（高考英语作文炼句）第12篇老师译文笔记

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天1.通过展现准时上课、集中精力和课前准备这些品质,大学生不仅能获得教授以及同龄人的尊重,也能成长为成熟稳重的成年人,为在学术和现实生活中的成功做好准备.By

demonstrating

(1.展现)punctuality,attentivenessandpreparednessforclass,collegestudentswillnotonly

commandtherespectof

(2.赢得……的尊重)theirprofessorsandpeers,butalsodevelopintomatureadults

wellpositionedfor(3.为……做好准备)successbothinacademiaand

intherealworld(4.现实生活).

1-demonstrate

词典释义：demonstrate2.VERB

动词

显示;表露

Ifyou

demonstrateaparticularskill,quality,orfeeling,youshowbyyouractionsthatyouhaveit.【语法信息】：Vn•Havethey,forexample,demonstratedacommitmenttodemocracy?

例如,他们是否已表现出会致力于民主?•Thegovernment'sgoingtogreatlengthsto

demonstrate

itsmilitarymight.该政府正不遗余力地展示其军事力量.外刊例句：Asexistingelectriccarsattest,today’slithium-ion

batteriesarelimitedinrangeandcanprovetemperamental—notleastby

demonstrating

adisturbingtendency

toburstintoflamesifoverheated.

()现存的电动汽车测试证实,锂电池如今种类有限,且不稳定——主要就是它温度过高时就会想要着火,这实在让人不安.

替换表达：showsomething/displaysomething/exhibitsomething

学生错误表达：(1)

Byrevealing点评：reveal是指揭露、显示之前隐藏的事物,不能用在指展现人的品质.

2-commandtherespectofcommand这里是及物动词,主语既可以是人,例如"(人)享有/应得他人的尊敬、支持、兴趣等”,也可以是物,例如"(物)应得好价钱等”.

词典释义：commandtransitive

■todeserveandgetsomethinggood,suchasattention,

respect,oralotofmoney

应得,值得•Shewasoneofthoseteacherswhojustcommandedrespect.

她是那些值得尊敬的老师中的一位.•She

commands

oneofthehighestfeesperfilminHollywood.她是好莱坞片酬最高的演员之一.

外刊例句：However,thefactofthematteris,hecannot

commandtherespectof

hisownparty,sohowcanhehopeto

command

therespectof

Brussels?(TheGuardian)然而,他事实上连自己党派的尊重都得不到,又怎么敢想去赢得欧盟各成员国的尊重呢?

替换表达：earn/gain/win(sb)therespectof学生错误表达：(1)

earn/win

respectofsomebody点评：respectofsomebody前面应该加定冠词the,即earn/wintherespectofsomebody(2)

beaffordedrespect点评：afford含义是"买得起;提供(给某人机会或保护等)”,用在这里不妥.

3-(be)wellpositionedfor这个短语取"position-v-把……安放到某位置”的延伸含义,理解为"把……放到合适的位置以便做某事”.

词典释义：bewell/ideallypositioned

phrase

tobeinagoodsituationtobeabletodosomething

Thebrandis

wellpositionedtosucceedintheSpanishmarket.

Thesaurus：

inagood,betterorpleasantsituationsynonym

Main

entry：

position

外刊例句：NowAlibaba

iswellpositionedfor

thenextwave."TheriseofChineseconsumers,Chinesetourists,Chinesecompaniesgoingglobalandsoon[willoffer]lotsofnewopportunities,”hesays.

()阿里巴巴集团现在已对下一波浪潮做好准备.他说："中国消费者、旅游者和公司越来越多地走向世界,这即将带来大量新机遇.”

替换表达：bereadyforsomething/bewellpreparedforsomething

学生错误表达：(1)

well

preparationfor点评：well是副词,不能用于修饰名词preparation,这里可以改为bewellpreparedfor

4-intherealworld

词典释义：therealworldnoun

onlysingular

■thesetofsituationsmosthumanshavetodealwith

intheirlives,ratherthanwhathappensinstories,films,etc.

