高考英语读后续写专项复习：助人型（解析版）

专题36读后续写07助人型（解析版）

主要分为：“我”帮助别人：别人帮助“我”。主题主要是：帮助helpful；奉献devotion；友善kind；

爱心love。

［一、思维导图

第一步：困难描写

（消极情绪+困难处境）

第二步：助人过程呈现

助人型故事构造

（想到办法+动作链）

第三步：皆大欢喜结局

（感激+感动+升华）

I第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）

（1）消极情绪

典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形

式和介词短语）

1.aflushof（表情绪的名词尸awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一阵...

2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/sh

ame...）

3.（表情绪的名词）floodedoversb=sweptoversb

因…颤抖

tremble//shiver/shake（withfear,panicexcitement,rage...）

（2）进一步细节描写

典型是：流泪；心里想……

流泪：

1.Tearsblurredone*seyes.

2.One*seyesgotmisty.

3.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.泪眼模糊

4....beclosetotears几乎要哭了

5.tears（rolldownone*seyes/cheeks/face）泪水落下

困难处境

1.Astheeconomywasindecline（经济衰退）,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilies

werestrugglingtomakeendsmeet（使收支平衡）.（2020.7高考山东卷）

2.Therewasamansickinbed（臣卜病在床）,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheir

littleboy.（2020.7高考山东卷）

3.Butoneday,ahurricanehitthearea（台风袭击当地）wherehelived,completelydestroyinghishome（完全摧

毁他的家）.（2021广州2月联考）

I第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）

（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法

典型：某人想至！1/明白…；有了主意

1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat从句=Ithitsbthat从句=Itstruckmethat从句=Itdawnedonsbthat从

句

2.（idea,thought...）occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone*smind

3.One*smindbegantorace

（2）动作链

Thenhegotasaw（锯子）fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditover

andputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木

头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】

I第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）

（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折

过了一段时间

1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,…二beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore从句=Ittook

sometimebefore从句不久，…

2.foraninstant/moment一瞬间

（2）有了结果

1.Toone'ssurprise（delight）/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat从句

2.Butonsecondthoughts,…但是转而一想,

3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.接下来发生的非常奇妙

（3）感谢

1.Now,Iwasdefinitelygratefultoherforextendingahelpinghand（伸出援手）.（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月

考三）

2.MollyandShawnmetonTuesday,andshesaysshecouldn'tthankhimenough（非常感谢他）andeveryone

involvedinforwhattheydidforher.（2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题）

（4）感动

1.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved（他们被深深地感动了），especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundaway

tomakemoneyforhisfamily.（2020.7高考山东卷）

2.HewastouchedthatI,acompletestranger,caredsomuchabouthim（如止匕关心他）andsaidhewaswillingto

work.（2021广州2月联考）

3.Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords（感动得说不出话来）.Ifeltsowarmas

iftherewereninesunsinmychest.（2021年1月省联考）

4.Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears（眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀）.（2021年1月八省联

考）

5.Stunnedandmoved（惊讶又感动），Istaredatthenote,feelingapangofguiltaboutmypreviousthoughtthatall

peoplewereindifferent.（2021年1月八省联考）

I（5）升华

1.Itislovethatmakestheworldgoround（是爱让世界运转）andBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.（2020.7

高考山东卷）

2.Everyonewashappyandsweet,exposingtheirsetsofwhiteteeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东

卷）

3.Imadeupmymindtopasson"love"toothers（传递爱给其他人）.Justasasayinggoes:"Rosesgiven,

fragranceinhand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）（2021年1月八省联考）

4.Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeonewhoneedshelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hopingtopassonthe

kindness（希望传递善意）thatMexicanfamilyofferedme.（2021年1月八省联考）

5.Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference（会有很大不同）.

［精讲精练

Passage01…开车半路救人

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文

AyoungandsuccessfulmanagerhadanewJaguar,whoseside*doorwasdented（凹陷的）.Thedamagewas

verynoticeable,butthemanagerneverbotheredtorepairit.Hekeptthedenttheretoremindhimofoneafternoon

aswellasthismessage：Don'tgothroughlifesofastthatsomeonehastothrowabrickatyoutogetyourattention!

