读后续写社会交往之善意传递课件-高三英语二轮复习

社会交往之善意传递主题续写FreetalkWhatactsdoyouthinkareconsideredtobe“kindness”?BrainstormCanyouthinkofasmanywordsrelatedtokindnessaspossible?kind-heartedmercifulhumane（善良的）accommodating（乐于助人的）warm-heartedaffable（和蔼可亲的）pitiful常见情节偶然事件相识结缘心心相传遭遇困境遗失物品贵人相助失而复得心有所感礼物回馈建立关系情景回顾偶然事件：遭遇困境1.我的车在公路上抛锚了。2.如果她不及时接受治疗，就将失去她年轻的生命。3.当我们把所有杂货搬到车里后，无论我怎么努力，车都无法启动。Mycarbrokedown

onthehighway.Ifshedidn’tgettimelytreatment,shewouldloseheryounglife.Oncewehadloadedallthegroceriesintothecar,itwouldn’tstartnomatterhowhardItried.情景回顾偶然事件：遭遇困境4.他需要给他妈妈打电话，告诉她发生了什么事，但他的手机没电了。Heneededtocallandtellhismotherwhathadhappened,buthiscellphonebatterywasdead.情景回顾偶然事件：遗失物品5.那正是我一年前被偷的雨伞。6.不幸的是，由于自己的粗心，她把身份证弄丢了。7.我打了大约一个小时的电话，试图找到我的戒指。Itwasmyumbrellathatwasstolen

ayearago.

Unfortunately,shehadlostherIDcard

duetohercarelessness.

Ispentanhourorsomakingtelephonecalls,tryingtolocatemyring.情景回顾偶然事件：遗失物品8.我说：“我的钱包在一元店丢了,我一定是把它落在购物车里了。”9.现在他确信，钥匙一定是掉在了店内的某个地方。“Ilost

mypurse

inDollarStore.Imusthaveleftitinthecart,”Isaid.Nowhewassurethekeymusthavebeendropped

somewhereinsidethestore.情景回顾相识结缘：贵人相助10.听到我说的话，他伸向他的口袋，快速地掏出一卷钱，如释重负地说：“你就是我要找的人。11.我正打算给他们一些钱作为回报，结果他们深呼吸，一句话都没说转身就走了。12.我抬起头，想弄清到底是谁在帮我。HearingwhatIsaid,hereachedintohispocket,swiftlypulledouttherollofthebillsandsaidwithrelief,"It'syouthatarethepersonweareseeking."Iwasabouttogivethemsomebillsinreturnwhentheytookadeepbreath,turnedaroundandmadetheirwayquicklywithoututteringaword.Ilookedup,tryingtofigureoutwhoitwasthatwashelpingme.情景回顾相识结缘：贵人相助13.如果没有她的帮助，我不可能穿着高跟鞋走回家。14.当一切都显得无望时，一位老人走过来，给了我一盘鸡肉、饼干和一些水。Withoutherhelp,Iwouldneverhavemadeithomeinmyhighheels.Wheneverythingseemedhopeless,anelderlymancameoverandgavemeaplateofchicken,biscuitsandsomewater.情景回顾相识结缘：失而复得15.小女孩把玩偶抱得更紧，更贴近她的心。16.她不仅找到了我丢失的钱包，还把它还给了我。17.他的手套被一个顾客捡到了，现在正在收银台后面等着他呢。Thelittlegirlheldthedoll

tighterandclosertoherheart.Notonlydidshefindmylostwallet,butshereturnedittome.Hisgloves,foundbyacustomer,werenowwaitingforhimbehindthecashier’sdesk.情景回顾相识结缘：失而复得18.令我后悔的是，一看到丢失的钱，我太激动了，一直表达我的感激之情以至于忘记了及时问他们的名字。Tomyregret,onseeingthelostmoneyIwastoothrilledandkeptexpressingmygratitudetothemwithoutaskingtheirnamesinatimelymanner.情景回顾心心相传：心有所感19.一股暖流涌入心中。20.善良是联结社会的金链。21.所以我们应该感激这个世界，在这里我们需要互相帮助，才能得以生存。

Awaveofwarmthwelledupinmyheart.kindnessisthegoldenchainlinkingsociety.Soweshouldbegratefulto

theworld,whereweneedeachothertogetby.情景回顾心心相传：心有所感22.我对生活又恢复了信心，我工作比以前更加努力，我的生活也变得更轻松了。Withtheregainedconfidenceinlife,Iworkedharderthanbeforeandmylifebecamemucheasier.情景回顾心心相传：礼物回馈23.我紧紧握着这20美元的钞票，忍不住流下了眼泪。24.真替你的女儿感到难过，希望这个新风筝能让她开心起来。25.为了对他的善意表示诚挚的感谢，我给了他一些钱作为礼物，但他拒绝了。Holdingthe$20bill

tightly,Icouldn’tcontrolmytears.

