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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。MybrotherBrandonandIhadalwayswantedapetdog.ThisChristmas,weopenedallofthepackagesundertheChristmastree.Allthatwasleftwasanenvelope.Weknewthatenvelopesusuallycontainedcards,andifwewereluckytheyalsocontainedgiftcardsorcash.Mydadlookedalmostlikehe'dforgottenabouttheenvelopeashecasuallyhandedittome.Ibrokeitssealanddiscoveredinsidea3x5cardwithaborderofglittersurroundingapoem.Ofcourse,Ididn'trememberthepoembyheart,butitsmysteriousrhymingmessageinstructedustogodownstairs.Wewereexcited.Whatwefounddownstairswasanotherenvelope,containinganothercardwithaborderofglittersurroundingapoem.ThispoemtoldustogotoDad'scar.Therewasjustanotherenvelopecontaininganotherglitterycardinhiscar.ThisonetoldustogotoMom'sofficedowntown.Neitherofuswasoldenoughtodrive.Thismeantwehadtobegourparentstohurryupandgetdressedandfinishdrinkingtheircoffeeandgetgoing.Theytookforever.Eventually,wemadeittoMom'sofficewherewefoundapoemtellingustogosomewhereelse.ThistimeitwastotheTVstationwhereDadworked.Bynow,ourcuriositywasstretchedtothelimitsofourimaginations.Werewemeetingsomeonefamous?WerewegoingtobeonTV?Itabsolutelydidn'tmakesensetokeepapetdogatthestudiobecauseDadhadadeskinanopenareasharedwithotherreporters.Wesoonfoundout,however,thatsuchadeskwasalovelyplacetokeepa3x5cardcompletewithglitterandapoem.Theinstructioninthispoemconfusedusmorethananyother.Ittoldustogotoanunfamiliaraddress.Fortunatelyforus,ourparentsknewhowtogetthere.Thecarstoppedinfrontoftheunknownhouse.Itfeltliketheendofthehunt.Mydadhandedusthefinalenvelope.Thefinalpoemtoldustoknockonthedoorandsay,“MerryChristmas!IsHumphreyhere?”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。第一段:Wedidn'tknowwhowouldanswerthedoor,andwedidn'tknowwhatHumphreywas.第二段:AndthenIsawsomethingcomingtowardusattopspeed:acloudofwhitefur.读后感:这是一个关于圣诞节寻宝游戏的故事。孩子们根据一系列的提示,最终找到了一个名叫Humphrey的宠物狗。以下是对故事的续写构思:伏笔及回应:伏笔:一系列的信封与诗歌引导,目的地不断变换。回应:最后来到陌生房子,完成寻找之旅的最终环节。伏笔:诗歌指令越来越神秘,让人好奇最终目的。回应:原来是寻找Humphrey,且地点在陌生房子。伏笔:提到想要宠物狗,整个寻找过程围绕未知事物展开。回应:Humphrey是一只白色的毛茸茸的宠物狗。伏笔:寻找地点包括多个场所,如家里、办公室、电视台等。回应:最终在陌生房子找到关键线索,解开谜题。伏笔:不断收到信封与诗歌,增加悬念。回应:最后信封中的诗歌给出关键提示,敲门并询问关于Humphrey的事情。续写要点:

第一段:描述敲门时的紧张与期待,以及门打开后的场景和对Humphrey的初步印象猜测。

第二段:详细描写看到Humphrey是一只可爱的狗时的惊喜与兴奋,以及一家人与狗相处的温馨画面。情感线:开始是对未知的好奇与寻找过程中的急切,敲门时紧张,看到Humphrey后转为惊喜与兴奋,最后沉浸在温馨喜悦之中。故事线:兄弟俩按诗歌指示来到陌生房子,敲门询问Humphrey,门开后先是疑惑,随后看到可爱的狗,一家人与狗开启欢乐相处时光。主旨升华句:“Thejourneyofanticipationanddiscoveryisoftenthesweetestpreludetounexpectedjoys.”(期待与发现之旅往往是意外喜悦最甜蜜的前奏。)“Sometimes,themostpreciousgiftsarehiddeninthemysteryoftheunknown,waitingtobeunveiled.”(有时,最珍贵的礼物隐藏在未知的神秘之中,等待被揭开。)“Thepursuitoftheunknowncanleadustothewarmestandmostdelightfulsurpriseslifehastooffer.”(对未知的追寻能引领我们找到生活给予的最温暖、最令人愉快的惊喜。)“Inthemazeofmystery,itisthefinalrevelationthatlightsupourheartswithboundlesshappiness.”(在神秘的迷宫中,最终的揭示用无尽的幸福点亮我们的心。)“Thepathofcuriositymaybewinding,butitalwaysleadstothemostendearingandcherishedmoments.”(好奇之路或许曲折,但它总是通向最可爱、最珍贵的时刻。)写作示范一:Wedidn'tknowwhowouldanswerthedoor,andwedidn'tknowwhatHumphreywas.Ourheartspoundedasweknocked.Thedooropenedslowly,andafriendlyfacegreetedus.Itwasanolderlady.Westammeredout,“MerryChristmas!IsHumphreyhere?”Shesmiledandsteppedaside.Wepeeredintothehouse,lookingforanysignofwhatcouldbeHumphrey.Theroomwaswarmandinviting,buttherewasnoobviousclue.AndthenIsawsomethingcomingtowardusattopspeed:acloudofwhitefur.ItwasabeautifulwhiteSamoyeddog.Histailwaggedfuriouslyasheboundeduptous.Wewereoverjoyed.Humphreylickedourhandsandcircledaroundus.MybrotherandIhuggedhimimmediately.Ourparentswatchedwithbigsmilesontheirfaces.ItwastheperfectChristmasgift.WethankedtheladyandtookHumphreyhome,wherehequicklybecameabelovedmemberofourfamily,fillingourdayswithlaughterandlove.写作示范二:Wedidn'tknowwhowouldanswerthedoor,andwedidn'tknowwhatHumphreywas.Nervously,weknocked.Amanopenedthedoor.Weaskedourquestion,andhechuckled.Heledusintoasmallroom.Therewasabigboxinthecorner.Welookedatitcuriously.WasHumphreyinthere?Themanjustgrinnedandmotionedforustoapproach.AndthenIsawsomethingcomingtowardusattopspeed:acloudofwhitefur.OutoftheboxsprangafluffywhiteMaltesepuppy.Hislittlebodywiggledwithexcitement.Wegaspedindelight.Ipickedhimupgently,andhesnuggledintomyarms.Brandonreachedouttopethim.Ourparentscameinandjoinedthehappyscene.HumphreywasthemostwonderfulChristmassurprise.Werealizedthatthejourneytofindhimhadmadethemomentevenmorespecial.Fromthatdayon,Humphreybroughtsomuchhappinessandwarmthtoourlives.参考答案

Wedidn’tknowwhowouldanswerthedoor,andwedidn’tknowwhatHumphreywas.

Butnow,thesecretwasabouttoberevealed.Withamixofexcitementandcuriosity,weknockedatthedoorandwaitedbreathlesslyforaresponse.Soon,asmall,elderlyladywithawarmsmilegreetedus.SheintroducedherselfasMrs.Jones,ananimallover,andinvitedusin.

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