2025届北京海淀区北方交通大学附属中学高考全国统考预测密卷英语试卷含解析

2025届北京海淀区北方交通大学附属中学高考全国统考预测密卷英语试卷考生须知：1．全卷分选择题和非选择题两部分，全部在答题纸上作答。选择题必须用2B铅笔填涂；非选择题的答案必须用黑色字迹的钢笔或答字笔写在“答题纸”相应位置上。2．请用黑色字迹的钢笔或答字笔在“答题纸”上先填写姓名和准考证号。3．保持卡面清洁，不要折叠，不要弄破、弄皱，在草稿纸、试题卷上答题无效。第一部分（共20小题，每小题1.5分，满分30分）1．________they’vemanagedtogeteverythingfinishedsoquicklyisnotcleartous.A．WhichB．WhatC．ThatD．How2．Haveyouheardthattheyareworkingaroundtheclocktocompetefortheprize?Don’tworry.Wearereadytothechallenge.A．buildup B．takeupC．stickto D．leadto3．Whatimpressedmemostaboutthemoviewerethe________filmedinNewYork.A．scenery B．scenesC．sights D．views4．ItwasluckythatlittleJackwasnotathomewhenthefirebrokeout；otherwise，hehislife．A．hadlost B．wouldlose C．wouldhavelost D．mightlose5．______theeffortsmadebythepolice,afantasticperformancewillbeputontomorrow.A．InplaceofB．InsearchofC．InchargeofD．Inpraiseof6．She________tosomeoneonthephone,soIjustnoddedtoherandwentaway.A．talked B．hastalkedC．hadtalked D．wastalking7．Jimtoldusallthat_______hesaidsoatthemeetingwasright.A．all B．whatC．allthat D．that8．Wearelivinginanagemostofthingsaredoneoncellphones.A．which B．thatC．whose D．when9．.Wedidn’tfindtheBlacksduringthelecture.Noonehadtoldthemabout_____alecture.A．theretobe B．therebeing C．therebe D．therewas10．Aroundthispoint______,whichishumorousandfullofastronglocalflavor.A．thestorydevelops B．doesthestorydevelopC．developsthestory D．thestorydeveloped11．Bythetimeherealizesthemistakehe________，itwillbetoolateforhimtodoanythingaboutit.A．hasmade B．made C．makes D．willmake12．It'ssaidthatthepowerplantisnowlargeaswhatitwas.A．twiceas B．astwiceC．twicemuch D．muchtwice13．Wheneveryou________apresent,youshouldthinkaboutitfromthereceiver’spointofview.A．bought B．havebought C．willbuy D．buy14．______hislove,Chrissenthismomathank-younoteonMother’sDay.A．ExpressingB．ExpressedC．ToexpressD．Havingexpressed15．——Yourargumentis.Iwillnotletyoupass.--Areyoukidding?A．sound B．rationalC．liberal D．plain16．—Whataboutwatchingaballetshowthisevening?—Thanksforinvitingme,butballetisn’treally______.A．theappleofmyeye B．myfeetofclayC．mycupoftea D．thesaltoftheearth17．Theeventthat_________inmymemoryhappenedonemorningin1983whenIwas14yearsold.Ithasneverescaped.A．stoodoutB．standsoutC．wouldstandoutD．hasstoodout18．Thisisthefirsttimethatyourparentshavebeenabroad,______?A．haven’tthey B．hasn’tit C．aren’tthey D．isn’tit19．Communicationcanhelpyougainmorerespectfromyourparents,andyoumaybeabletoreach____thatmakeeveryonehappy.A．compromises B．contributions C．congratulations D．competitions20．Whenyouaredressedinthelateststyle,dancingtothemostfashionablemusicafterwatchingthelatestfilm,youfeelgreat,______? A．aren'tyou B．don'tyou C．doyou D．areyou第二部分阅读理解（满分40分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。21．（6分）Idema,aDutchSinologist（汉学家）,hasservedasthedirectoroftheChineseLanguagesandCulturesDepartmentatLeidenUniversityoftheNetherlandsandwasalsodirectorofHarvard'sFairbankCenterforEastAsianResearch.HehasstudiedancientChineseplays,novelsandliterature,andhasauthoredortranslatedanumberofinfluentialbookspublishedinEnglishandotherlanguages.The70-year-oldDutchSinologistrecalledhishalf-century-longromancewithChinesecultureduringarecentvisittoBeijing.Asachild,thevividdescriptionsofChinainNobelandPulitzerPrize-winnerPearlS.Buck’sbookssparkedIdema'sinterestinthecountry.HelaterreadclassicChineseliteratureandspentwholedayspouringthroughworksattheNationalLibraryofChina.WhilemanyotherexpertsonChinafocusedonthecountry'seconomictransformation,IdemacontinuedtostudytraditionalChineseliterature."Therewerescholarsstudyinglaw,religionandsociety,butnottraditionalChineseliterature,whichwasmypersonalinterest,"Idemaexplains.Findingreferencebooksforhisresearch,especiallyregionalpublications,usedtobeahugechallenge,andIdemausedtospendalotoftimecollectingbooksandothermaterialsduringvisitstoChina.NowitismuchmoreconvenientwiththeInternet.Idemausuallychoosesless-knownsubjectsforhisresearchandtriestogetfirsthandmaterials.Inrecentyears,hehasdevotedhimselftotranslatingChinesefolktalesandwritingaboutChinesefolksocietyandfolkculture."TraditionalChinesecultureisapassion.Ihavebeenstudyingitfor50yearsandwillcontinuetodoso,"saystheretiredprofessor.1、Whatdoestheunderlinedword"sparked"inParagraph2mean?A．Increased.B．Broke.C．Performed.D．Aroused.2、IdemaconcentratedontraditionalChineseliteraturebecause.A．hewantedtoshowhewasdifferentfromothersB．hewasinterestedintraditionalChineseliteratureC．traditionalChineseliteratureiseasiertostudythanotherfieldsD．hecouldbenefittedalotfromthetraditionalChineseliterature3、Whatmaybethebesttitleforthetext?A．APassionforChineseCultureB．TheLifeofIdemaC．Idema'sVisittoChinaD．ThePersonalHobby22．（8分）Saturday，22April,2017Wearecurrentlyonacamp-sitenearCalais,onourwaytotheUK,anditispouringwithrain.AsifgodswanttoprepareusfortheUKatallcosts.Asifwedon'tknowwhatrainis...Ourferrytothegreenisleswillleavetomorrowat10.30anddespitetherain,Iamreallylookingforwardtoit.Ithastakenusawhiletogethere,aswealreadyleftElChorroon4April.AfterrushingthroughSpainintwodays,however,wecametoaninevitableslow-downwhenweenteredFrance.Inevitable,asFrancehassimplytoomuchtoofferforus.SoassoonaswecrossedthePyrenees,ourdrivingsequencebecamesomethinglikedrivingafewkilometres,visitingacastle,drivingafewkilometres,takingpicturesofanicechurch,drivingafewkilometres,havingaquickpeekatafleasmarket,drivingafewkilometres,visitingamuseumetc.WhenweenteredBrittanytherealsightseeingstarted,inVannes,inLorient,inBrestandthenontoNormandy:LeMontStMichel,Bayeuxandfinally,finallytheD-Daybeaches.Ialwayswantedtovisitthese,forobviousreasonsIwouldsay,butmyfather,realisticashewas,calculatedthechancesthatitwouldrainaconsiderableamountofdaysofathree-weekholidayandalwaysdecidedagainstit.ButafewdaysagoIfinallysteppedontoGoldBeach(wheretheBritslanded)andIwasgreetedbytheNormansun.Abeautifulday.1、Itwas_____whenthewriterwasonhiswaytotheUK.A．pouringB．foggyC．snowyD．sunny2、Accordingtothepassage,thePyreneesmustbeaplacein_____.A．SpainB．FranceC．NetherlandD．Normandy3、WhichofthefollowingstatementisNOTtrue?A．Theyspent2daysinSpaintraveling.B．ThewriterthoughtFrancehasalotofplacestovisit.C．ThewriterthoughttherealsightseeingwasinE1Chorro,andinBrest.D．Thewriter’sfatherwasarealisticperson.4、Thepassageprobablycomesfrom_______.A．atraveljournalB．asciencefictionC．anewsreportD．afilmreview23．（8分）WhenCharlesLeehandedmethesmallrednotebookin1974,hechangedmylife.