Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation？-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）（教师版）

Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation？单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度度假＂三步五要素法＂写游记本单元主要话题是节日与假期，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与节假日里的旅游相结合。命题内容以游览为主，根据提示记叙在节假日里旅游的大致情况。写作时应注意游记的内容、格式以及事态的运用。内容一般从以下几方面着手：1.Wheredidyougo?2.Howwastheweather?3.Whatdidyoudo?4.Howwasthefood?5.Howwasthepeople?6.Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?写作步骤◆步骤一：在第一行写明日期（年月日与星期）和天气等信息。◆步骤二：正文用一般过去时态描述当天发生的事情。◆步骤三：在日记的最后描述自己的感受和体会。游记三个段落内容要点：I.何时与何人到何地；II.交通方式；天气；活动（美食、观光、拍照、购物...）；III.感受。【词汇积累】1diary(n.日记;记事簿)-(复数)diaries2bored(adj.厌倦的,烦闷的)-boring(adj.没趣的,令人厌倦的)3enjoy(v.享受······的乐趣;喜爱)-enjoyable(adj.有乐趣的;令人愉快的)-enjoyment(n.乐趣;乐事)4activity(n.活动)-(复数)activities5decide(v.决定;选定)-decision(n.决定;抉择)6build(v.建筑;建造)-building(n.建筑物;房子)-builder(n.建筑者)7trade(n.贸易v.做买卖;从事贸易)-trader(n.商人)8wonder(v.想知道;琢磨n.惊叹;惊奇)-wonderful(adj.精彩的;绝妙的)-wonderfully(adv.精彩地)9different(adj.不同的)-difference(n.差别;差异)10.like(v.喜欢n.喜好;爱好)-(反义词)dislike［v.&n.不喜爱(的事物);厌恶(的事物)］11below(prep.&adv.在······下面;到······下面)-(反义词)above[prep.&adv.在(·····)上面］12hunger(n.饥饿;渴望)-hungry(adj.饥饿的;渴望得到)【句式积累】总体概括ThebestplacethatIhaveevervisitedisBeijing替换地名.IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentslastsummer.我去过的最好的地方是北京。去年夏天我和父母去了北京。Itisbettertotraveltenthousandmilesthantoreadtenthousandbooks.Today,I’dliketosharemysummerholidaywithyou.

读万卷书，不如行万里路。今天，我想和大家分享我的暑假。ItwassunnyonMay1st.Iwentonatripwithmyparents替换同行人.5月1日，天气晴朗。我和父母去旅行了。OnthefirstdayofNationalDay,IwentforatriptoShanghaiwithmyparents.国庆节的第一天，我和父母去上海旅游。MyfamilyandIwenttoXi’anduringtheMayDayholiday.Everythingwasgreat.我和家人在五一假期去了西安。一切都很棒。IamsoexcitedtotellyousomethinginterestingIhaveexperiencedinsomeplace替换地名.我很高兴告诉你我在某地有趣的经历。Ihadagoodtimewithmyfamilylastsummerholiday.去年暑假我和家人玩得很开心。旅游活动Wewenttherebytrain/plane...Westayedthereforfivedays.Wevisitedsomeplacesofinterest.我们是坐火车/飞机去的...我们在那里住了五天。我们参观了一些名胜古迹。Theflowersonthemountainwereverybeautiful.Itwasnotcoldorhotthosedays.Ilikedtheweatherverymuch.山上的花很漂亮。那几天不冷不热。我非常喜欢这里的天气。Therewasalwayssunshineandsoftwind,whichmadeussocomfortable.总是有阳光和柔和的风，这使我们如此舒适。4.Itwasanexcellentvacation.Iwenttherebytrainandmytraintripwasrelaxing.Theweatherwassunnyandwarm.这是一个极好的假期。我是坐火车去的，我的火车之旅很轻松。天气晴朗温暖。5.Onthefirstday,...Onthesecondday,...Onthethirdday,...6.Wesawbeautifulgreenhills,cleanwaterandsoon.我们看到了美丽的青山绿水等等。7.ThefoodinChangchunisverydelicious.Peoplearealsoveryfriendly/kindandwarm.长春的食物很好吃。人们非常友好和热情。8.ChangchunliesinthenorthofChinaanditisareallybeautifulplace.长春位于中国的北部，它是一个非常美丽的地方。9.WewentbacktoChangchunbyplane.Itwasfasterandmorecomfortablethanbytrain.我们坐飞机回长春。比坐火车更快，更舒适。10.Weenjoyedthetripandatelotsoflocalsnacks.Whatawonderfultripwehad!我们很喜欢这次旅行，吃了很多当地的小吃。我们的旅行真是太棒了！11.IclimbedtheWestHill.Itwasalittledifficulttoclimb,butIwasveryhappy.我爬上了西山。爬起来有点难度，不过还是很开心。12.Wetookmanyphotosthere.Welivedinafive-starhotelatnight.我们在那里拍了很多照片。晚上我们住在五星级酒店。13.Myparentstookmetotasteallkindsofdeliciousseafood.

