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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。IntheheartofTexas,inthelivelycityofSanAntonio,astoryofloveunfoldedinJune,2024.ItisthetaleofEmily,ayoungwomanadoptedasachild,whogrewup,showingselflessness.Emilywasaspirited25-year-old,withaheartasbroadastheLoneStarState.ShewasadoptedbytheSmithfamily.FromthemomentEmilyenteredtheirlives,theSmithshavedevotedthemselvestoprovidingherwithalovingandstablehome.Theymadesureshehadawarmbedtosleepineverynight,cookeddeliciousandnutritiousmealsforhereveryday.Theyencouragedhertopursueherhobbiesandinterests,whetheritwaspainting,whichtheywoulddisplayproudlyonthewallsoftheirhome,orplayingthepiano,forwhichtheyarrangedlessons.TheirloveandcareenvelopedEmilyasshegrewup.Herbondwithheradoptivemother,Susan,wasparticularlyprofound.“You'remyworld,Emily,”Susanwouldoftensay,hereyesfullofcareandaffection.Inthespringof2024,Susanwasstruckbyasuddenandsevereliver(肝)condition.ThedoctorsinSanAntoniodeliveredthecruelnewsthatalivertransplant(移植)wasSusan'sonlyhopeforsurvival.Thefamily,desperate,beganthesearchforadonor.“Wehavetofindamatch,”thedoctorurged.However,amongSusan'simmediatefamily,nonewereamatchforherliver.“It'slikewe'rehittingadeadend,”Susan'shusband,MarkSmith,saidsadly.Emily,unabletobearthethoughtoflosinghermother,decidedtogettestedasapotentiallivingdonor.“Letmetry,”shetoldherfatherwithdetermination.Theresultswereastonishing---shewasaperfectmatch.Buttherewasacatch.Emilyhadachronic(慢性的)conditionsincechildhood,andthedoctorswarnedherthatdonatingapartofherlivercouldputherindanger.“It'stoorisky,Emily,”thedoctorsaid.ButEmilyreplied,“Nomatterwhat,I'mgoingtosavemymom.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。第一段:Emilytoldallthistohermom,Susan.第二段:However,Emilyinsistedthathermomacceptherliverdonation.文章大意:2024年6月,在得克萨斯州圣安东尼奥市,自幼被史密斯一家收养的25岁女孩艾米丽,在这个充满爱的家庭中幸福成长。养母苏珊在春天突患严重肝病,肝移植是唯一的生存希望,可家人中无人匹配。艾米丽决定检测,结果竟与苏珊完美匹配,但她自幼患有慢性病,医生警告捐赠肝脏风险极大。即便如此,艾米丽仍坚定要救母亲,展现出无私且深厚的母女情,也引出后续她与母亲及家人的艰难抉择。伏笔及续写回应:伏笔:艾米丽自幼被收养,史密斯一家对她关怀备至,为她提供温暖的家、可口的饭菜,支持她的兴趣爱好。回应:正因为这份深厚的养育之恩,艾米丽才会毫不犹豫地决定为苏珊捐赠肝脏,即便面临风险也不退缩,凸显出她对家人的感恩与回报。伏笔:艾米丽与养母苏珊感情深厚,苏珊常说“你是我的全世界,艾米丽”。回应:这使得艾米丽在面对苏珊的病情时,情感上无法接受失去母亲,从而坚定了她救母亲的决心,在续写中这种情感成为推动情节发展的关键因素。伏笔:医生告知苏珊的病情严重,肝移植是唯一希望,而家人中无人匹配。回应:为艾米丽挺身而出成为潜在捐赠者做了铺垫,突出她在家庭困境中的担当,也使得后续关于她是否捐赠的情节更具张力。伏笔:艾米丽患有慢性疾病,医生警告捐赠肝脏会有危险。回应:在续写中,这成为家人和医生劝阻她的重要理由,也让艾米丽的坚持显得更加难能可贵,同时增加了故事的曲折性。伏笔:艾米丽告诉父亲自己要去检测时的坚定态度“让我试试”。回应:延续这种坚定,在后续与母亲的交流以及坚持捐赠的过程中,展现出她一旦决定就不轻易放弃的性格特点,使人物形象更加丰满。续写要点:第一段:情感线:艾米丽与苏珊之间深厚的母女情进一步展现,苏珊因担心女儿的健康而拒绝,内心充满矛盾与不舍;艾米丽则因母亲的拒绝而着急、难过,但又坚定地想要说服母亲。故事线:艾米丽详细地向苏珊讲述自己愿意承担风险的决心,提及过去母亲对自己的关爱和付出,强调家庭的重要性,试图让苏珊明白自己的心意,两人展开情感上的拉扯与交流。第二段:情感线:艾米丽持续的坚持让苏珊逐渐动摇,家人也被艾米丽的执着所打动,情感从反对逐渐转向支持;艾米丽则感受到家人态度的变化,更加坚定自己的选择,同时也对未来充满希望和勇气。故事线:艾米丽不顾医生和家人的再次劝阻,继续为捐赠肝脏做准备,最终成功进行手术,苏珊逐渐康复,一家人的感情因这次磨难变得更加深厚,艾米丽也收获了成长和幸福。