“Whileyouaretraveling,youshouldkeepnotesofthingsyouseeanddo,”heexplained.Iwas20yearsold,ajuniorincollege,spendingatermattheUniversityofLondon.Charleswasaretiredtravelingsalesman.IwasstayingwithhiminhiscottageinKendal,locatedintheLakeDistrictofnorthernEngland.Itwasaone-weekhomestaytheuniversityarrangedforusbeforeclassesbegan.Itookhisadvice.Iwroteinthenotebookeverydayduringthehomestay.BackinLondon,IrecordedweekendtripstoWales,Yorkshire,France,andSpain.Icommentedonmyclasses,professors,andclassmates.IcontrastedmylifeatasmallcollegeintheUSwithmywanderingthroughthestreetsofLondon,myintroductiontolifeinabigcity,andmyinitialtravelsoutsidetheUS.ItrackedideasIhadaboutmylifeandmyfuture.WhenIwroteinthenotebook,Istruggledwithasenseofmyaudienceandpurpose.Whowouldreadthis?Werethesewritingsjustforme,ordidIwantotherstoreadthem?WasIrecordingeventsandideasjustasaprompt(提示)tomemory,orwastheresomelargerpurposeforthisdailyexercise?IknewIwasrecordingevents,thoughts,wordsthatwereimportanttomylife.Iimaginedafuturemesittingdowntoreadthepages.Iwonderedwhatitwouldfeelliketoreadthosewordslater.IwonderedwhereIwouldbeandwhatmylifewouldbelike.IfilledthenotebookCharlesgaveme.Iboughtanewoneandfilledit.Thenanotherandanother.Icontinuedwritinginnotebooksforfourdecades.Bythattime,theyfilledtwoboxesinmygarage.Ihadrereadsomeofthejournals.SpecificvolumeshadprovidedmewiththebackgroundIneededfordozensofarticlesformagazines.ButIhadneverreadthemall.Recently,Idecidedtobringmycollectionofnotebooksintomyofficeandreplaymylife.AsIopenedthefirstbox,IsuddenlybecamenervouswouldIliketheformermedescribedonthosepages?Therewasariskinopeningthatfirstnotebook.Ididitanyway.Charleshadbeenright.Irememberedthebigeventsandthecentralhappenings,butoneachpageweremanydetailsIhadn’tretained(保留).Thepagesrevealedhighlightsfromcollegeclassesandstoriesaboutroommatesandfriends.IreadanxiouscommentsI’dwrittenasI’dlaunchedmyteachingcareer,learnedtowritelessonplants,assignedgradesforstudentwork,andsolveddisciplineproblems.Ireflectedonmycomingmarriage,thenthewedding,andeventuallytheproudmomentswhenIheldeachofmythreegirlsasafather.Irecountedmoretrips—returningtoEurope,teachinginSouthAmerica,goingonsafari(游猎)inAfrica,andexploringGreenland.Irelivedmemoriesoftrailshit,riverscrossed,andmountainsclimbed.Thewritingsinthosejournalsframedmylife.Ihadn’twritteneveryday.Ioftenskippedafewdaysorevenweeks,butIalwayspickedupthewritingwhenitfeltimportant.JournalswentwithmewhenItraveled,andIoftenwroteinthematschoolwhenmyownstudentswerewriting.Ittookseverallongeveningstoreadthroughthenotebooks,takingmeontourspanning(持续)42years.AsIreadIcouldrecallsittingonabenchinTrafalgarSquareinLondonorinourapartmentinPerutowritetothefutureme.ItwasthenthatIrealized:IamnowthepersonIwaswritingtothroughoutthoseyears.1、WhatcanwelearnaboutCharlesLee?A．HewasanEnglishmantheauthorcameacross.B．Hegavetheauthoranotebookasbirthdaypresent.C．Theauthorgainedvaluableexperienceoflifefromhim.D．Theauthoroncelivedinhishouseasacollegegraduate.2、Onereasonwhytheauthorkeptwritingjournalswasthathewantedto________.A．letothersreadwhathewroteinthefutureB．liveuptoCharlesLee’sexpectationforhimC．knowwhathislifewouldbelikeinthefutureD．leavesomethingspecialtohisthreedaughters3、Howdidtheauthorfeelwhenheopenedthefirstboxfilledwithhisjournals?A．