高考英语复习读后续写练习+少年冲浪手汤姆的逐梦与重生之路 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习少年冲浪手汤姆的逐梦与重生之路1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Tomwasaskilledteenagesurfer.Hehadalwaysbeenattractedbytheoceanandthechallengeofridingitswaves.Hehadtrainedtirelesslyforyears,sharpeninghisskillsandperfectinghistechnique.Hehadparticipatedinmanycompetitionsandwonseveraltitles.Butoneday,hisworldwasturnedupsidedown.Itwasaroutinetrainingday.WhileTomwasconcentratingonhistraininginthesea,asharkcameinthroughthebrokenshark-proofnetandapproachedhim.TheanimalknockedoverTom’ssurfboardandbithisrightleg,tearingthroughhisflesh(肉体)andcausingmassivedamage.Despitetheseriousnessofhisinjuries,Tomwasluckytosurvivetheattack.Hewasrushedtothehospital,wherehereceivedanemergencyoperation.Withtheeffortsofdoctors,hislegwassaved.4续写原文Tom’srecoverywaslongandpainful,butherefusedtogiveuponhisdreamofsurfing.Atfirst,hisprogresswasslow.Hehadtolearntowalkagain,andthentorun,andthentojump.Everymovementwasastruggle.Butwiththehelpofhisfamilyandfriends,aswellashisownfiercedetermination,Tomgraduallybegantomakeprogress.Hespenthourseverydayinthegym,doingstrengthandbalanceexercisestorebuildhisbody.5续写原文Finally,aftermonthsofhardwork,Tomwasreadytogetbackintothewater.Hisfirsttrainingwasincrediblydifficult,ashestruggledtoovercomehisfearoftheoceanandthememoryofthesharkattack.Butgradually,hebegantoregainhisconfidenceandhisloveforsurfing.Ashisstrengthandskillsreturned,Tomsethissightsoncompetingonceagain.Hetrainedtirelessly,workingwithacoachtoperfecthistechniqueandimprovehisperformance.Andfinally,thedayofthecompetitionarrived.6段首句Paragraph1:Standinginfrontofthestartinglineagain,Tomfeltnervous.Paragraph2:Tomfellintothesea.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文中讲述了Tom曾是一名技艺娴熟的青少年冲浪者，在冲浪领域屡获佳绩。然而一次日常训练中，鲨鱼冲破防鲨网咬了他的右腿，伤势严重但他幸运存活并保住了腿。漫长痛苦的恢复过程中，Tom未放弃冲浪梦，在家人、朋友的支持与自身坚定决心下，努力做康复训练。数月后他重返大海，首次训练艰难，不过他逐渐克服了对海洋和鲨鱼攻击的恐惧，重拾信心与热爱。最终，他再次踏上冲浪赛场，向着新的目标奋进，展现了顽强不屈、追逐梦想的精神。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1:Standinginfrontofthestartinglineagain,Tomfeltnervous.再次站在起跑线前，汤姆感到紧张。他的手心沁出了汗水，心脏在胸腔里剧烈跳动。眼前的海面波光粼粼，却让他不禁回想起那次可怕的鲨鱼袭击。观众们的欢呼声在耳边回响，他深吸一口气，努力让自己镇定下来。他紧紧握住冲浪板，目光坚定地望向远方涌起的海浪，试图将恐惧转化为前进的动力，心里默默告诉自己，这是他重新证明自己的机会，无论如何都要勇敢地冲出去。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:Tomfellintothesea.汤姆冲进了浪中，可就在他试图完成一个高难度动作时，突然一阵强烈的水流冲击过来，打乱了他的节奏，使他瞬间失去了平衡。他的身体不由自主地向一侧倾斜，冲浪板也从脚下飞了出去。紧接着，他整个人便直直地坠入了海中。冰冷的海水瞬间将他包围，他拼命地挣扎着，试图重新浮出水面。耳边是海水的轰鸣声和自己剧烈的心跳声，眼前是一片模糊的蓝色，他努力挥动着双臂，朝着水面游去，心中只有一个信念，那就是一定要回到冲浪板上，继续完成这次比赛。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Standinginfrontofthestartinglineagain,Tomfeltnervous.Hispalmsweresweatyandhisheartwaspoundingviolentlyinhischest.Theglisteningseainfrontofhiminvoluntarilyremindedhimofthatdreadfulsharkattack.Thecheersoftheaudienceranginhisears.Hetookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmhimselfdown.Grippinghissurfboardtightly,helookedfirmlyatthewavessurginginthedistance,attemptingtoturnhisfearintothedrivingforceformovingforward.Hetoldhimselfsilentlythatthiswashischancetoprovehimselfagainandhemustbravelyridethewavesnomatterwhat.14范文呈现Tompaddledhardandcaughtawave.Ashestartedtostandupontheboard,asuddenstrongundercurrenthithim,throwingoffhisbalance.Hisbodytiltedtoonesideuncontrollablyandthesurfboardflewoutfromunderhisfeet.Intheblinkofaneye,heplungedintothesea.Theicywaterengulfedhimimmediately.Hethrashedaboutdesperately,strugglingtoresurface.Theroarofthewaterandthesoundofhisownfranticheartbeatfilledhisears.Withablurryblueallaroundhim,heflailedhisarmsvigorously,swimmingtowardsthesurface,withonlyonethoughtinhismind-hehadtogetbackonthesurfboardandfinishthiscompetition.15升级版范文呈现Standinginfrontofthestartinglineagain,Tomfeltasifathousandbutterflieswereflutteringinhisstomach.Hispalms,dampwithnervoussweat,andhisheart,poundinglikeajackhammer,betrayedhisunease.Theglisteningseathatstretchedoutbeforehim,whichhadoncebeenthestageforhistriumphs,nowominouslyremindedhimoftheterrifyingsharkattack.Amidthedeafeningcheersoftheaudiencethatechoedaroundhim,hetookadeepbreath,attemptingtosoothehisfrayednerves.Withhisfingerstightlygrippingthesurfboard,hefixedhisgazefirmlyontheapproachingwaves,determinedtotransformhisfearintoapropellingforce.Itwaspreciselythismomentthathesilentlyvowedtohimselfwashisopportunitytoreclaimhisgloryandthathewould,withoutadoubt,bravelyridethewaves,nomattertheodds.16升级版范文呈现Tompaddledwithallhismightandmanagedtolatchontoawave.Butjustashewasabouttostandupontheboard,asudden,powerfulundercurrent,likeaninvisiblehand,yankedathisfeetandsenthimtumbling.Hisbody,tiltinguncontrollablytooneside,causedthesurfboardtobewrenchedfrombeneathhim.Intheblinkofaneye,hewasplungedintotheicydepths.Thefrigidwater,likeahungrybeast,immediatelyswallowedhimwhole.Thrashingaboutdesperately,hefoughttoresurface.Thethunderousroarofthewaterandthefranticdrummingofhisownheartfilledhisears.Surroundedbyahazyblueblur,heflailedhisarmswithallhisstrength,hismindfirm