现实世界•Christine,theplay'sbullyingmain

character,wouldn'tlastaminute

in

therealworld.克莉丝蒂娜,剧中那个横行霸道的主角,在现实世界中一分钟都活不了.

外刊例句：Progresshasbeenslow,butsteady.Andnowitmaybe

possibletoseehowacertaintypeofquantumcomputerperforms

intherealworld.OnMay15th,ata

computingconferenceinIschiainItaly,CatherineMcGeoch,acomputer

scientistatAmherstCollegeinMassachusetts,presentedapaperdescribing

theperformanceofaquantumcomputermanufacturedbyaCanadianfirmcalled

D-Wave.

()进展缓慢却稳定.现在,人们可能可以看清量子计算机到底在真实世界是如何运作的了.5月15日,麻省艾莫斯特学院的电脑科学家CatherineMcGeoch在意大利伊斯基亚举办的一次电脑大会上,介绍了她的论文,内容有关一家名为D-Wave的加拿大公司生产的量子计算机的性能.

替换表达：inreallife

学生错误表达：(1)

realistic

lives点评：没有realisticlives的说法,这里可以改为固定表达intherealworld或者inreallife(2)

sociallife点评：sociallife是指"社交生活,社交活动”(Yoursociallifeinvolvesspendingtimewithyourfriends,for

exampleatpartiesorinpubsorbars),用在此处不妥.

Q：attentiveness和attention是同一个词根的名词,

有什么区别呢?A：attentiveness是指"专心致志;照顾周到”,attention是指"注意力”,两者有所不同.

Q：获得尊重areaffordedprofessors'and

peers'respect这样写对么?我总觉得有点别扭,但是不知道怎么在这个基础上改A：这里afford用错了,afford含义是"买得起;提供(给某人机会或保护等)”,不能用来指"赢得尊重”,可以改为command,professors'and

peers'respect改为the

respectoftheirprofessorsandpeers会更加自然.

Bydemonstratingpunctuality,attentivenessand

preparednessforclass,collegestudentswillnotonlycommandtherespectof

theirprofessorsandpeers,butalsodevelopintomatureadultswellpositionedforsuccessbothinacademiaandintherealworld.

[分析]本句可分为两个部分,第一个逗号之前为从句部分,第一个逗号之后为主句部分.从句是一个由介词by引导的方式状语,在该状语中,demonstrating之后跟随三个并列的名词punctuality,attentivenessandpreparednessforclass作其宾语.主句的主语是collegestudents,谓语部分则由并列连词notonly…butalso…连接的willnotonlycommand…butalsodevelop承担,这两个谓语之后,therespectof

theirprofessorsandpeers作command的宾语,intomatureadultswellpositionedforsuccessbothinacademiaand

intherealworld作修饰develop的状语,在这个状语中,wellpositionedforsuccessbothinacademiaandintherealworld为过去分词短语作后置定语,修饰matureadults.

2.如今大学生所拥有的数量过多的电子设备已经占据了他们很多精力,包括电脑、手机和掌上游戏机.这些设备占用了宝贵的本来可以用于学习或做学术研究的时间.Collegestudentstodayalreadyhave

asurplusof

(1.数量过多的)electronicdevicesto

keepthemoccupied(2.占据精力),includingcomputers,cellphonesandhandheldgamingdevices.Allofthesecan

takeupvaluabletime

(3.占据宝贵时间)that

wouldotherwise

(4.本来可以……)bespentstudyingordoingacademicwork.

1-asurplusofsth.surplus既可以作名词也可以作形容词.

词典释义：surplusUK

['sɜ：.pləs]

US

['sɝ：-]

noun

countable

or

uncountable

adjective

ADVANCED

■(anamountwhichis)morethanisneeded

剩余(的),多余(的);过剩(的)•Theworldisnowproducinglargefood

surpluses.世界上目前生产的食品大大过剩.•Weareunlikelytoproduceany

surplus

thisyear.我们今年不太可能有任何盈余.•Thegovernmenthasauthorizedthearmytosellits

surplus

weapons.政府已经授权军队出售多余的武器.•UKThestoreissellingoffstockthatis

surplustorequirements

(=morethantheyneedtohave).这家商店正在抛售多余的存货.