Curious.B．Worried.C．Surprised.D．Disappointed.4、BymentioningthehighlightsinParagraph10,theauthorintendstotellus________.A．theregretshehadabouthislifeB．thebenefitsofkeepingjournalsC．thebigeventsthathappenedtohimD．thethemesofhisarticlesformagazines5、Wecanlearnfromthepassagethattheauthor________.A．rarelywrotejournalsatschoolB．keepsadailyjournalofhislifeC．evenwrotejournalswhentravelingD．hadkeptwritingjournalsforfivedecades6、Whatwouldbethebesttitleforthepassage?A．RereadingmyjournalsB．MyinterestingexperienceoflifeC．ArednotebookD．Agifttomyfutureself24．（8分）Super-stormSandyslammedintotheeasternUnitedStatesthreeyearsago.Thewind-drivenwatercausedalotofflooding,especiallyintheregion’ssubwaysystem.Nowtwoteenshaveinventedadevicethatcouldhelppreventfuturesubwayfloods.InNewYorkCityalone,Super-stormSandycausedanestimated$19billionindamage.Muchoftheflood-watersenteredthesubwaysystemthroughitsventilationgrates(通风栅).Thosemetalgrillsusuallylieatgroundlevel.Whenthesystemisshutdownaheadofaflood,engineerstrytocoverthosegrateswithplywood(胶合板)andsandbags.Butthefloodingoftenwashesawaythosemeasures,whichallowswatertoflowintothetunnels.Raisingthosegratesevenatinybitabovegroundlevelwouldcostalotofmoney.Otherideashaveincludedbuildingtallchimneysaroundtheholes.Thatwouldraisethegratesandcostalotofmoney,too.KyleandRaymondcameupwithadifferent,lessexpensiveidea.Theydesignedametalgratewithabuilt-in,adjustablecover.Whentrainsarerunning,onepartofthegrateslidesopentobringinfreshair.Butwhenthesystemisshutdown,thatpartcanbeslidshutlocompletelyblockthegrate.Theirgrateisthesamesizeasthegratesusednow.So,itwouldbesimple,theysay,toliftouttheoldgrateanddropinareplacement.Theirdesignincludestamper-prooffeatures,whichcanpreventfromoperationmistakes.Theymakesurethatpeopledon’tintentionallyshutoffairflowduringnormalconditions.Forpeoplewiththeproperkey,itwouldonlytakeaminuteortwotoclosethegrateaheadofaflood.1、What’sthesecondparagraphmainlyabout?A．Thestepstooperategrates.B．Themeasurestopreventflood.C．Thefunctionofplywoodandsandbags.D．Thedisadvantageofpresentsubwaysystem.2、Whichofthefollowingwordsbestdescribesthetwoteens’newinvention?A．Costly.B．Time-saving.C．Practical.D．Conventional.3、What’sthepurposeofdesigningthetamper-prooffeature?A．Toreplacetheoldgratecorrectly.B．Toclosethegrateaheadofaflood.C．Toensureairflowinnormalconditions.D．Tostopthetrainspeedingupunexpectedly.4、Wheredoesthetextmostprobablycomefrom?A．Anewsreport.B．Anadventurousstory.C．Anintroductiontonewequipment.D．Aguidebookofmakinggrates.25．（10分）SusanBrownellAnthonywasaladyaheadofhertime.Shefoughtforwomen'srightslongbeforeitbecameapopularevent.SusanwasbornonFebruary15,1820,inAdams,Massachusetts.Atthattime,womenhadfewrights.Theycouldnotownproperty（财产）.Moneyearnedbyamarriedwomanbelongedtoherhusband.Majordecisionsinvolvingchildrenweremadebythefathers.Womencouldnotvote.Attheageof15,Susanbecameaschoolteacher.Shetaughtfor15years.Thenshebeganorganizingwomen'sgroupstopromoterightsthatwereimportanttowomen.Shehelpedgainbettereducationalrightsforwomen.Shehelpedgivemarriedwomenpossessionoftheirearnings.AftertheCivilWar,Susanbecameveryinvolvedinthewomen'svotingmovement.Afteryearsoflecturing,writing,andappealingbySusanandotherwomen,somepartsoftheUnitedStateschangedtheirlawstogivewomentherighttovote.ThefirststatewasWyomingin1869.OtherareasandstatesgraduallyfollowedWyoming'sdecision.Itwasnotuntil1920thattheU.S.Constitution（宪法）waschangedtogiveallwomenvotingrights.SusanBrownellAnthonydiedin1906attheageof86.ShewaselectedtotheHallofFameforGreatAmericansin1950.ShewasthefirstAmericanwomantohavealikeness（肖像）ofherfaceonacoin.Itwasthe1979SusanBrownellAnthonydollar.1、WhatwasthesituationofAmericanwomenlikewhenSusanwasborn？A．Theyhadlowsocialplace.B．Theycouldvoteaftergettingmarried.C．Theymanagedmoneyfortheirhusbands.D．Theywereresponsiblefordecision-making.2、Whatisthethirdparagraphmainlyabout？A．Susan'steachingexperiences.B．Susan'seducationalbackground.C．Susan'seffortstostopslavery.D．Susan'sfightingforwomen'srights.3、Whatdoestheunderlinedword"decision"inthefourthparagraphreferto？A．Promotingthesocialmovement.B．ChangingtheU.S.Constitution.C．Givingwomenvotingrights.D．Unitingotherareasandstates.4、Whatmaybethebesttitleforthepassage？A．ThefirstAmericanwomantoinventcoinsB．Theproblemofwomen'srightsintheU.S.C．ThemostpopularwomenorganizationD．Apioneerinfightingforwomen'srights第三部分语言知识运用（共两节）第一节（每小题1.5分，满分30分）阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项．26．（30分）GoranKroppwasaSwedishadventurerandmountaineer.In1972,attheageofsix,withhisfather’shelp,he1Galdhopiggen,thehighestmountaininNorthernEurope.twenty-threeyearslater,hestoodonthehighestpeakintheworld,Qomolangma.Hisjourneytothe2showsjusthowindependent,persistent(坚持的),anddeterminedthis3manis.4mostpeoplearriveatthefoothillsofQomolangmabysomesortofmodern5,Kroppbicycled7,000milesfromhishomeinSweden.Travelingbybikewasnot6.Hestoppedmanytimesto7hisbikebecauseroughroadscausedmechanicalproblemsforhim.Inaddition,hewasrunafterbydogs,stungbyhornets(马蜂)andwascaughtintherainseveraltimesbeforehe8thebaseofthemountain.Kropp9toclimbQomolangmathesamewayhetraveledtothemountain:withoutthe10ofothersandwithoutmodernconveniences.Unlikeother11Kroppclimbedthemountainwithoutaguideorhelper.Hedidnot12bottledoxygentohelphim13athighaltitudes,andhecarriedallofhis14himselfinapackthatweighedabout140pounds.IttookKropp15triestoreachthetopofQomolangma.Thefirsttime,hehadto16only350feetfromthetopbecausetheweatherwastoodangerous.Justafewdaysearlier,atthatsameleveleightclimbershad17becauseofasuddensnowstorminthemountain.Hefeltdeepsorrowforthem,butbecamemore18.Themountaineerwaitedoutthestorm,19,andtriedagainafewdayslater.Thistime,hewas20.Afterhewalkeddownthemountain,hegotbackonhisbikeandrodethe7,000milesbacktoSweden.1、A．heardofB．dreamedofC．sawD．climbed2、A．topB．countryC．areaD．valley3、A．outstandingB．generousC．modestD．honest4、A．UnlessB．OnceC．WhileD．Because5、A．designB．vehicleC．theoryD．material6、A．boringB．easyC．tiringD．busy7、A．lockB．rideC．repairD．find8、A．leftB．reachedC．discoveredD．toured9、A．choseB．refusedC．agreedD．hated10、A．presenceB．approvalC．assistanceD．knowledge11、A．observersB．travelersC．mountaineersD．hikers12、A．gatherB．orderC．shareD．bring13、A．breatheB．walkC．liveD．stay14、A．medicinesB．foodC．clothesD．equipment15、A．twoB．threeC．manyD．several16、A．goonB．getupC．setoutD．turnback17、A．slippedB．wanderedC．diedD．injured18、A．astonishedB．determinedC．satisfiedD．discouraged19、A．