高考英语复习：惊险类读后续写精彩表达积累+专项训练-“勇者无惧”

纯干货一一惊险类读后续写精彩表达积累+专题提升训练

学习目标：

1.学习积累表达“恐惧”“紧张”情感、氛围、动作细节的精彩语句；

2.在惊险类读后续写情境中提升运用相关的表达能力

本专题包括：

第一部分：输入一一夯实基础

（-）“恐惧”情感的精彩描写

（二）烘托“恐惧”氛围的环境描写

（三）体现“恐惧”的动作描写

第二部分：操练一一熟能生巧

1.单句操练

2.提升表达----句多译

第三部分：语篇输出一一学以致用

步骤：

StepI语料输入一一夯实基础

（-）关于"恐惧""紧张"情感的精彩描写你掌握多少？

1.英译汉2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语

①beseizedwithpanic________1）不知所措_________

②beseizedbyfear___________2）感到害怕—

(3)behalfdeadwithfear3）从心底感到害怕

④inpanic__________________4）惊慌___________________

⑤interror__________________5）充满了恐惧_______

⑥fearcreepsoversomebody___6）吓得半死—

⑦afloodoffearwellsupinsomebody7）害怕地—

⑧ataloss__________________8）恐惧地_________________

（二）烘托“恐惧”氛围的环境描写你会多少？

1.英译汉2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语

①astormynight_______________2)深埋在雪中—

②beburiedinsnow____________3)难以忍受的热______

③unbearablyhot______________4)夜幕降临__________________

④Thenightsettledin__________5)暴风舌的正猛______________

⑤Thestormisatitsheight______6)空气寒冷刺骨______________

⑥Thereisanipintheair________7)一个偏僻的小村子__________

⑦asmallvillageoffthemap______8)人烟稀少的农村地区—

⑧thethinlypopulatedruralarea____

（三）体现“恐惧”的动作描写你会多少？

1）暴风雨之夜_________________

1.英译汉2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语

①heartbeatviolently______________1)心跳得厉害_______________________

②takeadeepbreath_______________2)深吸一口气______________________

③comeassomethingofasurprise___3)有点惊讶_________________________

④bechokedbyfear_______________4)吓得透不过气来___________________

⑤tremblefromheadtotoe_________5)全身颤抖__________________________

⑥shakewithfear/terror____________6)因害怕/恐惧而发抖________________

⑦chokewithfear________________7)因为害怕而哽咽___________________

⑧faceturnspale_________________8)脸色变白__________________________

⑨jump/springtoone'sfeet_________9)一跃而起_________________________

⑩struggletoone'sfeet____________10)挣扎着站起来______________________

StepII句子操练

1.单句操练

1）我转向他，眼里充满了恐惧。

2）我吓得睁大了眼睛。

3）我的心怦怦跳。

4）我感到恐慌袭来。

5）我双膝发抖地走上楼梯。

6.那个声音使我害怕。

7.我吓得喘不过气来。

8.一看见那条蛇，我吓坏了。

9.突如其来的变故使我不知所措。

10.我浑身发抖，感到坐立不安。

2.一句多译一一提升单句表达力

（1）Atthesightofthesnake,thegirlfelt①（她的胸口发紧）

一看到那条蛇,那个女孩感到②（她的心脏狂跳）

③（她后背一阵寒意）

2）我完全被恐惧控制，寸步难行了。

①,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.

②,unabletomoveaninch.

（3）,Icouldhardlymoveaninch.

3）站在悬崖边上，我害怕极了。

①Standingattheedgeofthecliff,___________________________________________________

②Standingattheedgeofthecliff,___________________________________________________

③Istoodattheedgeofthecliff_____________________________________________________

StepIII语篇输出

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

（2021•湖北省七市（州）教科研协作体高三3月联考）

Gradyandhisfamilygocampingeverysummer.Asitwasbecominghotter,herecamethe

campingtime.

Havingplannedthecamplong,thefamilyfinallydecidedthedestination-theGreatNational

Forest.Withfood,necessityandcookersloadedontothecar,thefamilysqueezedintothecar.The

cardoorclosed,heatwasshutoutside.

Inthecar,Jared,Grady'syoungerbrotherwasplayingwithatoydinosaur,makinggreatnoise.

Grady'smothertalkedexcitedlywithhisfather.Onsettlinginthecar,Gradyputontheearphone

andturnedonthemusic.Heneitherwantedtojoinhisbrothernorjoinedanytalk.Afterwhat

seemedtobehours,thecarstoppedwheretheyheaded.Gradythrewdownhisbackpackand

slammedthecardoor.