主旨升华句:Loveisnotjustaboutreceiving,butalsoaboutgivingselflessly,eveninthefaceofdanger.Familytiesarethestrongestbondsthatcanwithstandanytrialsandtribulations,asshownbyEmily'sunwaveringdetermination.Trueloveknowsnobounds,andEmilyprovedthatwhenshewaswillingtoriskitallforhermother,showingthepowerofsacrifice.Inthejourneyoflife,itistheloveandcouragewithinusthatenableustoovercomethegreatestobstaclesandemergestronger.ThestoryofEmilyandSusanteachesusthatalovingheartcanconquerfearandthattheessenceoffamilyliesinstandingbyeachotherthroughthickandthin.写作示范:第一篇:Emilytoldallthistohermom,Susan.TearsstreameddownSusan'sfaceasshelistenedtoEmily'swords."Mychild,youarethemostpreciousgiftinmylife.Ican'tletyoudothisattheriskofyourownhealth.Yourwell-beingmeanseverythingtome."Emilyheldhermother'shandsfirmlyandsaid,"Mom,you'vebeenthereformethroughallmyjoysandsorrows.It'smyturntobestrongforyou.Weareafamily,andwe'llgetthroughthistogether."ButSusanshookherhead,herheartfilledwithworryandlove.However,Emilyinsistedthathermomacceptherliverdonation.Shetalkedtothedoctorsagain,askingthemtoexplaintheprocedureandthepossiblerisksindetail.Shethensharedtheinformationwithherfamily,showingthemthatshewaswell-prepared.Slowly,herfatherandotherfamilymembersbegantounderstandherresolve.Withtheirreluctantsupport,thesurgerywasscheduled.Emilywentintotheoperatingroomwithasmileonherface,knowingthatshewasgivinghermotherasecondchanceatlife.AndwhenSusanrecovered,theirbondwasevenstronger,atestamenttothepowerofloveandsacrifice.第二篇:Emilytoldallthistohermom,Susan.Susanwasvisiblyshaken,hereyesfilledwithhorroratthethoughtofEmilyendangeringherself."Emily,youaremylife,butIcan'tletyoudothis.Whatifsomethinghappenstoyou?I'dratherbearthepainmyself."Emily'stearsfellsilentlyasshereplied,"Mom,withoutyou,therewouldbenolifeformetocherish.Yourlovehasalwaysprotectedme,andnowit'smytimetoprotectyou."Theirconversationwasfilledwithrawemotion,withbothmotheranddaughtertornbetweenloveandfear.However,Emilyinsistedthathermomacceptherliverdonation.Shesoughtadvicefromothermedicalexperts,tryingtofindwaystominimizetherisks.Shealsoreachedouttofriendswhohadgonethroughsimilarsituationsforsupportandencouragement.Asdayspassed,herdeterminationworedownSusan'sresistance.Finally,thefamilycametogether,surroundingEmilywithloveandsupport.Thesurgerywasasuccess,andastheyallwatchedSusanregainherhealth,theyrealizedthatlovehadtriumphedoverall.Itwasajourneythattaughtthemthetruemeaningoffamilyandthestrengththatlieswithinunwaveringlove.Onepossibleversion:Emilytoldallthistohermom,Susan.However,whenSusanlearntthatitwouldcausegreatharmtoEmily'sbody,shestronglyrefusedtoallowEmilytodonateherliv-er.“Ican'tloseyoueither,”Susansaid,tearsstreamingdownherface.SheknewhowmuchEmilyhadalreadyovercome
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