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写好段落的意义写好段落的意义1)它是英语实际运用的基础;2)它是文章的重要组成部分;主题句通常放在段落的开端,其特点是开门见山地摆出问题,然后加以详细说明。5)LastSaturdayallofmyclosefriendscametomyhometocelebratemybirthday.(次要推展句2)Sweaty-palm,becauseI'malwaysnervousbeforeIentertheclassroom,surethatIwillbefoundoutforthefoolthatIam.(推展句)Asaresult,theymightsellwell,which,inreturn,maygreatlybenefitthemanufactures.Therewasanunexpected

thinghashappened

onmy

twenty'sbirthdayparty.2)Youarelonelyifyouhavenofriends.一个段落之内的几个句子并非是杂乱无章地堆砌在一起的。Myfriendworkshardonhismathstudy.Therearesomereasonswhyshetriestoimproveherlooks。Ihadanexciting(dangerous,interesting,etc.1)它是英语实际运用的基础;(主要推展句1)TeachingisthemostdifficultofthevariouswaysIhaveattemptedtoearnmyliving:mechanic,carpenter,writer.Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreetochoosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsasubtleinfluenceonus.“BeijingwillwelcometheOlympicGames.写好段落的标准一段一要点:在写作过程中,将文章划分为一个个段落的目的,就是将要阐述的信息分割为有一定意义的信息块(组)。而将这些信息块(组)按照一定的逻辑关系排列起来,就构成了文章的整体。因此,在一个段落里,最好只呈现文章的一个要点,并紧紧围绕这一要点进行写作。一定要注意不要在一个段落内塞入二三个甚至更多的要点,这会使读者感到困惑,不知本段侧重陈述什么内容。

主题句放前

主题句(topicsentence)是对整个段落要阐述内容的高等浓缩概括,用一句或两句话将其表述出来。一般来说,要将主题句放在段落的第一句,以便让读者一开始就明了作者在本段落要陈述的内容。但如果有承上启下的过渡句时,也可将主题句放在过渡句的后面。

段内忌杂而乱一个段落之内的几个句子并非是杂乱无章地堆砌在一起的。这些句子一定要与该段所表达的要点密切相关,并且按照一定的逻辑关系排列。句子之间可以使用恰当的关联词语衔接起来,以保持段落的完整性。

不长也不短在遵循上面的一段一要点的原则上,还需要注意段落的长度。一般情况下,一个段落不要太短(1~2句话),也不可太长(15句话以上)。段落太短很难将意思表达清楚,太长则读者会感到疲倦。

段间紧相连

由于每个段落集中阐述一个要点,段与段之间是相对独立的,因此段落之间最好使用一些关联词语或过渡语句,将文章中的各个段落有机地串联起来,使整篇文章浑然一体。段落的组成部分主题句topicsentence推展句supportingsentences结论句concludingsentence

Advertisementsareusefultothemanufactures.(主题句)Withtheirhelp,themanufacturescanprovidepeoplewithinformationabouttheirnewproducts--theirgoodquality,theircheappricesandtheirpopularity.(推展句)Asaresult,theymightsellwell,which,inreturn,maygreatlybenefitthemanufactures.(结尾句)

Mymotherhaspassedalongtomecertainrulesforgettingalongwithothers.Don'targuewithparents;theywillthinkyoudon'tlovethem.Don'targuewithchildren;theywillthinkthemselvesvictimized.Don'targuewithspouses;theywillthinkyouareatiresomemate.Don'targuewithstrangers;theywillthinkyouarenotfriendly.Mymother'srules,infact,canbesummedupintwowords:Don'targue.

主题句中心思想(controllingideaorcentralidea)是表达段落主题的句子。它用以概括段落大意,要求全段其他文字都围绕它展开。YousaidyouweregoingtolearnChineseinJinhuaChineseschoolandaskedmetofindaflatforyou.Iamveryhappytohaveaclosefriend.(推展句)Asaresult,theymightsellwell,which,inreturn,maygreatlybenefitthemanufactures.Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreetochoosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsasubtleinfluenceonus.1〕每个主要推展句都应该是对主题句中表示主要思想的关键词的直接、明确的说明。4)ExaminationNextFridayIwillgotomybestfriendAngela's1)它是英语实际运用的基础;而将这些信息块(组)按照一定的逻辑关系排列起来,就构成了文章的整体。Intheireffortstopersuadeustobuythisorthatproduct,advertisershavemadeaclosestudyofhumannatureandhaveclassifiedallourlittleweakness.b'Tomisahard-workingstudent.Myfriendishardworkingandwarm-hearted.3)Examinationisawayforteachertocheckstudents,butthereisabadbehaviorofcheatingintheexamination.推展句supportingsentences关键词要尽量写得具体些。主题句的位置