“Thiswillbealengthyweek“hesaidunhappilytonooneinparticular.Helookedaroundthe

campground.Hundredsoftallandgreenfirtrees,someastallaschurchtowers,coveredthe

mountainsidelikeagreencarpet.Thesunwouldbesettingsoon.Gradythoughtmaybetheheat

wouldn'tbeunbearable.Butactuallynowinthemountain,thehotstickinessofJulywasclosely

attachedtohim.

Gradyhatedcamping,butitwassomethinghisfamilystucktoeverysummer.Hisfatherliked

cookingoveranopenair,tellingstoriesabouthowtosurvivethingslikebearattacksandbitesof

bees.HismotherandJaredlikedtohikeandtakepicturesofanimals.Jaredhadacollectionofbug

picturesthathehadpinnedtothewallsinhishalfoftheirroom.Gradythoughttheywerejust

scaryandproofthatJaredwasastrangekid.

Theysetupcamp-twotents,oneforhisparentsandoneforhimselfandJared.Whileeveryone

elsestartedpreparingdinner,Grady,lookingforsomeplacetocooldown,setoffforthenearby

stream,whichwasdeepenoughtoswimin.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

AsGradygotclosetothestream,anadorablebearcubcaughthiseye..

Turningaround,hesawanangrybearmovingswiftlytowardshim

“四步”搞定读后续写：

1.读懂材料

2.理清人物事件(6W-who?What?WhenandWhere?How?Why?)

3.根据已给两个段首句，确定两段的续写内容：

第一段：______________________________________________________________________

第二段：

4.润色提升，完成故事续写，认真善写到作文本上

纯干货一惊险类读后续写精彩表达积累+专题提升训练答案

StepI语料输入一一夯实基础

（-）关于“恐惧"''紧张'情感的精彩描写你掌握多少？

1.英译汉2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语

①惊慌失措1)ataloss

②充满了恐惧2)beseizedbyfear

③吓得半死3)afloodoffearwellsupinsomebody

④害怕地4)beseizedwithpanic

⑤恐惧地5)fearcreepsoversomebody

⑥感到害怕6)behalfdeadwithfear

⑦从心底感到害怕7)inpanic

⑧不知所措8)interror

（二）烘托“恐惧”氛围的环境描写你会多少?

1.英译汉2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语

①暴风雨之夜1)astormynight

②深埋在雪中2)beburiedinsnow

③难以忍受的热3)unbearablyhot

④夜幕降临4)Thenightsettledin

⑤暴风刮的正猛5)Thestormisatitsheight

⑥空气寒冷刺骨6)Thereisanipintheair

⑦一个偏僻的小村子7)asmallvillageoffthemap

⑧人烟稀少的农村地区8)thethinlypopulatedruralarea

（三）体现“恐惧”的动作描写你会多少？

1.英译汉2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语

①

心跳得厉害9)jump/springtoone'sfeet

②

深吸一口气

③10)struggletoone'sfeet

有点惊讶

④

⑤吓得透不过气来

⑥全身颤抖

⑦因害怕/恐惧而发抖

⑧因为害怕而哽咽

⑨脸色变白

⑩一跃而起

挣扎着站起来

1)heartbeatviolently

2)takeadeepbreath

3)comeassomethingofasurprise

4)bechokedbyfear

5)tremblefromheadtotoe

6)shakewithfear/terror

7)chokewithfear

8)faceturnspale

StepII句子操练

1

■单句操练

1\

/!Iturnedtohim,withhiseyesfulloffear.

2\

/!Myeyeswerewidewithhorror.

3\

—

4/Myheartwasbeatinghard.

5Awaveofpanicflooded/sweptoverme.Thesoundthrewmeintoapanic.

)\

6/Iwalkedupthestairswithmykneestrembling.

D\

7/Thesoundthrewmeintoapanic.

-\

/Iwasoutofbreathwithfear.

8\

9—/Iwasfrightenedatthesightofthesnake.

\

—/Theunexpectedandsuddenchangemademeataloss.

10)Ishookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.

2.一句多译一一提升单句表达力

(1)Atthesightofthesnake,thegirlfelt①herchesttightenedwithfear.

②herheartracedwildlyinherchest.

③acoldwentupherback.

2)①Aburstofhorrorseizedmetotally,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.

②Iwastotallyheldbyhorror,unabletomoveaninch.

③Overwhelmed/Heldcompletelybyhorror,Icouldhardlymoveaninch.

3)①Standingattheedgeofthecliff,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.

②Standingattheedgeofthecliff」feltbutterfliesinmystomachandmykneesfeltweak.

③Istoodattheedgeofthecliffwithmyheartinthroatandmypalmssweating.

StepIII语篇输出

学生佳作赏析：

AsGradygot