Unit 5 Into the Wild Developing ideas Writing 课件高一英语外研版（2019）必修第一册

Unit5IntothewildDevelopingideas—writingJiangsuYanchengWetlandNationalNatureReserveisfamousfordifferentkindsofbirds,includingthered-crownedcrane.Whatdoyouknowaboutit?Howaboutitsappearance,habitat,diet?Viewtheshortvideotofindmore.Readtheparagraphandanswerthequestions.1.Whatdoesthered-crownedcranelooklike?2.Wherecanyoufindit?3.Wheredoesitmigrateto?4.Whatdoesiteat?5.Whatsymbolicmeaningdoesthered-crownedcranehaveinChineseculture?Pre-writing1.Whatdoesthered-crownedcranelooklike?2.Wherecanyoufindit?3.Wheredoesitmigrateto?Ithaswhitefeathersexceptforsomeblackonesonitsface,neckandwings.Italsohasbrightredskinonthetopofitshead.ItcanbefoundinChina,Russia,Mongolia,JapanandtheKoreanPeninsula.Itmigratestoeast-centralChinawhentheweathergetscold.4.Whatdoesiteat?5.Whatsymbolicmeaningdoesthered-crownedcranehaveinChineseculture?Iteatsfish,snailsandwaterplants.IthasasymbolicmeaningoflonglifeandgoodluckinChineseculture.Findtheusefulexpressionsintheparagraphandunderstandthemcarefully.它有……高。它的名字来自……它独有的特征是……它的食物包括……它是……的象征。Itis…tall.Itgetsitsnamefrom…Itsuniquefeatureis…Itsfoodincludes…Itisasymbolof…Findtheusefulexpressionsintheparagraphandunderstandthemcarefully.以……而命名身高/体重为…………能活……年……能跑……快以……为食各种各样的……被看作……胃口好它代表了……benamedafter…withaheight/weightof……canlivefor…years…canranataspeedof…feedon…avarietyof…beregardedas…haveagoodappetiteItstandsfor…Readtheparagraphaboutthered-crownedcrane(丹顶鹤)andfillintheblanks.Appearance:thinandlonglegs,snowywhitefeathers,about140cminheight,weighupto32kilograms,...Habitat:different/variousplaces,isfoundinEastAsia,desert,forests,grasslands,warmandhumidbushes…Migration:TheymigratetoChinainwinter.Whenitbecomeswarm,itmigratestoSiberia.Diet/Food:haveagoodappetite,variousgrains,leaves,waterplants,insects,fish…Otherinformation:Itisasymbolof…Itstandsfor…Chooseananimalyouwanttowriteaboutandmakenotes.Animal:____________Appearance_________________________________Habitat_________________________________Migration_________________________________Diet_________________________________Otherinformation_________________________________□

Usefulexpressions·

Itis…tall.·

Itgetsitsnamefrom…·

Itsuniquefeatureis…·

Itsfoodincludes…·Itisasymbolof…While-writing写一篇动物简介Ⅰ.技能指导1.写作指南：

此类文章以说明为主要表达方式，用来介绍动物的类属、生活习性、生存状态、外貌特征等，也可以是某种动物的生存现状或者历史的描述。审题“四确定”确定体裁和格式确定主体时态确定中心人称确定段落科普说明文客观事实一般现在时介绍动物第三人称第一段：外貌特征

第二段：生活习性第三段：象征意义2.常用表达：（1）开头One

of

my

favourite

wild

animals

is...They

live

in...我最喜欢的野生动物之一是……它们生活在……Because

of...,

the

number

of...

is

on

the

decline.由于……，……的数量在下降。We

have

realized

that

the

habitats

of

wild

animals...They

are

in

great

danger.我们已经意识到野生动物的栖息地……它们处于极大的危险之中。A

variety

of

animals

have

been

killed

for

their

meat,

skins

and

fur.为了获得肉、皮和毛，人们杀害了各种各样的动物。（2）主体...are

very

cute

animals,

whose

fur

is...……是非常可爱的动物，它们的毛是……Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

body.它们的尾巴和身子一样长。They

mainly

feed

on...它们主要以……为食。（3）结尾Protecting...can

not

only...，

but

also...保护……不但能……，而且能……As

for

me,

I

have

volunteered

to...Meanwhile,

the

government

should

take

effective

measures

to

protect

endangered

animals.对我来说，我已经志愿做……同时，政府应该采取有效的措施来保护濒危动物。Therefore,

we

should

seek

for

solutions

to

protecting

wild

animals.因此，我们应该寻求保护野生动物的解决方案。根据要求写一篇濒危动物西伯利亚鹤(又名“雪鹤”)的短文。1.外貌特征：140cm高；羽毛几乎雪白；没有羽毛的脸是淡红色的。

