专题07 书面表达热点话题10篇-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（深圳专用）-4

2023深圳市中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递第四期专题07书面表达热点话题10篇一、通知1．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）为丰富校园生活，学校的英语俱乐部决定举办以“最美深圳”(AmazingShenzhen)为主题的英文绘本大赛。请你根据以下提示，写一则活动通知。要点：1.参赛对象：全校学生2.提交时间：下周五上午12:00前3.绘本内容：选择深圳这座城市的任一方面，如发展历程、景点、文化、志愿服务等。4.参赛要求：①绘本必须原创；②……（至少补充一点）参考词汇：内容content；原创的original要求：1.词数80左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。NoticeInordertoenrichstudents’campuslife,theschoolEnglishclubdecidestoholdanEnglishpicturebookcompetitionwiththetheme“AmazingShenzhen”._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EnglishClub【答案】Onepossibleversion:NoticeInordertoenrichstudents’campuslife,theschoolEnglishclubdecidestoholdanEnglishpicturebookcompetitionwiththetheme“AmazingShenzhen”.Thefollowingissomethingyoushouldpayattentionto.Allthestudentscantakepartinthecompetition.Yourworksshouldbehandedinbefore12:00amnextFriday.YoucanfinishyourEnglishpicturebooksfromanyaspectofShenzhen,suchasitsdevelopmenthistory,scenicspots,culture,volunteerservicesandsoon.Rememberthatyourworksmustbeoriginalandthecontentsshouldbepositive.Wehopeallofyoucantakepartinthecompetition.EnglishClub【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇通知，介绍英文绘本大赛。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。③提示：题目要求根据提示写一则通知，内容为举办以“最美深圳”(AmazingShenzhen)为主题的英文绘本大赛。写作时注意适当增加细节，补充要点，同时不要遗漏所给要点。[写作步聚]第一步，先简单介绍活动内容。（开头已给出）第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍活动的具体内容以及要求。第三步，最后号召大家积极参加。[亮点词汇]①payattentionto注意②takepartin参加③handin上交[高分句型]①Yourworksshouldbehandedinbefore12:00amnextFriday.（含情态动词的被动语态）②Rememberthatyourworksmustbeoriginalandthecontentsshouldbepositive.（肯定祈使句）二、材料作文2．（2023·广东深圳·校联考二模）目前我国生态环境保护任务依然艰巨，生态环境部表示：2023年将积极推进美丽中国建设实践，扎实推动绿色低碳高质量发展，深入打好污染防治攻坚战，扎实推进蓝天保卫战、碧水保卫战、净土保卫战，加强固体废物和新污染物治理，深入推进“无废城市”高质量建设，切实维护生态环境安全，加快健全现代环境治理体系。假设你校的英语校报正在征集有关“环保周”的文章，请你根据以下提示写一篇关于环保的英语短文。生态环境现状河水变脏、天空变成灰色、一些地区没有干净的饮用水环保措施1.不往河里乱扔垃圾；2.节约用水3.……（补充1—2点措施）呼吁携手共建美丽中国要求：1.内容完整，条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；2.词数不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名；4.标点正确，卷面整洁。参考词汇：rubbish垃圾

environmentalprotection环保Asisknowntoall,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Asisknowntoall,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse.Nowtheriverhasbecomedirty,theskyhasturnedgray,andsomeareasdonothavecleandrinkingwater.Solet’sdosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.Don’tlittertheriver.Atthesametime,wealsoneedtosavewater.Itisnecessaryforustogotoschoolbybusoronfoot,becauseitcancutdownonthewasteair.Wehadbetterplantmoretrees.Recyclingisgoodforourplanetbecauseitchangeslitterintosomethingthatwecanuseagain.Environmentalprotectioniscloselyrelatedtoourdailylife.Soitiseveryone’sresponsibilitytoprotectourenvironment.Let’sbuildabeautifulChinatogether.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据题干中的要求介绍如何保护环境，可适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，并介绍生态环境现状；第二步，详细介绍环保措施；第三步，发出呼吁。[亮点词汇]①atthesametime同时②hadbetter最好③berelatedto和……有关[高分句型]①Itisnecessaryforustogotoschoolbybusoronfoot,becauseitcancutdownonthewasteair.(because引导的原因状语从句)②Recyclingisgoodforourplanetbecauseitchangeslitterintosomethingthatwecanuseagain.(that引导的定语从句)3．（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）为了发展学生兴趣爱好、丰富职业体验，你校成功举办了题为“ExperiencingFutureJob”的职业体验游园活动。学校英文报就此活动展开征文比赛。请你根据以下内容投稿。1.场景描写：①多种职业②……2.体验描述：①你的选择②……3.体验感悟：注意：1.词数80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。