主题句通常放在段落的开端,其特点是开门见山地摆出问题,然后加以详细说明。其作用是使文章的结构更清晰,更具说服力,便于读者迅速地把握主题和想象全段的内容。主题句可以放在段中起到承上启下的作用,或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。

Ourlifetodaydependsverymuchonenergy.Intownsandinvillages,onfarmsandinfactories,machineshavemadelifeeasierthanitusedtobe.Themachinesuseenergy,andenergyisneededforheating,lighting,communications,carryinggoods--everything.Factoriesandindustrialplantsuseagreatdealofenergytomakethethingsthatweuseandbuyandsell.

Intheireffortstopersuadeustobuythisorthatproduct,advertisershavemadeaclosestudyofhumannatureandhaveclassifiedallourlittleweakness.Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreetochoosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsasubtleinfluenceonus.Intheireffortstopersuadeustobuythisorthatproduct,advertisershavemadeaclosestudyofhumannatureandhaveclassifiedallourlittleweakness.

写好主题句中的关键词

段落的主题句对主题的限定主要是通过句中的关键词来表现的。关键词要尽量写得具体些。对“具体”的要求包括两个方面:一是要具体到能控制和限制段落的发展;二是要具体到能说明段落发展的方法。准确地把握关键词是清楚地表达段落主题、写好段落主题句的重要前提之一

比较:Hecanfixabicyclehimself.Hecanfixabicyclehimselfinseveralsimplesteps.Thereareseveralreasonswhyhecanfixabicyclehimself.

Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreetochoosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsasubtleinfluenceonus.句子之间可以使用恰当的关联词语衔接起来,以保持段落的完整性。主题句的内容要明确具体,具有特定性和单一性,切忌笼统。因此,在一个段落里,最好只呈现文章的一个要点,并紧紧围绕这一要点进行写作。关键词要尽量写得具体些。Oneofmyhobbiesisdrawingoldpictures.Ihavesomefriendswhichcomefromdifferentcountries.MygoodFriendscelebratedtomybirthday,andgavememanykindsofpresents.(次要推展句2)Sweaty-palm,becauseI'malwaysnervousbeforeIentertheclassroom,surethatIwillbefoundoutforthefoolthatIam.关键词要尽量写得具体些。Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreetochoosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsasubtleinfluenceonus.二是要具体到能说明段落发展的方法。写好主题句中的关键词段落的主题句对主题的限定主要是通过句中的关键词来表现的。

比较:Shetriestoimproveherlooks.Shetriesmanywaystoimproveherlooks.Therearesomereasonswhyshetriestoimproveherlooks。

因此,导向(control)和制约(limit)。

Therearetwowaysinwhichonecanownabook.Thefirstisthepropertyrightyouestablishbypayingforit,justasyouhavemadeitapartofyourselfandthebestwaytomakeyourselfapartofitisbywritinginit.

Exerciseisbeneficialtoyourheart.A22-yearstudywasconductedbydoctorsinCalifornia.Theyfoundthatpeoplewhoworkatphysicaljobsexperiencefewerheartattacksthanotherpeople.Theseactivepeopleworkallthetimeatmoderatespeeds,theirdailyroutinegivesthemanadequateamountofexerciseandhelpsthemstayinshape.

小结主题句的内容要明确具体,具有特定性和单一性,切忌笼统。a.Waterisimportant.a'Waterisimportanttous.bTomisagoodstudent.b'Tomisahard-workingstudent.MygoodFriendscelebratedtomybirthday,andgavememanykindsofpresents.(3)按论说的重要程度安排.一定要注意不要在一个段落内塞入二三个甚至更多的要点,这会使读者感到困惑,不知本段侧重陈述什么内容。Mymother'srules,infact,canbesummedupintwowords:Don'targue.主题句通常放在段落的开端,其特点是开门见山地摆出问题,然后加以详细说明。关键词要尽量写得具体些。YousaidyouweregoingtolearnChineseinJinhuaChineseschoolandaskedmetofindaflatforyou.Advertisementsareusefultothemanufactures.次要推展句(minorsupportingstatement)是指对主要推展句作进一步的事实分析和举例说明。Wehadagoodtime.关键词要尽量写得具体些。一般顺序是先次要后主要,最主要的理由放在最后.Ithinkexaminationhaveadvantageanddisadvantage.4)Ifyouwanttoentertheuniversityyoumusttositanexaminationinmath.1〕每个主要推展句都应该是对主题句中表示主要思想的关键词的直接、明确的说明。

