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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Tonywaswalkingdownthestreet.Hewastryingtogettoastorebeforeitclosed,andhewasnotthinkingaboutanythingbutthat.Hehadhisshoppinglistinhandandwasrushingthroughthecrosswalks,tryingtoavoidgettinghitbycars.Arrivingatacrosswalk,Tonystopped,waitingforthegreenlighttocross.Theflashingredhandshowedhimnottowalk,butinfact,hedidconsiderwhethertogothroughtheredlight,astherewerenotmanycars.Still,itdidn’tseemlikeagoodidea,sohecontinuedtowait.Notfaraway,heheardamantalkingonthephone,sayingsomethingaboutanimals.Outofnowhere,agorilla(大猩猩)appearedandheadedovertoTonyonitsfeet.ThereweresomanypeoplearoundthatTonydidn’tnoticeitatfirst,hismindtotallyfocusedonthestore,whichhecouldseefaraway,justablockortwoahead.Anxious,Tonyrecheckedhislist.Ifhedidn’tgeteverythingonthelist,hismotherwouldbeangry.Heoftenforgotsomething,sohewantedtomakesurehediditrightthistime.Justashewascheckinghislistcarefully,hefeltataponhisshoulder.“Pardonme,”Tonysaid,steppingtooneside,incaseithadbeenhisproblem.Hefeltanothertap.“Hey,watchyourself.”Tonylookedoverinanger,onlytorealizehiswarningfellondeafears—orrather,hairyones.Hewasnosetonosewithagorilla!Hesteppedback,suddenlyfearful.Thegorillamadeashort,lowsoundandfollowedhim.Tonylookedaroundhimselfindisbelief.Allaroundhimwerepeoplewhowerewatchingwithgreatinterest.Somelookedafraidandwerebackingaway.Somewhisperedbehindtheirhandsandwatchedwithwideeyes.Afewevenhadtheirphonesoutandwererecordingvideosortakingpictures.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Tony’sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:托尼正匆忙赶在商店关门前去购物,他全神贯注于购物清单和赶路,在一个十字路口等待绿灯时,一只大猩猩突然出现并走向他。周围有很多人在围观,托尼起初未察觉,发现后十分惊恐,而大猩猩只是与他互动,之后饲养员赶来带走了大猩猩,托尼继续前往商店并与收银员分享了这段奇特经历。伏笔以及回应:伏笔1:托尼匆忙赶路且只专注于购物清单,暗示他可能会因分心而遭遇意外情况,续写中他被大猩猩的出现吓了一跳并陷入慌乱。伏笔2:托尼听到不远处有人谈论动物,为大猩猩的出现做了铺垫,续写中饲养员的出现也与动物相关话题相呼应。伏笔3:托尼考虑过闯红灯但放弃了,体现他有基本的规则意识,续写中他在面对大猩猩时虽害怕但也尝试友好应对。伏笔4:周围有很多人且有人在录像拍照,预示着这一事件会被更多人知晓,续写中托尼会在商店分享这段经历。伏笔5:托尼担心买不全东西妈妈会生气,突出他的任务紧迫性,续写中他在大猩猩事件后仍继续完成购物任务。续写要点:第一段:情感线:极度震惊与害怕,随后在大猩猩未表现出攻击性时尝试镇定并友好相处,内心依旧紧张不安。故事线:托尼身体微微颤抖,试图与大猩猩保持距离但又不敢有大动作。他轻声与大猩猩交流,尽管知道它可能听不懂,只是希望缓解紧张气氛。当饲养员出现时,他既松了一口气又好奇大猩猩为何会出现在这里。第二段:情感线:如释重负,带着些许兴奋和感慨,从奇特经历中逐渐恢复平静并回归日常。故事线:托尼在前往商店的路上整理自己的思绪和衣服,试图让自己看起来正常些。进入商店后,他在挑选商品时仍会时不时想起大猩猩的模样。与收银员讲述经历时,他的语气从紧张到轻松,最后带着购物袋满意地离开。主旨升华句:“Lifeisfullofunexpectedencountersthatcanbothstartleandamazeus,teachingustoembracetheunknownwithanopenheart.”(生活充满了意想不到的邂逅,既会让我们惊愕又会使我们惊叹,教导我们以开放的心态拥抱未知。)“Eveninthemostordinaryofdays,extraordinaryeventscanoccur,remindingusthattheworldisfullofsurpriseswaitingtobediscovered.”(即使在最平凡的日子里,非凡的事件也可能发生,提醒我们世界充满了等待被发现的惊喜。)