父母带我去品尝了各种美味的海鲜。旅游感受1.Myvacationtherewasreallyexciting.Xi’anisreallyanancientcitywithalonghistoryandIplantovisitthereagain!

我在那里的假期真的很令人兴奋。西安真的是一座历史悠久的古城，我打算再去一次！2.I’minterestedinthetraditionsindifferentplaces.I’mlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.我对不同地方的传统很感兴趣。我期待着再次去那里。3.Weweretiredbutreallyhappy.Wehadagreattime.

我们很累，但真的很开心。我们度过了一段美好时光。4.WehadawonderfultimeinChangchun.Ilookforwardtogoingthereagain./Ihopetovisitthereagainsomeday.

我们在长春度过了一段美好的时光。我期待着再去那里。/我希望有一天再去那儿。【谚语积累】1.Readtenthousandbooksandtraveltenthousandmiles.读万卷书，行万里路。2.Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行，始于足下。3.Abosomfriendafarbringsadistantlandnear.海内存知己，天涯若比邻。【万能写作模板】模板叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构，模板如下：介绍景观介绍景观介绍旅行经历总结旅行感受…isoneofthemostbeautifulsceneryspots.Ivolunteeredaguidetointroduce…ItwasabusyandtireddaybutIwasveryhappy.写好叙事类文章的开头的四种方式1.

＂开门见山＂式开头

一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到＂开门见山＂，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如＂A