Themanagerwastravelingdownaneighborhoodstreet,goingabittoofastinhisnew.Jaguar.Hewas

watchingforkidsrushingoutfrombetweenparkedcarsandsloweddownwhenhethoughthesawsomething.As

hiscarpassed,nochildrenappeared.Instead,abrickcrashedintotheJag'ssidedoor!Hebrakedsharplyanddrove

theJagbackwardtothespotwherethebrickhadbeenthrown.Theangrydriverthenjumpedoutofthecar,

grabbedthenearestkidandpushedhimupagainstaparkedcar,shouting,""Whatwasthatallaboutandwhoare

you?^^

Theyoungboyapologized.HPleasemister...please,I'msorry...Ididn'tknowwhatelsetodo,"hebegged.

“Ithrewthebrickbecausenooneelsewouldstop...nWithtearscomingdownhisface,thelittleboypointed

toaspotjustaroundaparkedcar.

“MyelderbrotherfelloutofhiswheelchairandIcan*tlifthimup.hesaid.

Stillcrying,theboyaskedtheastonishedmanager,“Wouldyoupleasehelpmegethimbackintohis

wheelchair?He'shurtandhe*stooheavyforme.”

Movedbeyondwords,hehurriedtothespotwiththeboy.Anotherboywaslyingonthegroundbleeding.He

tookouthiscleanhandkerchiefandtouchedlightlyatthefreshscrapes（擦伤）andcuts.Aquicklooktoldhim

thatthewoundwasserious,thedisabledmustbetakentothehospitalatonce.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

Luckily,hehadafirst-aidkitinthecar.

Infifteenminutes,theyarrivedatthenearesthospital.

【写作特训】

1.Don'tgothroughlifesofastthat（必须有人向你扔石专头才能引起你

的注意）！

2.（他7目流丫黄面），thelittleboypointedtoaspotjustaroundaparkedcar.

3.（他感动得说不出话来）,hehurriedtothespotwiththeboy.

4.（他看了一眼就知道了）thatthewoundwasserious,thedisabledmust

betakentothehospitalatonce.

5.（慢慢地，他把残疾人扶上汽车后座），whiletheyoungerbrother

satingbesidetotakecareofhim.

6.Startingthecarquicklyagain,（他冲向最近的医院）.

7.Themanagergotoutthewheelchairand（把伤残者抱进车里，急忙

把他推到急救中心）.

8.Atthistime,theyoungerboyandhisparentscametohimand_________________________（向他表

示衷心的感谢）.

【范文赏析】

Paragraph1:

Luckily,hehadafirst-aidkitinthecar.Immediately,hetookoutabandagefromthekit,andlieditlightly

aroundthewound.Slowly,hegotthedisabledintothebackseatofthecar,whiletheyoungerbrothersatingbeside

totakecareofhim.Thenthemanagerfoldedthewheelchairandputitintothetrunk.Startingthecarquicklyagain,

herushedtowardthenearesthospital.Ontheway,hehandedhissmartphonetotheyoungerbrothertocalltheir

parents,andconstantlycomfortedthetwobrotherstotakeiteasy.

Paragraph2:

Infifteenminute,theyarrivedatthenearesthospital.Themanagergotoutthewheelchairandliftedthe

disabledintoitandhurriedlypushedhimtotheemergencycenter.Whengivingtheinjuredboytothemedical

workers,hegotreleased.Atthistime,theyoungerboyandhisparentscametohimandgavehimheartfeltthanks.

Finallyhedrovehiscartowork,withthesidedoorstilldented.

【写作特训答案】

1.Don'tgothroughlifesofastthatsomeonehastothrowabrickatyoutogetyourattention!

2.Withtearscomingdownhisface,thelittleboypointedtoaspotjustaroundaparkedcar.

3.Movedbeyondwords,hehurriedtothespotwiththeboy.

4.Aquicklooktoldhimthatthewoundwasserious,thedisabledmustbetakentothehospitalatonce.

5.Slowly,hegotthedisabledintothebackseatofthecar,whiletheyoungerbrothersatingbesidetotake

careofhim.

6.Startingthecarquicklyagain,herushedtowardthenearesthospital.

7.Themanagergotoutthewheelchairandliftedthedisabledintoitaudhurriedlypushedhimtothe

emergencycenter.

8.Atthistime,theyoungerboyandhisparentscametohimandgavehimheartfeltthanks.

Passage02…马戏团购票

读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Once,whenIwasateenager,myfatherandIwerestandinginlinetobuyticketsforthecircus.Finally,there

wasonlyonefamilybetweenusandtheticketcounter.

Thisfamilymadeabigimpressiononme.Therewereeightchildren,allprobablyundertheageoftwelve.You

couldtelltheydidn'thavealotofmoney.

