高考英语复习读后续写练习+善良的查理与顽皮的比尔+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习善良的查理与顽皮的比尔1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Charliewasveryobedienttohisparentsandteachers,forwhicheveryonelovedhimalot.Duetohisfather’sjob,hisfamilymovedtoanewcity,whereheenteredanewschool.AsCharliewasagoodboy,soonmostofhisnewclassmatesbecamehisgoodfriends.Theteachersalsopraisedthisnewboy,becauseofhisintelligenceandnicebehaviortoall.ButtherewasoneboyintheclasswhodidnotlikeCharlieatall!HisnamewasBillandhewasaverynaughtyboy,forwhichnoonelikedhimatall.HefoundthatCharliewasaquietboy.Sohestartedcreatingtroublesforhisnewclassmate.Atthelunchtime,whenCharliewashavinglunch,Billcameuptohimandasked,“Hey,whatdoyouhaveforlunch?”“It’scakeandsweets,”Charlierepliedwithasmile.4续写原文“IlovesweetsandsoIwilleatthisfoodtoday.”Billsaidgrudgingly.HesnatchedthelunchboxfromCharlie.Theotherboyssittingaroundwerefurious,butnoonedaredtoprotestduetofearsofbeingbulliedbyBillandhislittlegang.Fromthatdayon,BillregularlyateCharlie’slunchandeventhrewawaythewaterfromhiswaterbottleoneday.ButCharliestillkeptquietanddidnotcomplaintotheteacher.Billneverdidhishomeworkandalwaysforcedthegoodboysoftheclass,includingCharlie,towriteitdownonhiscopyforhim!WhenCharlie’sparentslearnedaboutallthesebulliesofBill,theywantedtocometotheschoolandcomplainaboutthisnaughtyboy.ButCharliestoppedthemandsaid,“Mom,Dad,pleasedonotworry.Everythingwillbeallright.Afterall,Billisalsoakidlikeme.”5续写原文Thedayswentbyandthetimecamefortheannualsportsattheschool.Charliewasalsogoodatsportsandheparticipatedinanumberofevents.Billalsoparticipatedinsackrace(套袋赛跑),thoughhecouldnotrunveryfastduetohisfatbody.6段首句Paragraph1：SeeingCharliewonfirstprizein100meters,Billfeltverybadandthenmadeadecision.Paragraph2：CharliethentookBilltotheschooldoctorwhotendedhisinjuredleg.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了查理随家人搬到新城市上学，他乖巧懂事，深受师生喜爱，却遭同学比尔刁难，比尔常抢他午餐、逼他代写作业等。但查理默默忍受，未向老师告状。学校运动会时，查理100米赛跑夺冠，比尔心生嫉妒使坏却弄伤自己，查理不计前嫌带他看医生，此后比尔深受触动，改过自新，两人还成了朋友，班级氛围也更和谐。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：SeeingCharliewonfirstprizein100meters,Billfeltverybadandthenmadeadecision.看到查理赢得100米比赛第一名，比尔心里极度失衡，于是恶意在套袋赛跑中故意推搡查理，结果自己重心不稳摔倒在地，腿部受伤。查理见状，立刻放弃比赛名次，毫不犹豫地跑向比尔，其他同学都围了过来，对眼前的一幕感到惊讶。11续写思路分析Para2：CharliethentookBilltotheschooldoctorwhotendedhisinjuredleg.查理小心翼翼地扶起比尔，然后坚定地带着他往学校医务室走去。校医为比尔处理伤口时，比尔满脸愧疚，终于鼓起勇气向查理道歉，承认自己之前的种种错误行为。查理微笑着原谅了他，从此比尔洗心革面，两人成为了真正的好朋友，班级也因他们的和解而更加团结友爱。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现WitnessingCharlie'svictoryinthe100-meterrace,Billwasconsumedbyenvyandspite.Thus,duringthesackrace,withamaliciousintention,hedeliberatelyshovedCharlie,onlytofindhimselflosingbalanceandtumblingdown,severelyinjuringhisleg.Uponseeingthis,Charlie,withoutamoment'shesitation,abandonedhispursuitoftheracerankingandrushedtowardsBill.Theotherstudentsgatheredaround,astonishedbythesceneunfoldingbeforethem.14范文呈现CharliegentlyliftedBillupandresolutelyledhimtotheschoolinfirmary.WhiletheschooldoctorwastendingtoBill'swound,Bill,overcomewithguilt,finallysummonedthecouragetoapologizetoCharlie,confessingallhispreviousmisdeeds.Charlie,withaforgivingsmile,pardonedhim.Fromthenon,Billwastransformed.Thetwobecamegenuinefriends,andtheclassgrewmoreunitedandamicableasaresultoftheirreconciliation.15升级版范文呈现Itwasattheschool'sannualsportsdaythatthelong-standingrivalrybetweenCharlieandBillreachedaturningpoint.HavingwitnessedCharlie'soutstandingperformanceandhisgloriousvictoryinthe100-meterrace,Bill,whoseheartwasfilledwithenvyandresentment,madeafatefuldecision.Intheensuingsackrace,withamaliciousglintinhiseye,herecklesslyshovedCharlie,onlytofindhimselfcrashingtotheground,hislegtwistedandinjured.ItwasCharlie,theepitomeofkindness,who,withoutamoment'sdelay,forsookhischanceofwinninganddashedtowardsBill.Theonlookers,theireyeswidewithastonishment,watchedasCharlie'sactofselflessnessunfolded.16升级版范文呈现Subsequently,Charlie,withgentleyetfirmhands,helpedBilltohisfeetandescortedhimtotheschoolinfirmary.There,astheschooldoctormeticulouslyattendedtoBill'swound,aprofoundsenseofguiltwashedoverBill.Summoningallhiscourage,hefinallyutteredasincereapologytoCharlie,confessingtohispastwrongdoings.ItwasCharlie'smagnanimoussmileandforgivingwordsthatsealedtheirnewfoundfriendship.Fromthatdayforward,Billwasachangedboy.Thetwobecameinseparable,andtheclass,once