黄金卷05-【赢在高考·黄金8卷】2024年高考英语模拟卷（新高考七省专用）

【赢在高考・黄金8卷】备战2024年高考英语模拟卷（新高考七省专用）

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黄金卷05

（考试时间：120分钟试卷满分：150分）

注意事项：

1.答卷前，考生务必将自己的姓名、考生号等填写在答题卡和试卷指定位置上。

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3.考试结束后，将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。

第一部分听力（共两节，满分30分）

第一节（共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分）

听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每

段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下•小题。每段对话仅读•遍。

1.Whattimeofdayisitnow?

A.Morning.B.Afternoon.C.Evening.

2.Whatistheprobablerelationshipbetweenthespeakers?

A.Interviewerandinterviewee.B.Bossandsecretary.C.Hostandguest.

3.Wheredoestheconversationtakeplace?

A.Inaphoneshop.B.Inabookstore.C.Inthelibrary.

4.Howoldisthewomannow?

A.20yearsold.B.45yearsold.C.65yearsold.

5.WhatdoesthewomanspeakerthinkofJessica?

A.Unreliable.B.Helpful.C.Impatient.

第二节（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分）

听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳

选项。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的

作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。

听下面一段较长对话，回答6〜7小题。

6.WhyisthewomangoingtoGreece?

A.Tovisitafamouspark.B.Toattenduniversity.C.lbseeherfamily.

7.Howcanthemanbebestdescribed?

A.Aprofessionaltourguide.B.Ahelpfultravelpartner.C.Afriendlystranger.

听下面一段较长对话，回答8〜9小题。

8.WhatdoesAmandawanttodo?

A.Sendacard.B.Makeacall.C.Holdaparty.

9.WhatisJohndoing?

A.Givinganexplanation.B.Sharinganexperience.C.Makinganapology.

听下面一段较长对话，回答10~12小题。

10.Whatistheprobablerelationshipbetweenthespeakers?

A.Colleagues.B.Neighbors.C.Husbandandwife.

11.WhyisthemanunwillingtoeatinKFC?

A.Itisfaraway.B.Theserviceisslow.C.Hehashadamealthererecently.

12.Howdoesthewomanfeelabouttheman'sideaforthefuture?

A.It'sjustso-so.B.It'sgood.C.It'simpractical.

听下面一段较长对话，回答1376小题。

13.Whatisthewomandoing?

A.Hostingashow.B.Givingalecture.C.Havingaclass.

14.HowdidSteven'smotherinfluencehim?

A.Bysendinghimtopoetryclasses.

B.Byteachinghimtowritebusinessplans.

C.Byaskinghimtoreadfromearlychildhood.

15.WlialduesSlevenfindmostdifficultinwiiling?

A.Findingtherightwords.B.Choosingasuitabletopic.C.Describingrealexperiences.

16.WhatisSteven'sopiniononhisownwriting?-

A.Creative.B.Successful.C.Encouraging.

听下面一段独白，回答I7~2()小题。

17.Whatisthespeakermainlytalkingabout?

A.Somewayslokeephealthy.B.Someothisfavouritesports.C.Ihewaytosolveproblems.

18.Wheredoesthespeakerprobablylive?

A.Inthecountryside.B.Inabigcity.C.Bythesea.

19.Whatdid（hespeakerdotenyearsago?

A.HeclimbedtheAlps.B.HetookpartinLondonMarathon.C.Hefinishedacourseiniceclimbing.

20.Whydoesthespeaker'swifeseldomgoclimbing?

A.Shehasnotime.B.Sheisn'tstrongenough.C.Sheisafraidofclimbing.

第二部分阅读（共两节，满分50分）

第一节（共15小题:每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）

阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。

A

Wantapart-timejob?Herearesomeoptions.

CourtMonitors

WeareseekingfunandenergeticindividualsforCourtMonitors.Youmustbeagoodcommunicator,ableto

workunderpressureandenjoyafast-pacedenvironment.Applicantsmusthavereliabletransportation,beavailable

toworkweekendsandhaveaprovenbackgroundinthefield.