Theirclotheswerenotexpensive,buttheywereclean.Thechildrenwerewell-behaved,allofthemstandingin

line,two-by-twobehindtheirparents,holdinghands.Theywereexcitedlytalkingabouttheclowns,elephants,and

otheractstheywouldseethatnightwiththeirbrothersorsistersinalowvoice.

Onecouldsensetheyhadneverbeentothecircusbefore.Itpromisedtobehighlightoftheiryounglives.The

fatherandmotherwereattheheadofthepack,standingproudascouldbe.Themotherwasholdingherhusband's

hand,lookingupathimasiftosay,“Youaremyknightinshiningarmor.^^

Hewassmilingandrespondinginpride,lookingbackatherasiftosay,44Yougotthatright.^^Theticketlady

askedthefatherhowmanyticketshewanted.Heproudlyresponded,"'Pleaseletmebuyeightchildren'sticketsand

twoadultticketssoIcantakemyfamilytothecircus.9,

Theticketladygavetheprice.Theman'swifeletgoofhishand,herheaddropped,andhislipsbegantoshake.

Thefatherleanedalittlecloserandasked,t6Howmuchdidyousay?”

Theticketladyagainquotedtheprice.Themandidn'thaveenoughmoney.

Howwashesupposedtoturnandtellhiseightchildrenthathedidn'thaveenoughmoneytotakethemtothe

circus?

Actuallywewerenotwealthyinanysense.SoIunderstandhowthekidswouldfeel.Ifeltsorryforthem.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；

Paragraph1

Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditonthe

ground.

Paragraph2

ThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.

【写作特训】

1.Once,whenIwasateenager,myfatherandI（我们排队买马戏团的

票）.

2.Thefatherandmotherwereattheheadofthepack,（尽可能骄傲地

站着）.

3.Theman*swifeletgoofhishand,（她低下头,他的嘴唇开始颤抖）.

4.（父亲靠得更近一点问道）,whiletheyoungerbrothersatingbesideto

takecareofhim.

5.Then（他捡起它，拍了拍那人的肩膀说），"Excuseme,sir,thisfell

outofyourpocket/

6.Heknewwhatwasgoingon,（他直视着我爸爸的眼睛，双手握住

我爸爸的手）andsqueezedtightlyontothe$20bill..

7.（他的嘴唇颤抖着，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来）,hereplied,t4Thankyou,

thankyou,sir.Thisreallymeansalottomeandmyfamily.

8.（他停顿了一会儿），asifwanderinginhismemory.

参考范文：

Paragraph1:

Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddropped

itontheground.Thenhepickeditupandtappedthemanontheshoulderandsaid,“Excuseme,sir,this

felloutofyourpocket/Themanturnedaroundandsawthemoney.Heknewwhatwasgoingon,he

lookedstraightintomydad'seyes,tookmydad'shandinbothofhis,squeezedtightlyontothe$20bill,

andwithhislipshakingandatearrunningdownhischeek,hereplied,“Thankyou,thankyou,sir.This

reallymeansalottomeandmyfamily.

Paragraph2:

ThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.Wedidn't

gotothecircusthatnight,whenIaskeddadwhyhedidso,Dadsaid,"Mychild,itwasadesperate,

heartbreakingandembarrassingsituationforafather.Surelyhewasn'tbeggingforahandout,buthe

remindedmeofmyfather,whenIwasyoung."Hepausedforawhile,asifwanderinginhismemory.

“Weshouldappreciatewhatwehaveobtainedfromlifeandseizeeveryopportunitytohelpothers.We

didn'tgotothecircustonight,butwedidn'tgowithout.Now,whowantsanicecream?”

【写作特训答案】

1.Once,whenIwasateenager,myfatherandIwerestandinginlinetobuyticketsforthecircus.

2.Thefatherandmotherwereattheheadofthepack,standingproudascouldb。.

3.Theman'swifeletgoofhishand,herheaddropped,andhislipsbegantoshake.

4.Thefatherleanedalittlecloserandasked,“Howmuchdidyousay?”

5.Thenhepickeditupandtappedthemanontheshoulderandsaid,“Excuseme,sir,thisfelloutof

yourpocket/

6.Heknewwhatwasgoingon,helookedstraightintomydacfseyes,tookmydad?shandinbothof

his,andsqueezedtightlyontothe$20bill.

7.Withhislipshakingandatearrunningdownhischeek,hereplied,“Thankyou,thankyou,sir.

Thisreallymeansalottomeandmyfamily.9,

8.Hepausedforawhile,asifwanderinginhismemory.