外刊例句：Aninterestingparadoxinthetechnologyworldisthatthereisbothashortageand

asurplusof

engineersintheUnitedStates.TalktothoseworkingatanySiliconValleycompany,andtheywilltellyouhowharditistofindqualifiedtalent.Butlistentotheheart-wrenchingstoriesofunemployedengineers,andyouwillrealizethattherearetensofthousandswhocan'tgetjobs.

()科技界存在着奇特的自相矛盾情况——美国科技界面临着工程师短缺的同时又面临着工程师供过于求.若与那些硅谷的科技公司的职员聊天,他们总会说很难找到称职的工程师.但听闻些失业工程师的故事后,感到难过之余,你又会发现到,有成千上万工程师仍找不到工作.

替换表达：anexcessofsomething

学生错误表达：(1)

largeamounts

of点评：amountof后面只能接不可数名词,而electronic

devices是可数名词,不能用amountof来修饰.(2)

anumberof点评：anumberof含义是"几个,若干”,这里没有表达出"数量过剩”的意思.(3)

numerous点评：numerous含义是"很多”,但没有表达出"数量过剩”的意思.

2-keepsboccupiedoccupy既可以指空间的占据,也可以指时间、精力的占据,后常跟介词短语withsth;另外,keepsb/sthdone中,done直接作宾补,不需要用keepsb/sthbeingdone的形式.

词典释义：occupied

oc·cu·pied/

ˈɑkjəˌpaɪd

;

ˈɔkjʊpaɪd

/adjective

1.notbeforenounbusydoingsomething忙于…的,从事…的：

[+

with

]•Histimewasoccupiedwiththechildren.他的时间都用于照顾孩子了.•She'sfullyoccupiedwithwork.工作使她忙得不可开交.•Themuseumhasenoughexhibitstokeepanyoneoccupiedforanhourortwo.这座博物馆的藏品数量足够让任何一个人观赏一两个小时.•Ikeptmyself

occupiedbywatchingtelevision.为了不让自己闲着,我就一直看电视.

外刊例句：Howareutilitycompaniesresponding?Forthemoment,

preparingtotakeadvantageofnewlyliberalisingmarkets—throughallianceswith,andacquisitionsof,complementarycompanies—isenoughto

keepthemoccupied.

()公用事业公司将如何应对?目前看来,他们都在为从新的自由市场中得到好处而做准备,比如通过与优势互补的公司合作或收购它们,而这已经够他们忙的了.

学生错误表达：(1)

theenergiesareswallowedup点评：energy在这里是不可数名词,energies应该改为energy(2)

takenover

toomuchenergy点评：takeover表达不妥,它在词典中的含义是：(1)tobegintohavecontrolofor

responsibilityforsth,especiallyinplaceofsbelse接替;接任;接管;接手(2)togaincontrolofapoliticalparty,a

country,etc.控制,接管(政党、国家等),不能用来指"占据精力”.(3)

takemuch

theirenergy点评：应该改为takeupmuch

oftheirenergy

3-takeupvaluabletime

词典释义：5.PHRASAL

VERB

短语动词

占用,花费(时间、空间或精力)

Ifsomething

takesup

a

particularamountoftime,space,oreffort,itusesthatamount.

【语法信息】：VPn(notpron)

【语法信息】：beV-edPwith-ing/n

【语法信息】：VPnwithn/-ing•IknowhowbusyyoumustbeandnaturallyIwouldn'twant

to

takeup

toomuchofyourtime...我知道您肯定特别忙,我当然不想占用您太多的时间.•Theentirememotookupalloftwopages...整个备忘录写了满满两页纸.•Agooddealofmytimeistakenupwithreadingcritical

essaysandreviews...我的大部分时间都用在阅读评论文章上了.

