Unit 7 Will people have robots？-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年八年级上册英语单元写作深度指导（人教版）（学生版）

Unit7Willpeoplehaverobots？单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度科技发明了解未来的机器人科技，描述未来的生活本单元的话题是“未来的生活”，主要谈论对未来的看法和打算等。在写作过程中，学生应注意以下几点：1.在描写未来的生活时，要重点描述与现在相比发生的变化以及这些变化给生活带来的影响；2.注意正确使用一般将来时，合理展开想象；能描述未来的生活1.能用“will"描述未来的生活，内容包括居住环境、职业情况、生活水平、出行方式、日常饮食、科技发明等;2.能使用because，however,but,so,sothat等连词拓展句子;3.能正确使用“therewill(not)be”句型对未来的生活进行预测;4.能正确使用more/less/fewer和其他形容词的比较级描述将来的变化;5.写作微技能:善用连词，使文章逻辑清晰,思路流畅。第一段可以提出论点第二段可以进行细节描写，围绕题干要点进行展开和叙述。第三段可以进行适当总结和展望，并结尾。【词汇积累】1.prediction预言;预测2.future未来3.pollution污染 4.environment环境5.impossible不可能的6.playapart/role(in)参与；发挥作用7.falldown跌倒;倒塌8.overandoveragain多次；反复地9.hundredsof许多;大量10.lookfor寻找；寻求11.ingreatdanger处于极大的危险之中12.ontheearth在地球上13.worldpeace世界和平14.liveonaspacestation住在太空站上15.falldown突然倒下；跌倒；倒塌16.stayathomeoncomputers在家电脑上学习17.dothesamejobaspeople和人们做一样的工作18.buildmoretallbuildings建更多的高楼19.flyrocketstothemoon乘火箭飞往月球三、句型积累1.Iwillbeapilotbythen.到那时我将会成为一名飞行员。2.Therewillbearobotinmyhousethathelpsmedohousework.在我家里将会有一个机器人帮我做家务。3.Infiftyyears,therewillbelotsofpeoplelivinginunderwaterhouses.4.Peoplewilllivetobe200yearsold.人们将活到200岁。5.Citieswillbemorecrowdedandpolluted.城市将来加拥挤，污染会更多。6.Wecanuselesswaterandplantmoretrees.我们可以少用水，多种树。7.What’smore,thereisnoneedforchildrentogotoschooleverydayandtheywilllearnathome.8.Yourhousecanturnintoaflyingmachinewhenyouwanttotravel.9.Inthefuture,peoplewilltraveleverywherebyspaceship.10.Therearealreadyrobotsworkinginfactories.已经有机器人在工厂里工作了。11.Theenvironmentwillbeingreatdanger.环境将处于极大的危险中。12.Everyoneshouldplayapartinsavingtheearth.每个人都应该参与拯救地球。◆开头句①Whatwillourearthbelikein50years?②In2035，mylifewillbedifferentfromnow.③Whatdoyouthinkofthelifewillbelikeinthefuture?④I'dliketotalkaboutwhattheworldinthefuturewillbelikewithyou.◆中间句①Robotscancookdeliciousfoodanddoeverythingcarefully.②Therewillalsobemoretreesandthetreeswillevenbeonthebuildings.③What'smore，studentswillhavelessonsonlineeverydayinthefuture.④Therewillbelesspollutionin20years.⑤Peoplewillhaverobotsintheirhomes.◆结尾句①Instead，weneedtoworkhardtomakeourdreamscometrue.②Ibelievemylifein10yearswillbemuchbetterthannow.③Inaword，ourlifewillbebetterandbetter.【谚语积累】1．Youthisourfutureandourhope.青少年是我们的未来，是我们的希望。2．Ifwintercomes，canspringbefarbehind？冬天来了，春天还会远吗？【万能写作模板】说明利弊型介绍一种社会现象并引出论点Nowadays,_____________liketo_____________（社会现象）.Aboutthisdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.介绍一种社会现象并引出论点总结自己的观点阐述缺点并论证阐述优点并论证Ontheonehand,somepeoplethink_____________（优点一）.Moreover_____________（优点二）.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Firstly,_____________（缺点一）.Besides,_____________（缺点二）.总结自己的观点阐述缺点并论证阐述优点并论证Ithink_____________（我的观点）.你们学校将举办英语写作比赛。请你以“MyLifein2035”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文参赛，描述你对未来的憧憬。◆◆审题指导1．文体：说明文；2．时态：以一般将来时为主；3．注意事项：注意段落布局并恰当使用复合句或连接词来增加得分点。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】【组句成篇】MyLifein2035In2035，mylifewillbedifferentfromnow.Peoplewillhaverobotsintheirhomes.Therobotswillhelpustodoalotofhousework.Theycancookdeliciousfoodanddoeverythingcarefully.Theroadwillbecleanandtheairwillbefresh.Therewillalsobemoretreesandthetreeswillevenbeonthebuildings.In2035，IthinkIwillbeanartist.Robotswilldoallthehousework.Sopeoplewillhavemorefreetime.Theywilllookforbeautifulartworksmoreoften，soIwillbetheonewhomakesartworks.However，wecan'tjustkeepdreaming.Instead，weneedtoworkhardtomakeourdreamscometrue.一、词汇积累1.空闲时间________________2.免费的_________________3.活到200岁________________4.在未来__________________________5.关于未来的预言_____________________6.处于极度危险之中_________________7.一百年之后_____________________8.