高考英语复习读后续写练习+从自卑少年到舞台闪耀：成长的蜕变+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从自卑少年到舞台闪耀：成长的蜕变1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenIwasaboy,IalwaysworeturtleneckshirtsbecauseIwassosensitiveandshy.Iworkedhardtoearnexceptionalmarksandalwaystriedtobehavewell.Iwasyoungerthaneveryoneelsebecausemygoodmarkshadallowedmetoskipsecondgrade,butthisaddednothingtomyalreadylowself-confidence.WhenIwas14,myparentsdivorced(离婚).Imovedinwithmydadinanewneighborhood,buthewasalwayssobusyandhadlittletimeforme.Itseemedtheonlytimeheeverspoketomewastobedemandingorcritical.Ibegantohatecominghomefromschooleveryday.Isankfurtherintomylowself-esteem(自尊心)andwasoverwhelmedwithfeelingunappreciatedandalone.4续写原文Oneday,myauntcalled.Thisseemedlikeamiracle(奇迹)tome.AuntGinetteusuallyonlycalledonceayear,onmybirthday.Shesaidshehadjustseensomeyoungteenagersparticipateinapublicspeakingcontest,andshethoughtIshouldtryit,too.ShetoldmeshefirmlybelievedIcouldperformonstageliketheotherkidssinceshehadseenmedoskits(幽默小品)forthefamilyatChristmas.Iwasalittlesurprised.Me?Onstage?Inapublicspeakingcontest?Iwashesitant.ButAuntGinettewassoconfidentandseemedreallyserious.Feelingherstrongbelief,Iwentagainstalloddsandagreedtoenterthecontest.5续写原文Allthatwinter,twiceaweekafterdinner,Itookthreedifferentbusesforthethree-hourround-triptopracticeinVilled’Anjou,wherethecompetitionwouldtakeplace.Althoughmydadreallydidlovemeandwantedthebestforme,hedisapprovedofthisnewdream,fearingitwouldtakeawayfrommyhomeworktimeandimpactmyacademicperformance.ButIremainedatopperformerinschoolandnevermissedaday.6段首句Paragraph1：Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Paragraph2：WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－hewassoproud.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了五岁的奥利弗和身为学生护士且患有高血压等疾病的母亲科迪生活在达文特里。科迪深知自己健康状况不佳，需格外注意。奥利弗虽年幼却对健康安全知识充满热情。一日，科迪身体不适去医院检查后回家，下午在厨房与奥利弗聊天时病情突然恶化晕倒。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.四个月后，那个重要的夜晚终于来临。我早早来到后台，紧张地等待着上台。看着其他选手自信的模样，我心里七上八下，但想到自己几个月的努力，又暗暗给自己打气。轮到我时，我稳步走上舞台，灯光洒下，我深吸一口气，开始演讲。我努力让自己的声音沉稳有力，目光扫过台下观众。演讲过程中，我越来越放松，顺利地完成了演讲，听到台下热烈的掌声，我心中满是喜悦。11续写思路分析Para2：WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－hewassoproud.当我看到父亲的脸时，他的眼睛闪烁着光芒——他是如此骄傲。那一刻，我知道自己的努力没有白费。父亲走上前，紧紧地抱住我，说他从未想过我能如此出色。我也感受到了他对我的爱。这次经历让我明白，只要勇敢尝试，就能突破自我，收获成长。从那以后，我变得更加自信，不再是那个自卑孤独的男孩。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Iarrivedatthebackstageearly,waitingnervouslyformyturn.Lookingattheconfidentlooksofothercontestants,Ifeltextremelyuneasy.Butthinkingofmyeffortsinthepastfewmonths,Icheeredmyselfup.Whenitwasmyturn,Iwalkedsteadilyontothestage.Withthespotlightonme,Itookadeepbreathandbeganmyspeech.Itriedtomakemyvoicecalmandpowerful,glancingattheaudience.Duringthespeech,Ibecamemoreandmorerelaxedandsuccessfullyfinishedit.Hearingthewarmapplausefromtheaudience,Iwasfilledwithjoy.14范文呈现WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－hewassoproud.Atthatmoment,Iknewthatallmyeffortshadpaidoff.Myfathercameupandhuggedmetightly,sayingthathehadneverexpectedmetobesoexcellent.Ialsofelthisloveforme.ThisexperiencemademeunderstandthataslongasIdaredtotry,Icouldbreakthroughmyselfandgaingrowth.Sincethen,IhavebecomemoreconfidentandnolongertheshyandlonelyboyIusedtobe.15升级版范文呈现Fourmonthslater,thelong-awaitednightfinallyarrived.Standingbackstage,myheartpoundingwithnervousness,Iawaitedmyturnapprehensively.Gazingattheself-assureddemeanorsoftheothercontestants,anoverwhelmingsenseofuneasewashedoverme.However,recollectingthearduouseffortsIhaddedicatedoverthepastmonths,Isummonedthecouragetobuoymyselfup.Whenmynamewasannounced,withmeasuredsteps,Imademywayontotheresplendentstage.Bathedinthespotlight,Iinhaleddeeplyandcommencedmyspeech.Strivingtorendermyvoicesteadyandforceful,Isweptmygazeacrosstheexpectantaudience.Asthespeechprogressed,agrowingsenseofrelaxationenvelopedme,andImanagedtoconcludeitsmoothly.Thethunderousapplausethatgreetedmefilledmyheartwithanindescribablesenseofelation.16升级版范文呈现WhenIcaughtsightofmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereaglowwithanunmistakablepride.Inthatinstant,Iknewthateveryounceofmytoilhadreapedrichrewards.Myfatherhastenedtowardsmeandenfoldedmeinatightembrace,exclaimingthathehadneverenvisionedmeachievingsuchremarkablefeats.ItwasthenthatItrulysensedthedepthofhisloveforme.ThisexperiencehasingrainedinmetheprofoundunderstandingthataslongasIdaredtotaketheplunge,Icouldshattertheshacklesofself-doubtandembarkonajourn