高三上学期10月联考英语读后续写分析讲义

天域读后续写分析阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。SweatdrippedfromCallie'sfaceasshehelpedherbigbrotherBriggsloadhaybales(干草捆)ontotheconveyor(输送机).Shewasn'tstrongenoughtoliftthemherself,butshecouldatleasthelpdragthemintoplace.Themachinechatterednoisilywhileitcarriedthebalesuptothehayloft,whereCallie'sdadstackedthem.AllwasquietwhenCalliewentinsidetofeedthehorses.Butasshefilledthewaterbuckets,shethoughtsheheardafaintmeowfromthehayloft.Sheclimbedthestepstotheloftandlistened.Thesoundseemedtobecomingfrombehindthebales.SherantogetherdadandBriggs.Briggscockedhishead.“It'scomingfromoutside,”hedetermined.“Justabirdinatree.”Callie'sdadagreed.“Howdoyouknowforsure?”Calliesaid.“Iguesswe'vejustgotbetterearsthanyou,”Briggsjoked.ButCalliewasn'tconvinced.Shecheckedthehayloftagainaftersupper.“Areyoustuckinthere,kitty?”shesaid,pressinganeartothebales.Callieracedbacktothehouse.“Ihearditagain,Dad!Willyoupleaselistenoncemore??”“Allright,Cal,”herdadsaid,turningofftheTV.“I'llgocheckwhileyougetreadyforbed.”Afewminuteslater,DadpokedhisheadintoCallie'sroom.“TheonlythingIheardouttherewasascreechowl,”hesaid.“Sostopworrying.”“OK,Dad,”Calliesaid.“Thanksforchecking.”Butshewokeinthenightthinkingaboutwhatshe'dheard.Whatifakittenwastrappedbehindthebales?Shelayonherback,wonderingwhattodo.Finally,shegrabbedaflashlightandcreptintothebarn.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Onceinthebarn,sheshinedtheflashlight'sbeamtowardtheladder.Finally,Calliepickedupthescaredkittenfromthecornerofthehayloft.分析：Shewasn'tstrongenoughtoliftthemherself这边说明女孩是一个手无缚鸡之力的小女孩，后面可以用矛盾修辞法说明她帮助小猫的决心微信公众号ClassroomMissYanshethoughtsheheardafaintmeowfromthehayloft.Sheclimbedthestepstotheloftandlistened.Thesoundseemedtobecomingfrombehindthebales.这里隐约暗示小猫的所在的位置。“Iguesswe'vejustgotbetterearsthanyou,”Briggsjoked.TheonlythingIheardouttherewasascreechowl,”hesaid.她的爸爸和哥哥都说是鸟，而且说她耳朵不好，那女主能不能坚持自己的想法呢。后面可以呼应。微信公众号ClassroomMissYanOnceinthebarn,sheshinedtheflashlight'sbeamtowardtheladder.Asshesteppedontotheoldladder,theshakywoodenladdermadesomecreakingnoise.Somedarkshadowsseemedtobelurkingoutsidethewindow,allofwhichgaveherachilldownherspine.However,thethoughtofapoorkittenstuckinthehaybale,desperateanddying,somehowofferedherextraordinarycourage.“Hello,kitten...”shewhisperedasshemadeittothehayloft.Inthedeadsilenceofthenight,therewasnothingbutherownvoiceechoinginthedarkness.Suddenly,afaintmeowcaughtherattention.Callieheadedtoabaleofhay,scoutingcarefullyforthesourceofthesound.微信公众号ClassroomMissYanFinally,Calliepickedupthescaredkittenfromthecornerofthehayloft.Behindtheabalewasatremblingwhitefurryball,frailandfragile,purringfeeblyinadesperateattempttocaughttheattentionofsomekindsoul.Withouthesitation,Calliewrappedthepoorcreatureinherscarfandtookitbacktothemainhouse.Thenextfewdayswitnessedthegirl’sgentletreatmentandcarenursingthepoorkittenbacktohealth.Callienamedthelittlecat“Bird”,foritisaremindertoholdyourgroundfirmlywhenothersarealltellingyouthatyouarewrong,or“youdon’thavegoodears”.Onthatday,Callienotonlysavedapreciouslife,butalsolearnedapricelesslifelesson.微信公众号ClassroomMissYanbyMissYan他山之石Paragraph1:Onceinthebarn,sheshinedtheflashlight'sbeamtowardtheladder.Thecreakingwoodcutthroughthestillnessasshesteppedon,andastartled"meow"slippedintothenight,sharpandclear."It'snotabird!""Meow,"shegreetedthekitten.Thekittenresponded,itscriesnolongerofthatfear."There!"shespottedthesourceandhurriedtowardthehayloft.Withthecoldmetallictasteoftheflashlightgrippedbetweenherteeth,sheworkedherwaythroughthehaystacks,oneafteranother.Thedustswirledaroundherwitheachpull.Howmanymorewouldshehavetomove?Shedidn'tcare.Fornow,therewassomethinggreater,somethingsofteryetstrongerthatcalledtoher.Atlast,asherfingersbrushedagainstthehay,shefoundatiny,tuftedcreature.