2024届高中英语高考总复习应用文之感谢信

感谢信【试题探究】假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Step1:审题布局人称第一人称(I)为主,第二人称(you)为辅时态一般过去时,一般现在时要点1.点明写作目的,感谢对方的帮助2.具体指出曾经的帮助3.临别祝愿Step2:巧饰亮点要点1:你教我如何学英语。一般表达:YoutaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.句式升级(强调句)是你教我如何学英语。ItwasyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.要点2:你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。一般表达:YouhelpedimprovemyEnglishandgavememoreconfidenceinlearning.句式升级(倒装句)你不但帮助我提高了英语,并且给了我更多学习的自信。NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butalsoyougavememoreconfidenceinlearning.Step3:衔接然成篇DearAlex,I’veheardthatyou’releavingChinasoon,soI’mwritingtoexpressmysincereblessingandthanks.IcanwellremembertherewasatimewhenIhaddifficultyinlearningEnglish.ItwasyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.Underyourpatientguidance,IgraduallymadeprogressandbegantobecomeinterestedinEnglish.NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butalsoyougavememoreconfidenceinlearning.Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.Iwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.Yours,LiHua【句式储备】1.篇头——开篇表意,写信原因和目的①I’mwritingtothankyouforhelpingmespendwonderfuldaysinLondon.我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过快乐的日子。②Iamwritingtoexpress/show/conveymysincerethankstoyouforyourhelp.我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。2.篇中——描述对方对自己的帮助①Without/Butforyourhelp(Ifitwerenotforyourhelp),IwouldnothavemadesomuchprogressinmyEnglish.要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。②Haditnotbeenforyourpatientguidance,Icouldn’thavepreparedsowell.如果没有你耐心的指导,我不可能准备得这么好。3.结尾——表达谢意①Again,nowordsarestrongenoughtoconveyhowgratefulIam.再一次,没有任何言语能表达我的感激之情。②Yourkindnessandhelpwillalwaysberemembered.我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。【拓展储备】假定你是李华,你在你校举办的英语辩论赛上取得了不错的成绩。请给你的留学生朋友Chris写一封感谢信,感谢他对你的帮助,内容包括:1.表达感谢;2.感谢的原因;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearChris,I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforthehelpyouofferedme.Tobehonest,yourassistancehasagreatimpactonme.ItwasyouwhomademyEnglishimprovegreatly.Haditnotbeenforyourpatientguidance,Icouldn’thavepreparedsowell.Withoutyouraid,Iwouldn’thavedonewellintheEnglishdebatecontestheldinourschool.I’llbearyourkindnessinmindforever.Again,I’dliketothankyouforwhatyoudidformeandwishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【要点精练】1．假定你是李华，你被你心仪的大学录取了。请你给你在高中期间的外教MrPotter写一封邮件表达对他的感谢，内容包括：1.对老师的辛勤工作表示感谢；2.感谢老师对自己的教导和帮助；3.表达对老师的祝愿。注意：1.可适当补充信息，以使行文连贯；2.词数为80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李华，前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好。你的网友Oliver时常关心着你。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括：1.目前状况及感谢；2.介绍健身计划。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearOliver,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.分享获奖的喜悦；2.感谢他的帮助；3.邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearPeter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动WorkCreatesaBetterLife得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：1．表示感谢；2．外教的帮助；3．活动的反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假设你是李华，你的英国伦敦的朋友Peter在你暑期在伦敦旅游期间对你热情款待和帮助，写信对他表示感谢，内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.回顾你在伦敦时Peter对你的帮助；3.再次表达感谢，表达回报的愿望；注意：1.词数80到100之间；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPeter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLihua6．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友Robert上周末参加了你校英语社团举办的探访养老院活动，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.回顾活动内容；3.期待后续参与。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRobert,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua7．假设你是高一学生李华。正在英国某国际中学交换学习。上周末你的同学Mark邀请你参加了学校组织的世界图书日（4月23日）（WorldBookandCopyrightDay）。请你给Mark写一封邮件。内容包括：1.感谢邀请；2.分享感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假设你是李华，上周六一外国乘客John发现了你落在地铁上的相机，并根据名牌上的Email联系你，将相机寄回。现你已经收到相机。请你给John写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.事情过程；2.你的感受；3.表达感谢。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学学习，现在你已经被悉尼大学录取，请写一封信向梁教授表示感谢。悉尼大学SydneyUniversity；被录取beadmittedinto/toDearProfessorLiang,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua10．假定你是李华，现在在美国某高中做交换生，你因为受伤在家休养，这期间有不少同班同学来看望你。现在你即将康复，请给他们写一封感谢信，内容包括：1.回忆同学们为你做的事；2.表达你的感谢之情。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案1．DearMrPotter,I’mgladtowritetosharewithyoumyhappinessofbeingadmittedtocollege,whichIhavebeendreamingof.Firstly,I’dliketoexpressmygratitudeforyourexcellentteachingandyourcareaswellasloveforme!It’syouwhocheeredmeup.NeverwillIforgetwhatyousaid—doorsopentotheverymanwithfullconfidenceandinstantaction.Withoutyourhelp,Icouldneverhaveenjoyedsuchajoyfulharvest.AndIreallyappreciateyourinstructions.Iwishmoreandmoreofyourstudentscouldgototheiridealcolleges.Wishyouallthebest!Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你被你心仪的大学录取了。请你给你在高中期间的外教MrPotter写一封邮件表达对他的感谢。【要点分析】1.词汇积累感激：gratitude→thankfulness表达：express→extend高兴的：glad→delighted快乐：happiness→joy2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Withoutyourhelp,Icouldneverhaveenjoyedsuchajoyfulharvest.AndIreallyappreciateyourinstructions.拓展句：Ireallyappreciateyourinstructionsbecausewithoutyourhelp,Icouldneverhaveenjoyedsuchajoyfulharvest.[高分句型1]I’mgladtowritetosharewithyoumyhappinessofbeingadmittedtocollege,whichIhavebeendreamingof.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]NeverwillIforgetwhatyousaid—doorsopentotheverymanwithfullconfidenceandinstantaction.(运用了否定词Never置于句首引起的部分倒装以及what引导的宾语从句)2．DearOliver,Thiswinter,thecoldwasverypopularandIlackedexercise,somyphysicalconditionhasbeenpoor.Itisyourconcernandencouragementthathavecontinuouslystrengthenedmyconfidence.Ifeelwarmtohavefriendslikeyou.Springhasarrived.Ayear’splanliesinspring.Iamplanningtodevelopadetailedfitnessplanaccordingtowhatyousaid.Firstly,participateinmoreoutdooractivitiesandbreathefreshair.Secondly,handletherelationshipbetweenlearningandhealthcorrectly,andemphasizetheroleofphysicalhealthinlearning.Inthefuture,Iwillcontinuetocommunicatewithyouaboutthissituation.Ialsowishyoubetterhealth.Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于“前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好，你的网友Oliver时常关心着你”这一情况，用英语写一封回复邮件。【要点分析】1.词汇积累缺乏：lacked→wasshortof增强，提升：strengthened→enhanced参加：participatein→takepartin强调：emphasize→stress2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thiswinter,thecoldwasverypopularandIlackedexercise,somyphysicalconditionhasbeenpoor.拓展句：Thiswinter,thecoldwasverypopularandIlackedexercise,whichledtomyphysicalconditionpoor.【高分句型1】Itisyourconcernandencouragementthathavecontinuouslystrengthenedmyconfidence.（运用了Itis…that…的强调句式。）【高分句型2】Iamplanningtodevelopadetailedfitnessplanaccordingtowhatyousaid.（运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句。）3．DearPeter,IamthrilledtosharewithyouthatIjustwonthefirstprizeinourschool’sEnglishspeechcompetitionlastweek!Thisaccomplishmentisundoubtedlyaresultofyourinvaluableassistance.Yourinsights,suggestions,andencouragementwerecrucialinhelpingmeprepareforthecompetition.Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.Toexpressmyheartfeltgratitude,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutomyhomeforavisit.Itwouldbeapleasuretohaveyouasmyguestandtothankyouinpersonforallyourhelp.Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生好友Peter写封邮件，告诉他在上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖，同时感谢他的帮助。【要点分析】1.词汇积累激动的：thrilled→excited帮助：assistance→help至关重要的：crucial→vital感谢：appreciate→thank2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Yourinsights,suggestions,andencouragementwerecrucialinhelpingmeprepareforthecompetition.拓展句：Yourinsights,suggestions,andencouragementwerecrucial,whichhelpedmeprepareforthecompetition.【高分句型1】IamthrilledtosharewithyouthatIjustwonthefirstprizeinourschool’sEnglishspeechcompetitionlastweek!（运用了从属连词that引导的宾语从句。）【高分句型2】Toexpressmyheartfeltgratitude,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutomyhomeforavisit.（运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式Toexpress作目的状语。）4．DearPatrick,IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.Itissoniceofyoutohaveofferedusavarietyofpresentationskillsandcreativesuggestionsonourshow.Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsofcooking,gardening,etc.Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.Mostimportantly,thisactivityhelpedstudentsreceivewideadmirationandgaintheirtremendousconfidence.Manythanksforyourtimeandsupport.Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢外教Patrick对学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动的大力支持。【要点分析】1.词汇积累感激：gratitude→appreciation惊人的：amazing→astonishing表达：express→convey各种各样的：avarietyof→various2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.拓展句：Theirperformanceswhichimpressedpeople,definitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.【高分句型1】IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsofcooking,gardening,etc.(运用了itis...that强调句型)5．DearPeter,IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhospitalityandassistanceduringmysummertravelinLondon.FromthemomentIarrived,youwelcomedmewithopenarmsandmademefeelathomeinyourbeautifulcity.Istillrememberhowyoupatientlyshowedmearoundthecity,introducingmetoitshiddengemsandtakingmetoyourfavoritelocalspots.Moreover,yourwillingnesstoaccompanymeonvariousexcursionsmadethetripevenmoreenjoyableandmemorable.Onceagain,thankyoufromthebottomofmyheartforbeingsuchanamazinghostandfriend.IwouldlovetohavetheopportunitytohostyouinmycountrysomedaysothatIcanreturnthefavorandshowyouthesamelevelofhospitalityandgratitudethatyoushowedme.Yours,Lihua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国伦敦的朋友Peter在你暑期在伦敦旅游期间对你热情款待和帮助，请你给他写信对他表示感谢。