专题12 应用文写作-五年(2020-2024)高考英语真题分类汇编(新高考专用)(解析版)

2020-2024年五年高考真题分类汇编PAGEPAGE1专题22应用文写作五年(2020-2024)高考英语真题分类汇编(新高考专用)考点五年考情(2020-2024)考点1书信体2024新课标I&II卷—告知信；2023新课标I&II卷—建议信；2022新课标I&II卷—邀请信；2021新课标I&II卷—投稿信考点2非书信体2024浙江1月卷—短文投稿；2023浙江1月卷—活动报道；2020年新课标卷—活动报道1.最近五年新课标卷应用文写作以书信类为主。2.浙江1月卷应用文写作倾向于非书信体。3.应用文写作渗透“德智体美劳”理念，尤其是体育健身、美育教育、劳动意识。4.写作字数应为80个左右，实际需要120词左右。5.重视材料审题能力、核心素养主题把握能力以及综合运用高级词汇和复杂句式表达能力。考点一书信体1.2024新课标I&II卷—告知信假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：(1)你完成的作品；(2)你的感想。注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmycreativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.Yours,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信,分享在公园上美术课的经历。【详析】1.词汇积累决定：decide→determine整个的：entire→whole提供：offer→provide总之：inaword→inshort2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.【『点石成金』】[高分句型1]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.(that引导的定语从句)[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.(as引导的时间状语从句)2.2023新课标I&II卷—建议信假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；1.说明问题；2.提出建议注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearRyan, I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。【详析】1.词汇积累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建议：suggestion→advice选择：choose→select2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【『点石成金』】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.(运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)3.2022新课标I&II卷—邀请信假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearCaroline,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。【详析】1.词汇积累建立：establish→setup了不起的：amazing→fabulous帮助：aid→assistance许多：plentyof→alotof2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.【『点石成金』】[高分句型1]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.(运用了状语从句的省略)4.2021新课标I&II卷—投稿信你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。YouthandMe____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案1】DearEditor-in-Chief,Congratulationsonthe10thanniversaryofYouth.IhavebeenadevotedreadersinceIsubscribedtothenewspaper.Obsessedwithit,Ireadeachissuefromcovertocover.Itboastsavarietyofcolumns,ofwhichChinesecultureismyfavorite.Theseriesofcontentsnotonlyintroducesabundantculturalknowledgebutalsovaluestheinheritanceofbrilliantcultureandstrengthensourculturalconfidence.AsafanofYouth.IrecommendthatitwillbebetterifitcarriessomearticlesaboutthelifeofforeignteensandIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【答案2】Deareditor,MynameisLiHua,asenior3student.

