高考英语复习读后续写练习+夏日营地：从期待到高空挑战恐惧+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习夏日营地：从期待到高空挑战恐惧1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Itwasahotsummerdaywhenmyworldturnedupsidedown.Thesunshonebrightlyandtheskyseemedtobepaintedinanendlessshadeofblue.LittledidIknowthatthisparticulardaywouldbecomerootedinmymemoryforever.Iwokeupwithasenseofexcitement;itwasthefirstdayofthesummercamp.Ihadbeenlookingforwardtothisdayforweeks,imaginingtheadventures,newfriends,andendlessfunthatawaitedme.IquicklydressedinmyfavoritecampT-shirtandshorts,mybackpackfilledwithsnacksandawaterbottle,eagerlyanticipatingthedayahead.AsIarrivedatthecamp,theenergywascontagious(有感染力的).Theairwasfilledwithlaughter,chatter,andthepromiseofanunforgettablesummer.IquicklymadefriendswithSarah,agirlwithacontagioussmile,andwebecamereallycloseoveroursharedloveforadventure.4续写原文Thecampwasawonderland,withactivitiesrangingfromsportstoartsandcrafts.IfeltlikeIwasreadytoabsorbeverybitofknowledgeandexperiencethatcamemyway.Thedaywentbyquicklyaswelaughedthroughgames,amazedatnaturehikes,andcheeredeachotheronduringvarioussportsactivities.Thesunseemedtorunagainsttheclock,remindingustoenjoyeverymomentbeforeitwastoolate.However,thedaytookanunexpectedturnwhenateacherannouncedanunexpectedactivity-ateam-buildingexerciseinvolvingahighropescourse.Ihadalwaysbeenafraidofheights,buttheexcitementofthechallengemixedwiththeencouragementfrommynewfoundfriendspushedmetogiveitatry.Standingatthebaseofthetoweringstructure,myheartracedlikearunawaytrain.Eachstepuptheladderfeltheavier.Asenseofpanicgraduallybegantocatchme.5段首句Paragraph1：AsIreachedthetopandlookeddown,Ifroze.Paragraph2：Littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了在一个炎热的夏日，主人公满怀期待地迎来了夏令营的第一天，穿着喜爱的营服、背着装满零食的背包前往营地。营地里充满欢声笑语，主人公很快和笑容极具感染力的莎拉成为好友，一同参与各类精彩活动，如游戏、自然徒步和体育项目等，尽情享受着夏日时光。然而，当天老师宣布了一项意外活动——高空绳索团队建设练习。尽管主人公一直恐高，但在新朋友的鼓励和挑战的刺激下，还是决定尝试。站在高耸结构下，主人公内心极度紧张，每一步攀登都无比艰难，故事在此留下悬念，引人期待主人公后续的表现以及他将如何面对内心的恐惧，在这次挑战中实现自我成长。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：AsIreachedthetopandlookeddown,Ifroze.当我到达顶端向下望去时，我僵住了。双腿发软，仿佛被钉在了原地，无法挪动分毫。底下的一切看起来是那么遥远而又可怕，我的心提到了嗓子眼，呼吸也变得急促起来。我紧紧地抓住绳索，手心全是汗，眼睛死死地盯着眼前的一小片区域，不敢再往远处看。风在耳边呼呼作响，似乎在嘲笑我的胆小。我开始后悔自己为什么要逞强来参加这个活动，脑海中不断浮现出如果掉下去会怎样的可怕画面。此刻，我陷入了极度的恐惧之中，进退两难。10续写思路分析Para2：Littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.一点一点地，我挪到了另一边。我深深地吸了一口气，试图让自己镇定下来。我想起了朋友们鼓励的眼神和话语，心中涌起一股勇气。我小心翼翼地迈出了第一步，尽管身体还在颤抖，但我紧紧咬着牙，坚持着。每移动一点，我都感觉像是用尽了全身的力气。我专注地看着前方的目标，不再去想脚下的高度。慢慢地，我找到了节奏，一步一步地向前挪动。随着距离终点越来越近，我的信心也逐渐增强。终于，我成功地到达了另一边，一种巨大的成就感涌上心头，我战胜了自己内心的恐惧。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现AsIreachedthetopandlookeddown,Ifroze.Mywholebodywentrigidandmylegsfeltliketheywereturnedtojelly.Thegroundseemedmilesawayandthesightofitmademystomachchurn.PanicsurgedthroughmeandIcouldhearmyheartpoundingviolentlyinmyears.Iclutchedtheropesotightlythatmyknucklesturnedwhite.Thewindwhippedaroundme,heighteningmysenseofdread.Iwasacutelyawareofhowprecariousmypositionwasandregrettedmydecisiontotakeonthischallenge.AllIcouldthinkaboutwerethepotentialconsequencesofafall.Iwascompletelyimmobilizedbyfear,unabletotakeanotherstepforwardorevenconsidergoingbackdown.13范文呈现Littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.GatheringeveryounceofcourageIhadleft,Itookadeep,shakybreath.Ithoughtofmyfriends'encouragingsmilesandkindwords,andthatgavemethestrengthtostartmoving.Veryslowlyanddeliberately,Iliftedmyfootandplaceditonthenextstep.Mybodywasstilltrembling,butIrefusedtogiveintothefear.Ifocusedmygazefirmlyontheplatformahead,blockingoutthedizzyingdropbeneathme.Witheachsmallmovement,Igrewmoredetermined.AsIgotcloserandclosertotheotherside,aglimmerofconfidencebegantoreplacetheterror.Finally,afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,Ifeltthesolidgroundbeneathmyfeet.IhadconqueredmyfearandachievedsomethingIneverthoughtpossible.14升级版范文呈现Itwasonthatfatefuldayofthesummercamp,whenstandingatthetopofthehighropescourseandlookingdown,Ifroze.Theseeminglybottomlessvoidbeneathmewaslikeayawningchasm,mylegsturningtojellyandeverynerveinmybodyscreaminginterror.Itwasatthatmomentthatthefollyofmybravadohitmefullforce.Thewind,howlingaroundmelikeabanshee,onlyaddedtomysenseofdread.15升级版范文呈现However,withtheimageofmyfriends'encouragingfacesfirmlyinmymind,littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.TremblingasIwas,notasinglestepdidIfalter.NeverhadIthoughtIcouldmustersuchcourage.Itwasnotjustaphysicaljourneybut

atriumphovermyinnerdemons.Thisexperien