参考词汇：career职业；gametester游戏测试师；astronaut宇航员；fitnessinstructor健身教练Lastweek,theactivity“ExperiencingFutureJob”washeldinourschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Lastweek,theactivity“ExperiencingFutureJob”washeldinourschool.Thereweremanyjobsforustochooseintheactivity,suchasteachers,doctors,astronauts,fitnessinstructorsandsoon.Wecouldchoosethejobweliked.Ichosetobeateacherasmyjob.BecauseIwantedtobeateacherlikemymother.Itaughtourstudentsalotofknowledge.Ialsotalkedwiththemabouttheirdreamsandfuturelives.WhenIwaswithmanystudents,Ifeltrealizedteachingisagreatprofession.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意要点齐全，不要遗漏，语句通顺，表述完整。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，直接引出职业体验游园活动；第二步，具体介绍活动场景和内容；第三步，介绍自己的体验感悟。[亮点词汇]①alotof大量的②talkwith交流[高分句型]①Thereweremanyjobsforustochooseintheactivity,suchasteachers,doctors,astronauts,fitnessinstructorsandsoon.（therebe句型）②WhenIwaswithmanystudents,Ifeltrealizedteachingisagreatprofession.（when引导的时间状语从句）4．（2023·广东深圳·校考一模）深圳是座现代化的花园城市，致力于率先实现碳中和。为了实现这个目标，我们每个人都应该为此尽一份力。假如你是李华，请你写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿，写一封倡议信，介绍你的想法和做法并号召大家都积极行动起来，为保护环境而贡献自己的力量。要点：1）保护环境的意义。2）我们能够做些什么：比如①做环保型消费者；②节约水电……3）号召大家参加此活动。要求：1）词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；2）要点齐全，可适当发挥；3）条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Dearfollowstudents,WehaveonlyoneEarth,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【答案】例文：Dearfollowstudents,WehaveonlyoneEarth.Earthisouronlyhome.Asweallknow,ourearthfacesmanychallenges,suchasglobalwarming,environmentalpollution,naturaldisastersandsoon.Thesethingsaremakingourearthworseandworse.Protectingtheenvironmentisprotectingourselves.Sowemustdosomethingtoprotectit.First,beenvironmentallyfriendlyconsumers.Weshouldtrytogotoworkbybikeoronfootinsteadofbycars.Secondly,savewaterandelectricityinourdaily.Inaddition,wecanworkasvolunteerstotellpeopletheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Let’stakeactiveactiontocontributeoureffortstoprotectingtheenvironment.Iamsureourcitywillbecomebetterandbetter.Lihua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为应用文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：3个写作要点已经给出，需要具体化；这是一篇倡议信，所以“能够做些什么”部分可以用祈使句和情态动词来表达。[写作步骤]第一步，描写保护环境的意义；第二步，描写为了保护环境我们能够做的事情；第三步，号召大家积极行动起来保护环境。[亮点词汇]①beenvironmentallyfriendlyconsumers成为环保型消费者②inaddition另外③tellpeopletheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment告诉人们保护环境的重要性④contributeoureffortsto为……做出贡献[高分句型]Iamsureourcitywillbecomebetterandbetter.（宾语从句）5．（2023·广东深圳·南山实验教育集团南海中学校考二模）传统的长途旅行常常让人疲惫不堪，越来越多的人选择在自家周边方便轻松地度过周末。假如你是深圳市南山区的一名九年级学生李华，请在班上给同学们介绍一些南山区的好去处以及可开展的活动，并呼吁大家多出门走走。要点：1.大沙河公园（DashahePark）：野餐、放风筝，……2.华侨城湿地公园（OCTWetlandPark）：观鸟、骑自行车，……3.其他地点：……，……（自行补充至少2项活动）要求：1.词数80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范整洁；4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplechoosetodo“staycation”.LetmeintroducesomeoftheattractionsinNanshanDistricttoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplechoosetodo“staycation”.LetmeintroducesomeoftheattractionsinNanshanDistricttoyou.First,youcangototheDashahePark.Itisbeautifulforitsnaturalscenery.Youcanhavepicnicswithyourfamilyorfriendsthere.Whentheweatherisfine,youcanflykitesandplaygameswithyourchildren.Therearelotsofotheractivitiesthatyouareinterestedin.Second,OCTWetlandParkisalsoagoodplacetorelax.Thereareallkindsofbirds.Youcangobird-watchingwithyourclassmates.Whenyougocyclingalongtheriver,youcanseefascinatingcloudsintheskyandenjoythesunset.Itisgreat.YoucanvisitsomeplacesofinterestandtakebeautifulphotosinNanshanDistrict.Itwillhelpyourelaxyourselvesaswellashavefun.