2025届中考英语复习写作培优册（外研版广西专用）07-人与自我-主题7 经历与感受

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高频主题三阶写作指导人与自我主题7

经历与感受（与家人、朋友之间的事情；让你成长、改变的经历；难忘的经历）【教材模块/单元链接】外研版人教版译林牛津版八（下）M1

感受八（下）M2

个人经历九（上）M4

独自在家的生活九（下）M3

现在的生活&过去的生活八（下）U5

难忘的事情九（全）U4

我们的变化九（全）U11

感受八（下）U1

改变（过去和现在）九（上）U2

颜色和心情九（上）U3

不同的烦恼一阶

素材积累与训练素材积累短语与句型积极正面的感受1.be

deeply

moved

by...

被……深深地感动2.be

thankful

to

sb.感激某人3.be

proud

of...

为……感到骄傲/自豪4.be

pleased

with...

对……满意5.be

surprised

at…

对……感到惊讶6.be

sure

about…

确信；对……有把握7.be

excited

about…

对……感到兴奋8.be

of

help/helpful有帮助的9.enjoy

doing

sth.喜欢做某事10.enjoy

oneself=have

a

good/great/nice/wonderful

time

玩得开心11.look

up

to钦佩，仰慕12.cheer

up使……振作13.The

most

exciting

moment

was…

最激动人心的时刻是……14.a

sense

of…

一种……感15.can’t

wait

to

do

sth.

迫不及待做某事担心/其他感受1.be

afraid

of

（doing）

sth.害怕/担心（做）某事2.be

afraid

to

do

sth.因害怕而不敢做某事3.be/feel

sorry

for…

为……感到抱歉4.be

tired

of/be

bored

with…

对……感到厌倦5.be

angry

with

sb.生某人的气6.be

angry

at/about

sth.因某事而生气7.be

mad

at

sb.生某人的气8.be

in/get

into

trouble陷入困境9.say

sorry

to…

向……道歉10.It’s

a

pity

that…

很遗憾……开头句1.I’m

having

a

wonderful

time

in

Beijing.

I’ve

done

so

many

things!［外研八（下）M2］2.During

my

lifetime，

I’ve

had

a

lot

of

unforgettable

experiences.

Among

them，

the

most

important

experience

was

a

basketball

game

when

I

was

14.

［人教九（全）U11］3.Everyone

has

his

or

her

own

fears.

No

matter

how

big

or

small

it

is，

learning

how

to

overcome

it

is

especially

important.中间句介绍经历与表达感受1.I

often

feel

a

bit

sad

at

first

when

I

leave

my

mum

and

dad

for

a

few

days,

and

I’m

quite

shy

when

I’m

with

strangers.

I

feel

nervous

when

I

speak

Chinese,

but

I’ll

be

fine

in

a

few

days.［外研八（下）M1］2.I

worried

that

I

had

let

my

teacher

and

classmates

down.

But

to

my

surprise，

they

all

comforted

me

with

warm

words.［人教九（全）U11］3.Last

Thursday,

Wang

Hong

saw

an

elderly

blind

man

wandering

around

the

street

corner

on

her

way

home.

Wang

Hong

offered

to

help

him

cross

the

road

after

communicating

with

the

old

man.

When

they

crossed

the

road,

the

drivers

on

the

road

stopped

their

cars

and

waited

patiently.

Wang

Hong

took

the

old

man

across

the

road

and

said

goodbye

to

him.

I

think

Wang

Hong

is

really

a

very

warm-hearted

and

kind

girl.

I

should

learn

from

her

and

try

my

best

to

help

others.结尾句1.From

this

experience，

I

learned

that

it’s

not

terrible

to

fail

as

long

as

I

can

stand

up

in

failure.［人教九（全）U11］2.In

short,

I

think

the

excellent

game

will

be

in

my

mind

forever.3.I

was

so

thankful

that

I

decided

to

help

others

from

then

on.4.In

my

view,

helping

others

gives

me

a

strong

feeling

of

being

needed

and

brings

me

happiness.俗语/谚语1.Many

hands

make

light

work.众人拾柴火焰高。2.Failure

is

the

mother

of

success.失败是成功之母。3.Experience

is

the

best

teacher.经验是最好的老师。4.God

helps

those

who

help

themselves.天助自助者。句型训练1.The

memories

of

the

junior

high

school

are

sweet.

