Unit2ExploringEnglishContinuationwriting课件高中英语

continuationwriting外研2019版高中英语必修第一册Unit2ExploringEnglishlearningobjectivesAfterthisclass,youareableto:1.gainsomeskillsofanalyzingthepassageofcontinuationwriting;2.knowhowtocontinuetowritebasedonthegivenpassageandthetwogivensentences.Analyzethestorywith4Rs014Rs情感情节主旨矛盾3.情感态度决定主题2.主要矛盾决定主线4.主题决定协同1.情节细节决定拐点故事情节

Readforplot情感

Readforemotionalchange冲突

Readforconflict主题

ReadforthemewhenwherewhywhatwhoIhadalwaysdreamedofwinningtheschoolmarathon(马拉松).EversinceIjoinedtherunningteaminfreshmanyear,Ihadtrainedhardtoimprovemyspeed.Iknewitwouldn'tbeeasy.Thereweremanystrongrunnersinmygrade,andsomeofthemhadmoreexperienceandskillsthanme.OneofthemwasLeo.Hewasmyfriend,butalsomybiggestcompetitor.Hewasconfidentthathewouldwinthemarathontoo.Thedayoftheracefinallycame.Iwasnervousbutexcited.Iputonmyrunningshoesandheadedtothestartingline.Isawmycompetitors,someofthemlookingconfident,someofthemlookingworried.Leowasamongthem,smilingandwavingatme.Itriedtorelaxmyselfandpayattentiontomyownrunning.Thecoachgaveussomelastminuteadviceandencouragement.Hetoldustodoourbestandnotgiveup.Thewhistle（哨子）blewandwewereoff.Irushedahead,tryingtogetagoodposition（位置）.Ifeltthewindinmyface.Iheardthecheersofthecrowd（人群）andthefootstepsoftheotherrunners.Ikeptrunning,pushingmyselftodomybest.Afterrunningforawhile,IrealizedthatIwasinthelead.Icouldn'tbelieveit.Ihadneverbeeninthissituationbefore.ButthenIalsofeltasenseoffear.WhatifIcouldn'tkeepitup?Whatifsomeonecaughtupwithme?WhatifIfell?Itriedtoshakeoffthesenegativethoughtsandpayattentiontothefinishline.Butitwasgettingharderandharder.Mylegswereburningandmyheartwaspounding.Analyzethestorywith4RswhowherewhenwhywhatendingbeginningReadforplot

Ihadalwaysdreamedofwinningtheschoolmarathon(马拉松).EversinceIjoinedtherunningteaminfreshmanyear,Ihadtrainedhardtoimprovemyspeed.Iknewitwouldn'tbeeasy.Thereweremanystrongrunnersinmygrade,andsomeofthemhadmoreexperienceandskillsthanme.OneofthemwasLeo.Hewasmyfriend,butalsomybiggestcompetitor.Hewasconfidentthathewouldwinthemarathontoo.

Thedayoftheracefinallycame.Iwasnervousbutexcited.Iputonmyrunningshoesandheadedtothestartingline.Isawmycompetitors,someofthemlookingconfident,someofthemlookingworried.Leowasamongthem,smilingandwavingatme.Itriedtorelaxmyselfandpayattentiontomyownrunning.Thecoachgaveussomelastminuteadviceandencouragement.Hetoldustodoourbestandnotgiveup.Thewhistle（哨子）blewandwewereoff.Irushedahead,tryingtogetagoodposition（位置）.Ifeltthewindinmyface.Iheardthecheersofthecrowd（人群）andthefootstepsoftheotherrunners.Ikeptrunning,pushingmyselftodomybest.

Afterrunningforawhile,IrealizedthatIwasinthelead.Icouldn'tbelieveit.Ihadneverbeeninthissituationbefore.ButthenIalsofeltasenseoffear.WhatifIcouldn'tkeepitup?Whatifsomeonecaughtupwithme?WhatifIfell?Itriedtoshakeoffthesenegativethoughtsandpayattentiontothefinishline.Butitwasgettingharderandharder.Mylegswereburningandmyheartwaspounding.whowhenontheschoolplaygroundwhatwhywhereAnalyzethestorywith4RswhowherewhenwhywhatendingbeginningI,Leo,thecoachthedayoftheraceIwasintheleadafterrunningforawhile,butitwasgettingharderandharderandIevenwantedtogiveup.Ihadsomenegativethoughts,fearingofnotkeepingitupandfallingbehind.ReadforplotontheschoolplaygroundIhadalwaysdreamedofwinningtheschoolmarathon(马拉松).EversinceIjoinedtherunningteaminfreshmanyear,Ihadtrainedhardtoimprovemyspeed.Iknewitwouldn'tbeeasy.Thereweremanystrongrunnersinmygrade,andsomeofthemhadmoreexperienceandskillsthanme.OneofthemwasLeo.Hewasmyfriend,butalsomybiggestcompetitor.Hewasconfidentthathewouldwinthemarathontoo.Thedayoftheracefinallycame.Iwasnervousbutexcited.Iputonmyrunningshoesandheadedtothestartingline.Isawmycompetitors,someofthemlookingconfident,someofthemlookingworried.Leowasamongthem,smilingandwavingatme.Itriedtorelaxmyselfandpayattentiontomyownrunning.Thecoachgaveussomelastminuteadviceandencouragement.Hetoldustodoourbestandnotgiveup.Thewhistle（哨子）blewandwewereoff.Irushedahead,tryingtogetagoodposition（位置）.Ifeltthewindinmyface.Iheardthecheersofthecrowd（人群）andthefootstepsoftheotherrunners.Ikeptrunning,pushingmyselftodomybest.Afterrunningforawhile,IrealizedthatIwasinthelead.Icouldn'tbelieveit.Ihadneverbeeninthissituationbefore.ButthenIalsofeltasenseoffear.WhatifIcouldn'tkeepitup?Whatifsomeonecaughtupwithme?WhatifIfell?Itriedtoshakeoffthesenegativethoughtsandpayattentiontothefinishline.Butitwasgettingharderandharder.Mylegswereburningandmyheartwaspounding.confidentnervousbutexcitedsurprised---worriedtiredAnalyzethestorywith4RsContinuationwriting:Ifeltlikegivingup.ResolutionFallingactionRisingactionBackgroundbeforetheMarathonIputonmyrunningshoesandheadedtothestartingline

