Unit 4 《Writing-概要写作》课件2023-2024学年高一上学期英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

Writing——概要写作概要写作是一种阅读和写作要求并重的英语高考新题型，有准确性、完整性、概括性、客观性、个体性等特点。概要写作提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生在对原文阅读后根据其内容写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。概要所用语句既要用词准确、结构合理、语意连贯、不得抄写原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。一、注意事项1.词数要限制在60词左右，上下限不得超过10个单词。2.要根据文章的体裁特点进行概要写作。3.人称和时态要与所给文章中的人称和时态保持一致，但必要时也可变换成第三人称。4.写作时尽可能地使用复合句，必要时可转换词性，不得完全照搬、照抄原文。二、写作流程1.确定体裁，明确主题及结构体裁结构记叙文人物＋时间＋地点＋事件(起因＋发展＋结果)说明文事物的性质功能：对象＋性质功能＋利好问题的解决方法或措施：问题＋解决方法现象类：现象＋原因＋结果议论文主题＋补充论据(＋结论)2.确定主题句，找关键信息

划出每一段的主题句，抓住关键信息，忽略次要信息。3.改写关键信息，得出要点使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式，或使用不同的句子结构表达同一意思，如改变语态、肯定变否定等，避免抄袭原文句子。4.添加连接词，使行文连贯要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。常用的关联词有：however，besides，inaddition，therefore，instead等。

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChilelateonTuesday，cuttingpowerandleadingtosmalllandslidesandatsunami.Fourmenandonewomandied—twowhosufferedheartattacksandthreewhowerecrushed.About300prisonersescapedfromthenorthernportcityofIquiqueintheimmediateaftershock. Thequakestruckatabout8：46p.m.localtime，some60milesnorthwestofIquique.Ithadadepthof12.5miles.Chile’sNationalEmergencyOfficeaskedcoastalresidentstoleaveforsafeplaces.“Thefactis，wewillknowtheextentofthedamageastimegoesbyandwhenweinspect(视察)theareasinthelightofday，”Chile’sPresidentMichelleBacheletsaidearlyonWednesday.“Thecountryhasfacedthesefirstemergencyhoursverywell.” ResidentsintheportcityofAntofagastawalkedcalmlythroughthestreetstohighergroundastrafficbecameheavyinsomeplaces.“Manypeoplearefearfulafterexperiencingthepowerfulearthquakein2010，sotheyimmediatelyrushedtohighergroundwhentheyheardthetsunamiwarning，”saidagovernmentofficial.“Therehavebeenlotsofaftershocksandcommunicationshavebeencutoffinmanyoftheaffectedareas.Sopeoplearewaitinginthedarkhills，notknowingwhatistocome，andhopingtheywillbeabletoreturntotheirhomessafely.” ThePacificTsunamiWarningCentersentoutseveraltsunamiwarnings，butcalledoffallofthembyearlyWednesday.TsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeetcausedbytheearthquakewashedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.Iquique，withapopulationofmorethan200，000，sawseven-footwaves.第一步：要点提炼要点1：地震发生的时间、地点；要点2：地震导致的结果：电力中断、人员伤亡等；要点3：余震导致的结果；要点4：地震导致了海啸。第二步：要点翻译1.一场8.2级的地震在当地时间晚上8：46袭击了智利北部海岸。An8.2-magnitudeearthquake__________________________________at8：46p.m.localtime.2.这场地震导致了电力中断、五人死亡。Theearthquake_____________________________________________.struckoffthecoastofnorthernChilecausedpowercutsandfivedeaths3.在很多地震灾区通信中断。(cutoff)_________________________________inmanyoftheearthquake-hitareas.4.地震导致了六英尺多高的海啸波浪。(cause)Tsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeet_________________________________.5.这些海浪席卷了皮萨瓜沿岸。_________________________________onthecoastofPisagua.CommunicationswerecutoffwerecausedbytheearthquakeThesewaveswashedashore第三步：词句升级1.用分词短语作状语升级要点1和要点2An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChileat8：46p.m.localtime，_____________________________________________.2.用分词短语作定语升级要点4和要点5Tsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeet_____________________________washedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.causingpowercutsandfivedeathscausedbytheearthquake第四步：连句成篇 An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChileat8：46p．m.localtime，causingpowercutsandfivedeaths.(要点1)Therewerelotsofaftershocksandcommunicationswerecutoffinmanyoftheearthquake－hitareas.(要点2)TsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeetcausedbytheearthquakewashedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.(要点3)Thebestclassroomintheworldisatthefeetofanelderlyperson.世界上最好的课堂在老人的脚下.Havingachildfallasleepinyourarmsisoneofthemostpeacefulfeelingintheworld.让一个孩子在你的臂弯入睡,你会体会到世间最安宁的感觉.Beingkindismoreimportantthanbeingright.善良比真理更重要.Youshouldneversaynotoagiftfromachild.永远不要拒绝孩子送给你的礼物.Some