2.栖息地:通常在东亚；冬天大多数迁徙到中国，极少数迁徙到伊朗。3.饮食习惯：胃口好，种类多，食鱼、食虫、食水草根茎等。4.象征意义：在中国文化中，代表优雅、纯洁、好运和长寿。思路指引1.文章主要介绍一种动物，可以从外貌(appearance)、体型(tall、small、tiny等)、栖息地(habitat)、是否为迁徙(migration)动物、以什么为主食(food)以及其他信息(otherinformation)(是否濒危,是否为国家保护动物……等方面来介绍。动物资料档案思路指引2.语篇结构：第一段：总体介绍；第二段：介绍某种动物的外貌、栖息地、饮食等；第三段：介绍当前面临的困境，并呼吁对其进行保护。注意使用恰当的过渡词，使行文连!贯,表达流畅。Thegiant...isananimalthatlivesin...Itfeedson...Manytreesarebeingcutdownandmoreandmoreforestsarelost,makinganimalslosetheirhomestolivein.Asforestsarebeingcutdown,itshabitatisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Toprotect...,measuresshouldbetakentosetupsomenaturereserves.Finally,weshouldletpeopleknowtheimportanceofprotectingendangeredanimals.Inaword,wemusttakesomemeasurestoprotectrareanimalsfromextinction.实用表达

TheSiberiancraneisalsoknownasthesnowcrane.Itisabout140cminheight,generallyshorterthanthered-crownedcrane.Itsfeathersarenearlyallsnowywhiteexceptforsomeblackonesthatareonlyvisibleinflight.Itsfeatherlessfaceisreddishincolour.Appearance西伯利亚鹤,又名“雪鹤”。

140厘米高，一般比丹顶鹤矮。

羽毛几乎雪白，除了一些黑色的，只有在飞行中才能看到。

没有羽毛的脸是淡红色的。

西伯利亚鹤通常生活在东亚，其数量被称为东方种群。

它们在冬天迁徙到中国。

其他小得多的人口在冬天迁移到伊朗。TheSiberiancraneisusuallyfoundinEastAsia,whereitsnumbersareknownastheeasternpopulations.TheymigratetoChinainwinterwhileothermuchsmallerpopulationsmigratetoIraninwinter.Habitat&Migration雪鹤胃口好，种类繁多，食鱼、食虫、食水草根茎等。Thesnowcranehasagoodanddiverseappetite,includingfish,insects,therootsandtubersofwaterplantsandsoon.DietOtherinformation在中国文化中，雪鹤是优雅、纯洁、好运和长寿的象征。InChineseculture,thesnowcraneisasymbolofelegance,purity,goodfortuneandlonglife.

TheSiberiancraneisalsoknownasthesnowcrane.Itisabout140cminheight,generallyshorterthanthered-crownedcrane.Itsfeathersarenearlyallsnowywhiteexceptforsomeblackonesthatareonlyvisibleinflight.Itsfeatherlessfaceisreddishincolour.TheSiberiancraneisusuallyfoundinEastAsia,whereitsnumbersareknownastheeasternpopulations.ThesemigratetoChinainwinter.OthermuchsmallerpopulationsmigratetoIraninwinter.Thesnowcranehasagoodanddiverseappetite,includingfish,insects,therootsandtubersofwaterplantsandsoon.InChineseculture,thesnowcraneisasymbolofelegance,purity,goodfortuneandlonglife.AppearanceHabitatMigrationDietOtherinformationⅡ.情景再现

写一篇关于濒危动物——金丝猴（golden

monkey）的短文。要点如下：

1.栖息地：主要在中国；

2.外貌：金黄色，有点灰；尾巴和身体一样长；

3.生活环境：海拔1,500—3,000米的森林；

4.生活习性：群居，吃野果、树叶等；

5.它们的数量在减少，呼吁人们停止猎杀金丝猴。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___【审题谋篇】【词汇储备】1.

____n.软毛fur2.

_____adj.灰色的grey3.

____n.尾巴tail4.

_____v.猎取hunt5.

________以……为食feed

on【句型运用】1.