【详解】［总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；②时态：本文为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中大沙河公园中野餐、放风筝；华侨城湿地公园中观鸟、骑自行车等要点介绍，并自行补充至少2项活动，注意保证选词准确，条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范整洁。［写作步骤］第一步，表明写作意图。以“介绍深圳市南山区的景点来度过轻松的周末，”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。大沙河公园中野餐、放风筝；华侨城湿地公园中观鸟、骑自行车等要点介绍，和其他一些活动；第三步，书写结语。南山区还有更多其他景点可供放松和玩乐。［亮点词汇］①staycation居家度假②attraction有吸引力的（事物）③scenery风景④fascinating极有吸引力的；迷人的［高分句型］①Therearelotsofotheractivitiesthatyouareinterestedin.(that引导定语从句)②Itwillhelpyourelaxyourselvesaswellashavefun.(aswellas和……一样；除……以外还）6．（2023·广东深圳·校考二模）近期，深圳市电视台对中学生闲暇活动的安排进行了采访及调查，假如你是学生代表李华，请用英语写一篇短文介绍你和同学们的闲暇活动开展情况。要点提示：1.内容：体育，如跑步；艺术，如唱歌绘画；劳动，如做家务、参加志愿者活动；其它，如阅读……2.好处：休息放松，学习新知识，学会新技能，结交新朋友等。3.个人观点：……要求：1.词数80词左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；3.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。参考词语：volunteer,relax,knowledge,skillFree-timeActivitiesFree-timeactivitiesaregoodforusteenagers__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Free-timeActivitiesFree-timeactivitiesaregoodforusteenagers.Differentpeoplehavedifferentfree-timeactivities,andI’dliketoshareouractivitieswithyou.Firstly,bothmyfriendsandIpaymuchattentiontophysicalhealth,soweoftendosportstogether,suchasrunning,playingbasketballandsoon.Theseactivitiescanalsohelptorelaxourselves.Secondly,wearefondofsinginganddrawing,whichhelpusmakemorefriends.Thirdly,labouristhesourceofhappiness.Iusuallyhelpmymotherdosomehouseworkandjoininsomevolunteeractivitiesinordertohelppeopleinneed.Atthesametime,Icanlearnsomenewskills.Finally,readingisoneofmyhobbies,andIcanalwayslearnsomeknowledgebyreading.Inaword,free-timeactivitiescannotonlyenrichourlife,butalsohelpuslearnsomethingnew.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，所需要点已经给出；②时态：一般现在时为主；③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，以“想和你分享我们的活动”引出下文；第二步，按照要点提示，从体育，艺术，劳动等方面阐述自己的闲暇活动，并注意补充内容，可使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly等词语使得文章连贯，并注意说明这些活动的好处；第三步，结尾表达自己的看法，表示自己对闲暇活动的赞同。[亮点词汇]①sharesthwithsb和某人分享某物②paymuchattentionto很注意③befondof喜爱④enrichourlife丰富我们的生活[高分句型]①Wearefondofsinginganddrawing,whichhelpusmakemorefriends.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）三、电子邮件7．（2022·广东深圳·统考二模）为落实国家教育部提出的加强中小学劳动教育的实施意见，你们学校安排了丰富多彩的劳动教育课。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Linda对你参加的课程很感兴趣，她发来邮件想了解有关情况。请你根据以下提示，给Linda回一封邮件。要点:1.劳动教育的目的：树立劳动光荣的观念、培养良好的劳动习惯等；2.具体活动：学习传统手工制作、学做家务等；3.你对学校开展的劳动教育课的看法。(至少给出两点)要求:1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校;3.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;4.条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：劳动教育thelaboreducation劳动课thelaborlesson/course

手工课themanualtraininglesson/courseDearLinda,I’mgladtohearfromyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文:DearLinda,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Yousayyouareinterestedinourlaborcourse.Iwouldliketosharesomethingaboutitwithyou.Asweknow,thelaborcourseissettoeducatestudentstorespectandhonorhardwork,andformgoodworkinghabits.Inourschool,weareofferedvariousChinesetraditionalmanualtrainingcourses,suchaspaper-cutting.Welearntodohouseworkaswell.Someteachersteachustocookseveralkindsofsimpledishes.Inmyview,throughthelaboreducation,westudentscanacquiresomelifeskills.Meanwhile,ourschoollifewillbecomemorecolorfulandmeaningful.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意补充两点对劳动教育课的看法。