howtoread?Leowassmilingandwavingatme.ItriedtorelaxmyselfandpayattentiontohisownrunningReadforforemotionalchangeIwasinthelead,butthenIfeltasenseoffearnervousexcitednervoustired/exhaustedgiveup感情线情景线，两情相悦Climaxsurprised--fearful/worriedItwasgettingharderandharder.MylegswereburningandmyheartwaspoundingconfidentAnalyzethestorywith4RsReadforthethemeTheme:persistence/willNevergiveup/keepupConflict:Iwasintheleadbutthenitwasgettingharderandharderwithsomenegativethoughts.ReadfortheconflictFindoutsomewordsdescribingactionsIhadalwaysdreamedofwinningtheschoolmarathon(马拉松).EversinceIjoinedtherunningteaminfreshmanyear,Ihadtrainedhardtoimprovemyspeed.Iknewitwouldn'tbeeasy.Thereweremanystrongrunnersinmygrade,andsomeofthemhadmoreexperienceandskillsthanme.OneofthemwasLeo.Hewasmyfriend,butalsomybiggestcompetitor.Hewasconfidentthathewouldwinthemarathontoo.Thedayoftheracefinallycame.Iwasnervousbutexcited.Iputonmyrunningshoesandheadedtothestartingline.Isawmycompetitors,someofthemlookingconfident,someofthemlookingworried.Leowasamongthem,smilingandwavingatme.Itriedtorelaxmyselfandpayattentiontomyownrunning.Thecoachgaveussomelastminuteadviceandencouragement.Hetoldustodoourbestandnotgiveup.Thewhistle（哨子）blewandwewereoff.Irushedahead,tryingtogetagoodposition（位置）.Ifeltthewindinmyface.Iheardthecheersofthecrowd（人群）andthefootstepsoftheotherrunners.Ikeptrunning,pushingmyselftodomybest.Afterrunningforawhile,IrealizedthatIwasinthelead.Icouldn'tbelieveit.Ihadneverbeeninthissituationbefore.ButthenIalsofeltasenseoffear.WhatifIcouldn'tkeepitup?Whatifsomeonecaughtupwithme?WhatifIfell?Itriedtoshakeoffthesenegativethoughtsandpayattentiontothefinishline.Butitwasgettingharderandharder.Mylegswereburningandmyheartwaspounding.三大原则3Principles023Ps情感情节冲突3.消极→积极2.冲突→解决1.行动→反应2.Conflict-Solution3.Negative-Positive1.Action-ResponsetipsbeforewritingReadthetwogivensentencesfirstPayattentiontothesubjectsofthetwogivensentencesTrytousemorespecificwordstodescribeactionsandfeelingsDon'tcreatecharactersrandomly,andyourwritingshouldbebasedonthegivenpassageAgoodendingshouldbepositiveandrelatedtothetheme3Principles构思草稿Firstdraft①句（承接上文）②句③句④句⑤句(引领下文）WherewereLeoandothercompetitorswhenIwasabouttogiveup?Whatweremyinnerthoughts?WhatdidIdowhenIfeltlikegivingup?WhatdidLeodoandsay?Ifeltlikegivingup.___________________________________________________________negativeorpositive?WhatwasmyactiontowhatLeodid?一个好结尾1Goodending03431情感情节冲突3.消极→积极2.冲突→解决1.行动→反应2.Conflict-Solution3.Negative-Positive1.Action-ResponseReadforplotReadforemotionalchangeReadforconflictReadforthemeButthenthereasonforrunninginthefirstplacecametomind.___________________________________________________________conflict---solutionnegative---positiveaction---responseButthenthereasonforrunninginthefirstplacecametomind.___________________________________________________________hints：1.Whatwasthereasonforrunningthefirstplace?（承接上文）2.Whatwerethemotivationsthatdrovemetokeepup?Howaboutthosenegativethoughts?（衔接原文）3.Whatwastheresult?(首尾呼应）4.WhatdidIgainfromtherace?（主题升华）assignmentfinishthecontinuationwriting

Ifeltlikegivingup.IlookedbehindmeandsawthatLeowasclosing.HewasrunningsofastwhileIwasrunningmoreandmoreslowly