金丝猴主要生活在中国。___________________________________Golden

monkeys

mainly

live

in

China.2.

金丝猴受到中国政府的保护。_____________________________________________________Golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.3.

它们的毛是金黄色的，略带灰色。________________________________Their

fur

is

golden

and

a

bit

grey.4.

它们的尾巴和身体一样长。___________________________________Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

bodies.5.

雄性金丝猴又大又壮。__________________________________________The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong.6.

雌性的要小得多。________________________________The

female

ones

are

much

smaller.7.

金丝猴生活在海拔1,500—3,000米的森林中。______________________________________________________________________Golden

monkeys

live

in

forests

which

are

1,500-3,000

meters

above

sea

level.8.

它们喜欢群居生活。_______________________________They

like

living

in

family

groups.9.

它们以野果、树叶等为食。____________________________________________They

feed

on

wild

fruits,

tree

leaves

and

so

on.10.

但是现在它们的数目越来越少。________________________________________________But

now

their

number

is

getting

smaller

and

smaller.11.

我们希望人们停止猎杀金丝猴。__________________________________________________We

hope

that

people

will

stop

hunting

golden

monkeys.【句式升级】1.

用现在分词短语作状语合并句1和句2。_________________________________________________________________________________Mainly

living

in

China,

golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.2.

用while合并句5和句6。______________________________________________________________________________The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong

while

the

female

ones

are

much

smaller.3.

用and合并句8和句9。_______________________________________________________________________They

like

living

in

family

groups

and

feed

on

wild

fruits,

tree

leaves

and

so

on.【连句成篇】

将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。The

golden

monkeys

Mainly

living

in

China,

golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.

Their

fur

is

golden

and

a

bit

grey.

Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

bodies.

The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong

while

the

female

ones

are

much

smaller.

Golden

monkeys

live

in

forests

which

are

1,500-3,000

meters

above

sea

level.

They

like

living

in

family

groups

and

feed

on

wild

fruits,

tree

leaves

and

so

on.

But

now

their

number

is

getting

smaller

and

smaller.

We

hope

that

people

will

stop

hunting

golden

monkeys.一

常用表达第一段陈述现象:动物数量减少,濒临灭绝。Thenumberofanimals____________________________(正变得越来越少).____________________________________________(多种动物濒临灭绝)，whichconcernsusgreatly.第二段分析原因,逐一列举。3.Thereasonsforthatare_________(如下).4.Humanactivitiesmainly___________________(造成这一结果).保护动物的书信、倡议书或演讲稿isbecomingsmallerandsmallerAvarietyofanimalsareindangerofbeingextinctasfollowscontributetotheresult5.______________________________________________(一些动物栖息地已经遭到破坏)，whichmostlyresultsfromhumanactivities6.Peopleoftenusechemicalstokilltheplants(that/which)animal________________(以.....为食).7.Somebusinessmenkillanimalsto____________(谋求利润).第三段说明解决方法,政府采取措法,倡议全民行动,保护动物8.It'surgentto________________(采取措施)toprotectanimals.9.We__________________(应当)protectthenaturalenvironmentbypreservingtheforests.aresupposedtoSomehabitatsofanimalshavebeendestroyedfeedonmakeaprofittakemeasures10.It'sbetterto_____________________(过低碳生活)toreduceenvironmentalpollution.11.Lastbutnotleast,everybodyshould_____________________________________(提高保护动物的意识).12.Thegoodnewsisthatthegovernment____________(已采取行动)toprotectendangeredanimals.13.Asmalleffortcan_________________________(有很大的影响/作用).14.It'swhatwedo___________(重要).livealow-carbonliferaisetheawarenesofprotectinganimalshastakenactionmakeabigdifferencethatcounts二、书面表达（一）假如你是李华,准备参加某英文报纸关于"拯救大熊猫"的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文投稿。1.现状:大熊猫濒临灭绝。2.原因:人类活动、气候变暖等。3.措施:自拟(至少两点)。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearEditor,Nowadays,giantpandasare1._________________________(danger,extinct),whichconcernsusgreatly.

Thereasonsforthatare2.__________(follow).Firstly.somehabitatsofgiantpandashavebeendestroyed,whichmostly3.____________(result)humanactivities.Secondly,theclimateis4.______________________________(get,warm).Thegoodnewsisthatthegovernmenthastakenactiontoprotectgiantpandas.