微信公众号ClassroomMissYanParagraph2:Finally,Calliepickedupthescaredkittenfromthecornerofthehayloft.Sheheldthekittenclose,itssmallbodytremblingagainstherchest,andforamoment,thenightseemedtoopenuparoundthem.Shewrappeditinhersweaterandwentback.Shedidn'tturntoanybody,instead,sheplacedthekitteninamakeshiftbedasoftblanketshehadfromwhenshewaslittle—allbyherself.Thenextmorning,Callieshowedherfamily,"It'snotabird."Herfatherleanedforward,clearlysurprised."You...foundit?"Calliesimplynodded."You'vegotbetterearsthanwedo."Briggsjoked.Calliesimplysmiled.Thentheywenttothebarn.ForBriggsandherfather,thesoundsalwaysfadedintosilence;butforCallie,theoppressivenoiseoftheconveyorgavewaytoawhimperof"meow".Paragraph1:Onceinthebarn,sheshinedtheflashlight'sbeamtowardtheladder.Illuminatedbeforeherwerewoodenstepsleadinguptothehayloft,apotentialshelterfortheunknownmeow-creature."Meooow..."Itwasakitten!Butwouldshe,aninexperiencedgirl,makeit—climbupandsaveit?Anothermeowechoing,Callie'sfeargavewaytoherconcernforthelittlecreature.Withtheflashlightgrippedbetweenherteeth,Callietightenedherholdontheladder,climbedcautiously,andfinallypulledherselfontothehayloftwitharelievedleap."Areyouhere,kitty?"Calliecalledtenderly,eyesscanningthedifferentpilesofhay.Amongtheshadowsofthehayloft,shediscoveredthetinyballoffur.微信公众号ClassroomMissYanParagraph2:Finally,Calliepickedupthescaredkittenfromthecornerofthehayloft.Outofhungerandcoldness,itwastremblingslightly.Herbrighteyesmetwithitsblueones,wheresherecognizedweaknessandattachment."It'sOKnow."cooedCallie.Shecarefullytookitdowntheladder,navigatedthroughthepaths,andcreptbackherhome.Thesilvermoonlightcastsoftshadowsonthenightstand,witnessingtheblossomingbondbetweenabravegirlandacuredcat."Cal,morWHAT'STHIS?"camethevoiceofsurpriseasthedooropenedtoDad'spoliteknock."Whoa!Lookslikeourgirlhasbetterears."Briggschuckled,lookingintothatpairofblueeyes,likeacalmlakedisturbedonlybyripplesofkindness.Well,perhapstodaythetinybeingcouldaccompanyCallieindraggingthehaybales.参考答案Possibleversion1:Onceinthebarn,sheshinedtheflashlight’sbeamtowardtheladder.Herheartpounding,Callieclimbeduptothehayloft.Shemovedcarefullybetweenthehaybales,listeningintently.Suddenly,sheheardafaintmeowcomingfromafarcorner.Excitedbutcautious,Callieinchedherwaytowardsthesound,movinghaybalesasideonebyone.Asshenearedthesource,themeowinggrewlouderandmoredesperate.Finally,behindthelastbale,shespottedatinyblackandwhitekitten,itseyeswidewithfear.Finally,Calliepickedupthescaredkittenfromthecornerofthehayloft.Shecradleditgentlyinherarms,thelittlekittenshiveringallover.Itsnuggledagainsther,seeminglyrelievedtobefound.Calliecarefullymadeherwaydowntheladderandrushedbacktothehouse.Shewokeherfatherandbrother,proudlyshowingthemthekittenandexplaininghowshehadtrustedherinstincts.Herfamilywasamazedandproudofherpersistence.Shedecidedtonamethekitten“Lucky”andvowedtocareforituntiltheycouldfinditsowneror,ifnecessary,giveitapermanenthomeontheirfarm.Possibleversion2:Onceinthebarn,sheshinedtheflashlight’sbeamtowardtheladder.Sheclimbedit,thencrawledoverthehaybalestowhereshe’dheardthecry.“Areyouinthere?”shecalled.“Meow!”cametheanswer.Callieaimedthelightintoacrackbetweenthebales.Shesawtwolittleeyesglowingupather!“Iseeyou!”Calliecried.Sheflattenedherselfagainstthehayandstuckherarmdown,stretchingitasfarasshecould.Butherarmwastoos