•Theaimwasnotto

takeup

valuabletimewiththeusualboringpictures.目的在于不要用常见的无聊图片占用宝贵时间.

外刊例句：Thecriticshaveacase,uptoapoint.Manyoftheclaims

madeundertheADAarefrivolous,and

takeupvaluabletime

andresources.

()这些批评说到了点子上.这些美国糖料病协会作出的声明过于轻率,还占用了宝贵的时间与资源.

替换表达：fill/consume/useupprecioustime

学生错误表达：(1)

spendthe

precioustime点评：precioustime在这里是泛指,且time是不可数名词,前面的冠词the应该去掉.即somebodyspendsprecioustimedoingsomething或者somethingtakesupprecioustime

4-wouldotherwiseotherwise常见的翻译是"否则、要不然”,

其实把这种翻译扩展一下,即"如果不是前述做法,就会……”,对应到中文,就是"可能会……”、或者"本来会……”.

词典释义：otherwise

●●●●○1.ADV

副词

否则;不然

Youuse

otherwise

afterstatingasituationorfact,inordertosaywhatthe

resultorconsequencewouldbeifthissituationorfactwasnotthecase.

【搭配模式】：ADVwithcl•Makeanoteofthequestionsyouwanttoask.Youwill

invariablyforgetsomeofthem

otherwise...把想提的问题记下来,否则总是会漏掉其中的一些.

•I'mluckythatI'minterestedinschoolwork,

otherwise

I'dgomad.我很庆幸自己对学习怀有兴趣,不然我会疯掉的.

•...menwhowanttoprovidepositiverolemodelsforkids

whomight

otherwise

beoutonthestreets.想为那些可能会流落街头的孩子树立榜样的人

外刊例句：Itsconclusionisthattheywillbehigh：thecentral

estimatetoutedbyGeorgeOsborne,thechancellor,isthatGDPmaybe6.2%lower

thanit

wouldotherwise

havebeen

by2030,anannualcostthathereckonsworksoutatsome£4,300($6,000)per

household.

()该结论是它们会很高：财政部长乔治·奥斯本吹嘘的主要估算是国民生产总值到2030年将比本来的预期低6.2%,他认为每户人的年开销应该大概会在4300英镑(6000美元).

学生错误表达：(1)

could/should

havedone点评：这里虚拟语气使用有误.could/

shouldhave用来表示过去本来应该做某事,但却没有做.比如：

Ishouldhavegonethis

morningbutIwasfeelingabitill...今天早晨我本应该走的,但是我觉得有点不舒服.而原句的意思是众多电子设备会占据本来应该用来学习的时间,这里只是一种假设,不能用could/should

havedone

Q：invaluable和valuable有什么区别,用法有区别吗?A：invaluable以及valuable都可以表示"宝贵的”(veryusefulinhelpingyoudosomething),但是invaluable的宝贵程度要更深,valuable可以翻译为"宝贵的”,invaluable可以翻译为"极其宝贵的”.此外,valuable还有"值钱的,贵重的”这一层含义,比如：avaluablepainting一幅名贵的画,但invaluable没有,不可以说

aninvaluablepainting

Q：想问一下wouldotherwise的来源是什么,这是标准的用法吗?我查了牛津高阶,剑桥,柯林斯字典

都没有这种用法~A：有.可以参考韦氏词典例句：Thenewcomputerprogramallowsustodo

insecondswhatwouldotherwise[=withoutthecomputerprogram]takeusdays

toaccomplish.

此外,《经济学人》等外刊上经常会出现这一用法,比如：Thatallowsthecomputerstoteachthemselvesrulesofthumbthathumanprogrammerswouldotherwisehavetotrytowriteexplicitlyincomputercode,anotoriouslydifficulttask.

3.比起在校外租公寓住,居住在学生宿舍能够节省开支.公寓租金一般很高,学生和家长会为此花费大量金钱,而高校所收取的住宿费一般较为合理.Comparedto

(1.比起……)rentinganapartmentoff-campus,livinginastudentdormcan

leadtofinancialsavings(2.节省开支).Whileapartmentrentsareoftenhighandcanquickly

drainstudents'ortheirparents'bankaccounts(3.消耗金钱),collegestypically

chargereasonablerates(4.收取合理的费用)forstudentaccommodations.