Trip

to

Huangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头可以是：Lastmonth,myfamilywenttoHuangshanbytrain.Ittookustenhourstogetthere.Whatalongandtiringjourney!Weweretiredbutthebeautifulsceneryexcitedus.2.回忆性开头在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如neverforget(永远无法忘记)、remember(记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad(难过的)...如＂ATriptoHuangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头还以这样写：IwillneverforgetmyfirsttriptoHuangshan.或ItwasreallyanunforgettableexperienceIhad.3.疑问性开头在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如＂PlantingTrees(种树)＂的开头可以是：Haveyoueverplantedtrees?Don’tyouthinkplantingtreesis...再如＂TravelingAbroad(出国之旅)＂的开头可以是：Ifyouhaveanopportunitytotravelabroad,whynotconsiderSingapore?4.倒叙式开头在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如＂CatchingThieves(捉贼)＂的开头可以这样写：Ilayinbedinthehospital.Ismiledatmyfriendseventhoughmylegshurt.Doyouwanttoknowwhathappenedtome?Letmetellyou.It’sa...story.写一篇游记。写作提示：时间、地点、人物、出行方式、游览顺序、感受。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】时间、地点、人物LastweekIwithmyparentswenttoBeijingforaholiday.出行方式、游览顺序ItismyfirsttimetovisitBeijing.ThecityisthedreamcityforalltheChinese.IttookusaboutfivehoursfromChangchuntoBeijingbytrain.Theweatherwassunnyandwarmduringmyvacation.Onthefirstday,myfamilyvisitedtheGreatWallandTian’anmenSquare.IwassoexcitedwhenIclimbedTheGreatWall.ThenextdaywewenttothePalaceMuseumandWangfujing.Iboughtsomegiftsformyfriends.HowhappyIam!WehadBeijingDuckonthelastday.Itwasreallydelicious.感受WereallyenjoyedthistripandIwilltakealongtourtoBeijingnexttime.一、写出下列单词1._______________adj.厌倦的；烦闷的2._______________pron.某人3._______________n.日记；记事簿4._______________adj.有乐趣的；令人愉快的5._______________n.活动6._______________v.决定；选定7._______________v.&n.尝试；设法；努力8._______________n.鸟9._______________n.自行车；脚踏车10._______________n.建筑物；房子11._______________n.商人12._______________v.想知道；琢磨13._______________n.差别；差异14._______________n.顶部；表面15._______________v.等待；等候16._______________n.伞；雨伞17._______________adj.湿的；潮湿的；下雨的18._______________prep.&adv.在……下面；到……下面19._______________adj.&adv.足够的（地）；充足的（地）；充分的（地）20._______________adj.饥饿的答案：bored2.someone3.diary 4.enjoyable5.activity6.decide7.try 8.bird9.bicycle 10.building11.trader 12.wonder13.difference14.top15.wait16.Umbrella17.wet 18.below19.enough 20.hungry重点短语1.___________________________去度假2.___________________________待在家3.___________________________参加夏令营4.___________________________相当多；不少5.___________________________当然6.___________________________大多数时间7.___________________________玩得愉快8.___________________________记日记9.___________________________给……的感觉；感受到10.___________________________因为11.___________________________在过去12.___________________________乘火车13.___________________________到达14.____________________________决定做某事 15.____________________________做一个决定 16.___________________________尽力做某事 17.________________________等待 18.________________________足够的钱 19._________________________另外两个小时 20.___________________________与…相同 答案：1.goonvacation 2.stayathome 3.gotosummercamp 4.quiteafew5.ofcourse6.mostofthetime7.haveagoodtime8.keepadiary9.feellike 10.becauseof11.inthepast12.takethetrain 13.getto14.decidetodosth.15.makeadecision16.trytodosth17waitfor18.enoughmoney19.anothertwohours 20.thesameas 三、重点句子1.很久不见了。