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高考英语读后续写语篇练习两只小猫带来的意外欢乐与温馨1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Mysister-in-lawCarolsaidshe’dalreadypickedoutakittenforme.Iagreedtogowithher…justtolook.Imadenopromisetotakeonehome.Afterall,onlytwomonthshadpassedsinceIlostmybelovedcalicocat,Mandi.MaybeIneededtobepet-freeforawhile.Whenwegotthere,threeofthefourkittensremainedinthelitter.Carolpickeduponeandhandedittome.Thebeautifulfaceandwhitefurontherightsideofhernoseremindedmeofaclown-likemask.HowcouldIresist?Thenanotherkitten,withanevenlybalancedwhiteface,jumpedintomylapandpurred.DrivinghomeinmyBritishsportscarproveddifficultwithtwomischievouskittens.Oneclungtomyleftarmandshoulder,watchingthefast-movingsceneryoutside.Theotherpacedbackandforthfrommylaptothepassenger’sseat,makingithardformetoshiftgears.Bothmewedinaloudduet(二重奏)ofprotest.Ofcourse,Ihadn’tbroughtacage.Ihadnotplannedtotakehomeakitten—ortwo.4续写原文Theclown-like-maskedfemaleearnedthenameSqueakettewithhertinyvoicesqueakingabouteachnewdiscoveryassheexploredhernewhome.Themale,lackingonlyablacktieinhisformalclothes,tookthenameSebastianformyfavoritecomposer,JohannSebastianBach.Afewweekslater,aneighborhelpedmecarrydownmysix-footartificialChristmastreefromtheattic(阁楼).Ithankedhimwithabatchofcookies,andthensetupthetreeinthecomerofmylivingroom.SebastianandSqueaketteknockeditdownbeforeIopenedtheboxofdecorations.Aftersettingitupright,Istraightenedthefewbentwirebranchesbackintoplace.AsIcheckedforanyotherdamage,aquickflashofblack-and-whitefurpassedbyme.Uptheywent,branchbybranch.Thetreedancedaroundasthetwokittenstookturnsclimbingittogether.SebastianmadeittothetopamomentaheadofSqueakette.5段首句Paragraph1:Helungedatmefromthetop,pawsstretchedoutlikewings.Paragraph2:Sensingtheirinterest,IfoundasmallerChristmastreeforthem.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了作者在失去爱猫曼迪两个月后,被嫂子卡罗尔带去看小猫,最终带回了两只小猫,取名塞巴斯蒂安和斯奎基特。回家途中小猫调皮捣蛋,到家后它们又撞倒了圣诞树,还在树上嬉戏玩耍,作者虽无奈但也被它们的活泼可爱所感染,后来作者还专门为它们准备了一棵小圣诞树,让它们尽情玩耍,小猫的到来为作者的生活增添了新的欢乐和生机,填补了之前失去爱猫的空缺。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1:Helungedatmefromthetop,pawsstretchedoutlikewings.它从树顶向我扑来,爪子像翅膀一样张开。我急忙伸手接住它,它却在我怀里兴奋地扭动着,还伸出小脑袋蹭我的下巴。斯奎基特见状,也“喵喵”叫着从树上跳下来,围着我的脚打转。我看着它们天真无邪的模样,心中的无奈瞬间化为乌有,只剩下满满的宠溺。我轻轻地挠着它们的下巴,它们舒服地眯起眼睛,喉咙里发出咕噜咕噜的声音,那一刻,我知道它们已经完全融入了我的生活,成为我生活中不可或缺的一部分。10续写思路分析Para2:Sensingtheirinterest,IfoundasmallerChristmastreeforthem.察觉到它们对圣诞树的浓厚兴趣后,我特意找了一棵较小的圣诞树放在厨房角落。我在树上挂满了五颜六色的小铃铛和柔软的毛球,还在树下铺了一块柔软的垫子。当我把小猫们抱到树前时,它们的眼睛一下子亮了起来,迫不及待地扑向小树。它们用爪子轻轻拍打铃铛,追逐着毛球,玩得不亦乐乎。看着它们欢快的样子,我也被这份纯真的快乐所感染,坐在一旁静静地欣赏着它们的表演,享受着这温馨的时刻。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Helungedatmefromthetop,pawsoutstretchedlikewings.Hastily,Ireachedoutandcaughthim.Thrilled,hewriggledinmyarmsandrubbedhislittleheadagainstmychinaffectionately.Noticingthis,Squeakettejumpeddownfromthetree,meowing,andcircledaroundmyfeet.Lookingattheirinnocentandlivelyappearance,myinitialexasperationvanishedinstantly,replacedbysheerfondness.Gently,Iscratchedtheirchins,andtheyclosedtheireyescontentedly,purringwithpleasure.Atthatmoment,Iknewtheyhadseamlesslyintegratedintomylifeandbecomeanindispensablepartofit.13范文呈现SensingtheirkeeninterestintheChristmastree,Ideliberatelyfoundasmalleroneandplaceditinthecornerofthekitchen.Iadorneditwithcolorfullittlebellsandsoftpom-pomsandspreadasoftmatunderneath.WhenIbroughtthekittenstothetree,theireyeslitupimmediately,andtheycouldn'twaittopounceonit.Theyplayfullybattedatthebellswiththeirpawsandchasedafterthepom-poms,havingagreattime.Watchingtheirjoyousplay,Iwasalsoinfectedbythispurehappiness.Isataside,quietlyenjoyingtheirperformanceandsavoringthiswarmandsweetmoment.14升级版范文呈现Inasplitsecond,helaunchedhimselfatmefromthepinnacleofthetree,hispawssplayedwidelikethewingsofafledglingtakingitsfirstflight.Reactinginstinctively,Ishotoutmyhandsandmanagedtocatchhimmid-air.Overwhelmedwithexcitement,hesquirmedwithinmygrasp,histinyheadnuzzlingaffectionatelyagainstmychin.Atthesightofthis,Squeakette,notonetobeleftbehind,letoutaseriesofmeowsandgracefullyleapeddownfromthetree,proceedingtoencirclemyfeetinafigureofeight.Beholdingtheirguilelessandanimatedcountenances,theexasperationthathadinitiallywelledupwithinmedissipatedintothinair,supplantedbyanoverwhelmingsenseofaffection.Withtheutmosttenderness,Icaressedtheirchins,elicitingcontentedpurrsthatreverberatedthroughtheroom.ItwasatthisprecisemomentthatIbecameacutelyawarethattheyhadeffortlesslywoventhemselvesintothefabricofmylife,assuminganindispensableroletherein.15升级版范文呈现PerceivingtheirintensefascinationwiththeChristmastree,Ipurposefullyprocuredamorediminutiveoneandcarefullypositioneditinacozynookofthekitchen.ThisIbedeckedwithaprofusionofvividlyhuedlittlebellsandplushpom-poms,andbeneathit,Ilaidasumptuouslysoftmat.ThemomentIintroducedthekittenstothisnewfoundwond

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