世界和平____________________9.在海里_______________________10.看到蓝天______________________11.更多的污染_____________________12.更少的自由时间__________________13.更少的树_______________________14.我希望如此。______________________15.50年后_______________________16.和人类做同样的工作_____________________17.一起度过时光___________________________18.这条街对面_______________________________19.在公寓里___________________________20.编程人员__________________________21.乘火箭飞往月球__________________22.住在太空站______________________23.乘火车去上学______________________24.人类的仆人______________________25.帮忙做家务_________________________26.制造汽车_____________________________27.反复地______________________28.感到厌烦_____________________29.看起来像人类_____________________30.比如_________________________31.不同意某人_____________________32.几百年_________________________33.倒塌，落下___________________________34.似乎不可能_____________________________35.从某方面来说_____________________________36.作为一名记者_____________________________37.不适合养宠物________________________38.在工作日______________________________39.穿戴整洁______________________________40.业余活动__________________________二、句子积累1.人人都应该贡献自己的一份力量来拯救地球。______________________________________________________2.未来是什么样子？_______________________________________________________3.我认为会有更多的污染。_________________________________________________________4.他们帮助做家务并且做一些像在肮脏或危险的地方干活之类的工作。___________________________________________________________5.现在已经有在工厂里工作的机器人了。______________________________________________________________6.科学家们正在努力使机器人更像人类并且能做与我们一样的事情。______________________________________________________________7.然而，他们承认这可能会花费数百年时间。______________________________________________________________8.如果里面有人的建筑物突然倒塌，这些蛇形机器人就能帮助寻找建筑物下的人。_______________________________________________________________________9.20年后，我想我将成为一名报社记者。__________________________________________________________10.我认为学生们不再需要字典因为机器人会告诉他们单词的含义。_________________________________________________________11.你也应当记住生活中既会有好事也会有坏事。____________________________________________________三、以读促写根据所给汉语或首字母提示，写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。每空限填一词。完成后请找出文中的比较级并思考其在文中的用法。Lifeinthef______1____isdifferentfromnow.Forexample，therewon'tbe___2_____(纸)moneyanymore.PeoplewillshopontheInternet.AndtheInter-netwillplayanimportantp____3_____inourdailylife.Ofcoursethenet______4_____(环境)willnever:be____5_____(危险的).Asforeducation,there____6_____(甚至)won'tbeanyschoolsonthe_____7___(地球).Studentswillhavelessonsathomeoncomputer._____8____(很可能，大概)teacherswillteachthemandgiveouthomeworkontheInternet.ChildrenhandintheirhomeworkandtheycanalsocheckitbythemselvesontheNet.Todaythereare___9_______(已经)robotsworkingindifferent____10_____(工厂)doingsimplejobsalldayandallnight.We____11_______(相信)therewillbemoremachinesinourfuturelife.Robotswilldoalltheboringandtiringhouseworkfor_____12____(人类).Parentswon'tcookorwashclothes.Acookingr___13_____willkbreakfastandaservantrobotwillwakeusupandservebreakfasttous.Thankstorobots,it's____14_____(可能的)thatpeoplewillbemuchfreer.Therewillbemore_____15_____(假期).Familieswillbeabletospendmoretimestayingtogether.___16________(在…期间)theirholidays,peoplewillgosightseeingortravelingaroundtheworldmoreoften.【参考答案】一、词汇积累1.freetime2.befree3.livetobe200yearsold4.inthefuture5.thepredictionaboutthefuture6.beingreatdanger7.in100years8.worldpeace9.inthesea10.seeblueskies11.morepollution12.lessfreetime13.fewertrees14.Ihopeso.15.in50years16.dothesamejobsaspeople17.spendtimetogether18.acrossthestreet19.inanapartment20.computerprogrammer21.flyrocketstothemoon22.liveonaspacestation23.takethetraintoschool24.humanservants25.helpwiththehousework26.buildcars27.overandoveragain28.getbored29.looklikehumans30.forexample31.disagreewithsb32.hundredsofyears33.falldown34.seemimpossible35.atsomepoint36.asareporter37.benogoodforpets38.duringtheweek39.wearsmartclothes40.freetimeactivities二、句子积累1.Everyoneshouldplayapartinsavingtheearth.2.Whatwillthefuturebelike?3.Ithinktherewillbemorepollution.4.Theyhelpwiththehouseworkanddojobslikeworkingindirtyordangerousplaces.5.Todaytherearealreadyrobotsworkinginfactories．