Feelingbadforyourdaughter,Ihopethisnewkite

willmakehersmile.Toexpressmysinceregratitudeforhiskindness,Iofferedhimsomemoneyasagift,butheturneditdown.情景回顾心心相传：建立关系26.后来，他们约好一起出去玩。27.从那时起，我和经常来饭店吃晚饭的双胞胎建立起了亲密的友谊。Later,theymadeanappointment

tohangout

together.

Fromthenon,Idevelopedaclosefriendshipwith

thetwinswhooftencametotherestaurantfordinner.ReadthepassageandgettoknowthedetailsOnemorninginDecember2023,myco-workerAl'semailcaughtmyattention:“Found:$20billonthefloorinthelabattheendofthehallfromthemainbuilding.SeeAlanW.toclaim."Al'semailremindedmeofanincidentthatoccurredonChristmas40yearsago.BeforeheadingoutforChristmasshoppingthatevening,Ihadwithdrawn$400fromthebank,foolishlystuffingeightfiftydollarbillsinmyfronttrouserspocket.OnmywaytoOakbrookShoppingCenter,IstoppedatSportMarttolookatskiingequipmentformyson.ReadthepassageandgettoknowthedetailsReturningtothecar,Idiscoveredthebillsweregone.Thiswas$400in1983-ahugesumofmoney!Feelingterrible,Iturnedmypocketsinsideout,thinkinghowIcouldhavebeensocareless!Iturnedonmycarheadlightsanddesperatelylookedforthebillsinthesnowcoveringtheparkingarea,butfoundnothing.ThiswastheChicagoarea.Itwassaidthatpeopleinneighborhoodswerenotinthehabitofturningincashtheyfound.Atthethoughtofthis,Iwassosad.Withlowexpectations,IreturnedtoSportMartandstartedtellingmyawfultaletothestoremanager.ReadthepassageandgettoknowthedetailsHearingP'dlostcash,heinterrupted,slatingheneededtopage(呼叫)thestorequickly.Someonehadearlierreportedfindingmoney.Thecustomerwouldn'tsayhowmuchorleavethemoneywiththemanager,butlefthisname.Themanagerwasconceredhemayhaveleft.Istoppedbreathingasthepagebroadeast.Minutespassed,andIwasabouttogiveupwanandaboyapproachedthemanager.Themanagerpointedtheminmy12.ren.Hewasinhismid-thirties,withdarkhair,awinterjacket,andasonabout10o12.Hesmiled,“Themanagertellsmeyoulostsomemoney.Canyoudescribetheamountanddenominations(面额)?”ContinuationWritingPara1：ItoldhimI’dlost$400,eightfifties.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2：Theyleftbefore.Icouldaskthemtheirnames.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PlotWhen:onChristmas40yearsagoWhere:inthebank,inthestoreSportMartWho:I,amanandaboyWhat:IlostmoneywithdrawnfromthebankWhy:becauseofmycarelessnessHow:howdidtheplotsandemotionsdeveloped

Howdidtheplotsandemotionsdeveloped？

Theplot：

1.Iwithdrewsomemoneyfromthebankandputthebillsinmyfronttrouserspocket.

2.Ilostmymoney.Idesperatelylookedforthebills,butcannotfindthebills.

3.Amanandaboypickedupmybillsandwasreadytoreturnmybills.

Emotion：anxious，upset，desperate，hopeless

Plot

ItoldhimI‘dlost$400，eightfifties.

1.WhatdidthemandoafterhearingwhatIsaid?

2.HowdidIfeel？

3.WhatdidIdo？

TheyleftbeforeIcouldaskthemtheirname.

1.HowdidIfeel?

2.WhatdidIlearnaboutfromthething?

Example:Para1：ItoldhimI’dlost$400,eightfifties.Hearingmywords,hereachedintohispocket,swiftlypulledouttherollofthebillsandsaid,"Youaretheverypersonweareseeking."HardlyhadItouchedthebillscarryingthefather'sbodytemperaturewhenIfeltmoved.Ifeltheartwarming.Iwasabouttogivethemtwobillsinreturnwhentheyleft.

Para2：Theyleftbefore.Icouldaskthemtheirnames.TheyleftbeforeIcouldaskthemtheirnames.WhenseeingthelostmoneyIwastooexcitedandkeptexpressingmygratitudetothemwithoutaskingtheirnamesinatimelymanner.Despitenotknowingtheirnames,I'llneverforgettheChristmasgiftfromtwototalstrangers.ComparedwiththeprejudiceaboutthepeopleinChicagoarea,myexperienceprovedtheexistingpeople'shonestyandkindness.Moreover,Al'semailhasalsoprovedthispoint.Improvements:Para1：ItoldhimI’dlost$400,eightfifties._________________(what引导宾语从句）,hereachedintohispocket,swiftlypulledouttherollofthebillsandsaid__________(如释重负）,youaretheverypersonweareseeking."HardlyhadItouchedthebillscarryingthefather'sbodytemperaturewhenIfelt______________(非常地）moved.__________________________________.(一股暖流涌入心中.)Iwasabouttogivethemtwobillsinreturnwhenthey_______________________________________________