新高考英语｜读后续写真题解读：妈妈的雨衣学案-2025届高三英语作文专项复习读后续写

〖读后续写亲情类〗新高考读后续写分步阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Whenschoolwasover,thedaywasfadinganditstartedtodrizzle(下毛毛雨).Istoodattheschoolgate,withaloadedbackpackonmyshoulders.ItwasFridayagain:aweekendofjoywithunlimitedsleepinghoursanddinnercoursesspeciallymadetomytaste,aweekendathome.Iwavedgoodbyetomyfriendsastheyjumpedintotheirfathers’warmandcomfortablecars.Curiously,thisgaverisetoadisturbingfeelinginme.Itwasnotexactlywhattheycalledjealousy,butsomethinglikedismay(沮丧).IknewallIcouldexpectwasanoldbikeMomwouldridealongon,withthebadly-oiledchaincreaking(嘎作响)againstthewheeltoannounceherarrival.EveryFridaywhenMomcametopickmeupfortheweekend,itwasamomentfullofgreatexpectationandgreatunease.Ialwaysfeltmyfaceburningaswerodeourwayinandoutofthenumerouscarsandsawmyfriends'facesstickingoutofthecarwindows.ItwaslikesteppingintoaballroomwithbeautifullydressedladiesandfindingyourselfinasmellyT-shirt.Totellyouthetruth,Momisquiteaheadacheonceinawhile.Shejustlooksahomelymiddle-agedhousewife.BeingapractitionerofDIY,sheknitsmostofmysweaters,chieflyinoldstyles.Whenevercaughtbysomecuriousclassmatesaskingwhatbrandmysweatersare,I'dforceasmileandreplyinahalfjokingmanner:homemade.Icouldn'trememberwhenIstartedtofindhersuchanembarrassment.Asalittleboy,Ireliedonhersomuch.Shehadbeenworkingathome,cookinginthekitchen,knittingbythelamporridingacrosstowntobuymeabookIbadlyneeded.IthadalwaysbeenmuchfunridingwithMom.Butjustnowthereseemedtobesomethingstandingbetweenus,somethingthatmadehersostrangetomeandmetoher.Today，sheshowedupinaraincoat.________________________________________________________________________________Momtriedtocovermewiththebackoftheraincoatagainasastormsetin.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________原文解读角色__________：(性格)________________________________：(性格)______________________角色关系__________________________情节线Beginning Development Climax高潮 Ending→→→情感线_______________→______________→_______________→_____________主题__________________________伏笔__________________________________________________________________续写构思Paragraph1:Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat细节扩充：Paragraph2:Momtriedtocovermewiththebackoftheraincoatagainasastormsetin.细节扩充：TIP这篇故事的写作风格是内心活动丰富，“暗线不暗”。因此续写两段，一定要紧扣“我”的情感变化和内心活动。写记叙文，对话要写出对话的味道。符合人物身份和交际场合。有些动作描写太过于“泛滥而廉价”，要慎用结尾升华不一定要强行上价值或者醍醐灌醒式的顿悟。尝试通过故事情境中的画面定格来收笔。词句积累：天色慢慢暗下来，天开始下毛毛雨。_________________________________________________________.沉重的背包_________________3.和某人挥手告别____________4.跳进温暖舒适的车里_________________5.这个让我感到很沮丧_________________6.一辆老旧的自行车，破旧的链条嘎吱作响___________________________________________________7.这是一个充满期待和不安的时刻_________________8.令人头疼的事_________________9.一个平凡的家庭主妇_________________10.一个DIY爱好者_________________11.勉强微笑_________________句子翻译：Para11.一看到我，她立马激动地喊我。_________________________________________________________.2.我低下头盯着路面看，头上开始冒汗了。_________________________________________________________.3.当她试着把雨衣盖在我身上时候，我生气地扔到一边。_________________________________________________________.向她投去责备的一瞥，我重重地把书包扔进自行车前面的篮子里。_________________________________________________________.Para2我不情愿地接了过来。_________________________________________________________.风雨越来越大，里面却让人感到温暖和安全。_________________________________________________________.母亲弓着腰拼尽全力地蹬着自行车。_________________________________________________________.我充满了负罪感，眼泪流了出来。_________________________________________________________.我搂着妈妈的腰，轻轻地把脸贴在她的背上。_________________________________________________________.连句成篇（合理添加，美化句子）Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Momtriedtocovermewiththebackofaraincoatagainasastormsetin._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________句子翻译：Para1Onceshesawme,momcalledmynameexcitedly.Idroppedmyheadandfixedmystareonthemiddleoftheroad,sweatformingonmyforehead.Whenshetriedtocovermewiththebackofherraincoat,Isimplythrewitaside.Insilence,shotherablamingglanceandthrewmybackpackheavilyintothefrontbasketofthebike.Para2Reluctantly,Ipulleditover.Withthewindroaringangryandtheraincoatdancing,Ifeltwarmandsecureinside.Istartedtofeelguiltyofmycoldness,tearswearingupinmyeyes.IslippedmyhandsaroundtheMom`swaistandgentlypressedmyfaceagainstherback.[参考范文)Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat.Onceshesawme,momcalledmynameexcitedly.Almosteverybodypresentlookedinherdirection.Idroppedmyheadandfixedmystareonthemiddleoftheroad,sweatformingonmyforehead.Whenshetriedtocovermewiththebackofherraincoat,Isimplythrewitaside.Insilence,