山东省潍坊市2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题英语读后续写病房里的友情曙光Lucy的陪伴与希望讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。LucyandImetintheninthgrade.Untilthen,IhadafewgoodfriendswithwhomIsharedmanyofthesameinterests,butneverinmylifehadIexperiencedafriendshipquiteliketheoneIsharedwithher.LucyandIsharedeverything.Attimesitevenseemedlikewesharedabrain.LucyandIbothhadathingfortakingphotosofourshadowsinthemoonlight.Somenightswewouldkeepawayfromeveryoneelse,andwalkaroundschool,thepark,eventraintrackswithourcameras—searchingfortheperfectshotofourshadowscastonthesidewalkbesideus.AfewmonthsbeforeImetLucy,Iwasdiagnosed(诊断)withararenervoussystemdiseasethatwouldprogressifleftuntreated.Iwasmisdiagnosedformonths.Consequently,alotoftimewaswastedonthewrongtreatmentsandIwasgettingworseandworse.LucywasthefirstfriendIevertoldaboutmysituation.“EventuallyImightnotbeabletowalk,beinthesun,digestfood,eatlikeanormalperson.Orworse,”Isaidaswesatonabenchonedayafterschool.Shewasquietforamoment.“Well,ifyoucan’twalk,I’llpushyouandifyoucan’teat,I’llhaveafoodfightwithyouanyway,andifyoubeeallergictolightwe’llstillbeabletogoshadowhunting.I’llbeyouremotionalsunscreen—SPF(防晒指数)1,000.”“MySPF1,000,huh?”“Yup,”shelaughed.Ihuggedher.“Thankyou.”Daysturnedintoweeks,weeksturnedintomonthsandmyhealthworsened.Itwasgettingincreasinglydifficultformetogetaround.Lucywastherewithme,every“step”oftheway.Finally,thingsgotbadenoughthatIwasforcedtoleaveschool.HospitalbecamemyhomeawayfromhomeandIwasoftenthereformonthsatatime.Iwasverysickandunabletostayincontactwithfriends,evenLucy.ThoughIhadanursetotakecareofme,Ifeltlonely.Ineededsomeonetotalkto,afriend.注意：(1)续写的词数应为150左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Oneday,anunexpectedvisitorarrivedatmyhospitalbedside.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WithLucy’spanyanddoctors’propertreatment,thingsbegantoimprove._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：作者在九年级与Lucy成为好友，两人兴趣相投，常一起拍摄月光下的影子。作者被诊断出罕见神经系统疾病且曾被误诊，病情逐渐加重，Lucy表示会一直陪伴。后来作者病情恶化被迫休学住院，与朋友包括Lucy失去联系，在医院深感孤独。伏笔与回应：伏笔：作者提到病情严重可能无法行走等。回应：后文Lucy来医院看望并表示愿意陪伴照顾，推轮椅等。伏笔：Lucy说要做作者的“情感防晒霜”。回应：在作者孤独住院时，她的到来给予作者情感慰藉。伏笔：作者常因病住院数月。回应：续写中提到住院期间Lucy的陪伴让病情好转有了更合理的时间跨度。伏笔：作者与Lucy曾一起四处拍照。回应：结尾可呼应两人恢复健康后又能一起去追寻影子拍摄的美好。伏笔：作者因病无法与朋友联系。回应：所以Lucy的到来才显得意外且珍贵。续写要点：第一段：写Lucy来到医院床边，带来了她们之前拍摄影子的照片，鼓励作者，两人回忆往昔美好时光，作者重获温暖与希望。第二段：在Lucy的陪伴鼓励下以及医生的治疗，作者病情好转，最终出院，和Lucy又能像以前一样相伴，感悟友谊和希望的力量。情感线：从作者在医院的孤独无助，到Lucy到来后的惊喜与感动，再到病情好转后的欣慰与对友谊充满感激。故事线：作者患病住院与朋友失联，Lucy前来探望，在其陪伴与医生治疗下病情转好，两人重归美好相伴。主旨升华句：Truefriendshipisthelightthatpiercesthroughthedarkestcloudsofillness.（真正的友谊是穿透疾病黑暗云层的光。）Inthefaceofadversity,afriend'spresenceisthemostpowerfulmedicine.（在逆境中，朋友的陪伴是最有力的良药。）Friendship,likealighthouse,guidesusbacktohealthandhappiness.（友谊如灯塔，引领我们重回健康与幸福。）Afriendinneedisahopeindeed,shiningbrightlyinthehospitalward.（患难中的朋友就是希望，在病房中闪耀。）Thebondoffriendshipcanwithstandthetestofillnessandtime,leadingtorecoveryandrenewal.（友谊的纽带能经受疾病与时间的考验，通向康复与新生。）写作示范一：Oneday,anunexpectedvisitorarrivedatmyhospitalbedside.ItwasLucy.Sheheldastackofphotosinherhand.“Look,thesearethepicturesofourshadowhunting.Rememberhowmuchfunwehad?”shesaidwithabigsmile.Iwassosurprisedandoverjoyedthattearswelledupinmyeyes.Wetalkedaboutouroldtimes,andshetoldmeshewouldalwaysbethereforme.Herwordswerelikeawarmfireinthecoldandlonelyhospitalroom.WithLucy’spanyanddoctors’propertreatment,thingsbegantoimprove.Daybyday,Iregainedmystrength.Icouldwalkalittlefurtherandeatabitmore.Finally,Iwasdischargedfromthehospital.LucyandIwentbacktoourfavoriteplaces,liketheschoolandthepark,tocontinueourshadowhunting.Ourfriendshiphadbeeevenstrongerafterthistrial,andItrulyunderstoodthatwithagoodfriendbyyourside,youcanovereanydifficulty.写作示范二：Oneday,anunexpectedvisitorarrivedatmyhospitalbedside.Lucywalkedin,herfacefullofconcernyetwithadeterminedlook.Sheshowedmethephotosofourpastadventures,saying,“Westillhavealottodotogether.Youcan’tstayhereforever.”Hervisitmademefeelaliveagain.Wesharedstoriesandlaughter,andIfeltthelonelinessfadingaway.WithLucy’spanyanddoctors’propertreatment,thingsbegantoimprove.Istartedtorespondwelltothetreatment.Lucywouldoftenreadtomeortellmejokestokeepmyspiritsup.Asmyhealthgotbetter,wemadeplansforthefuture.WhenIwasfinallywellenoughtoleavethehospital,weembracedtightly.Iknewthatourfriendshipwasapreciousgiftthathadhelpedmethroughthetoughesttimeandwouldcontinuetoshinebrightlyinourlives.参考答案Oneday,anunexpectedvisitorarrivedatmyhospitalbedside.ItwasLucy.Shewasabitbreathless,asifshehadrushedallthewayhere.“Imissedyousomuch,”shesaid,hereyesfilledwithgenuineaffection.Shethencarefullytookoutasmallalbumfromherbag.“Imadethisforyou.Ithasallourbestshadowpicturesandsomenotesaboutouradventures.”AsIflippedthroughthealbum,memoriesfloodedback,andasmileslowlyspreadacrossmyface.Sheheldmyhandtightlyandsaid,“We’