读后续写模拟专练01

读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Dawncameslowly.Ashaftofsunlightreachedintothe4-meter-deepcrateif弹坑）,makingthemetal

ofthebombshine.Theboyswerenumbandtight,andhungry.Theytriednottolookatthehugeshape

ofthebombthatappearedoverthem.

HarrysuddenlyopenedhiseyesandseizedJack'sarm."Listen!”hewhispered.Jack'seyewidened

instantly,andbothboysstrainedtheirears.Theycouldhearamantalkingsoftly.Thevoiceseemedalong

wayoff.Jackwenttoshout,butHarryclampedhishandoverJack*smouth."Don'tshout/'hehissed（发出

嘘声），"Wellbeblownintopieces.H

Thesoftvoicecamenearerandnearer.Suddenly,anarmycaptainappearedatthetopofcrater.He

wastalkingtoamouthpiece（话筒）aroundhisneck.Hestoppedtalkingwhenhesawtheboys.nWhat

the..."hesaid,“Whoareyou?Hairyfoundhisvoice,"JackandHarryBrown.""Isthatdogdead?"asked

thecaptain."No:he'ssleeping,nsaidHarry.

Thecaptainspokeintothemouthpieceagain,"Sergeant（中士）hesaid,stoppedandtookabreath

beforehewenton."Therearetwokidsandadogdownhere."Thenthecaptaincroucheddownandstared

closelyatthebomb."Don'tmoveanddon*tspeak,"hesaid,norwellallgoup."Hebegantalkingquietly

tohissergeant.

JackandHarryweretoostifftomove.TheyheldRaf,thedog,tightlyandwaited.Anotherman

appearedatthetopofthecrater.nIthoughtso,"hesaid,"Itsthemallright?"

"ItsOldTinHat!”whisperedJack.OldTinHatwascarryingaladder.Heandthecaptainlowered

theladderintothelooseearthnexttothetwoboys."Keepstill,nthecaptainwarnedthem.Asthecaptain

heldonatthetop.OldTinHatstartedtocomedowntheladderveryslowly,verygently,stepbystep.At

last,hereachedthebottom,andwithonemovement,heliftedJackonhisback.HarrywatchedasJack

wascarriedup.Itseemedtotakeanage.

Paragraph1:

Withasuddenfallofearth,OldTinHatfrozehalfwayup.

Paragraph2:

OldTinHatpulledHarryontohisback,carryingRafunderhisarm.

翻译小练习：

1.哈利吓得喘不过气来，但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。

2.OldTinHat又起来了。他一到山顶，手就伸出来，杰克就不见了。

3.OldTinHat又从梯子上下来了，温柔而谨慎。

4.最终，他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。

5.尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他坚持说他们会在一起。

6.OldTinHat第二次开始爬梯子。

7.男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。

8.经过巨大的努力，他们到达了火山口的顶部。

9.所有人都获救了！远处传来微弱的欢呼声。

10.一群人挤在栅栏后面。

11.在那儿，“妈妈！"Hurry冲过去，紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来，消息传来，炸弹已安全运走。

参考答案：

1.哈利吓得喘不过气来，但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。

Harrygaspedwithterrorbutluckilytheladderwassteady.

2.OldTinHat又起来了。他一到山顶，手就伸出来，杰克就不见了。

OldTinHatstartedupagain.NosoonerhadhegottothetopthanhandsreachedoutandJackdisappeared.

3.OldTinHat又从梯子上下来了,温柔而谨慎。

AgaindowntheladdercameOldTinHat,gentlyandcautiously.

4.最终，他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。

Eventually,hejoinedHarryandRaf.

5.尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他坚持说他们会在一起。

Thoughhesuggestedthatdogwentlast,Harryinsistedthattheywouldbetogether.

6.OldTinHat第二次开始爬梯子。

OldTinHatstartedtoclimbtheladderforthesecondtime.

7.男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。

Theweightoftheboyandthedogmadehimgasp.

8.经过巨大的努力，他们到达了火山口的顶部。

Withgreatefforts,theycametothetopofthecrater.

9.所有人都获救了！远处传来微弱的欢呼声。

Everybodywasrescued!Afaintcheerrosefromalongwayoff.

10.一群人挤在栅栏后面。

Agroupofpeoplecrowdedbehindthebarrier.

11.在那儿，“妈妈！"Hurry冲过去，紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来，消息传来，炸弹已安全运走。

Andtherewas,"Mom!"Hurryrushedover,hugginghismomtightly.Later,newscamethatthebombwastaken

away,safe.