1-comparedtoAcomparesBwith/toC,意为"A将B和C进行比较”,被比较的二者是B和C,所以当B作为逻辑主语时,compare需要被动,注意不能写成"ComparingtoC,B……”的形式.

词典释义：compareUK

[kəm'peər]

US

[-per]

verb

transitive

EXAMINE

DIFFERENCES

查找差异

ESSENTIAL

■toexamineorlookforthedifferencebetweentwoormore

things

对比,对照,比较•Ifyou

compare

housepricesinthetwoareas,it's

quiteamazinghowdifferenttheyare.如果比较一下两个地段的房价,你会惊讶地发现两者差别竟如此之大.•Thatseemsexpensive-haveyou

compared

pricesin

othershops?

那好像很贵——你有没有比较一下其他店里的价格?•Compare

somerecentwork

with

yourolderstuffandyou'llseehowmuchyou've

improved.把你近来的作品与以前的对照一下,你就会知道你的进步有多大.•Thisroadisquitebusy

compared

to/with

ours.与我们那条路相比,这条路很繁忙.•Childrenseemtolearnmoreinterestingthings

compared

to/with

whenwewereatschool.与我们上学时相比,孩子现在学到的有趣东西似乎更多一些.

外刊例句：When

comparedto

thethreeotherslowestpost-warrecoveries,thecurrent"joblessrecovery”

hasbeenthoughtuniqueinitslackofemploymentgrowth.()若把今日的"就业复苏”与其它三次缓慢的战后复苏相比,它会显得很独特,因为它并没有增加就业.

替换表达：comparedwith/incomparisonwith

2-leadtofinancialsavings

词典释义：saving

●●●○○1.N-COUNT

可数名词

节省;节约

A

saving

isa

reductionintheamountoftimeormoneythatisusedorneeded.

【搭配模式】：usuwithsupp•Fillintheformbelowandyouwillbemakinga

saving

of

£6.60onaone-yearsubscription.填写以下表格,全年订阅即可为您节省6.60英镑.•...aprogramofhousehold

savings

onenergyuse.家庭节能计划

leadtoPhrasal

Verbs

leadtosth

ESSENTIAL

■Ifanactionoreventleadstosomething,itcausesthat

thingtohappenorexist

导致,引起•Reducingspeedlimitsshould

lead

tofewerdeaths

ontheroads.降低限速可以减少交通死亡人数.

外刊例句：Thegovernmenthaspreviouslyjustifiedthewelfarecapon

thegroundsof"fairness”becauseinprinciplenojoblesshouseholdshould

getmoreinbenefitincomethanthe£26,000earnedbytheaverageworking

family.Itarguesthatthecapwillincentivisepeopletomoveintoworkand

leadtofinancialsavings

of£500m

overthenextfiveyears.

()政府之前打着"公平”的名义来给福利上限政策辩护,因为,从原则上来说,失业家庭的福利收入理应高于普通工薪家庭平均年收入26000英镑.它认为,该上限能刺激民众去工作,从而在未来5年给政府节省5亿英镑支出.

替换表达：savemoney

学生错误表达：(1)

cutdownonexpenditures点评：expenditure一般指政府或机构的开支,用来指学生的开支不妥.

3-drainone’sbankaccounts词典释义：drain[dreɪn]verb

REDUCE减少

intransitiveortransitive

■toreduceorcause

somethingtoreduce使减少;使降低;消耗•Thelongwarhad

drainedtheresourcesofbothcountries.那场旷日持久的战争使两国元气大伤.•Wardrainsa

nationofitsyouthanditswealth(=usesthemuntiltheyaregone).战争消耗掉的是国家的青年和财富.