_______________________________2.在那里我们拍了大量的照片。_______________________________3.我给父母买了一些东西，但是什么也没给自己买。_______________________________4.我真的没有看到我喜欢的东西。_______________________________5._______________________________似乎仍然没有人觉得无聊。6._______________________________天气晴朗炎热，因此我们决定到我们旅馆附近的沙滩去。7._______________________________我感觉自己就像是一只鸟儿。8._______________________________我想知道过去这里的生活是什么样子的。9._______________________________一天的差异是多么大啊！10._______________________________我的双腿很累，我想停下来。答案：1.Longtimenosee.2.Wetookquiteafewphotosthere.3.Iboughtsomethingformyparents,butnothingformyself.4.Ididn’treallyseeanythingIliked.5.Stillnooneseemedtobebored.6.Itwassunnyandhot,sowedecidedtogotothebeachnearourhotel.7.IfeltlikeIwasabird.8.Iwonderwhatlifewaslikehereinthepast.9.Whatadifferenceadaymakes!10.MylegsweresotiredthatIwantedtostop.四、连句成文上个月2号(8月2号)，周五，天气晴朗，你和父母去北京观光旅游，游览了北京天安门广场、紫禁城和长城等几个地方，玩得非常开心。要求：1.写一篇英语日记，注意格式；2.词数不少于70。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________材料分析：日记就是把自己当天经历的有意义的事情以及见闻感受记录下来，通常用第一人称来写，且时态为一般过去时。注意日记的格式：正文上方自左起写上星期几、日期和天气情况，正文另起一行。写作时，要注意必须按照时间顺序来描述当天的活动，这样会显得层次分明、有条理性。在写作过程中，不要忘记写出自己的真实感受，灵活运用各种所学句型，使文章显得更加生动。佳句欣赏与模仿：1.ItismyfirsttimetovisittheGreatWall.【one'sfirsttimetodosth.意为“某人第一次做某事”】这是他第一次赢得了这个比赛。________________________________________________________________________2.Ialwaysgotoschoolwithmysisteronweekdays.【goto...意为“去……地方”，with介词表示“伴随，跟着”】上个月，我和我的家人去了贵州度假。________________________________________________________________________3.Intheevening,wewenttothebeachandenjoyedourselvesthere.【and连接并列的谓语】下午，我们去爬山了，在那里我们欣赏到一些特别的东西。________________________________________________________________________4.ThebookissointerestingthatIdecidetoreaditagain.【so...that...意为“如此……以至于……”】他是如此好的一个老师，以至于我们都喜欢他。________________________________________________________________________答案：1.Thisishisfirsttimetowinthegame.2.Lastmonth,IwenttoGuizhouonvacationwithmyfamily.3.Intheafternoon,wewenttothemountainandenjoyedsomethingspecialthere.4.Heissogoodateacherthatwealllikehim.参考范文Friday,August2nd,SunnyTheweatherwassunnyandwarm.①IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentsonvacation.Itwasmyfirsttimetogothere，soeverythingwasreallyinteresting.②Wevisitedthreeplacesandtookquiteafewphotos.FirstwewenttoTian'anmenSquare.Itwasbeautiful.ThenwewenttothePalaceMuseum.③Wesawmanyoldthingsthere.Itwascool.Intheafternoon，wewenttotheGreatWallandsawmanybeautifulthingsfromthetop.④Itwassogreatandenjoyablethatwealldecidetovisititagain.⑤[亮点分析]①goto...意为“去……地方”，with介词表示“伴随，跟着”。②one'sfirsttimetodosth.意为“某人第一次做某事”，so在此连接并列句，表示因果关系。③用first，then等词来叙述事情发生的经过，是写日记的常用模式。④and连接并列的谓语，使句子更饱满。⑤so...that...意为“如此……以至于……”，引导结果状语从句。（一）1．假如你是LiMing，你第一次收到美国笔友Paul的来信，信中他提了一些问题想要了解你。请你仔细阅读下面的邮件，针对邮件中的问题进行回复。要求：语言通畅得体，词数80左右。DearLiMing,It’ssoexcitingtobeyourpenpal.Wehaven’tseeneachother,wouldyouliketoshareyourlifewithme?Whatdoyouusuallydoinyourfreetime?Howoftendoyoudothem?Whichactivitydoyoulikebestandwhy?AsIknow,youhada7-dayholidayinOctober.Whatdidyoudoandhowwasyourholiday?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!PaulDearPaul,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇应用文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括和对方分享自己的生活，空闲时间做的事情，最喜欢哪个活动以及原因，同时叙述十一假期7天的情况。【写作步骤】第一步，介绍自己收到对方来信的心情和想要分享自己生活的意愿；第二步，具体阐述自己的日常生活情况，以及十一假期7天的情况；第三步，最后是叙述自己希望对方到来。【满分作文】DearPaul,