hidB．stoppedC．survivedD．rested20、A．thoughtfulB．successfulC．doubtfulD．meaningful第二节（每小题1.5分，满分15分）阅读下面材料，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。27．（15分）Doyouwanttolearnaforeignlanguage?Chooseoneofthemost1．(use)languagessuggestedbelowtolearn.Inmostcountriesallovertheworld,Englishis2．mostwidelyusedsecondlanguage.Whetherapersonistravelingtoaforeigncountryorcommunicating3．peoplefromother4．(country)forbusinesspurposes,Englishisonelanguagewhichwillcomeinhandyateverystep.Spanishisthelanguageofbusinessinabouttwentycountries.TherearemanyjobsintheUnitedStatesaswellasinmanyothercountries,whichspeciallyaskforpeople5．knowhowtospeakandwriteSpanish.TheChineseeconomyisbooming!Inthefuture,China6．(become)theeconomicworldleader,whichmakes7．theperfecttimetolearnMandarinChinese,alanguage8．(speak)bymillionsofpeople.Frenchisrecognizedasoneofthetoplanguagestolearn,9．(simple)becauseitisachieflanguageinnorthernandwesternAfrica.AnyonetryingtounderstandEuropeanhistorycanbenefitalotfrom10．(learn)thislanguage.第四部分写作（共两节）第一节短文改错（满分10分）28．（10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。WevoluntarilyparticipatedinanactivityorganizedbyourschoolinSaturday、WegottogetherattheGoodwillSquareandhandedoutleafletstopassers-by,tellthemthesignificanceofenvironmentalprotection、Theleafletssoonattracttheattentionofthepublic、Someofusalsodeliveredapublicspeechtotellpeoplesomeknowledgesabouthowtoprotecttheenvironment、Theywerealsotoldwheretotakeactioninaproperlyandefficientway、ThisactivitywasofferedusachancetocontributetooursocietybutIhavelearnedmuchfromit、Ithinksomeoneshouldbeconcernedaboutourenvironmentandtakeactivepartinimprovingit、13第二节书面表达（满分25分）29．（25分）假定你是李华,你的笔友Tom给你写信咨询“如何在班级创设浓厚的汉语学习氛围”。请你根据提示给他写一封英文回信。内容包括:1.宣传标语用英汉双语;2.开设汉语角;3.邀请汉语外教来学校上课。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearTom,Howareyoudoing?I’mgladtohearfromyou.Fromyourletter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua

参考答案第一部分（共20小题，每小题1.5分，满分30分）1、D2、B3、B4、C5、D6、D7、A8、D9、B10、C11、A12、A13、D14、C15、D16、C17、B18、D19、A20、B第二部分阅读理解（满分40分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。21、1、D2、B3、A22、Manyscholarshipsrequirethatyouwriteanessayinordertobeconsideredfortheprizemoney.However,ifyouarethesortofpersonthathasaheadachewheneveryouhavetocompleteawritingassignment,thismaynotbethebestnews.Luckilyforyou,thereisnoreasontofearthescholarshipessay.Thefollowingtipscouldhelpyouconquerthisnot-so-easyaspectofthescholarshipapplicationprocess.Youshouldalwaysoutlineyouressays.Thisdoesnotjustapplytothescholarshipessays,either.Anoutlinehelpslendfocustoyourthoughtsandhelpsyoucreateapictureofthe“whole”thattheessaywillbecome.Judgescannottostandwhenyourwritingisloose,lackscoherence(连贯性)orwhenyoufailtoconnectyourmainpointstogether.Theywanttoseethatyoucansupportyourargumentwellwithclearandbriefexamplesandthattheseexamplesdo,infact,relatetothetopicathand.Ifyouhaveachoiceinthetopicyougettowriteabout,alwaystrytoselectsomethingyouarepersonallyinterestedin.Don'twritewhatyouthinkthejudgeswanttohear.Thiswillonlyamountinanessaythatreadslikesomeoneelse’s,whichisnotagreatwaytomakeyourselfstandout.Ifyoufeelboredwiththetopic,thenyouressaywillbeboringaswell.Makesureyourideafollowaclearand