2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+一块巧克力引发的道德挣扎之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习一块巧克力引发的道德挣扎之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ihavealwaysbeenfondofallsortsofchocolates,especiallybitterbakingchocolate.Mymotherhadpurchasedabarofit,andsomehow,Icouldn’tgetitoutofmymind.Iwasassistingmyfatheronthefarm.Justthen,anideastruckme.Icouldcutoffachunk(厚块)ofthechocolate.Mymotherwouldsurelynoticeit,butbeforeshediscoveredwhohaddoneit,IcouldadmitthatIhadtakenit.Probably,Imightnotevenreceiveaspanking(打屁股).Iwaiteduntilmymotherwentouttofeedthechickens.Then,ItoldmyfatherthatIwouldgoinsideforsomewater.ItookdownthebarandwasabouttocutitwhenIheardmymothercomingback.Ireactedswiftly,slippingthechocolateintomypocketandrunningout.Beforereturningtohelpmyfather,Iwenttothebarnandhidthechocolatethere.4续写原文Onmywayout,Icalmeddownabitandcouldthinkmoreclearly.ItoldmyselfthatIhadn’tactuallystolentheentirebarofchocolatebecauseIonlyintendedtotakeasmallpiece.IfIputthewholebarback,Iwouldn’thavedoneanythingwrong.Ialmostdecidedtoputitallback.Butjustthinkingaboutthatchocolatemademytonguealmosttasteitssmoothbitterness.IstartedthinkingthatifIslicedabouthalfaninchofftheendwithasharpknife,mymothermightnevernoticeit.Suddenly,Irememberedwhatmyfatherhadsaidonce—someofthefamilymoneywasminebecauseIhadhelpedearnit.Whywouldn’titbeokaytothinkthatthebarofchocolatehadbeenboughtwithmyownmoney?Thatseemedtofixeverything.5段首句Paragraph1：ThatnightIcouldn’tsleep,wonderinghowIcouldmakeitsecretly.Paragraph2：Bymoonlight,justasIwasabouttocutit,myfathersaid.“Son!”6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了“我”一直钟情于苦烘焙巧克力，看到母亲买的巧克力后便心生贪念。在帮父亲干农活时，“我”想趁母亲喂鸡时偷切一块巧克力，可刚拿到还没来得及切就被母亲回来打断，“我”匆忙将巧克力藏到谷仓。之后“我”内心开始挣扎，先是安慰自己只拿一小块不算偷，后来又想用父亲说自己挣钱的话来合理化拿巧克力的行为，在欲望与道德之间来回拉扯，不知最终是否会真的偷吃巧克力，陷入了纠结的境地。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：ThatnightIcouldn’tsleep,wonderinghowIcouldmakeitsecretly.那个夜晚，我躺在床上辗转反侧，脑海中不断浮现出巧克力那丝滑的苦味和醇厚的口感，心心念念着怎样才能神不知鬼不觉地将其据为己有。月光如水，透过窗户洒在屋内，像是在为我的“行动”提供掩护。我悄悄起身，轻手轻脚地走向藏着巧克力的谷仓，心脏砰砰直跳，紧张得手心都冒出了汗。好不容易来到谷仓，我颤抖着双手拿出巧克力和小刀，深吸一口气，正要将刀落下，把那朝思暮想的一小块切下来时，突然，窗外传来了一丝细微的声响，让我瞬间僵在了原地，心也提到了嗓子眼儿。10续写思路分析Para2：Bymoonlight,justasIwasabouttocutit,myfathersaid.“Son!”就在这千钧一发之际，父亲那低沉而熟悉的声音在我耳边响起：“儿子！”这一声仿佛一道惊雷，将我从那被欲望驱使的混沌中惊醒。我惊恐地转过头，看到月光下父亲那高大的身影，他的眼神中似乎带着洞察一切的锐利。我吓得手一哆嗦，刀和巧克力差点掉落在地，脸上一阵发烫，羞愧得恨不得找个地缝钻进去。我知道，自己那点小心思在父亲面前无所遁形。父亲缓缓向我走来，我的心也随之沉到了谷底，不知道接下来等待我的会是什么，是严厉的斥责，还是深刻的教诲……11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现ThatnightItossedandturnedinbed,mymindconsumedwiththoughtsofthatbarofchocolatehiddeninthebarn.Imagesofitsrich,darksurfaceandthesmoothbitternessthatawaitedmytastebudsdancedbeforemyeyes.Iplannedeverydetailmeticulously,envisioningmyselfsneakingoutofthehouseunderthecoverofdarkness.Themoonlightwouldbemyaccomplice,guidingmywaytothebarn.IrehearsedhowIwouldquietlyretrievethechocolatefromitshidingplaceand,withasharpknifeIhadsecretlytakenfromthekitchen,carefullysliceoffapiecejustsmallenoughthatmymothermightnotnoticeitsabsence.Myheartracedwithamixtureofexcitementandguilt,buttheallureofthechocolatewastoostrong,andsleepeludedmeasIwaitedfortherightmomenttoexecutemyplan.13范文呈现Bymoonlight,justasIwasabouttocutit,myfathersaid.“Son!”Hisvoicecutthroughthesilencelikeaknife,startlingmesomuchthatInearlydroppedthechocolateandtheknife.Myhandstrembled,andmyfaceflushedwithshame.Islowlyturnedaroundtofacehim,myeyesdowncast,unabletomeethisgaze.IknewIhadbeencaughtred-handed,andallmyelaborateplanshadcomecrashingdown.Therewasalong,heavysilenceasIwaitedforhimtospeak.Iexpectedascolding,oratleastasternlectureabouthonestyandrightandwrong.Butinstead,hejuststoodthere,lookingatmewithamixtureofdisappointmentandunderstanding.Itwasthatlookthatmademefeelevenworsethananypunishmenthecouldhavegivenme.14升级版范文呈现Lyinginbedthatnight,mymindwasobsessivelyoccupiedbythebarofchocolatestashedawayinthebarn.Thepicturesofitssumptuousdarksurfaceandthesilkybitternessthatwassettotitillatemytastebudswereconstantlyparadingbeforeme.Everysingledetailhadbeenpainstakinglyplanned.Visualizingmyselfstealingoutofthehouseunderthecoverofthemoonlessnight,withthemoonlightactingasmyaccomplice,Irehearsedhowtoquietlyextractthechocolatefromitshidingplace.Armedwithasharpknifeprocuredfurtivelyfromthekitchen,Iwasonthevergeofslicingoffapiecesodiminutivethatitcouldpotentiallyeludemymother'snotice.Myheartwasthumpingwildly,atempestuousblendofexcitementandguiltchurningwithinme.Theirresistibleallureofthechocolateheldmeinitsthrall,andthus,sleepevadedmeasIimpatientlyawaitedtheopportunemomenttoexecutemysurreptitiousplan.15升级版范文呈现Underthepalemoonlight,justasthebladewasabouttomakecontactwiththechocolate,outofthebluecamemyfather'svoice,"Son!"Itcleavedthroughthestillnesslikeaboltoflightning,startlingmetosuchanextentthatthechocolateandtheknifenearlyslippedfrommygrasp.Myhandswerequivering,andaflushofshamesuffusedmycheeks.Slowly,Iwheeledaroundtoconfronthim,myeyesdowncast,