主题句的语言要简洁,开门见山.YousaidyouweregoingtolearnChineseinJinhuaChineseschoolandaskedmetofindaflatforyou.NowIamwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheoneI'vefoundforyou.I'mgladtoknowthatyouwillcometoChinaandI'vefoundaflatforyou.课堂练习就下面的主题写出一个主题句:1)BirthdayParty2)Hobby3)MyFriend4)Examination5)OlympicGames练习讲解1)MybirthdaywillcomeandIplantotakeabirthdayparty.2)Ionlyplaybadmintonasahobby.3)MyeyesmovingfromfacetofaceandIwondersheismyfriendorfoe?4)Ifyouwanttoentertheuniversityyoumusttositanexaminationinmath.5)WehaveeveryconfidenceinBeijing'sabilitytostageanexcellentOlympicgames.

1.Therewasanunexpected

thinghashappened

onmy

twenty'sbirthdayparty.2.Youcanachievemoreknowledgeandhappinessfrom

yourhobbies.3.Myfriendworkshardonhismathstudy.4.

DoyouthinkthatitisnecessaryforustositaCET4examination?5.NotonlydoOlympicGameshaveitsadvantages,butitalsohavedisadvantages.

Myfriendsgavemefourdifferentbirthdaypartyduringthepastfouryears.Myhobbiesarequietdifferentfromothers.Ihavesomefriendswhichcomefromdifferentcountries.TheexaminationincludesthefollowingpartsThereareseveralreasonswhyOlympicGamewillbeheldinChina.

1.Iwenttomybestfriend'sbirthdaypartylastMonday.2.Oneofmyhobbiesisdrawingoldpictures.3.Myfriendishardworkingandwarm-hearted.4.IsittedsomanyexaminationswhenIwasintheseniorhighschool.5.TherearesomenewcompetitionsinOlympicGames.

1.NextFridayIwillgotomybestfriendAngela'sbirthdayparty.2.Ihavemanyhobbies,suchasplayingbadminton,listeningtothemusicandchattingwithmyfriends.3.Inmyopinion,theexaminationisavailablebutnotnecessary.4."Oneworld,onedream.“BeijingwillwelcometheOlympicGames.5.WhatIdefinemyfriendiswhocanshareherhappinessandsorrowwithmewheneverwegettogether.

1.MygoodFriendscelebratedtomybirthday,andgavememanykindsofpresents.2.Marryhastwohobbiesunusualtootherpeople.3.Afriendisapersonwhocanletyoufeelwarmwhenyouaredepressed.SoIhavemanyfriends.4.Ithinkexaminationhaveadvantageanddisadvantage.5.ThesearemanyprojectsintheOlympicGames.

1)Ithinkallofyouhavehobbies.Butifyouknowthatdifferenthobbiesleadtodifferentcharacters.2)Youarelonelyifyouhavenofriends.Iamveryhappytohaveaclosefriend.3)Examinationisawayforteachertocheckstudents,butthereisabadbehaviorofcheatingintheexamination.4)AllthepeopleinChinafeelexcitingbecausethattheOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing.5)LastSaturdayallofmyclosefriendscametomyhometocelebratemybirthday.Wehadagoodtime.段落的推展主要特点是:围绕段落主题句展开的每一个推展句本身都不要求作进一步的说明或证明,句与句之间的关系是相互独立又是互相连接的。

推展句的写法(1)按事情的起因,经过和结果的顺序组织安排语句.一般的写事段落采用这种办法.(2)按地点和景物变换的空间顺序组织安排语句.(3)按论说的重要程度安排.一般顺序是先次要后主要,最主要的理由放在最后.

(主题句)Thereareseveralfactorsaffectingclimate.(推展句1)Onefactoristhemountofsunlightreceived.(推展句2)Altitude,ortheheightabovesealevel,alsodeterminesclimate.(推展句3)Theoceanshaveaneffectontheclimateofadjacentland.(推展句4)Inaddition,climateisinfluencedbythegeneralcirculationoftheatmosphere.

TherearethreereasonswhyIliketofish.First,Fishingcandevelopman’spersonality.Second,fishingcanhelpyoukilltimeandfinally,fishingcanmakeyoubecomem

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