Benefits:

•Employeediscount

•Flexiblescheduleforalloflifeevents

BasicLandscaping

DickersonLandscapingislookingtoaddexperiencedmembers（oourlandscapingteam.Ifyouenjoyworking

outdoorsandaregenuinelyinterestedincrafting,planting,anddigging,thenwe'reinterestedinyou!Youshouldbe

capableofdoingphysicalworkandliftingobjectsover50lbs.Weworkonweekdays.

Benefits:

•Paidlimeoff

•Lifeinsurance

•Healthinsurance

SandwichArtist

AnoutstandingSandwichMakeiswanted!Theidealpersonforthispositionhasrelevantworkexperiencein

therestaurantindustry.Aresponsibilityistosafelypreparesandwichestoourcustomers*specifications,work

cooperativelywithotherfoodservicestaffandhelptomaintainorganizationandcleanlinessinthekitchen.

outofcarstohelpreduceplanetwarmingemissions.

Greattransformationhastakenplacesince.TransitadvocateshavepressedMetroandelectedofficialstostop

treatingbusridersasanafterthought.FormerCouncilmemberMikeBonin,whoalsosatonMetro'sgoverning

board,pushedforthecreationoftheBusSpeedandReliabilityWorkingGroup.Withacleargoal—tospeedupthe

buses—andamandate（授权）frompoliticalleaders,staffatthetwoagencieswereabletocutthroughbureaucratic

barriersthatoftenstymie（阻碍）publicworksprojects.

BusRapidTransit,orbusways,withdedicatedlanesandspecialstops,havefacedresistancefromsome

residentsandbusinessowners,whoworryaboutlosingcarlanesorparking.Thecompromiseisthatmostbus

ridersgetthebenefitofbuslanesonlyduringrushhours,from7to10a.m.and4to7p.m.Theserush-hourlanes

willdemonstratethebenefitsofgivingpeoplefast,convenientbusservice,soL.A.'spoliticalleaderswill

wholeheartedlysupportmorededicatedbuswaysandeven24-hourbuslanes.

24.WhathaveMetroandthecity'sDepartmentofTransportationdone?

A.Makingpreparationsforthe2028Olympics.

B.Demandingthebusestorur40milesperhour.

C.Arrangingspecialbuslanesduringrushhours.

D.Callingoncitizenstotakepublictransportation.

25.Whatdoestheunderlinedword“enlice“inparagraph3mean?

A.Attract.B.Order.C.Force.D.Beg.

26.Whatledtothetransformation?

A.Politics.B.Publicawareness.C.Economy.D.Marketingmanagement.

27.Whatdoesthelastparagraphimply?

A.Someresidentsresistbusways.B.Morecarlanesorparkingwillbelost.

C.Businessownersconflictwithbusriders.D.Publictransportationmaygetmoresupport.

C

Insomnia（失眠）feelslikeacurseforthoselefttossingandturningastheytrytofallasleep.Suchproblems

canbenotonlyupsetting,butalsoharmfi.iltothebrain,asrevealedinlastissue'sarticleonsleep.

ScientistsfromtheUSUniversityofWashingtonhavebeenusingbracelets（手镯）tomonitorthesleeppatters

of507universitystudentsoveraperiodofthreeyears.Thebraceletsallowedscientistsnotonlytomonitor（he

sleeppatternsoftheirsubjectsbutalsotoexaminetheirexposuretolightduringtheday.

Ihedatarevealedthatthestudentsenjoyedaboutthesamequantityofsleepregardlessofseasons.Buton

weeknightsinthewintertheywenttobed35minuteslater,andalsoroseagain27minuteslater,comparedwith

weeknightsinthesummer.

Thediscoverysurprisedthescientists.ThecityofSeattle,wheretheuniversityislocated,gets16hoursof

daylightinthesummerandonly8inthewinter.Theyexpectedthatlonglightsummereveningswouldkeepthe

studentsuplonger—buttheoppositeprovedtobethecase.

Accordingtothescientists,theexplanationmaybethatthelowquantityofdaylightinwinterdisturbsthe

studentsJinternalclock,shiftingitbysome40minutes.Theysimplyspenttoolittletimeoutdoorsduringwinter

months.