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，和笔友分享关于劳动教育课的情况；第二步，详细介绍开展劳动教育的目的以及具体的活动内容有哪些；第三步，表达自己的看法。[亮点词汇]①beinterestedin对……感兴趣②sharesth.withsb.和某人分享某物③formgoodworkinghabits养成良好的工作习惯④teachsb.todosth.教某人做某事[高分句型]Yousayyouareinterestedinourlaborcourse.（省略that的宾语从句）8．（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）2023年春节期间，深圳宝安区举办了首届“民族美食嘉年华”活动，将民族美食融入新春文化。假如你是李华，你在春节期间参加了这次美食嘉年华。请根据以下提示，给你的外教Mr.Smith写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。要点：1.时间地点：2023年1月15日，宝安万达广场2.内容：①品尝不同民族的美食；②欣赏少数民族舞蹈表演；③……（请自行补充两点内容）3.你的感受：……（请自行补充两点感受）要求：1.80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：美食嘉年华FoodCarnival少数民族ethnicminority万达广场WandaPlazaDearMr.Smith,DuringtheSpringFestival,weheldaFoodCarnivalinShenzhen.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMr.Smith,DuringtheSpringFestival,weheldaFoodCarnivalinShenzhen.ItwaswonderfulandIwouldliketotellyousomedetailsaboutit.TheFoodCarnivalwasheldatWandaPlazainBaoan,onJanuary15,2023.PeoplecelebratedtheSpringFestivalbyenjoyingdeliciousfood.Firstly,wetasteddifferentethnicfoodfromalloverthecountry,suchasTibetanfoodanddrinksandMiaofood.Then,weenjoyedadanceshowfromEthnicminorities.Thedancersworebeautifulclothes.Theperformancewassofantasticthatitattractsmanyaudiences.Also,therewasaDIYactivitywhichwecouldjoininandmakehandicraftsbyourselves.What’smore,thereweremanylanternsandpeoplecouldtrytosolvethepuzzlesonthelanterns.Thecarnivalwasreallyinterestingandunforgettable.WecanexperiencecolorfulChinesecultureinadifferentway.IhopeyoucanattendtheFoodCarnivalnextyear.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，属于电子邮件写作；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；第二步，根据要点提示介绍活动的时间、地点，以及活动的具体内容，需要自行补充至少两个活动内容，可列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发此活动带来的感受并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①fromalloverthecountry来自全国各地②solvethepuzzlesonthelanterns猜灯谜[高分句型]①Theperformancewassofantasticthatitattractsmanyaudiences.（so…that引导结果状语从句）②Also,therewasaDIYactivitywhichwecouldjoininandmakehandicraftsbyourselves.（which引导限制性定语从句）9．（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony即将在暑假来深圳研学旅行。请你根据以下提示给他写一封邮件，帮助他适应在深圳的生活。内容提示：（1）欢迎他来深研学旅行；（2）你的建议：学习一些中国习俗，如使用筷子等；购物时可以使用移动支付；……（3）你对他的祝福。要求：（1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；（4）标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：研学旅行studytrip

移动支付mobilepaymentDearTony,Iamsogladthat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】(Onepossibleversion)DearTony,IamsogladthatyouaregoingtohaveastudytripinShenzhenthissummerholiday.Tohelpyouliveahappyandsafelifehere,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.First,youcanlearnsomeChinesecustoms,suchashowtousechopsticks,howtogreetpeopleandsoon.Second,whenyoushop,youcanpaywithmobilepayment.Besides,thetrafficrulesaredifferentfromthoseintheUK.Thedriversdriveontherightsideoftheroad,sowhenyoucrosstheroad,youshouldlookleft.IhopethatyoucanhaveagoodtimeinShenzhen.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并结合要点进行适当的发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，欢迎他来深圳进行研学旅行；第二步，具体介绍给他的一些建议；第三步，表达对他的祝福。[亮点词汇]①andsoon等等②bedifferentfrom与……不同③haveagoodtime玩得开心④lookforwardto期盼[高分句型]①Tohelpyouliveahappyandsafelifehere,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.（不定式作目的状语）②First,youcanlearnsomeChinesecustoms,suchashowtousechopsticks,howtogreetpeopleandsoon.（疑问词+不定式）四、书信作文10．（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）深圳是一座“爱阅之城”。假如你是李华，你的外教Sam发来一封邮件，说他对光明区随处可见的24小时书香亭(self-servicelibrary)很感兴趣，请你给他写一封回信，向他介绍书香亭并邀请他参加书香亭推广活动。1.介绍书香亭：1)光明区有71台书香亭，每台可放置约200本书；2)可以从书香亭拿到网上预借的图