I

will

always

keep

them

in

my

heart.（用so…that…

引导的结果状语从句升格句子）___________________________________________________________________________________________The

memories

of

the

junior

high

school

are

so

sweet

that

I

will

always

keep

them

in

my

heart.2.对我来说，最难忘的经历是和同学们去野营。（汉译英）____________________________________________________________________________________As

for

me,

the

most

unforgettable

experience

is

going

camping

with

my

classmates.3.每当我帮助别人的时候，都会有一种强烈的幸福感。（汉译英）_______________________________________________________________________I

always

have

a

strong

feeling

of

happiness

when

I

give

others

a

hand.4.遗憾的是，我们没有时间品尝当地的食物。（汉译英）_______________________________________________________It’s

a

pity

that

we

didn’t

have

time

to

try

the

local

food.5.我非常感谢我的英语老师，在她的帮助下，我取得了很大的进步。（汉译英）____________________________________________________________________________________I’m

very

thankful

to

my

English

teacher,

and

with

her

help,

I

have

made

great

progress.二阶

主题典例探究

心若芬芳，花自开。生活中总有一些瞬间让我们心生欢喜:一杯热茶、一次偶遇、抑或是一次成功……某英文网站正在开展以“My

little

happiness”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.一次让你心生欢喜的经历（交到新朋友、得到赞扬……）；2.让你心生欢喜的原因；3.你的感受/收获。注意：1.词数为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：fail

an

exam（未通过考试）,

comfort（v.

&

n.

安慰）,

promise（n.

&

v.

承诺）,

moved（adj.

感动的）My

little

happiness

Happiness

is

always

around

us

if

we

put

our

heart

into

it.

______________________写作剖析一、仔细审题1.文体：本文要求记叙一次让自己心生欢喜的经历，是一篇________；记叙文2.时态：记叙一次让自己心生欢喜的经历及自己心生欢喜的原因，时态以____________为主；介绍自己的感受/收获，用一般现在时或现在完成时；一般过去时3.人称：记叙一次让自己心生欢喜的经历及自己心生欢喜的原因，用第____人称和第____人称；介绍自己的感受/收获用第____人称。一三一二、构思框架，列出要点构思框架列出要点1.______________________________想要做某事2.___________________与某人分享某物3.____________告诉某人某事4.___________________结交一个新朋友5._____________________做某事感到高兴would

like/love/want

to

do

sth.share

sth.

with

sb.tell

sb.

sth.make

a

new

friendfeel

happy

to

do

sth.6.______________

被……表扬7.______________________________某人下定决心做某事8._________________________我将永远记得……9._________________________我真的很高兴……be

praised

bymake

up

one’s

mind

to

do

sth.I

will

always

remember…I

feel

really

happy

that…三、遣词造句，连句成文My

little

happiness

Happiness

is

always

around

us

if

we

put

our

heart

into

it.

I’d

love

to

tell

you

what

happened

in

class

that

day.

I

am

a

shy

girl.

I

am

always

afraid

of

failing

in

the

exam,

because

I

don’t

study

very

well.

However,

that

day,

I

got

my

courage

and

confidence

back.

When

the

teacher

told

me

my

grades

were

not

higher

than

others,

I

was

very

upset.

But

my

teacher

added,

“Your

handwriting

is

the

most

beautiful

writing

in

the

class.”

All

my

classmates

cheered

for

me.

What’s

more,

my

teacher

praised

me,

which

made

me

happy.

I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

study

better,

answer

more

questions

in

class

and

work

harder

on

tests.

I

feel

really

happy

that

I

had

this

experience—it

gave

me

confidence,

courage

and

support

from

my

classmates

and

teachers.三阶

写作实战训练

在校园生活和家庭生活中，我们经常会遇到一些困难。在克服这些困难的过程中，我们收获了解决问题的经验，且能力也在逐步提升。你校英文报正在开展以“Difficulties

help

me

grow

up”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.介绍你曾遇到过的一个困难；2.你是如何面对并战胜它的（向父母寻求帮助、勇敢面对……）；3.克服困难后你的感受/收获。注意：1.词数为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：challenge（v.

&

n.挑战），get

over（克服）Difficulties

help

me

grow

up

Everyone

meets

difficulties

on

the

way

to

success.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________When

I

was

in

middle

school,

I

had

a

big

problem

with

my

English

learning.

It

was

really

hard

for

me

to

understand

grammar

rules

and

remember

new

words.

To

deal

with

this

challenge,

I

decided

not

to

be

afraid.

Every

day,

I

spent

more

time

studying

English.

I

made

word

cards

and

practiced

writing

simple

sentences.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________