“Anunexpectedmeetingwithawildcreaturecanbreakthemonotonyofourroutineandofferauniqueperspectiveonthewondersofnature.”(与野生动物的意外相遇可以打破我们日常的单调,并提供对自然奇观的独特视角。)“Inthefaceoftheunexpected,ourabilitytoremaincalmandadaptdeterminesnotonlyourimmediateexperiencebutalsoourgrowthasindividuals.”(面对意外情况,我们保持冷静和适应的能力不仅决定了我们当下的经历,也决定了我们作为个体的成长。)“Thestrangeencounterwiththegorillashowsthattheboundariesbetweenthehumanworldandthewildcansometimesblur,leadingtomomentsofwonderandselfreflection.”(与大猩猩的奇特相遇表明人类世界与野外之间的界限有时会模糊,带来惊奇和自我反思的时刻。)写作示范一:Tony’sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Hismindwentblankforasecond.Hecouldfeelhispalmssweatingandhislegsturningweak.Thegorilla,however,didn'tseemtohaveanyaggressiveintentions.Itjuststoodthere,lookingatTonywithitsbig,curiouseyes.Tonyforcedhimselftosmile,tryingtoappearfriendly.Heslowlycroucheddown,hopingtoshowthathemeantnoharm.Thegorillamimickedhisaction,whichmadeTonyabitlessnervous.Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief.Hefeltastrangemixtureofemotions.Hewasstillabitshakyfromtheencounterbutalsofeltasenseofadventure.Hecontinuedhiswalktothestore,hisstepsabitslowerthanbefore.Whenheenteredthestore,hecouldn'thelpbutsharehisstorywiththefirstpersonhesaw.Thecashierlistenedwithgreatinterest,andTonyfeltproudtohavehadsuchauniqueexperience.Hefinallypletedhisshoppingandleftthestore,lookingforwardtotellinghisfriendsandfamilyaboutthisamazingencounter.写作示范二:Tony’sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Hewasterrifiedbuttriednottoshowit.Hethoughtaboutrunningbutwasafraidtoprovokethegorilla.Sohejuststoodthere,frozen.Thegorillathentookastepcloser,andTonyclosedhiseyesinstinctively.Butinsteadofattacking,thegorillagentlytouchedhisarm.Tonyopenedhiseyesandsawthegorilla'scalmface.Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief.Hewasamazedbywhathadjusthappened.Hestartedwalkingtothestoreagain,hisheartstillpounding.Ashewalked,hereplayedtheencounterinhismind.Whenhegottothestore,hetoldthestorytothestoreowner.Theownerwasastonishedandaskedalotofquestions.Tonyansweredthemwithasmile,feelingthatthisencounterhadmadehisdaymoreinteresting.Heboughthisthingsandleft,knowingthatthiswouldbeastoryhewouldrememberforalongtime.Onepossibleversion:Tony'sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Hehadneverimaginedgettingsoclosetoagorilla.Thegorillaalsoseemedconfused,itsdarkeyesmovingbackandforthbetweenTonyandthepeoplearoundthem.Theman,whoTonynoticedtalkingonhisphonejustnow,approachedcarefully,tryingtoassessthesituation.Hereachedhishandtowardsthegorilla,speakinginafortingvoice,"Easy,easy.I'mheretohelpyou."Thegorillahesitatedfor
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