Unit4 解透单元写作

2/2Unit4解透单元写作主题写作——逆境和勇气1.写作任务假设你是李华，受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文电影，主要内容包括：（1）放映时间、地点；（2）影片内容；（3）欢迎对影片进行评论。注意：（1）词数80左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.写作思路（1）一审：体裁、结构与主题体裁：应用文——通知第一段：基本信息及影片内容介绍结构：两段第二段：电影评价及欢迎对影片进行评论主题：观影通知（2）二定：时态与人称时态：以一般现在时为主人称：第三人称（3）三明确：写作要点基本信息：时间、地点、影片内容电影介绍：故事梗概电影评议：电影评价、欢迎发表评论3.素材整理（1）关键词语beduetodosth.预计做某事theexpeditionto去……的探险aftertenmonths’voyage在十个月的航行后becrushedintopieces被压成碎片getoutofdanger摆脱危险inthefaceofadversity面对逆境bebelievedto被认为voiceone’sopinion发表某人的看法（2）完成句子①这部英语电影，预计将在周五下午2点在学校大厅放映。TheEnglishfilm________________________________________at2pmonFridayattheschoolhall.②它讲述了由著名的欧内斯特沙克尔顿爵士带领远征南极的故事。Itdepictsthethe________________SouthPole________________thefamousSirErnestShackleton.③不幸的是，经过十个月的航行后，他们的船被冰挤压成了碎片，他们不得不放弃船只。________,aftertenmonths’________,theirship________________intopiecesbyiceandtheyhadto________it.④正是船员们在面对逆境时的坚持、忍耐力和决心拯救了他们。Itwasthecrewmembers’________,________and________inthefaceof________________savedthem.⑤人们认为这部电影很有教育意义并且非常精彩。Thefilm________________________be________andwonderful.⑥看完电影后，欢迎所有学生发表对这部电影的看法。Allthestudentsarewelcometo________________________aboutthefilm________seeingthefilm.答案：①isduetobeshown②expeditionto,ledby③Unfortunately,voyage,wascrushed,abandon④perseverance,endurance,resolution,adversitythat⑤isbelievedto,instructive⑥voicetheiropinions,after4.高分作文NOTICEAnEnglishfilm,TheEndurance：Shackleton’sLegendaryAntarcticExpedition,isduetobeshownat2pmonFridayattheschoolhall.ItdepictstheexpeditiontotheSouthPoleledbythefamousSirErnestShackleton.In1914,ShackletonsailedtowardstheSouthPolebutunfortunately,aftertenmonths’voyage,theirshipwascrushedintopiecesbyiceandtheyhadtoabandonit.Theyfinallysucceededingettingoutofdangerin1916.Itwasthecrewmembers’perseverance,enduranceandresolutioninthefaceofadversitythatsavedthem.Thefilmisbelievedtobeinstructiveandwonderful.Allthestudentsarewelcometovoicetheiropinionsaboutthefilmafterseeingthefilm.TheStudents’Union5.佳作背诵（1）佳作一假设你是校学生会主席李华，你校将举办一次主题为“逆境和勇气”的英语演讲比赛，请你给外籍教师史密斯太太写封信，邀请她担任演讲比赛的评委。主要内容包括：①写信目的；②演讲比赛举办的时间、地点和主题；③注意问题。注意：①词数80左右；②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMrs.Smith,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearMrs.Smith,AnEnglishspeechcontest,themed“AdversityandPerseverance”,willtakeplaceinourschool.Isincerelyinviteyoutoserveasajudge.Thecontestwillbeheldintheschoolhallfrom2to5pmonJune15.Tenqualifiedcandidateswilltakepart.Youarerequiredtoprovideathoroughanddetailedassessmentoftheirspeech.Besides,specificguidanceisalsowhatwearereallyexpected.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldbepresent.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua（2）佳作二假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter非常喜爱看小说，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他介绍一本你最喜欢的小说。主要内容包括：①小说名称；②小说内容；③对你的影响。注意：①词数80左右；②开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearPeter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?I’dliketosharewithyoumyfavoritenovel.ThenovelisTheOldManandtheSea,tellingaboutanoldfishermanwhoneverabandonshishopeandfightswithgreatenduranceandperseverance.Althoughfinallyhefails,hisoptimisticattitudeandspiritofnevergivingupreallycount.Thenovelteachesmealot.Ishouldbeconfidentwhateveradversitymaylieahead.AslongasIpersevere,nothingcanpreventmegoingahead.Whataboutyou?Yours,LiHua【附】话题写作常用表达和句型1.Itwastheirperseveranceandenduranceinthefaceofadversitythathelpedthemsucceedintheend.正是他们在面对逆境时的坚持和忍耐力帮助他们最终获得成功。2.Nodifficultycannotbeovercomeaslongaswehavefaithinourselves.只要我们自己有信念，没有什么困难克服不了。3.Weareconvincedthat,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.我们相信，有志者事竟成。4.Oncewehavemadethedecision，wearesupposedtosparenoeffortstoachieveit.一旦我们做出决定，我们应该不遗余力地去实现它。5.Thesecretofsuccessistosticktoyourgoalsandbeliefs.成功的秘诀在于坚持自己的目标和信念。6.Whateveradversitymaylieahead，aslongasIpersevere，nothingcanstopmefromgoingahead.无论前方有多困难，只要我坚持下去，没有什么可以阻止我前行。7.Thestorydepictsanoldmanwhoneverabandonshishopeandfightsagainstadversitywithgreaten