6.Scientistsarenowtryingtomakerobotslooklikehumansanddothesamethingsaswedo.7.However,theyagreeitmaytakehundredsofyears.8.Ifbuildingsfalldownwithpeopleinside,thesesnakerobotscanhelplookforpeopleunderthebuildings.9.In20years,IthinkI'llbeanewspaperreporter.10.Ithinkstudentswon'tneeddictionariesbecausearobotwilltellthemthemeaningsofwords.11.Youshouldalsorememberthattherewillbebothgoodandbadthingsinlife.三、以读促写1.future2.paper3.part4.environment5.dangerous6.even7.earth8.Probably9.already10.factories11.believe12.humans13.robot14.possible15.holidays16.During（一）你们班下周将召开一次班会，主题是“2050年的生活”。请根据以下内容提示写一份发言稿。提示：①人口迅速增长；②工作时间缩短，娱乐和旅游的时间将更加充裕；③机器人做大量工作，很多人面临失业。要求：80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)，短文要包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。Lifein2050Lifein2050willbedifferentfromnow,becausechanges_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。【写作步骤】第一步，补充所给内容，引出变化；第二步，具体阐述2050年生活，包括提示的三个要点。【满分作文】Lifein2050Lifein2050willbedifferentfromnow,becausechangeswilltakeplace.Butwhatwillthechangesbe?Thepopulationisgrowingfast.Therewillbemoreandmorepeopleintheworldandmostofthemwilllivelongerthannow.Peoplewillworkfewerhoursthantheydonow,andtheywillhavemorefreetimeforsports,watchingTVandtraveling.Manypeoplewillgotoothercountriesforholidays.Workinthefuturewillbedifferent,too.Lotsofdangerousandhardworkwillbedonebyrobots.Becauseofthis,manypeoplewillnothaveenoughworktodo.Thiswillbeaproblem.【亮点词汇】①mostof大多数②lotsof大量的③becauseof因为【高分句型】①Therewillbemoreandmorepeopleintheworldandmostofthemwilllivelongerthannow.（比较级句型）②Lotsofdangerousandhardworkwillbedonebyrobots.（被动语态）（二）请以“MyLifein20Years”为题，用英语写一篇短文。写作要求：1.语言流畅，层次清晰。书写规范，卷面整洁。2.词数80-100词。3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。【写作步骤】第一步，引出本文主题；第二步，介绍20年之后的生活；第三步，总结概括。【满分作文】MyLifein20YearsI’malwaysworkinghardforabrightfuture.Iimaginewhatmylifein20yearswillbelike.In20years,Iwillplayanimportantroleinmyfamily.Iwilltakegoodcareofmyparents.Inmyfreetime,Iwillgettogetherwithmyfriendstoenjoylife.What’smore,Iwillhaveajobandtakeonnewchallenges.Iwillbeadoctorandhelppatients.Lastbutnotleast,maybeIwillgetarobottohelpmeinmydailylife.Inaword,Ihopemylifein20yearswillbebetterandbetter.【亮点词汇】①playanimportantrolein在……中起重要作用②takegoodcareof好好照顾③inmyfreetime在我的闲暇时间【高分句型】Iimaginewhatmylifein20yearswillbelike.（what引导宾语从句）（三）请以“MyLifeinTenYears”为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文。提示短文须包含下列要点：1.Whatdoyouwanttobeintenyears?Andwhy?2.Wherewillyouliveintenyears?Andwhy?3.Saysomethingaboutyourfamilyoryourfreetimeactivitiesintenyears.4.Whatshouldyoudotoachieveyourdreams?注意：短文中，不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。MyLifeinTenYears________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于“未来的职业及原因、居住地及原因、十年后你的家庭或业余时间的活动和怎么去实现目标”的要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。借用“MyLifeinTenYears”这个题目直接来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体描述写作内容。从“未来的职业及原因、居住地及原因、十年后你的家庭或业余时间的活动和怎么去实现目标”几个方面重点介绍十年后我的生活；第三步，书写结语。表达“十年后我的生活会越来越好”的愿望。【满分作文】MyLifeinTenYearsIntenyears,IthinkI’llbeareporter.IwillliveinanapartmentwithmysisterbecauseIdon’tlikelivingalone.AndIcanplaywithherinmyapartment.Sointenyears,Iwillbeagoodreporter.IwillmeetalotofinterestingandfamouspeopleandIwillgotoanotherplaceonbusiness.Intenyears,Iwillhavemanydifferentpets.MaybeIwillkeepapetturtle.IthinkIwillgoshoppingwithmysisteraslongasIhavetime.AndIwillgotoLondononmyvacation.So,I’llworkhardtoachievemydream.I’msuremylifeintenyearswillbebetterandbetter!.