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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Aboutamonthago,myhusbandandIfoundkindnessinanunlikelyplace:standinginlineataSubwaysandwichshoptopickupaquickdinner.Itwasextremelybusyonthisparticularnight,andInoticedadadbehinduswithhislittlegirl,wholookedtobearoundfour.Themanseemedastiredasmyhusband,butthelittlegirlwascheerfulandexcitedasshewaitedforhersandwichandcookie.Iwatchedasthemanbehindusgotclosertothefrontoftheline.Hestartedtolookworried.Rightbeforewecheckedout,Iheardthemansaytothewomanwhohadmadehissandwichesthathewassorrytojustleavehisoutbecausehedidn’thaveenoughmoneytopayforthemall.Helookedveryembarrassed.Hislittlegirlcontinuedjumpingaroundexcitedly.Iquietlyaskedthecashiertoaddtheman’swholeordertoours.Ipaidthe$87.73,andwegotoutoftherebeforethemanbehindusknewwhathadhappened.LikemanyotherssinceCOVID19hit,ourfamilyoffivewaslivingononeine.Iwasholdingourdebitcard(借记卡)andknewthatweonlyhad$90.16inouraccount.Thatwasallwewouldhaveuntilpaydaythreedayslater.Butstill,itfeltgreattobeabletohelpthatfamily,eventhoughwewouldbeoutofmoneyforafewdays.Whathappenednextwasamazing.MyhusbandwentbacktothatSubwaythenextweektopickupfivesandwichesthatIthoughtwouldcost$44.58.Therewas$47inouraccount.Butitturnedoutthatthedinnercostmorethanwehadonthecard.Myhusbandtoldthemtoputhissandwichbackbecausehecouldn’taffordit.Thenhepaidforthefoursandwichesandheadedtoourcar.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asheopenedthedoor,oneofthefemaleworkersrantohim.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwomennoddedatoneanotherandwentontheirway.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:大约一个月前,“我”和丈夫在一家赛百味三明治店排队买晚餐时,发现身后一位带着小女孩的男士因钱不够而无法支付所点食物。“我们”虽经济拮据,但仍悄悄为其付了款。一周后,丈夫再次去买三明治,因费用超出卡内余额正准备退回自己那份时,发生了后续的事情。伏笔及回应:伏笔:“我们”家庭靠一份收入生活且卡内余额仅够支付自身订单及帮助他人后的三天生活。回应:再次购物时因余额不足出现尴尬局面,后得到他人帮助。伏笔:男士因没钱支付食物而尴尬,小女孩却不知情仍兴奋。回应:后续未提及小女孩反应,重点在大人之间的互动与善意传递。伏笔:“我”悄悄为男士付款,他未察觉。回应:后续男士以自己的方式回报善意,形成善的循环。伏笔:丈夫再次去同一家赛百味买三明治。回应:在这家店经历了余额不足与得到帮助的情节。伏笔:丈夫准备退回自己那份三明治。回应:因他人帮助得以带回所有三明治。续写要点:情感线:从丈夫因余额不足的窘迫与无奈,到因他人帮助的惊喜与感激,最后双方因善意传递而心怀温暖与欣慰。故事线:丈夫准备退回三明治时,女店员跑来告知有人已为他付款,原来是上次被帮助的男士,他以这种方式回报了“我们”。主旨升华句:“Asingleactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,cancreatearippleeffectthatspreadsfarandwide,touchinglivesinunexpectedways.”(一个小小的善举,无论多么微不足道,都能产生涟漪效应,以意想不到的方式影响他人的生活并广泛传播。)“Kindnessisalanguagethatthedeafcanhearandtheblindcansee.Ittranscendsallbarriersandenrichesthehumanspirit.”(善良是一种聋人能听见、盲人能看见的语言。它超越所有障碍,丰富人类的精神世界。)“Inthetapestryoflife,actsofkindnessarethegoldenthreadsthatbindustogether,weavingapatternofloveandpassion.”(在生活的织锦中,善举是将我们联系在一起的金线,编织出爱与同情的图案。)“Thebeautyofkindnessliesnotinthemagnitudeofthegesturebutinthepurityoftheheart.Ithasthepowertotransformboththegiverandthereceiver.”(善良之美不在于举动的大小,而在于心灵的纯净。它有能力改变施与者和接受者。)“Whenkindnessisgivenfreely,itreturnstenfold,fillingtheworldwithwarmthandhope,oneactatatime.”(当善良被自由地给予,它会十倍返还,一次一个善举,让世界充满温暖与希望。)写作示范一:

Asheopenedthedoor,oneofthefemaleworkersrantohim.Shetoldhimthatthemanhehadhelpedlastweekhadeinearlierandprepaidforhisorder.Myhusbandwasstunned.Hecouldn'tbelievethatthemanhehadassistedwithoutexpectinganythinginreturnhadrememberedhiskindnessandrepaiditsopromptly.Hethankedtheworkerandgotintothecar,awarmfeelingspreadingthroughhischest.

Thetwomennoddedatoneanotherandwentontheirway.Therewasnoneedforwords.Thesimpleactofnoddingconveyedtheirmutualunderstandingandrespect.Thatnight,asourfamilysatdowntoeatthesandwiches,wetalkedabouthowkindnesscouldebacktousinthemostunexpectedways.Werealizedthatevenindifficulttimes,asmallactofkindnesscouldmakeabigdifferenceandcreateabeautifulcycleofgivingandreceiving.写作示范二:

Asheopenedthedoor,oneofthefemaleworkersrantohim.Shehandedhimanoteandsaidthemanwhowasshortofmoneylasttimehadleftitforhim.Thenoteread,“Thankyouforyourkindness.Iwashavingatoughday,andyoumadeitbetter.Nowit'smyturn.”Myhusbandwasdeeplytouched.Herealizedthathissmallactofhelpinghadaprofoundimpactontheman.Hetookthesandwichesandgotinthecar,hisheartfullofgratitude.

Thetwomennoddedatoneanotherandwentontheirway.Itwasasilentexchangeofgratitudeandrecognition.Weknewthatthisencounterwasnotjustaboutsandwichesbutaboutthepowerofkindness.Itmadeusmoredeterminedtocontinuetobekindinthefuture,knowingthatourkindnesswouldnotgounnoticedandwouldinspireotherstodothesame.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Asheopenedthedoor,oneofthefemaleworkersrantohim.Whenhewasconfusedlywonderingwhatshewasfor,theworkerhandedhimhissandwich.Withoutaword,sheranbackintothestore.Withagratefulheart,heassumedthattheladyhadjustgiven

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