【课件】中考英语人教版九年级作文课件-叙事类讲评示范课

中考作文之经历感受型作文教学目标审题准确，要点齐全01词汇丰富，短语多样02语法正确，句式多变结构清晰，书写工整0304空白！瞎写！抄写阅读！No！No！No！Weneedhelpthem！题目回顾PPT下载http:///xiazai/学校英语专栏以“Practicemakesperfect”

为题，向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你对该谚语的理解；2.你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动，乐器，家务，学习等方面）；3.你的感悟。主题:Practicemakesperfect

Whatdoesitmean?熟能生巧Practicing/Workinghardbecomebetteratsomethinghelpsyou题目回顾PPT下载http:///xiazai/学校英语专栏以“Practicemakesperfect”

为题，向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你对该谚语的理解；2.你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动，乐器，家务，学习等方面）；3.你的感悟。

要点：理解举例子感悟文体：记叙+议论题目回顾注意：1.词数100短文开头已给出不计入总词数；2.内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。PracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imean.

人称：时态：第一人称一般现在时或一般过去式为主审好题定方向审时态审人称审文体审主题01020304列要点05互评互鉴StructureLinkingwordsExpressionsPairwork佳作赏析佳作赏析Haveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imean

thatonlythroughpracticecanyoudoyourthingsperfectly.Forexample,ifyouareaviolinlearner,youcanonlymakeprogressbypracticingplayingitoverandoveragain.Butit’snotjustrepeatingwhatyoudidlasttimebuttofindyourweaknessandgetridofit.Throughlotsofpractice,youcannotonlyplaythesongfluentlybutalsogainmuchexperienceonplayingit.Inmyeyes,thissayingissuitableforeverythingwedoinourlives.Whateveryourgoalis,youcanneverachieveitwithoutpractice.实例说明理解（续写完整）感悟总结Structure（结构）?Howaboutyours?Tip1:wecanmakethearticleclearbydividingitintoseveralparagraphs.佳作鉴赏Haveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imeanthatonlythroughpracticecanyoudoyourthingsperfectly.Forexample,ifyouareaviolinlearner,youcanonlymakeprogressbypracticingplayingitoverandoveragain.Butit’snotjustrepeatingwhatyoudidlasttimebuttofindyourweaknessandgetridofit.Throughlotsofpractice,youcannotonlyplaythesongfluentlybutalsogainmuchexperienceonplayingit.Inmyeyes,thissayingissuitableforeverythingwedoinourlives.Whateveryourgoalis,youcanneverachieveitwithoutpractice.Linkingwords(连接词)orphrases？Howaboutyours?Tip1:wecanmakethearticleclearbydividingitintoseveralparagraphs.Tip2:wecanmakethearticleclearbyusingthelinkingwords.佳作鉴赏Haveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imeanthatonlythroughpracticecanyoudoyourthingsperfectly.Forexample,ifyouareaviolinlearner,youcanonlymakeprogressbypracticingplayingitoverandoveragain.Butit’snotjustrepeatingwhatyoudidlasttimebuttofindyourweaknessandgetridofit.Throughlotsofpractice,youcannotonlyplaythesongfluentlybutalsogainmuchexperienceonplayingit.Inmyeyes,thissayingissuitableforeverythingwedoinourlives.Whateveryourgoalis,youcanneverachieveitwithoutpractice.Expressions?If条件状语从句倒装句宾语从句定语从句状语从句Howaboutyours?Tip3:wecanmakethearticlebetterbyusingdifferentphrasesandsentencepatterns.

句型分析Imeanthatonlythroughpracticecanyoudoyourthingsperfectly.析成分：本句是由only引导的；only放于句首时，句子要用倒装语序；句意：我的意思是只有通过练习，你才能做好你的事情。Imeanthemoreyoupractice,thebetteryouwillbe.---2024王梓睿、李梓杳、崔逸晨Imeanwe

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asmuchaspossible.---2023杨紫涵Imeanyoushouldspendmoretimepracticingonethingthatisvaluableandimportant.---2023张煦哲Imeanifyoutryyourbesttopracticesomething,youcandoitwell.---2024梁思然Asthesayinggoes,“useitorloseit.”---2023高靖航、石亚兵纠错实践Aslongasyoupracticemore,youwill/canbesuccessful.主语+谓语合适的情态动词Correctionpractice纠错实践Aslongaswetrytodoit,keeptryingandpracticemore,wecanmakeitperfect.谓语动词合适的情态动词Correctionpractice纠错实践WhenIwaseight,myhandwritingwasreallybad.时态一致Correctionpractice句子提升Imean.youshouldnevergiveupandkeeppracticing.Imeanifyounevergiveupandkeeppracticing,youwillsucceedintheend.Otherexpressions:Imeanyouwillneversucceedunlessyounevergiveupandkeeppracticing.SentenceimprovementGroupDiscussionFourstudentsinagroup.Findtheshinypointsandmistakesinothermembers'articles.Ifthereareshinypoints,learnandimproveyourselves.Iftherearemistakes,correctandimprovethem.

After6mins,sharethemwithus.互帮互助师生共评Sharingmoment句子提升spendtime/moneydoingsth.点拨：花费时间/金钱做某事仿写：我花费更多的时间和精力练习弹钢琴。Ispent

moretimeandenergypracticingplayingthepiano.ittakessbtime/moneytodosthIttookme

moretimeandenergytopracticeplayingthepiano.Sentenceimprovement句子提升Whatameaningfuldaytomakesomethingoutofrecyclingmaterials！用回收材料做点东西，是多么有意义的一天啊！仿写：持续练习是多么重要啊！Howimportantitistokeeppracticing!Sentenceimprovement句子提升Continuingtoworkhardisnecessaryforyoutoachieveacademicsuccess.继续努力是你取得学业成功的必要条件。仿写：Keepingpracticingisnecessaryforustoimproveourselves.Itis+adj+forsb.todosthInorderto...持续练习是我们提升自我的必要条件。Itisnecessaryforustokeeppracticingtoachieveourdreams.Itisnecessaryforustokeeppracticingifwewanttoachieveourdreams.Inordertoachieveourdreams,itisnecessaryforustokeeppracticing.从句？Sentenceimprovement真题演练(2022北京改编)某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的以及取得了什么效果。提示：(1)Howdoyouincreaseyoureffici