Unit3写作能力提升练

Unit3FamilytiesUnit3写作能力提升练当我们谈论家庭时，总是充满了温馨和回忆。家庭是我

们成长的港湾，承载着无数美好的瞬间。根据以下思维导图

提示用英文描述一下你的家庭吧。词数：不少于60。［审题指导］1.体裁：

说明文

2.人称：

第一人称为主3.时态：

一般现在时［思路构建］［精彩范文］MyFamilyIhaveahappyfamily.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily—

myfather，mother，youngerbrotherandme.Myfatherisanengineer，andheworksveryhard.Every

night，hereadsbookswithme.Ilearnedalotfromhim.My

motherisateacherofanelementaryschool.Shealwaysanswers

myquestionspatientlyandhelpsmewithmystudies.Mycute

littlebrotherisabitnaughty，butIstilllovehim.Weoftenplay

togetherandshareourhappiness.Ourfamilylifeiswarmandcozy.Everyweekend，wecook

deliciousdinnerstogether，gototheparkorwatchmovies

together.Myhomeisalwaysfullofloveandlaughter.Ilovemy

family.高分点评：

1.本文采用“总—分—总”结构，思路清晰。开

篇以“Ihaveahappyfamily.”点明主旨，引出下文对作者一家幸福家庭生活的描述；中间通过对爸爸、妈妈不同形式的爱和陪伴以及我对淘气小弟弟的喜爱的描述，给我们展现了一幅幅家庭温馨画面。最后通过一些家庭活动再次证明我家是一个幸福的家庭。2.通过一连串动作描写，readsbookswithme，answersmy

questionspatiently，cookdeliciousdinnerstogether，goto

theparkorwatchmoviestogether，使描述更加生动。假如你是Tommy，你父亲的生日快要到了，这是你向爸

爸表达感激的好机会。请根据以下问题提示，用英文给你父

亲写一封信。1.Whatdoyouthinkofyourfather？2.Whatdoesheoftendotomakeyougrowuphealthily？

(reading；travelling；exercising；helpingothers；going

green；beingpolite…)3.Whatwillyoudotoshowthankstoyourfather？注意：

词数不少于60；文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不

计入总词数。Dearfather，Youraisemeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youarean

importantpersonintheprocessofmygrowth.

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⁠Youtakegood

careofmeallthetimeandteachmegoodmanners.That

makesmeapoliteperson.

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⁠Youarealwayspatientenoughtoreadwithmeandgive

melotsofadviceonbooks.Iliketravelling，soyouoften

takemetodifferentplacesofinterestallovertheworld.I

enjoythejourneyverymuchandfeelrelaxed.Youareready

tohelppeopleinneed.Youteachmetobeakindperson.In

thepast，Ineversaid“Iloveyou”toyou.Todayisyour

birthday.Iwanttosayittoyouloudly.

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