Thescientistsalsosuggestthatthetypeoflightmattersverymuch."Lightduringtheday,particularlyinthe

morning,affectsyourinternalclock,soyougettiredearlierintheevening,whilelightlateinthedayorearlyinthe

eveningdelaysyourtiredness,nexplainsHoracio,ProfessorofBiologyattheUniversityofWashingtonandoneof

thescientistsbehindthepublication.

Accordingtohim,theresultsareanimportantremindertoallofus,notjustAmericanuniversitystudents,to

thinkaboutlightlevelsandourexposure.t4Manyofusliveincitieswithlotsofartificiallight,andatthesame(ime

ourlifestylekeepsusindoorsduringtheday,“Horacionotes."Thestudydemonstratesthatwehavetostepoutside

—evenbriefly,andparticularlyin(hemorning—tobesubjectedtonaturallight.''

28.Whatdoesparagraph1intendtotellus?

A.Thesignsofinsomnia.B.Thecausesofinsomnia.

C.Theexperiencesofinsomnia.D.Theproblemsofinsomnia.

29.Whatsurprisedthescientists?

A.LonghoursofdaylightinSeattle'ssummer.

B.Thesamequantityofsleepwhatevertheseason.

C.Thechangeablesleeppatternsoftheparticipants.

D.Tlicsliuilcisleepinglimeinwinlciweeknights.

30.Whatisthefunctionofparagraph6?

A.Tostateanotherproblem.B.Topresentdoubt.

C.Toprovideanotherexplanation.D.Togiveevidence.

31.WhatdocsHoracioadviseustodofromthelastparagraph?

A.Haveenoughsleep.B.Getoutearlytoenjoynaturallight.

C.Dealwithlightpollution.D.Slayindoortoavoidlightexposure.

D

Haveyoualwaysbeeninsuchadilemmainstartyourday?Youwanttoenjoyanicecheesypieceofpizzaor

amilkshake,butdon'twanttodealwiththeachesandpainsthatcomeafter.Actuallythisdiscomfortiscommonly

believedtobecausedbylactose（乳糖）intolerance.Ilisestimatedthat68percentoftheglobalhumanpopulation

islactoseintolerant.

Whilecuttingoutdairyproductsisasurefireway,yetthisislikethrowingthebabyoutwiththebathwater.

Pecplewithlacloseintolerancewillbehappytoknow（hereareplentyofsolutionsihat'llletthemenjoythese

foodswithoutfeelinguncomfortable.

Whenyoutakeinlactose,sittingdownorbendingovermaymakeyoufeelpainfromgasescompressingin

yourstomach.Adjustyourposturetoremovepressurefromyourstomach.

Meanwhile,dietassists.Chooselactose-freemilkormilkalternativeslikesoymilk,coconutmilkoroatmilk

topreventpain.Theytastethesameasregularmilk,soyoucanstillenjoythefull

flavorwithoutanydiscomfort.Dairythat'salreadybeenprocessedcanalsobeonyourlistbecauseithassomeof

itsinctoscbrokendownsothereisn'tasmuchforyourbodytodigest.Sometimestakinglactase（乳糖酶）pills

beforeyoueatdairyproductscanhaveanimmediateeffect.

Thereisnocureforlactoseintoleranceandnopennanenttreatmentthatcanincreaseyourbody'slactuse

production.Butwhatwedoknowaboutthelactoseintolerance,tosomeextent,revealshowwrong-headed

onc-size-fits-allnutritionalguidancecanbeformilkdrinkinghasbeenpresentedasuniversallygood.Inreality,

howmilkbecomespartofnutritiondepends,atleastinpart,onhowourbodiesprocessit.

32.Howdoestheauthorintroducethetopic?

A.Byanalyzingdata.B.Bytellingafunnystory

C.Bypresentinganargument.D.Byrelatingtoaperson'sroutine.

33.Whyisprocesseddairyrecommended?

A.Becauseillublcsbctlci.B.Bcuauscilliasinuiciiuliilion.

C.Becauseitcontainslesslactose.D.Becauseitcanproducesomelactase.

34.Whatcanbeinferredfromthelastparagraph?

A.It'sunnecessarytoavoidlactoseintolerance.

B.Itishighlyadvisabletodrinkprocessedmilk.

C.Thedisadvantageofdrinkingmilkwasoverstated.