参考范文：

Withasuddenfallofearth,OldTinHatfrozehalfwayup.

Harrygaspedwithterrorbutluckilytheladderwassteady.OldTinHatstartedupagain.Nosoonerhadhegotto

thetopthanhandsreachedoutandJackdisappeared.AgaindowntheladdercameOldTinHat,gentlyand

cautiously.Eventually,hejoinedHarryandRaf.Thoughhesuggestedthatdogwentlast,Harryinsistedthatthey

wouldbetogether.

OldTinHatpulledHarryontohisback,carryingRafunderhisarm.

OldTinHatstartedtoclimbtheladderforthesecondtime.Theweightoftheboyandthedogmadehimgasp.

Withgreatefforts,theycametothetopofthecrater.Everybodywasrescued!Afaintcheerrosefromalongway

off.Agroupofpeoplecrowdedbehindthebarrier.Andtherewas,"Mom!Hurryrushedover,hugginghismom

tightly.Later,newscamethatthebombwastakenaway,safe.

读后续写模拟专练02

读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

ItwasaSaturdayafternoon.Thecoloroftheskywaschanging,firstlightgray,thendarkgray,and

finallydarkanddense.Thewindwasblowingheavily,andthetreeswereswayinginthestrongwind.It

begantoraincatsanddogs.Soon,theroadwasfilledwithpuddlesfromtherain.

Insuchastormyafternoon,Mymothertookmyfive-year-oldbrother,Christopher,andmetoanew

bigtoystoreshehadreadaboutinthenewspaper."Somanytoys/'theadvertisementhadshoutedinfull

andflashycolor,66thatwehadtogetahugewarehousetofitthem

ChristopherandIcouldn'thavebeenmoreexcited.Weranacrosstheparkinglot,throughthecold

andbitingrain,asfastasourlittlelegscouldcarryus.Weleftourmotheroutsidetobattlewiththe

frustratingumbrella,whichneverworkedwhenshewanteditto."Christine!Takecareofyouryoung

brother!64Mothershoutedatthetopofhervoice.

“Christine!I'mgoingtofindtheLegosection（乐高积木区）!There*sanewpirateshipIwant,andI

havefourdollars!MaybeIcanbuyit!”Christopherexclaimedandranoffexcitedly.Ionlyhalfheardhim.

Itookarightturnand,tomywide-eyeddelight,foundmyselfinthemidstoftheBarbie（芭比）World.

IwasstudyingaBarbieanddoingsomesimplemathinmyheadwhensuddenlyanearthshakingclap

ofthunderroaredfromthestormoutside.Ijumpedatthenoise,droppingthedolltothefloor.Thelights

flickered（闪烁）onceanddied,coveringeverythinginablanketofblackness.Thundercontinuedtoshake

theskyandlightningilluminatedthestoreforseconds,castingfrighteningshadowsonmymind.

Paragraph1：

“Ohno,”Ithought,“Where'sChristopher?"

Paragraph2：

“Christine,I'mhere.

翻译小练习：

1.我当场被吓呆了，我觉得有必要看看，拥抱我的弟弟，确保他没事。

2.我的胃扭曲了。我在黑暗中在过道上跑来跑去，惊慌失措地填满了我的小胸膛，使我呼吸困难。

3.我撞到了糖果，被玩具绊倒了，还疯狂地叫着我弟弟的名字。

4.虽然我很着急，但还是找不到他。沮丧和恐惧的泪水从我的脸上滑落，但我继续奔跑。

5.激动得我喘不过气来一在乐高过道里，我找到了克里斯托弗。

6.他独自站在海盗船旁，一动不动。

7.我松了一口气哭了起来，搂着他，紧紧地拥抱着他。

8.他拥抱着我说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克莉丝汀，你会找到我的。”

9.然后，我拉着他的手，我们去寻找我们的母亲，她一定在商店里拼命地找我们。

参考答案：

1.我当场被吓呆了，我觉得有必要看看，拥抱我的弟弟，确保他没事。

Scaredandfrozenonthespot,Ifelttheneedtosee,hugmybrotherandmakesurehewasallright.

2.我的胃扭曲了。我在黑暗中在过道上跑来跑去，惊慌失措地填满了我的小胸膛，使我呼吸困难。

Mystomachtwisted.Iranupanddowntheaislesinthedark,panicfillingmysmallchestandmakingitdifficultto

breathe.

3.我撞到了糖果，被玩具绊倒了，还疯狂地叫着我弟弟的名字。

Iknockedintodisplaysofcandiesandtrippedovertoys,whilecallingmybrother'snamelikecrazy.

