2025届中考英语复习写作培优册（外研版广西专用）06-人与自我-主题6 促进中学生“五育并举”的发展

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高频主题三阶写作指导人与自我主题6

促进中学生“五育并举”的发展（德育：乐于助人；智育：创新方式解决；体育：体育运动；美育：美育知识，艺术课程；劳育：劳动实践的经历与感受）（2020北部湾经济区）【教材模块/单元链接】外研版人教版译林牛津版七（下）M2

讨论能力七（下）M12

娱乐：中西方音乐八（上）U8

烹饪八（下）U2

志愿服务与慈善八（下）U3

家务和许可七（上）U8

设计衣服七（下）U7

爱心俱乐部外研版人教版译林牛津版八（上）M5

娱乐：戏剧&电影八（下）M6

爱好九（上）M3

英雄：有名的人八（下）U8

文学和音乐九（全）U9

音乐和电影八（上）U4

自己做九（上）U4

对你影响最大的人九（上）U5

艺术形式续表一阶

素材积累与训练素材积累短语与搭配1.care

for照顾2.clean

up打扫干净3.sweep

the

floor扫地4.take

out

the

rubbish倒垃圾5.make

the

bed铺床6.do

the

dishes清洗餐具7.climb

mountains爬山8.enjoy

pop

music喜欢流行音乐9.basic

life

skills基本的生活技能10.keep

healthy/fit保持健康11.develop

an

interest

in在……方面培养兴趣12.be

able

to

do

sth.能够做某事13.make

a

big

difference意义重大；有很大影响14.look

after

oneself照顾某人自己15.develop

one’s

independence培养某人的独立性16.open

up

one’s

eyes

and

mind开阔某人的眼界和思维开头句1.To

be

a

better

person,

I

think

I

should

do

the

following

things.2.Life

skills

are

necessary

for

us

teenagers.

To

live

more

healthily

and

happily,

we

are

supposed

to

learn

more

life

skills.3.There

are

all

kinds

of

music

in

the

world.

Music

makes

people

happy.

Good

music

brings

people

comfort

and

peace

of

mind.

Everyone

loves

music,

but

different

people

have

different

tastes.中间句德育1.I

think

Odysseus

is

a

true

hero.

He

is

very

clever

and

has

a

strong

will.

I

also

learn

from

him

that

great

men

never

give

up,

no

matter

what

difficulties

they

face.［外研九（上）M3］2.I

am

outgoing

and

helpful.

As

long

as

someone

is

in

trouble，

I

will

try

my

best

to

help

them.［人教七（下）U1］智育1.Daniel

always

thinks

carefully

when

he

works.

He

plans

everything

well.［译林牛津七（下）M7］2.We

should

deal

with

the

difficulties

we

meet

wisely.

They

can

help

us

become

better

persons.体育1.After

school,

I

sometimes

play

basketball

for

half

an

hour.［人教七（下）U2］2.Basketball

offers

me

enjoyment,

friendship,

knowledge

and

relaxation.3.Exercising

is

a

good

way

to

keep

us

healthy

and

happy.美育1.I

like

smooth

music

that

helps

me

relax

after

a

long

week

at

work.［人教九（全）U9］2.It’s

our

duty

to

value

and

spread

Chinese

culture.劳育1.I

’d

like

to

be

the

cleaning

monitor.

I

often

help

my

mother

do

cleaning

at

home

and

I

like

a

clean

and

tidy

house.

I’m

sure

everybody

would

like

a

clean

classroom,

just

like

home.

Choose

me

and

we

can

make

our

classroom

beautiful.［外研七（下）M2］2.Students

are

able

to

learn

necessary

life

skills

by

taking

cleaning

or

cooking

lessons

in

school.［人教七（上）U9］3.Doing

chores

helps

to

develop

children’s

independence

and

teaches

them

how

to

look

after

themselves.［人教八（下）U3］4.I

think

it

is

important

for

children

to

learn

how

to

do

chores

and

help

their

parents

with

housework.［人教八（下）U3］结尾句1.By

learning

to

cook,

we

can

learn

some

cooking

skills.

At

the

same

time,

we

can

share

housework

and

become

more

independent.2.I’m

sure

the

earlier

we

learn

to

be

independent,

the

better

our

future

will

be.3.We

should

not

be

afraid

of

challenge.

