新教材适用2024-2025学年高中英语Unit3SportsandFitnessSectionⅣ写作指导学案新人教版必修第一册

SectionⅣ写作指导写一篇健康报告书写作储备阅读教材P42健康报告，提炼健康报告的写作特点。Ⅰ.黄金写作模板Ⅱ.写作语言特色运用恰当的描绘性语言，精确地表达出自己或他人在过去及现在的健康状况。Ⅲ.写作常用词汇1．slimadj.苗条的；单薄的2．weightn．体重3．dietn．饮食4．challengev．挑战5．refreshedadj.复原精神的6．energeticadj.充溢活力的7．worryabout担忧8．keepfit保持健康9．catchacoldnowandthen时常感冒Ⅳ.写作常用句型1．Iaddhealthyfoodtomymeals.我把健康食品加到我的饮食中。2．ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.我对自己喜爱的东西列了一个清单。3．Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody,Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.对自己和自己的身体有了主动确定的看法后，我变得更华蜜，更健康了。4．Ireadanarticlethatsaidperformingtaichiwouldmakeadifference.我读过一篇文章，上面写道打太极拳会有作用。5．Imakeitaruletogetupearly.早起成了我的一项有规律的活动。6．Mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday.通过每天熬炼，我的身体正在渐渐强壮起来。典例剖析请依据上面关于健康报告书的框架结构，写一篇短文。过去①幼年时期，身体虚弱；常常感冒②不能够正常上学转折点读到一篇关于早晨慢跑的文章现在①养成早起和慢跑的习惯②感到精神焕发，精力充足③身体逐步复原；日常生活从中受益留意：词数80左右。审题谋篇Ⅰ.定框架→好的起先，胜利的一半体裁健康报告书人称第一人称时态一般过去时和一般现在时框架第一段：描述过去状况其次段：现在状况第三段：总结Ⅱ.定要点、关键词及动词时态→打造一篇要点全面、用词精确得体、时态多样的极优作文要点一：幼年时期，我身体虚弱。(weak)WhenIwasalittlechild,Iwasweak.要点二：我常常感冒。(catchacold)Icaughtacoldnowandthen.要点三：正常上学很困难。(动名词短语作主语；difficult)Goingtoschoolregularlywasdifficult.要点四：我读到一篇文章。(article)Ireadanarticle.要点五：这篇文章上说早晨慢跑有效果。(jog；makeadifference)Thearticlesaidjogginginthemorningwouldmakearealdifference.要点六：我起得很早；慢跑半个小时。(getup)Igetupearlyandjogforabouthalfanhour.要点七：我感到精神焕发，精力充足。(refresh；energetic)Ifeelrefreshedandenergetic.要点八：通过每天熬炼，我的身体正在逐步复原。(buildup；workout)Mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday.要点九：它对我的日常生活有极大的好处。(benefit)Itbenefitsmydailylifegreatly.Ⅲ.词汇、句式升级→创建极优作文的倩词靓句升级句式一：用so...that连接要点一和要点二WhenIwasalittlechild,IwassoweakthatIcaughtacoldnowandthen.升级句式二：用定语从句连接要点四和要点五Ireadanarticle,whichsaidjogginginthemorningwouldmakearealdifference.升级句式三：用makeitaruleto改写要点六Imakeitaruletogetupearlyandjogforabouthalfanhour.升级句式四：用定语从句连接要点八和要点九Mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday,whichbenefitsmydailylifegreatly.Ⅳ.组建极优作文→水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉参考范文：WhenIwasalittlechild,IwassoweakthatIcaughtacoldnowandthen.Asaresult,goingtoschoolregularlywasabigchallengetome.ThenIreadanarticle,whichsaidjogginginthemorningwouldmakearealdifference.SoIfollowtheadviceandputitintopracticeeveryday.Now,Imakeitaruletogetupearlyandjogforabouthalfanhour.Afterthat,Ifeelrefreshedandenergetic.Atpresent,mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday,whichbenefitsmydailylifegreatly.J即学即练你校英语报健康栏目在征文，请你写一篇稿件参赛。内容如下：1．你过去的身体状况；2．变更历程；3．现状。留意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。参考范文：Iamahighschoolstudent.InthepastIalwaysfeltworriedaboutmyhealth，becauseIwasoverweight.Ifeltsleepyoftenandfelttired.Ididn'twanttodoanysports.Later，Idecidedtochangethissituation.First,Ichangedmydiet，stoppingeatingjunkfood.Instead，Iatemorefruitandvegetables.Besides，Ibegantotakemoreexercise