【要点分析】1.词汇积累诚挚的：sincere→genuine此外：moreover→what’smore各种各样的：various→avarietyof机会：opportunity→chance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhospitalityandassistanceduringmysummertravelinLondon.拓展句：IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhospitalityandassistanceduringmysummertravelinLondon,whicharegreatlypreciousforme.【高分句型1】Istillrememberhowyoupatientlyshowedmearoundthecity,introducingmetoitshiddengemsandtakingmetoyourfavoritelocalspots.（运用了how引导的宾语从句以及现在分词作伴随状语）【高分句型2】IwouldlovetohavetheopportunitytohostyouinmycountrysomedaysothatIcanreturnthefavorandshowyouthesamelevelofhospitalityandgratitudethatyoushowedme.（运用了sothat引导的目的状语从句）6．DearRobert,Knowingthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,Iwouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatrespectingtheelderlyisatraditionalChineseculture.Tocarryforwardourtraditionandalsohelptheelderly,theEnglishcommunitylaunchedanactivityatthenursinghomelastSaturday.Assoonaswegotthereearlyinthemorning,wegavethemourgiftsanddidsomecleaningfortheelderly.Whatagreatday!Weallbenefitedalotfromthisactivityandhopewecanparticipateinmoremeaningfulactivitiesinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生朋友Robert上周末参加了你校英语社团举办的探访养老院活动，要求考生按照要求给他写封邮件。【要点分析】1.词汇积累参与：participatein→takepartin感谢：thanks→gratitude一致地：universally→solidly承认：acknowledge→recognize2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Knowingthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,Iwouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.拓展句：AsIknowthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,Iwouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,Iwouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.（运用了现在分词Knowing作原因状语、that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatrespectingtheelderlyisatraditionalChineseculture.（运用了It作形式主语、that引导的主语从句、动名词respecting作主语）7．DearMark,ThankyouforinvitingmetotheWorldBookandCopyrightDaylastweekend.ItwasanamazingexperienceandIthoroughlyenjoyedspendingtimewithyou.Asweallknow,readingisbeneficialtous.Inthisactivity,readinggoodbooksenrichedourmind,broadenedourhorizonsandgaveuswisdomaswell.Mostimportantly,beingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstoriesgavemegreatpleasure.AndIamlookingforwardtomoreopportunitiestoread

goodbookswithyouinfuture.Bestregards.Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周末同学Mark邀请考生参加了学校组织的世界图书日，要求考生按照要求给Mark写一封邮件表示感谢以及分享感受。【要点分析】1.词汇积累令人大为惊奇的：amazing→surprising有益的：beneficial→helpful大量的：abundant→massive快乐：pleasure→joy2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Asweallknow,readingisbeneficialtous.拓展句：Itisknownthatreadingisbeneficialtous.【高分句型1】Asweallknow,readingisbeneficialtous.（运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Mostimportantly,beingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstoriesgavemegreatpleasure.（运用了动名词短语beingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstories作主语）8．DearJohn,I’mLiHua.I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindassistanceinreturningmylostcamera.LastSaturday,Itookthesubwayandaccidentallyleftmycameraonit.Later,Ireceivedanemailfromyou,informingmethatyouhadfoundmycameraandwouldmailitbacktome.Iwastrulytouchedbyyourthoughtfulnessandhonesty.Ihavealreadyreceivedthecameraandeverythingisingoodcondition.Yourkindnesshassavedmefromtheinconvenienceandfrustrationoflosinganimportantpossession.Onceagain,thankyouforyourhelp.Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的感谢信。要求考生给外国乘客John写封电子邮件，感谢其寄回自己丢失的相机。【要点分析】1.词汇积累真诚的：sincere→genuine意外地：accidentally→byaccident/bychance感动的：touched→moved重要的：important→significant/essential2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Ihavealreadyreceivedthecameraandeverythingisingoodcondition.拓展句：Ihavealreadyreceivedthecamerawhichisingoodcondition.【高分句型1】Later,Ireceivedanemailfromyou,informingmethatyouhadfoundmycameraandwouldmailitbacktome.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Ihavealreadyreceivedthecameraandeverythingisingoodcondition.（运用了and连接的并列句）9．DearProfessorLiang,Iamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyou.Haditnotforyourhelp,Iwouldn'thavebeenadmittedintoSydneyUniversity.LastJune,whenIappliedtobecomeastudentofSydneyUniversity,youreallygavemealotofvaluablehelp.Notonlydidyouwritearecommendationformetotheuniversitybutalsogavemecarefulandpatientinstructionsonhow