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高考英语读后续写语篇练习友谊的考验:失窃事件后的抉择1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文IrememberthefirsttimeImetRoy.Hewasstandinginthecenterofagroupofboys,talkingandlaughing.Hewasacuteboyknownintheclassforhiskindnessandgenerosity.MynameisDaniel,anewboyintheclass.OurwholefamilyhadmovedfromthenorthofEnglandbecauseofmyfatherbeingofferedajobhere.Ilostallmyoldfriendsandfeltlonelyatmynewschool.Moststudentsinmynewclassweren’tveryinterestedinashynewboy.Roywasoneofthefewpeoplewhowerekindtome.Heofteninvitedmetojoinhisparticulargroup,andasaresult,Istartedgettingtoknowpeople.RoyandIbecamegoodfriends.Wetrustedeachotherandwecouldtalkaboutpersonalmatters,thingsthatwereimportanttous.4续写原文Butjustunderayearago,Roy’sfatherwasknockedoverbyacar,whodiedafewdayslater.Hisfamilyhadtomovetoamuchsmallerhouseinordertomanagefinancially.Roychangedcompletely,becomingsilentandmoody,whoseemedtoloseallinterestinhiswork.Thesedays,RoyandIsaweachotherfromtimetotime,butwewerenolongerclose.Lastweekourschoolhadabigfairinordertoraisemoneyforacharity.Itwasverysuccessfulandbytheendoftheday,wehadmadeaboutf500.Ourclassteacher,Mr.White,cameandchattedtoagroupofusthatincludedRoy,andheldupaboxforustosee.There’s£500inhere,”hesaidwithasmile.5续写原文Havingleftsomethingintheclassroom,Iwentinsidetogetit,andfoundRoyholdingawalletinhishand.Seeingme,hewalkedoutwithoutsayingaword.Thenextmorning,weweretoldthatthemoneyhadbeenstolen.Mr.Whitehadlefttheboxintheclassroomforafewminutes,butwhenhecamebackithaddisappeared.Thisweekendmorning,havingthoughtaboutthesituationforawhile,IdecidedtoaskRoyaboutthethetheftandwenttoseehim.6段首句Paragraph1:RoywasoutandIwentupstairstohisbedroomtowaitforhim.Paragraph2:Atthatmoment,thedoorswungopen,andRoywalkedin.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了丹尼尔一家搬到新地方后,他在新班级感到孤独,幸得善良的罗伊帮助,两人成为好友。然而,罗伊父亲意外离世后,他性情大变。学校举办慈善义卖筹集了500英镑,钱却被盗,丹尼尔发现罗伊拿着钱包后,决定找他询问。周末,丹尼尔前往罗伊家,在其卧室等待,想要帮罗伊认识错误,挽回这段友谊,也让事情有个正确的解决方向,故事在此留下悬念。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:RoywasoutandIwentupstairstohisbedroomtowaitforhim.罗伊不在家,我上楼来到他的卧室等待。房间里有些凌乱,衣服随意地扔在床上,书桌上堆满了杂物。我坐在床边,心里忐忑不安,思索着等会儿该如何开口。墙上挂着罗伊和他父亲的合影,照片里的他们笑容灿烂,这让我不禁想起曾经那个开朗善良的罗伊。我深知他的变化源于父亲的离世,但我不能眼睁睁看着他犯错而不管。时间一分一秒过去,我的心情愈发沉重,担心这次谈话会伤害我们曾经的友谊,可又觉得必须要让他面对自己的行为。11续写思路分析Para2:Atthatmoment,thedoorswungopen,andRoywalkedin.就在这时,门突然开了,罗伊走了进来。他看到我先是一愣,脸上闪过一丝慌张,但很快又恢复了冷漠的神情。我站起身,看着他的眼睛,深吸一口气说:“罗伊,我知道你拿了那笔钱,我们谈谈吧。”罗伊低下头,沉默不语,双手紧紧地攥着衣角。我继续说道:“我知道你最近过得不好,但这不是解决问题的办法。我们曾经是那么好的朋友,你还记得吗?”罗伊的肩膀微微颤抖,我走上前,轻轻地拍了拍他的肩膀,希望他能放下防备,正视自己的错误,一起找到解决问题的方法,让我们的友谊重新回到正轨。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现RoywasoutandIwentupstairstohisbedroomtowaitforhim.Theroomwasinabitofamess,withclothesstrewnhaphazardlyonthebedandthedeskclutteredwithoddsandends.Isatontheedgeofthebed,myheartpoundingwithuneasinessasIponderedoverhowtobroachthesubject.OnthewallhungaphotoofRoyandhisfather,theirsmilesbeamingbrightlyinit,whichremindedmeoftheonce-cheerfulandkind-heartedRoy.Iwasfullyawarethathistransformationstemmedfromhisfather'sdeath,butIcouldn'tjuststandbyandwatchhimmakethismistake.Astheminutestickedby,mymoodgrewevenheavier,fearingthatthisconversationmightdamageouronce-closefriendship,yetfeelingcompelledtomakehimfaceuptohisactions.14范文呈现Atthatmoment,thedoorswungopenandRoywalkedin.Hefrozeforasecondwhenhesawme,aflickerofpaniccrossinghisface,butquicklyregainedhiscoldexpression.Istoodup,lookedhimstraightintheeye,andtookadeepbreathbeforesaying,"Roy,Iknowyoutookthemoney.Let'stalk."Royhunghisheadinsilence,hishandsclenchingthecornersofhisclothestightly.Icontinued,"Iknowyou'vebeenhavingatoughtimelately,butthisisn'tthewaytosolvetheproblem.Doyourememberhowcloseweusedtobe?"Roy'sshoulderstrembledslightly.Isteppedforwardandgentlypattedhimontheshoulder,hopinghewouldletdownhisguard,facehismistakesquarely,andtogetherwecouldfindawaytoresolvetheissueandgetourfriendshipbackontrack.15升级版范文呈现RoywasoutandI,withaheavyheart,ascendedthestairstohisbedroom,theretoawaithisreturn.Thechamberpresentedatableauofdisarray,garmentsstrewnpell-melluponthebedandtheescritoireawashwithmiscellanea.Iperchedmyselfonthebedside,mymindawhirlwithtrepidationasIcontemplatedtheimpendingconfrontation.AdorningthewallwasaphotographofRoyandhissire,theircountenancesaglowwithmirth,apoignantreminderoftheerstwhileamiablelad.Consciousofthefactthathismetamorphosiswasrootedinthetragiclossofhisfather,Iwasresolvednottoidlystandbywhileheveereddownthepathoferror.Asthesandsoftimetrickledaway,myspiritssanklower,apprehensivethatthisdiscoursemightirreparablyrendthefabricofourformerfriendship,yetimpelledbyasenseofdutytocompelhimtoconfronthisactions.16升级版范文呈现Atthatmoment,thedoorswungopenwithacreakandRoyentered.Hisstepfalteredashiseyesalighteduponme,amomentaryglimmerofconsternationflittingacrosshisvisage,beforeheswiftlymaskeditwithanimpassivemien.Irosetomyfeet,mygazelockingwithhis,and,summoningmycourage,Iuttered,"Roy,ithathcometomyknowledgethatthouhasttakenthemoney.Letusparley."Roy'sheaddroopedintacitur

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