Iamsogladtohearfromyou.Iwillsharemylifewithyou.

Inmyfreetime,Iusuallyplaycomputergameswithmyfriends.Ithinkitissorelaxing.Ioftenplaythemonceaweek.Playingtoomanygamesmaybebadformystudy.Besides,Ilikeclimbingthemountainswithmyclassmatesbest,becauseitcanbuildmybody.InOctober,IwenttotheMountHuawithmyparents,becauseIhada7-dayholidayinOctober.Thistripwassoexciting.Whenwereachedthetopofthemountain,Ifeltsohappy.Youcouldn’timaginehowcomfortableIwas.Freshairandbeautifulscenerymademefascinated.

IhopeyoucancomehereandIwillshowyouaround.Yours,LiMing【亮点词汇】①bebadfor对……有害②onceaweek一周一次③makesbadj使某人……【高分句型】①Playingtoomanygamesmaybebadformystudy.（动名词作主语）②Whenwereachedthetopofthemountain,Ifeltsohappy.（when引导的时间状语从句）2．寒假即将来临，你一定想做一些有意义的事情来度过一个轻松、愉快的假期，例如锻炼放松，拜访亲友，陪父母聊天、做家务，认识更多的人等等！请以“MyWinterVacation”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。参考词汇：knowledge知识socialactivities社会活动提示：1.Whereareyougoingtospendyourwintervacation?2.Whatareyougoingtodoforyourself,yourfamilyorothers?要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；2.词数80个左右；3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。MyWinterVacationThewintervacationiscoming.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；③提示：根据所给提示内容介绍自己将要怎样过一个有意义的假期生活。注意不要遗漏要点。【写作步骤】第一步，告知自己的假期将要来临，自己打算做一些想做的事。第二步，从放松读书，陪父母聊天、做家务及参加社会活动三个方面来说明自己打算怎样过一个有意义的假期。第三步，最后祝大家都能过一个愉快的假期。【满分作文】MyWinterVacationThewintervacationiscoming.I’mgoingtodowhatIwanttodo.First,I’mgoingtohaveagoodrestandrelaxathome.Iwillreadsomegoodbooks.Readingbooksisusefulbecauseitcanhelpmegetmoreknowledge.Itcanopenupmyeyestotheworld.Next,I’mgoingtospendmoretimetalkingwithmyparents.Iwillalsotrymybesttohelpthemdosomehousework.Then,I’mgoingtotakepartinsocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmorepeople.Whatdoyouthinkofmyvacation?Ihopeyouwillhaveahappywintervacation.【亮点词汇】①haveagoodrest好好休息②spendmoretimetalkingwithmyparents花更多的时间和父母交谈③takepartinsocialactivities参加社会活动【高分句型】①Readingbooksisusefulbecauseitcanhelpmegetmoreknowledge.(because引导的原因状语从句)②Ihopeyouwillhaveahappywintervacation.(省略that的宾语从句)3．三年初中生活即将结束，近期毕业生QQ群里正在谈论关于即将来临的暑假活动安排,请你根据QQ群里采集的信息以及你自己的想法，写一篇英语短文。注意事项：1.词数100个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。RecentlywehadadiscussiononhowtospendourcomingsummerholidayintheQQgroup.Herearetheresults.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时相结合。可分三段写作：第一段以已给出开头引出话题；第二段介绍群里学生们的打算；第三段介绍自己的想法。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。【满分作文】RecentlywehadadiscussiononhowtospendourcomingsummerholidayintheQQgroup.Herearetheresults.SomestudentsplantotravelaroundChinaandvisitmanyplacesofinterest.Theythinkitcannotonlyreducethestressofstudybutalsolearnmoreaboutourcountry.Somestudentsaregoingtoreadbooksathome.Theythinkreadingcanhelpopenuptheireyesandrelaxthemselves.Othersprefertodosomevoluntaryworksothattheycanhelpmorepeople.What’smore,theycangetsomeworkingexperience.Inordertomakemyholidaymeaningfulaswellashappy,Idecidetogetapart-timejobtoexperienceadifferentlifestyle.4．在新学期开始之际，校英语报发起了题为“AWonderfulVacation”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的暑假中一次难忘的经历，向校报投稿。内容提示：l.Wheredidyougo?2.Whatdidyoudothere?3.Howdidyoulikeit?要求：90词左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“去哪度假了，做了什么，有什么感受”的要点，同时可适当添加细节，使文章内容丰富。【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己去哪里度假；第二步，具体介绍度假期间都去了哪里，做了什么事情；第三步，表明度假感受。【满分作文】AWonderfulVacationIwenttoQingdaowithmysisterthissummervacation.Wehadagoodtimethere.Qingdaohasmanyplacesofinterest.First,wewenttothebeach.Theseawasasblueasthesky.Andtherewasalwayssunshineandsoftwind,whichmadeussocomfortable.Wealsotookmanyphotosthere.Laterwewenttosealifecenter.Wesawmanyamazingseacreaturesandlearnedmoreaboutthem.Also,Iboughtmanybeautifulsouvenirsformyparentsandfriends.Andmysistertookmetotasteallkindsofdeliciousseafood.Althoughweweretired,wewantedtovisitQingdaoagain.【亮点词汇】①placesofinterest名胜古迹②as…as和……一样……③allkindsof各种各样的【高分句型】①Andtherewasalwayssunshineandsoftwind,whichmadeussocomfortable.（which引导非限制性定语从句）②Althoughweweretired,wewantedtovisitQingdaoagain.（Although引导让步状语从句）5．三年的初中学习生活就要结束，暑假即将来临。你打算过一个什么样的暑假呢？放松的(relaxing)？忙碌的(busy)？有意义的(meaningful)？……你准备在这个暑假做些什么？(吃喝玩乐？学习？做志愿者？旅行？……)请你以MySummerVacation为题写一篇短文，说说你的计划和安排。写作要求：1、先填好标题，再围绕标题展开作文；2、100词左右；3、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名；4、短文内容与标题相符，文章逻辑结构合理，字、词、句、语法使用正确。My________SummerVacation_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言通畅，语法正确，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。【满分作文】MymeaningfulSummerVacationWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,Iplantorelaxmyself,such as watching movies and traveling with my parents.I’ll exercise every daybecauseit is good for our health.ThenI am going to spend some time learning cooking,swimming and bike riding.AndIwanttocommunicatewithmyparentsmore.In my opinion,these skills will be useful and helpful in my future life.At the same time,I’llread some books to open up my eyes.I also plan to takepartinsomesocialactivitiesto prepare for future study.I think I’ll have a meaningful summer vacation.（2022·广东深圳·统考中考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。内容包括：1.海边活动：下午：①沙滩排球；②……；晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。2.活动感言。注意：1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。参考词汇：冲浪surf

