九年级下学期专题复习写作(1)课件

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MiddlepartThebeginningThebodyTheendingHowdoyoumakeyour“hamburger”“delicious”and“healthy”?Step1:审审时态人称体裁（记叙文，应用文，议论文）Tip：用笔勾画主题Presentation“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Saveourearth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇80词左右的短文参评。参考词汇：environmentalprotection注意：（1）文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名。（2）文章标题已经给出，但不计入总词数。（3）可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。拯救地球存在的环境问题1.空气污染；2.……解决的方法1.更多地乘坐公共交通工具；2.……3.……呼吁保护地球

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1.审人称2.审时态3.审体裁4.审话题囗第一人称囗第二人称囗第三人称囗过去时囗现在时囗将来时囗记叙文囗议论文囗应用文囗说明文文章属于哪类常考话题？________________________________环保类Para1:environmentalproblemsPara2:thewaytosolvetheseproblemsPara3:askeveryonetoprotecttheearthStep2:列用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.Step2:列Tips:根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏！用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.Para1:__________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para3:__________________________________________________________________________________________ThebeginningThebodyTheending

airpollutionwaterpollutiontakemorepublictransportationplantmoretreesdon’tpourpollutedwaterintotheriverprotecttheearthandsavetheearthStep3:加Para1:__________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para3:__________________________________________________________________________________________ThebeginningThebodyTheending

加主语和宾语，使句子结构完整。Thereisairpollution.Thereiswaterpollution.Wecantakemorepublictransportation.Wecanplantmoretrees.Don’tpourpollutedwaterintotheriver.Let’sprotecttheearthandsavetheearth.1.表文章结构顺序：First,second…next…then,finally;

2.表并列补充关系的(递进关系)notonly…butalso不但…而且，atthesametime同时3.表转折对比关系的：however,but4.用来陈述正反方的不同观点（一般用于议论文章中）：Ontheonehand…,ontheotherhand…一方面，又一方面;

Everythinghastwosides…(事物都具有两面性)5.表因果关系的：because（不与so连用）,asaresult(结果),thanksto（多亏），becauseofStep4:连恰当运用关联词和过渡句，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。6.表进行举例说明：Forexample+句子（只举一例）,like,suchas…andsoon（可举多例）7.表陈述事实：Infact事实上,actually8.表达自己观点：AsfarasIknow,Inmyopinion依我看,

Tobehonest诚实地说9.表总结：Inaword（总之）,Allinall.Thereisairpollution.Also,thereisalsowaterpollution.Whatcanwedotosavetheearth?First,wecantakemorepublictransportation.Second,wecanplantmoretrees.Third,don’tpourpollutedwaterintotheriver.Theearthisourhome.Let’sprotectandsavetheearthtogether.Tom’scompositionStep4:连Para1:__________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para3:____________________________________________________________ThebeginningThebodyTheending

恰当运用关联词和过渡句。Thereisairpollution.Alsothereiswaterpollution.First,wecantakemorepublictransportation.Second,wecanplantmoretrees.Third,don’tpourpollutedwaterintotheriver.Let’sprotecttheearthandsavetheearth.Whatcanwedotosavetheearth?Step5:美美善用词汇活用句型谚语俗语妙用从句在有把握的情况下，展示自己的写作功底。Thereisairpollution.Thereisseriousairpollution.Thereisseriousairpollutionwhichcandoharmtopeople.Thereisseriousairpollutionwhichcandoharmtopeople.It’smainlycausedbyhavingtoomanycarsandfactories.加形容词或副词

加定语从句加其他句子补充说明1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.3.It’snevertoooldtolearn.4.Thinktwicebeforeacting.5.Nopains,nogains.6.Knowledgeispower.7.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.8.Toseeistobelieve.9.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.10.Don’tletourtearsbecomethelastdropofwaterontheearth.英文常用谚语Thereisairpollution.Also,thereiswaterpollution.Whatcanwedotosavetheearth?First,wecantakemorepublictransportation.Second,wecanplantmoretrees.Third,don’tpourpollutedwaterintotheriver.Theearthisourhome.Let’stakeactiontosavetheearth.GroupworkWorkingroupstohelpTombeautifythecomposition.Useatleastonesayingandoneattributiveclause（定语从句）.Group1-5:Para1and3;Group6-10:Para2Thereisairpollution.Also,thereisalsowaterpollution.Nowadays,theenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.Thereisseriousairpollutionwhichcandoharmtopeople.It’smainlycausedbyhavingtoomanycarsandfactories.Thereisalsowaterpollutionbecausemanyfactoriespourpollutedwaterintotheriver.Para1Before:After:Whatcanwedotosavetheearth?First,wecantakemorepublictransportation.Second,wecanplantmoretrees.Third,don’tpollutedwaterintotheriver.Whatcanwedotosolvetheseproblemsandsavetheearth?First,wecantakemorepublictransportationinsteadofdrivingcars.Second,wearesupposedtoplantmoretreesbecausetreescanprovideuswithmuchfreshair.Third,thegovernmentshouldstopfactoriesfrompouringpollutedwaterintotheriver.Para2Before:After:Theearthisourhome.Let’stakeactiontosavetheearth.Theearthisourhome.It’sourdutytoprotecttheearth.Let’stakeactiontosavetheearth.Don’tletourtearsbecomethelastdropofwaterontheearth.Para3Before:After:Nowadays,theenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.Thereisseriousairpollutionwhichcandoharmtopeople.It’smainlycausedbyhavingtoomanycarsandfactories.Thereisalsowaterpollutionbecausemanyfactoriespourpollutedwaterintotheriver.Whatcanwedotosolvetheseproblemsandsavetheearth?First,wecantakemorepublictransportationinsteadofdrivingcars.Second,wearesupposedtoplantmoretreesbecausetreescanprovideuswithmuchfreshair.Third,thegovernmentshouldstopfactoriesfrompouringpollutedwaterintotheriver.Theearthisourhome.It’sourdutytoprotecttheearth.Let’stakeactiontosavetheearth.Don’tletourtearsbecomethelastdropofwaterontheearth.Step6:查九查：1.格式、时态是否正确2.主谓是否一致3.要点是否全面4.人称是否正确5.语序是否有问题6.语言是否符合习惯7.句子结构是否完整8.固定短语是否恰当9.拼写、标点、大小写、名词的单复数是否准确等通读全文，检查复核Step7:誊书写注意事项：1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用胶带的情况——给人一种凌乱的感觉。3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线划掉即可。Ifyouaretheteacher,whichonedoyoulikebetter?回顾初中3年的成长历程，你一定有很多感受。假设你是李华，你将代表你校2024年毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。注意：（1）文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名。（2）文章标题已经给出，但不计入总词数。（3）可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。毕业发言描述学校1.校园环境；2.老师及同学；回忆学习、生活收获1.知识方面；2.……3.……表达谢意1.对老师；2.……Practice

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1.审人称2.审时态3.审体裁4.审话题囗第一人称囗第二人称