读后续写+二手自行车里的深沉父爱：从失落至悟爱+讲义-浙江省丽水市五校高中发展共同体 高二上学期11月期中考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Tedpressedhisnoseagainstthestorewindowthatstoodbetweenhimandametallic-blue21-speedracer.“Lookatthatbike,Sam!Iwantthatbike!”“GetawayfromtherebeforeMr.Huanmakesyoucleanthedrool(口水)

fromhisstorewindow!”

HisfriendSamlaughedandpulledTedaway.“Well,mybirthday’stomorrow,andI’vebeendroppingalotofhintsathome,liketheadsandpicturesofthebike.I’vejustgottohaveitsoIcangoanywhereIwant!”“Yourdad’soutofwork,”Samsaidquietly,“andIbetthatbike’sawfullyexpensive.Butdon’tbesad,youcanridemybikearoundthelakeifyouwant.”Teddidn’tanswer.“Yeah,”hethought,“butyouonlyturn13once.MomandDadalwayspromisedmesomethingspecialwhenIbecameateenager.”Hejumpedonahydrant

(消防栓)andbalancedamomentbeforejumpingdownagain.“He’llfindajobsoon.”Whenhegothome,hisparentswereinthekitchentalking.Tedhuggedthemandwenttothelivingroom.Floppingdownonthecouch,hedugbetweenthecushionsfortheremote.AsheflippedthroughTVstations,hecaughtsnatches(片段)ofhisparents’conversation.Therewerewordslike“overqualified”and“mortgage”andsomethingaboutunemploymentchecks.Tedfeltupsetandturnedthevolumehigher.Thenextmorning,Ted’sfatherwokehim.“Hey,Son,Momhadtogotoworkearly,soI’llbemakingyourbirthdaybreakfast.Doyouwantanythingspecial?Maybesomethingwithwheels?”Tedwassuddenlywideawake.Hethrewbackthecoversandbounded(蹦着跑)intothekitchen.There,wrappedinnewspaperandtiedwithacrookedbow,wasabicycle-shapedpackage.“Dad!”Tedtorethroughthenewspaper,andthensuddenlystoppedandstared.Therestoodnottheshinyracingbikebutasecondhand10-speed.Thechromehadbeenshinedup,andtheframewasfreshlypainted,butitwasnotnew.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Itwasnotwhathehadhopedfor.______________________________________Suddenly,hewasashamedofhimself.____________________________文章大意：Ted看到商店里一辆心仪的金属蓝色21速赛车，渴望在生日时得到它，尽管他知道父亲失业了。生日当天，父亲送给他一辆二手10速自行车，并非他期待的赛车。伏笔及回应：伏笔：提到Ted父亲失业，暗示家庭经济状况不佳，为后文父亲送二手自行车而非Ted心仪的昂贵赛车做铺垫，续写中Ted意识到父母的困境从而理解这份礼物。伏笔：Sam提醒Ted父亲失业且自行车昂贵，让Ted虽有期待但也有心理准备，续写中Ted因Sam的话而反思自己的行为。续写要点：第一段：描述Ted看到二手自行车时的失落心情，可提及他对自行车外观、性能与心仪赛车差距的感受。第二段：讲述Ted内心的转变，意识到父母的爱与付出，以及自己不应只看重物质。情感线：起初是看到二手自行车的极度失望，随后因回忆起家庭状况和他人的善意而产生愧疚，最后转变为对父母的感激与理解。故事线：Ted生日得到非理想的自行车而失落，回忆家庭经济困境和朋友话语后，理解父母的爱，接受自行车并感恩。主旨升华句：Loveisnotmeasuredbythepriceofagift,butbytheheartandeffortbehindit.（爱不是由礼物的价格衡量，而是由背后的心意与努力决定。）Truegratitudeliesinunderstandingthevalueofwhatwehave,ratherthanlongingforwhatwedon't.（真正的感恩在于理解我们所拥有的价值，而非渴望我们所没有的。）Inthefaceofmaterialdesires,familyloveistheanchorthatholdsusbacktorealityandmakesusseetheessence.（面对物质欲望，家庭之爱是将我们拉回现实并让我们看到本质的锚。）Sometimes,themostpreciouspresentsarewrappedinsimplicityandtiedwiththeribbonofsacrifice.（有时，最珍贵的礼物包裹在质朴之中，系着牺牲的丝带。）Aheartfilledwithappreciationcanturnanordinarygiftintoasymbolofextraordinarylove.（一颗充满感激的心能将一份普通礼物变成非凡爱的象征。）写作示范一：Itwasnotwhathehadhopedfor.Ted'seyesdimmedashesurveyedtheoldbike.Thefadedpaintandsimpledesignwereafarcryfromthesleekracerhehadfantasizedabout.Hefeltalumpinhisthroat,tryinghardnottoshowhisdissatisfaction.Buthisdisappointmentwaspalpable.Suddenly,hewasashamedofhimself.Herememberedhisfather'ssleeplessnightsworryingaboutfinances.Hethoughtofhowhismotherworkedextrahours.AndSam'soffertosharehisbikeflashedthroughhismind.Tedunderstoodthatthisbikewasatestamenttohisparents'loveintoughtimes.Hewalkedovertohisfatherandhuggedhimtightly.“Dad,it'sthebestbirthdaypresentever.Iloveit.”写作示范二：Itwasnotwhathehadhopedfor.Tedstaredblanklyatthesecondhand10-speed,hisdreamsofspeedingaroundontheshinynewracershattered.Thebikeseemedsoordinary,andhecouldn'tmusterasmile.Hewassilent,hismindfilledwiththeimageoftheperfectbikeinthestorewindow.Suddenly,hewasashamedofhimself.Herealizedthathisparentsweredoingtheirbestdespitetheirhardships.Theloveandcaretheyhadputintorefurbishingthisoldbikewerepriceless.HerecalledSam'sselflessfriendship.Ted'sheartsoftened.Helookedathisfatherwithawarmsmile.“Thankyou,Dad.Thisbikemeansmoretomethananyother.I'msolucky.”参考答案Itwasnotwhathehadhopedfor.Ted'sshouldersslumpedashegazedatthesecondhandbike.Theold-fashionedgearsandtheslightlyworntiresmadeitlooksoinferiortotheonehehadbeenlongingfor.Hefeltawaveofsadnesswashoverhim,andhisexcitementfromearliervanishedcompletely.Suddenly,hewasashamedofhimself.Hethoughtabouthisfather'sproudsmilewhenhepresentedthebike,oblivioustoTed'sinitialdisappointment.Herememberedallthetimeshisparentshadsacrificedforhim.Thebikemightnotbetheflashyracer,b