帐篷tentHi,everyone!IamLiHua.It’smygreatpleasuretopresentmyvlogtoyou.LastSaturday,wewenttotheseasidetocelebrateourgraduation.Intheafternoon,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Somuchformyvideo.Ihopeyouhaveenjoyedit.Thankyou.【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇解说词，属于演讲稿写作；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；第二步，根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动，包括下午和晚上的具体活动，要列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。【满分作文】Hi,everyone!IamLiHua.lt’smygreatpleasuretopresentmyvlogtoyou.LastSaturday,wewenttotheseasidetocelebrateourgraduation.Intheafternoon,wehadabeachvolleyballgame.Then,weenjoyedthefunofsurfinginthesea.Beforedark,wepickedupthelitteronthebeach.Howmeaningfulitwas!Atnight,weputuptwotentsandhadapicnic.Thefoodcookedbyuswassodelicious.Finally,allofussharedourfeelingsaboutthisfantasticexperience.Notonlycanitpromoteourfriendship,butalsoitleavesusavaluableexperience.Somuchformyvideo.Ihopeyouhaveenjoyedit.Thankyou.【亮点词汇】①pickupthelitter捡垃圾②notonly…butalso…不仅……而且……【高分句型】①Howmeaningfulitwas!（how引导的感叹句）②Thefoodcookedbyuswassodelicious.（过去分词作定语）③Notonlycanitpromoteourfriendship,butalsoitleavesusavaluableexperience.（部分倒装结构）（2022·宁夏·统考中考真题）暑假临近，你有什么计划吗？你校英语社团正在开展以“MySummerVacationPlan”为主题的征文活动。请根据思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的暑假计划。要求：1.文中须包含思维导图中的所有信息；2.补充至少两条计划；3.合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。注意：1.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。提示词语：takepartin参加socialpracticeactivities社会实践活动MySummerVacationPlanThesummervacationiscoming.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：本文以“一般将来时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己的暑期计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。【写作步骤】第一步，引入话题，表示自己暑期有很多事情要做；第二步，根据思维导图中的提示信息详细介绍自己暑期要做的事情；第三步，表达期待。【满分作文】MySummerVacationPlanThesummervacationiscoming.TherearesomanythingsIplantodo.First,I’mgoingtoreadsomemeaningfulbooks,becauseIbelievebooksareourbestfriends.Ilovemygrandparents.I’mgoingtovisitthemmoreoften.ThenIplantotakepartinsocialpracticeactivities.Forexample,Iwillgotoafarmtopickapples.Myfavouritesportisplayingbasketball.I’mgoingtoplaybasketballwithmybestfriendsonweekends.Finally,Iwanttogotoasummercampifpossible.I’mreallylookingforwardtothesummervacation.【亮点词汇】①plantodosth.计划做某事②takepartin参加③lookforwardtodoingsth.期待做某事【高分句型】①First,I’mgoingtoreadsomemeaningfulbooks,becauseIbelievebooksareourbestfriends.(because引导的原因状语从句)②Myfavouritesportisplayingbasketball.(动名词作表语)（2018·四川泸州·统考中考真题）暑期将至，我们都应该制定合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示，以“MySummerVacationPlan”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要点提示：1.放松自己：听音乐，看电影，锻炼身体等；2.陪伴家人：旅行，散步，与父母交流等；3.做志愿者：看望老人，赠送礼物，为他们唱歌等；4.努力学习：阅读书籍，复习知识，为以后学习做准备等；5.个人观点：……。要求：1.词数110词左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；3.字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅；4.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。参考词语：relaxmyself,spendtimewith…,volunteer,review,prepareforMySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________