4.虽然我很着急，但还是找不到他。沮丧和恐惧的泪水从我的脸上滑落，但我继续奔跑。

AnxiousasIwas,Icouldnotfindhim.Tearsoffrustrationandfeartrickleddownmyface,butIcontinuedtorun.

5.激动得我喘不过气来在乐高过道里，我找到了克里斯托弗。

Excitementtookmybreathaway-thereintheLegoaisleIfoundChristopher.

6.他独自站在海盗船旁，一动不动。

Hewasstandingalone,perfectlystill,nexttothepirateshipset.

7.我松了一口气哭了起来，搂着他，紧紧地拥抱着他。

Ibegantocryinrelief,throwingmyarmsaroundhimandhuggedhimtightly.

8.他拥抱着我说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克莉丝汀，你会找到我的。”

Hehuggedmeback,saying,4<IknewifIwaitedhere,Christine,youwouldbeabletofindme.”

9.然后，我拉着他的手，我们去寻找我们的母亲，她一定在商店里拼命地找我们。

Then,Itookhishandinmineandwewenttolookforourmother,whomustbedesperatelysearchingthestorefor

us.

参考范文:

Paragraph1:

“Ohno,"/thought,“Where'sChristopher?”Scaredandfrozenonthespot,Ifelttheneedtosee,hugmy

brotherandmakesurehewasallright.Mystomachtwisted.Iranupanddowntheaislesinthedark,panicfilling

mysmallchestandmakingitdifficulttobreathe.Iknockedintodisplaysofcandiesandtrippedovertoys,while

callingmybrother'snamelikecrazy.AnxiousasIwas,Icouldnotfindhim.Tearsoffrustrationandfeartrickled

downmyface,butIcontinuedtorun.

Paragraph2：

“Christine,1'mhereExcitementtookmybreathaway-thereintheLegoaisleIfoundChristopher.Hewas

standingalone,perfectlystill,nexttothepirateshipset.Ibegantocryinrelief,throwingmyarmsaroundhimand

huggedhimtightly.Hehuggedmeback,saying,“IknewifIwaitedhere,Christine,youwouldbeabletofindme.^^

Then,Itookhishandinmineandwewenttolookforourmother,whomustbedesperatelysearchingthestorefor

us.

读后续写模拟专练03

读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Therewasathickforestonthesidesofamountain.Manykindsofanimalslivedintheforest.Adeer

waseatinggrassandleaveswithhertwoyoungones.Theyoungoneswanderedhappilyhereandthere.

Thedeerfollowedherfawns（幼鹿）intoacave.Thedeerwasfrightenedbecauseitwasatiger'scave.

Therewerebonesofdeadanimalsalloverthecave.Fortunately,thetigerwasnotinsidethecaveatthe

time.

Thedeerwastryingtoleadheryoungonesoutofthecavewhensheheardaloudroar.Shesawthe

tigeratadistancecomingtowardsthecave.Itwasdangeroustogooutofthecavenow.Shethoughtofa

plan.Thedeerraisedhervoiceandshouted,"Mydeeryoungchildrendonotweep.Ishallcapture（才甫捉）

atigerforyoutoeat.Youcanhaveagooddinner."

Thetigerheardthesewordsandbecamefrightened.Hethought,"Whoseisthatstrangevoicefrom

thecave?Adangerousanimalisstayinginsidetocaptureme.Ishallrunawaytoescapedeath."Thetiger

begantorunawayfromthereasfastaspossible.

Ajackal（胡狼）sawtherunningtiger.4tWhyareyourunningingreatfear?"thejackalasked.The

tigersaid,"Myfriend,apowerfulandfierceanimalisinmycave.Theyoungonesarecryingforatigerto

eat.Themotherispromisingtocaptureatigerforthem.So,Iamrunningaway."

Thecunningjackalwasnowsurethetigerwasacoward（'需夫）.Itsaid,"Don'tbeafraid.Noanimal

isfiercerorstrongerthanatigerLetusgotogethertofindout."

Butthetigersaid,"Idonotwanttotakeachance.Youmayrunaway.Iwillbeleftalonetodie.So,I

willnotcomewithyou.**

Thejackalsaid,"Trustme.Letusknot（打结）ourtailstogether.ThenIwillnotbeabletoleave

you."Thetigeragreedunwillinglytothisproposal.Sothejackaltiedtheirtailsinaknot.Nowthey

walkedtowardsthecavetogether.

注意：

所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

应使用至少5个以上短文中