外刊例句：InachilledStarbucksmyfriendbroughtmeanicedcoffee,

whichIdrankthroughastraw(myjawstillhurt)andsaid,"Thepeoplein

thebankprobablythinkIbeatyouupandamtryingto

drainyourbankaccounts.That’swhatitlookslike.”

(www.

)在一家没多少人的星巴克里,我的朋友给我买了杯冰咖啡.我用吸管来喝它,因为我的下巴还很痛,而他接着说道："银行的那些人可能会觉得我打了你一顿,并且企图花光你的钱,而现在这情况看起来就是那样”.

替换表达：eatinto/useupsavings/consumemoney

4-chargereasonableratescharge作为动词含义较多,除了"收费”,还有"控告”、"命令”.

词典释义：rate[reɪt]

noun

countable

PAYMENT

付款

ESSENTIAL

■anamountorlevelofpayment

价格;费用•Weagreeda

rate

withthepainterbeforehe

startedwork.开工前,我们和油漆工谈好了薪酬.•What'sthe

going

(=standard)

rate

for

thistypeofwork?

这种工作一般酬金是多少?•Doyoupayyourmortgageona

fixed

or

variable

rate?

你怎样还抵押贷款,是定额偿付还是不定额偿付?

外刊例句：Englishcommonlawcametoseeinnkeepers,boatmen,

warehouseownersandgranaryoperatorsas"commoncarriers”：transporttrades

compelledtoserveallcomers,andto

charge

reasonablerates.

()英国习惯法曾视小旅馆掌柜、船主、货仓拥有者和粮仓拥有者为"惯常运送者”：负责用于服务外来者的运输贸易,并收取合理的费用.

学生错误表达：(1)

charge

reasonableaccommodationfee点评：fee是可数名词,这里应该改为accommodationfees

Q：我从网上查到comparedto是比较不同物体之间的相同点,comparedwith是比较相似物体之间的不同点,但是Macmillan词典上两者可混用,到底哪个对呢?A：comparedto以及comparedwith两者可以混用,按照麦克米伦词典的用法来就行.网上有些说法不准确.

comparedwith/to

phrase

usedfortalkingaboutthewaysinwhichtwothingsaredifferent,

oraboutthewaysinwhichsomethinghaschanged

Profitswere

goodcomparedwithlastyear.

Comparedto

someofthethingsshe’ssaid,thiswaspolite.

ascomparedto/with：

25%of

school-agechildrensmoke,ascomparedto21%ofadults.

Thesaurus：

waysof

comparingthingssynonym

Main

entry：

compared

Q：为啥这边用的是compared而不是comparing呢A：AcomparesBwith/toC,意为"A将B和C进行比较”,被比较的二者是B和C,当B作为被比较的对象时,应该说

ComparedtoC,B…(还原后相当于WhenBiscomparedtoC,B…),因为不能说ComparingtoC,B…

Q：老师,我想请问,在翻译句子中我有个疑惑,就是给出的句子,我一般直接抽取里面汉语的主干,然后再放上各种定语和从句等其他修饰成分,可是老师翻译的往往和汉语很不一样,名词性的话,用动词来表达,动词性的话,用名词来表达,我有点迷茫.A：翻译的时候不必严格按照词性对等的原则来翻,可以灵活处理,只要意思正确即可.

Q：住宿费太高是不是只能用high,而不能用expensive?A：prices/fees/rents这类名词可以用high来修饰,但不可以用expensive(Youuse

high

aboutrents/fees/prices/costs.Don’tuse

expensive

withthesewords),比如我们可以说

Accommodationfeesarehigh.但我们不可以说Accommodationfeesareexpensive.我们要说Accommodation

isexpensive.

4.企业招聘人员高度重视全面发展的学生,这些学生不仅有高学分,还拥有创业或工作经验.雇主会认为,与那些缺乏工作经验的学生相比,他们有更强烈的上进心,工作更努力,而且更为成熟.Corporaterecruiters

placeapremiumon

(1.高度重视)well-rounded

(2.全面发展)studentswhonotonlyhavegoodgradesbutalso

possessentrepreneurialoremploymentexperience(3.拥有创业或工作经验).Employerswill

regard

(4.认为……)thesestudentsasmoreambitious,hard-workingandmaturethangraduateswholacksuchworkexperience.