Instead,

we

should

try

our

best

to

solve

the

problems

in

our

study

and

life.句型训练1.Running

can

reduce

our

pressure.（用a

good

way

to

do升格句子）_____________________________________________Running

is

a

good

way

to

reduce

our

pressure.2.We

can

show

our

care

to

our

parents.

We

can

cook

a

meal

for

them.（用“by+v.-ing表示通过某种方式”改写句子）________________________________________________________________We

can

show

our

care

to

our

parents

by

cooking

a

meal

for

them.3.When

I

am

tired,

I

prefer

to

listen

to

the

music.

It

can

make

me

relaxed.（用that

引导的定语从句升格句子）__________________________________________________________________________When

I

am

tired,

I

prefer

to

listen

to

the

music

that

can

make

me

relaxed.4.作为新时代的青少年，向世界介绍中国文化是我们义不容辞的责任。（汉译英）_____________________________________________________________________________________As

teenagers

in

new

times,

it’s

our

duty

to

introduce

Chinese

culture

to

the

world.5.我们学校将开设一些新的课程来帮助学生学习一些基本的生活技能。（汉译英）___________________________________________________________________________________Our

school

will

set

up

some

new

courses

to

help

students

learn

some

basic

life

skills.二阶

主题典例探究

（2024长沙改编）音乐，一种听觉艺术，是直通心灵的艺术。你校英文报刊正在开展以“What

does

music

bring

to

me?”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。内容包括：1.音乐给你带来的益处（给我带来希望和力量、开阔我的眼界……）；2.你的希望。注意：1.词数为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：strength（n.力量），broaden

one’s

horizons

（开阔某人的眼界）What

does

music

bring

to

me?

Music

is

like

a

key,

which

opens

a

door

to

the

world

for

me.______________写作剖析一、仔细审题1.文体：本文要求介绍音乐带给自己的益处，是一篇________；2.时态：介绍音乐带给自己的益处为一般说明，以____________为主，表达自己的希望时，用____________；3.人称：介绍音乐的时候用第____人称，介绍自己的经历、音乐给自己带来的好处及号召大家怎么做时用第____人称。说明文一般现在时一般将来时三一二、构思框架，列出要点构思框架列出要点1.___________________________给我带来希望和力量2._______________弹吉他3.__________处理4.________________在我的日常生活中5.__________________提醒某人某事6.__________总之7._______________________________________________使我的生活更加丰富多彩，更有意义bring

me

hope

and

strengthplay

the

guitardeal

within

my

daily

liferemind

sb.

of

sth.all

in

allmake

my

life

more

colorful

and

more

meaningful三、遣词造句，连句成文What

does

music

bring

to

me?

Music

is

like

a

key,

which

opens

a

door

to

the

world

for

me.

Music

brings

me

hope

and

strength

during

hard

times.

When

I

was

a

kid,

I

used

to

be

shy.

After

I

took

up

playing

the

guitar

to

deal

with

my

shyness,

I

made

lots

of

friends.

Besides,

music

can

broaden

my

horizons.

I

can

know

something

that

can’t

be

learned

in

my

daily

life

or

from

the

textbooks.

Also,

music

reminds

me

of

some

happy

memories.

It

makes

me

remember

the

love

and

care

my

teachers

and

friends

have

given

me.

All

in

all,

music

makes

my

life

more

colorful

and

more

meaningful.

I

hope

that

all

of

us

will

value

music

and

make

it

a

part

of

our

life.三阶

写作实战训练

（2024玉林一模）为落实国家教育部提出的对中小学加强劳动教育（labor

education）的实施意见，你们学校安排了丰富多彩的劳动教育活动。假如你是王涛，请给你的笔友Tony写一封邮件，谈谈你参加学校组织的劳动教育活动的情况。内容包括：1.简单介绍你们学校开展的劳动教育活动（烹饪、种植……）；2.具体叙述一次你参加劳动教育活动的经历；3.谈谈你参加劳动教育活动的体会和收获。注意：1.词数为80左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：different（adj.不同的）,

encourage（v.鼓励）,

independent（adj.独立的）Dear

Tony,

How’s

it

going？____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Let

me

tell

you

something

about

our

labor

education.

We

have

many

different

labor

education

activities

in

our

school,

such

as

cooking,

cleaning

rooms

and

growing

vegetables.

I’m

interested

in

cooking

best,

so

I

joined

the

cooking

club

last

month.

Miss

Li,

our

cooking

teacher,

is

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________