1）.1hereshouldbeapersonalizedguidanceindrinkingmilk.

35.Whichcanbeasuitabletittleforthetext?

A.Newscientificfindings:Milksavesyourday

B.Dailyhide-and-seek:Adiseasethatgoesunnoticed

C.Fromdiscomforttodelight:Properwaysformilkdrinking

D.Theonce-for-allsolution:Replaceyourmilkwithacupoftea

第二节（共5小题:每小题2.5分，满分12.5分）

阅读下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

Yogahasawell-deservedreputationforhelpingimprovebalanceandflexibilityandforinducingcalmand

relaxation.36Whileyoumightnotburnasmanycaloriesbypracticingyogaasyouwouldbyrunningor

doingsomeotherhigh-intensityactivities,yogacanstillraiseyourheartrateandhelpbuildmuscle.Here'smore

abouthowyogaisacompletebodyandmindworkout.

•Reducestressandreducepounds.Yogahelpsdealwithstress.37Yogahasanimpactonthebody's

stressresponseandreducestheproductionofchemicalslinkedtoweightgain,suchascortisol（皮质醇），astress

hormone.

•Movewellandeatwell.38Participantsinvolvedinyogapracticerealizethattheytendtonoticenot

onlytheamountoffoodtheyeat,batalsowhattypeoffoodstheyeatandtheimpactofeatingthosefoods.They

becomeawareoftheeffectofcertainfoodsontheirbodiesduringtheiryogapractice.

•39Doingyogalongtermnotonlycanhelppeopleloseweightbutalsocanstrengthencognitive

skillstohelpkeepitoff.Amultiyearstudyexamines（hepossibilityofyogamaintainingweightloss.Itsfindings

suggest（hatyogamayhelp（oimprovelong-termweightlossoutcomesviaimprovementsindistresstolerance,

self-compassionandamorepositivemood.

Yogaisaveryreasonableformofexercise,butyouhavetochoosetherighttype.A2021studyfoundno

differenceinweightlosstotalsforparticipantspracticingagentle,restorativeyogaversusamorevigoroustypeof

yoga.40Everybodycanbenefitfruniayogapractice.

A.Makeweightlosslast.

B.Learnaboutcognitiveskills.

C.Studiesshowthathighlevelsofcortisolcanleadtoanincreaseinfat.

D.Severalstudieshaveconfinnedthatdoingyogadoesraisecortisollevels.

E.Yogahelpsbreakolddietaryhabitsandrelatedunconsciouspatternsofbehavior.

卜.Actually,thebestyogaisthepracticethatfitsloryou—theoneyouIIcommitto.

G.Butasforweightloss,manypeopleassumeothertypesofexercisewillbenefitmore.

第三部分语言运用（共两节，满分30分）

第一节（共15小题:每小题I分，满分15分）

阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

It'satypicalTuesdayforCristinaZenato.Sheducksbelowthesurfaceofthewater.Thisistheplacewhere

she'strulyatpeace-despitebeing41bydozensofsharks.

Zenatoworksasadivingprofessionalin（heBahamas.Sheusesavarietyof.42inherdailydives.But

theonethatleavespeople.43istoremovehooks（鱼钩）f?omsharks'mouths.

Sharksfollowfishingboats,oftenendingupwithhookscaughtintheirmouths,which44discomfort,

difficultyeatingandinfection.Removingthehookscanbealonganddangerous45.'Tmneverscared,M

Zenatosays.UIwatchandadapttothem,andI'vebuilta46withthemandtheyknowthatI'msafeandthey

can47

Hookremovalisjust48ofZenalo'ssharkconservationefforts.49herknowledge—withthe

public,severalBahamianorganizationsandothers—isanongoingtask.Shehelpspromotesharktourismby50

localdivers."Ihopethatbyallowingpeopletocomeclosetosharkswitha51understandingofthem,they

cansharetheir52experiencewithothers,“Zenatosays.

Shewill53toremovehooksonebyone,becauseeachsharkshehelpsaffectsthefutureofouroceans.

Allspeciesofsharksarcpartofacomplexfoodchain,eachpart54another."Sharksliveandbelonginour

oceans,andshouldn'tbeviewedwithfearandmisunderstanding,but55andkindness,“Zenatosays.