【亮点词汇】①intenyears十年后②playwith和……玩③aslongas只要④betterandbetter越来越好【高分句型】①Intenyears,IthinkI’llbeareporter.（intenyears十年后，用于将来时句型；Ithink+宾语从句）②IthinkIwillgoshoppingwithmysisteraslongasIhavetime.（复合句：as……as引导条件状语从句句型）（四）科技改变未来，学校正在开展主题为《畅想未来》的征文活动。请根据以下图示写一篇英语短文，进行投稿，谈谈你对未来生活的畅想。注意：1.词数80-120个左右（文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,lifeinthefuturewillbequitedifferent.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】本文采用一般将来时，人称以第三人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段叙述环境、科技和太空方面未来的情况；最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时做到无语法和标点错误。【满分作文】Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,lifeinthefuturewillbequitedifferent.Ourenvironmentwillbemuchbetter.Therewillbenomorepollutionbecausemoregreenenergieswillbedeveloped.Newkindsofplantsandflowerswillbegrowntomaketheearthmorebeautiful.Besides,higherandnewertechnologywillcomealongtomakeourlifemorecomfortable.Robotswillbecommonlyusedinallfields.Withmovinghouses,peopledon’thavetostayinhotelsevenwhentravelling.Theexplorationofspacewillbeanotherbigprogress.Ourdreamtotravelinspacefreelyandlearnmoreaboutotherplanetswillcometrue.Moreexcitingly,makingfriendswithalienswillalsobepossible.Lifeinthefuturewillbefantastic.HowIwishitwouldcomesoon!（五）随着科技的发展，未来人们的生活将会发生很大的变化。ShenzhenDaily正开展以“OurFutureLife”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包含以下要点：1.交通不再拥挤，因为人们拥有可以飞的摩托车；2.越来越多的人去月球度假；3.越来越多的机器人为我们服务，例如：①……；②……；4.为了未来的美好生活，你会做些什么准备。（至少2点）要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。提示词：拥挤的heavy；摩托车motorbikeOurFutureLifeWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】本文应该用第一人称来描述未来生活；时态采用一般将来时；要包含所有要点，并适当发挥，写出自己的准备内容，同时各要点间要保证条理清晰。【满分作文】OurFutureLifeWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.People’sliveswillchangealotinthefuture.Inthefuture,therewillbeintheworld.Sotheremaynotbeenoughfoodandwaterforsomanypeople.Butthetrafficwillnotbeheavyanymorebecausepeoplecangobyflyingmotorbikes.AndmoreandmorepeoplewillgoonavacationtotheMoonbyspaceship.Houses,hospitals,schoolswillbebuiltonotherplanets,too.Peoplewilldolessworkinthefuture,too.Robotswilldothedangerousandhardworkforpeople.Tohaveabetterinthefuture,I’mgoingtostudyhardertohavemoreknowledge.Atthesametime,Ialsowanttohavemoretimeforsportstohaveahealthierbody.Ibelieveourlifewillbebetterandbetter.1.（2023·江苏徐州·中考真题）假定你是李华。你班交换留学生Simon即将返校，他对“校园科技周”非常感兴趣，他写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信。注意：1.词数90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.邮件需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；3.邮件中不得泄露个人信息；4.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。HiSimon,I’mveryhappytotellyouaboutourSchoolTechnologyWeek.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’msureyouwillenjoytheTechnologyWeek.LiHua【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，根据开头，介绍科技周开始的时间；第二步，根据Simon的问题提示，介绍科技周的活动；第三步，介绍Simon感兴趣的机器人活动。【满分作文】HiSimon,I’mveryhappytotellyouaboutourSchoolTechnologyWeek.ItwillbeheldintheNo.2buildingintwoweeks.TherearemanydifferentkindsofactivitiesintheWeek.First,youcanwatchsciencefictionfilmslikeTheWanderingEarth.Second,somestudentswilltellstoriesaboutscientistslikeDengJiaxian.What’smore,ourschoolwillsharethelatestnewsabouttechnologyandshowcreativeideasaboutrobots.Youarecrazyaboutrobots,right?Great,therearesomesmartrobotshowsyoucantakepartinhere.Thenyoucanseeandexperiencehowexcellenttheyare.I’msureyouwillenjoytheTechnologyWeek.LiHua【亮点词汇】①differentkindsof不同种类的②takepartin参加【高分句型】The