1-placeapremiumon

词典释义：6.PHRASE

短语

高度重视

Ifyou

placeahighpremiumon

aqualityorcharacteristicor

putahighpremiumon

it,

youregarditasveryimportant.

【搭配模式】：Vinflects•Iplaceahigh

premiumonwhatsomeoneislikeasaperson...我非常重视一个人的人品.

•Theyputahigh

premiumonpreventionandprimarycare.他们对预防和初级护理极为重视.

外刊例句：Soldiers

placea

premiumon

beingtough,andmanyavoidseeingpsychologistsatallcosts.()士兵注重展露坚韧品质,大多想尽办法逃避看心理医生.

替换表达：thinghighlyof

学生错误表达：(1)

payhigh

attentionto点评：表达不准确.Pay

attentionto是"注意……”的意思.(2)puthighemphasison点评：putemphasison

一般搭配是putemphasisonsomething,例如：Schoolshereput/place/laygreatemphasisonwrittenworkand

grammar.

这里的学校特别重视写作和文法.一般没有put

emphasisonsomebody的用法.

2-well-rounded

词典释义：well-rounded

[ˌwel'raʊn.dɪd]

adjective

■involvingorhavingexperienceinawiderangeofideas

oractivities

全面的;多方面的•It'sa

well-rounded

articlewhichisfairtoboth

sidesofthedispute.这是一篇分析很全面的文章,对分歧的双方都很公平.•Shedescribesherselfasa"well-rounded

person"whoworkshardbuthasavariedsociallife.她把自己描述成一个"全面发展的人”,工作努力,社交生活也丰富多彩.

外刊例句：In1956WilliamWhytearguedinhisbestseller,"The

OrganisationMan”,thatcompaniesweresoinlovewith"well-rounded”executivesthattheyfoughta"fightagainst

genius”.Todaymanysufferfromtheoppositeprejudice.

()1956年威廉·怀特在他的畅销书籍《组织人》中提出了一个观点.他认为公司过于喜爱那些"全才型”的总裁,以致于许多公司已经到了"和天才为敌”的地步.如今,他们大多受困于与以前相反的偏见.

学生错误表达：(1)

all-rounded点评：没有all-rounded的说法,应该改为all-round(2)

thefull

rangeof点评：afullrangeof

something是指一系列事物,Thereisafullrangeofactivities

forchildren.这里有给孩子们提供的各种活动.afullrangeof不能用来指学生全面发展.(3)

well-developed点评：well-developed是指"发育良好的,健全的”,比如：Sheisaphysicallywell-developedteenagerwiththeemotionaland

mentallevelofafour-year-old.她是一个身体发育良好的少女,可是情感和智力只相当于四岁大孩子的程度.

3-possessentrepreneurialoremploymentexperience

词典释义：possess[pə'zes]

verb

transitive

OWN

拥有

IMPROVER

■tohaveorownsomething,ortohaveaparticularquality

拥有;具有•Idon't

possess

asingleDVD(=Idon'thaveeven

oneDVD).我一张DVD光碟都没有.•Inthepasttherootofthisplantwasthoughtto

possess

magicalpowers.过去这种植物的根被认为具有神奇的力量.

外刊例句：AsurveybytheGraduateManagementAdmissionCouncil,an

associationofbusinessschools,foundthatalthoughonly4%ofMBAs

haveentrepreneurialexperience

when

theyentertheircourse,26%saytheywanttostartcompaniesafterthey

graduate.

()据研究生入学管理委员会(一家商业学校联盟协会)的报告显示,尽管仅4%的MBA新生有商业经验,但在他们当中,26%的人想在毕业后创业.

替换表达：have/possess/gainworkexperience

学生错误表达：(1)

have

experiencesofstartingtheirownbusinessorworking点评：haveexperience

ofsomething/doingsomething,此时experience是不可数名词,不能说haveexperiences