41.A.attackedB.ledC.circledD.found

42.A.skillsB.ideasC.strategiesD.steps

43.A.confusedB.satisfiedC.disappointedD.amazed

44.A.leadstoB.addstoC.turnstoD.slicksto

45.A.aimB.processC.planD.decision

46.A.habitatB.networkC.defenceD.connection

47.A.leaveB.eatC.relaxD.follow

48.A.littleB.partC.noneD.much

49.A.IncreasingB.ExpandingC.SharingD.Gaining

50.A.trainingB.introducingC.contactingD.observing

51.A.uniqueB.newC.moralD.natural

52.A.strangeB.originalC.similarD.positive

53.A.intendB.continueC.needD.start

54.A.separatedfromB.basedonC.changingintoD.dependingon

55.A.loveB.pityC.interestD.Courage

第二节(共10小题:每小题L5分，满分15分)

阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

Therevitalization(复苏)ofabandonedpropertiesinruralChinaisontherise.Each56(locate)in

remoteChinesetowns,thefollowingthreestrikinghotelsarefarfromthehustleofthecity.

WuYuanSkywellsHotelinJiangxiprovince,apreviouslyneglected300-year-oldmansion,was57

(incredible)restoredtoitsformerglory,whilemaintainingitsregionalarchitecturalfeatureTianjing,anarrowand

tallcourtyardpullingsunlightinside,58introducingelementsofmoderncomfort.

Similarly,bytheendof2022.designers59(restore)theBambooCraftVillagenearChengducity,

preservingtheconstructiontraditions(obuildanextremely6()(impress)roof.Seenfromabove,theshape

ofthisbuildingislikeafigure"8"ortheinfinitysign“8”.

TheTreewowTribeinZhejiangprovince61(feature)housesthataresurroundedbyaseaofbamboo

treestoprovidetourists62comfortableprivacy.Notably,thefree-formroofimitatesthefree-flowinglines

ofnature,gracefully63(invite)thegreenlandscapeintotheprivatespace.

MarryingthechannoftraditionalChinesedesignsandthe64(rich)ofmodernliving,thesehotels

willdefinitelyofferyou65unforgettableexperienceandaperfectgetaway.

第四部分写作(共两节，满分40分)

第一节(满分15分)

中国古典诗词是中华民族的文化瑰宝，为鼓励同学们讲好中国故事，你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“我

最喜欢的诗人”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：

1.该人物及其主要贡献简介•；

2.该人物对你的影响。

注意：

L写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Myfavouritepoet

第二节(满分25分)

阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

1(wasabeautifulsunnymorninginearlysummer,when(heworldseemedfullofsunlightandnewgreen

leaves.Iwasinagoodmoodasmyparentshadjustgivenme$300formydailyexpensesduring(heweekthat

theywouldbeawayinMexicotovisitmymother'ssickgrandfather.Iwasextremelyoveijoyed,thinkinghard

aboutthethingsIcoulddowiththemoney.IfIsurvivedonbreadandbutterthewholeweek,Iwouldhavean

unexpectedwindfallof200tobuythelatestKobeBryantbasketballshoes!Whataterrificidea!

Asusual,thephysicaleducationclasswasthrilling.Ifeltmostateaseonthebasketballcourt.Afterplaying

severalfiercegames.IcouldhardlycatchmybreathasIheadedbacktowards(heclassroom,sweatyandexhausted.

WhenIentered,IfoundmyclassmatesgatheredaroundSteven'sdeskashesearchedthroughhisbooksandsome

otherpersonalitemsanxiously.Stevenhadalwaysbeenpopular.Notonlywasheintelligentandwell-mannered,

buthealsocamefromawell-offfamily.Andhesharedeverythinghehadwithus.

Rightaway,IlearnedStevenhadlostthemoneyhewoulddonatetoachildren'swelfareinstitutethat

afternoon.ThenIinformedMissJones,theclassteacher.Sherushedoverimmediatelyandorganizedasearch

aroundtheclassroom.Westoodbyourdesksandemptiedthecontentsofourschoolbagsontothedeskfor

inspection.