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gainmorepopularity.Yours,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。【详析】1.词汇积累建立：found→establish沮丧的：depressed→upset此外：besides→what’smore得到：receive→obtain2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.拓展句：Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.【『点石成金』】[高分句型1]Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.(运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)[高分句型2]RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.(运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)考点二：非书信体1.2024浙江1月卷—短文投稿请你写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1.介绍这项运动；2.说明推荐理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：StandUpandExercise,Everybody!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】StandUpandExercise,Everybody!Everybody!Areyoutiredofsittinginclassallday?Howaboutincorporatingsomephysicalactivityintoyourdailyroutine?Onegreatoptionisthe“StandUpandStretch”exercise.Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.It’saquickandeasywaytogetyourbloodflowingandre-energizeyourbodyandmind.Thisexerciseisrecommendedforseveralreasons.First,ithelpstocombatthenegativeeffectsofprolongedsitting,suchasbackpainandstiffness.Second,itcanimproveyourfocusandconcentration,makingiteasiertostayengagedinclass.Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.So,nexttimeyoufeelabitsluggishduringclass,remembertostandupandstretch!It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。【详析】1.词汇积累厌倦：betiredof→befedupwith首先：first→aboveall减轻：combat→relieve提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.拓展句：Thisisasimpleroutinethatinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.【『点石成金』】[高分句型1]Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.(运用了动名词作宾语)[高分句型2]It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.(运用了that引导的定语从句)2.2023浙江1月卷—活动报道上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.收获与感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUSLastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union.Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesofdifferentplants.Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterforanimals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem.Overall,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience.【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。【详析】1.词汇积累参与：participatein→attend开始：begin→start观察，调查：observe→survey震惊：strike→astonish/surprise2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union.拓展句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union,whichbenefitedmealot.【『点石成金』】【高分句型1】Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterforanimals.(运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句)3.2020年新课标卷—活动报道假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员；2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下；3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.【语篇解读】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。【详析】体裁:应用文时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构:总分总要求:1.参加人员2.跑步路线3.活动反响第二步:列提纲(重点词组)attend/witness/drawone’sattention/managetodosth./measure/speakhighlyof/providesth.forsb.第三步:连词成句1.LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.2.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.3.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.4.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.5.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.6.Theactivityishighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…状语从句连词:because/if/though/although…定语从句连词:which/that/when/where…第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)【『点石成金』】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.中which引导非限制性定语从句；Theactivityishighlythoughtof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.中使用了部分倒装。专题22应用文写作五年(2020-2024)高考英语真题分类汇编(新高考专用)考点五年考情(2020-2024)考点1书信体2024新课标I&II卷—告知信；2023新课标I&II卷—建议信；2022新课标I&II卷—邀请信；2021新课标I&II卷—投稿信考点2非书信体2024浙江1月卷—短文投稿；2023浙江1月卷—活动报道；2020年新课标卷—活动报道1.最近五年新课标卷应用文写作以书信类为主。2.浙江1月卷应用文写作倾向于非书信体。3.应用文写作渗透“德智体美劳”理念，尤其是体育健身、美育教育、劳动意识。4.写作字数应为80个左右，实际需要120词左右。5.重视材料审题能力、核心素养主题把握能力以及综合运用高级词汇和复杂句式表达能力。考点一书信体1.2024新课标I&II卷—告知信假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：(1)你完成的作品；(2)你的感想。注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmycreativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.Yours,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信,分享在公园上美术课的经历。【详析】1.词汇积累决定：decide→determine整个的：entire→whole提供：offer→provide总之：inaword→inshort2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.【『点石成金』】[高分句型1]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.(that引导的定语从句)[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.(as引导的时间状语从句)2.2023新课标I&II卷—建议信假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；1.说明问题；2.提出建议注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearRyan, I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。【详析】1.词汇积累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建议：suggestion→advice选择：choose→select2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【『点石成金』】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.(运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)3.2022新课标I&II卷—邀请信假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearCaroline,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。【详析】1.词汇积累建立：establish→setup了不起的：amazing→fabulous帮助：aid→assistance许多：plentyof→alotof2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.【『点石成金』】[高分句型1]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.(运用了状语从句的省略)4.2021新课标I&II卷—投稿信你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。YouthandMe____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案1】DearEditor-in-Chief,Congratulationsonthe10thanniversaryofYouth.IhavebeenadevotedreadersinceIsubscribedtothenewspaper.Obsessedwithit,Ireadeachissuefromcovertocover.Itboastsavarietyofcolumns,ofwhichChinesecultureismyfavorite.Theseriesofcontentsnotonlyintroducesabundantculturalknowledgebutalsovaluestheinheritanceofbrilliantcultureandstrengthensourculturalconfidence.AsafanofYouth.IrecommendthatitwillbebetterifitcarriessomearticlesaboutthelifeofforeignteensandIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【答案2】Deareditor,MynameisLiHua,asenior3student.

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gainmorepopularity.Yours,LiHua【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。【详析】1.词汇积累建立：found→establish沮丧的：depressed→upset此外：besides→what’smore得到：receive→obtain2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.拓展句：Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.【『点石成金』】[高分句型1]Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.(运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)[高分句型2]RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.(运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)考点二：非书信体1.2024浙江1月卷—短文投稿请你写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1.介绍这项运动；2.说明推荐理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：StandUpandExercise,Everybody!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】StandUpandExercise,Everybody!Everybody!Areyoutiredofsittinginclassallday?Howaboutincorporatingsomephysicalactivityintoyourdailyroutine?Onegreatoptionisthe“StandUpandStretch”exercise.Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.It’saquickandeasywaytogetyourbloodflowingandre-energizeyourbodyandmind.Thisexerciseisrecommendedforseveralreasons.First,ithelpstocombatthenegativeeffectsofprolongedsitting,suchasbackpainandstiffness.Second,itcanimproveyourfocusandconcentration,makingiteasiertostayengagedinclass.Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.So,nexttimeyoufeelabitsluggishduringclass,remembertostandupandstretch!It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。【详析】1.词汇积累厌倦：betiredof→befedupwith首先：first→aboveall减轻：combat→relieve提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.拓展句：Thisisasimpleroutinethatinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.【『点石成金』】[高分句型1]Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.(运用了动名词作宾语)[高分句型2]It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.(运用了that引导的定语从句)2.2023浙江1月卷—活动报道上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.收获与感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________