Itwasmyturn.AsMissJonestookoutthe300frommywallet,theclassfellintoashock.Ididn'tknowthe

amountlostwasexactly$300untilthen.Ikeptprovingmyinnocence,butinvain.MissJonesconfiscated(没收)

the300anddecidedIwasgettingkickedoutoftheschool.Istayedhomealonethewholeweek,livingonlyon

bread.Ifellwiongcd,angry,andlossofsclf-cslccm.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.按如下格式在答题卜的相应位置作答。

Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.

MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents'advicewhenStevencame.

【赢在高考・黄金8卷】备战2024年高考英语模拟卷（新高考七省专用）

黄金卷05■参考答案

英语-答案及评分标准

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第一部分听力（共两节，满分30分）

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第二部分阅读（共两节，满分50分）

第一节（共15小题；每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）

21—25ABBCA26—30ADDBC31—35BDCDC

第二节（共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12・5分）

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第三部分语言运用（共两节，满分30分）

第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）

41—45CADAB46—50DCBCA51—55BDBDA

第二节（共1。小题；每小题LS分，满分15分）

56.located57.incredibly58.and59.hadrestored60.impressive61.features62.with

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第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节（满分15分）

【参考范文】

Myfavouritepoet

ManycelebratedChinesepoetsoftheTangdynastyhavedisplayedtheirextraordinarytalentsandunique

intelligenceinTangpoetry.Amongallthesepoets,LiBaihasalwaysheldaspecialplaceinmyheart.

Asapoet,LiBai'smajorcontributionliesintheexquisitecraftsmanshipofhispoems,whicheffortlessly

blendvividlandscapeswithdeepphilosophicalmusings.Besides,hisabilitytocapturethebeautyofnatureandthe

humanexperienceresonatesdeeplywithreadersworldwide.Histimelessversesofprofoundimageryandemotion

haveleftalong-lastingmarkonliterature.

Inessence,LiBai'spoetryservesasatimelessreminder,continuingtoinspiregenerationsofreaders,

includingmyself.Hispoemshavetaughtme（oappreciate（hefleetingmomentsofbeauty,exploremyown

creativity,andexpressmyfeelingsthroughwriting.

应用文写作评分标准

一、评分原则

1.本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分°

2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，

最后给分。

3.词数少于60和多于100的，从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。其、美拼写及

词汇用法均可接受。

6.如书写较差，以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。

二、各档次的给分范围和要求

档次描述

笫五档完全完成了试题规定的任务。

（13〜15分）-覆盖所有内容要点。

-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但因尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级

词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。

-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

完全达到了预期的写作目的。

完全完成了试题规定的任务。

-虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。

-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

第四档

-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较更杂语

（10〜12分）

法结构或词汇所致。

-应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

达到了五i期的写作目的。

基本完成了试题规定的任务。

-虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。

第三档-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

（7〜9分）-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。

-应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。

整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

未适当完成试题规定的任务。

-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。

第二档-语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

（4〜6分）-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

-较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。

信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

未完成试题规定的任务。

-明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。

第一档

-语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

（1~3分）

-较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。

-缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。

信息未能传达给读者。

未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求

0分

内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

第二节（满分25分）

【参考范文】

Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.Theypatientlylistenedtomysideofthestory,their

understandingandsupporthelpingtoboostmyhurtfeelingsandself-esteem.Itoldthewholestoryofwhat

happened,includingtheexpensivemisunderstanding,andthereliefofsharingmytoughexperiencewasclearinthe

room.ItwasduringthisemotionalconversationthatIheardaboutSteven'sadmission,whichwouldchangethe

situation.

Miss.Joneshadjustacceptedmyparents'advicewhenStevencame.Hegenuinelylookedsorry,withahintof

regretinhiseyes.Toeveryone'sreliefheconfessedthathehadfoundthelostmoneyinhisbackpack.The

immensereliefandjoyIfeltwerehardtoputintowords,showinghowmisunderstandingsandhastyjudgmentscan

leadtoseriousproblems.Steven,ssincereapologyandourcollectiveunderstandingbroughtuscloserasclassmates^

restoringthewarmthofourfriendship.

读后续写评分原则

一、评分标准

1.本题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。

2.评分时，主要从续写内容、语言表达、篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：

（1）创造内容的质量，续写的完整性及与原文情景的融