2024-2025学年高中英语Module6TheInternetandTelecommunicationsSectionⅤGuidedWriting学案外研版必修1

PAGEModule6TheInternetandTelecommunications正反观点对比类争论文正反观点类争论文一般会给出两个或两个以上的对立观点，要求发表自己的看法或见解。一、留意事项1．结构：此类文章的结构一般为：引语→正方观点→反方观点→结论。可采纳四段式或传统的三段式模式。2．时态：此类文章多用一般现在时。论述一种现象或观点，不能因为是探讨过的内容，就用一般过去时。3．发表自己的观点或看法时，应紧扣主题，言简意赅。既可以赞成正方观点，也可以支持反方观点，也可以有自己的看法，只要言之有理，表达精确即可。二、增分佳句A．开头用语1．Ourclasshavehadadiscussionabout...2．Recentlytheproblemof...hasbeenbroughtintofocus.3．Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover...B．论证用语1．Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson...2．Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto...3．Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.4．Foronething，...Foranother(thing)，...5．On(the)onehand，...Ontheotherhand...C．结论用语1．Everythinghastwosidesand...2．Iquiteagreewiththestatementthat...3．Inmyopinion,weshouldattachmoreimportanceto...4．AsfarasIamconcerned,Iplanto...5．Inconclusion,Isupportthestatementthat...eq\a\vs4\al([题目要求])现在，网上购物正在被越来越多的消费者所接受。但是，由网上购物引发的问题也引起了人们的高度关注。请依据以下内容，写一篇英语短文，分析网上购物的利与弊，并简述自己的观点。网上购物利弊你的观点·便利快捷·价格便宜·产品种类多·质量无法保证·简单上当受骗……留意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：便利convenience质量quality___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为正反观点争论文；2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一、三人称；3．确定时态：陈述现象和观点用一般现在时。二、构思第一段：引出话题。其次段：网购之利。第三段：网购之弊。第四段：我的观点。其次步：核心词汇想周全1．withthespreadof 随着……的普及2．shoponline/goshoppingonline/onlineshopping 网上购物3．advantagesanddisadvantages 利弊4．becauseof 由于5．savetime 节约时间6．besides/inaddition/what'smore 另外7．manydifferentkindsof 种类繁多的8．besureof/about 对……有把握9．cheat/takein 欺瞒10．inmyopinion 在我看来第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．随着互联网的普及，越来越多的人喜爱网上购物。(preferdoingsth.)WiththespreadoftheInternet,moreandmorepeopleprefergoingshoppingonline.2．事实上，网上购物既有优点又有弊端。(therebe结构)Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesofonlineshopping.3．我们不出家门就可以在网上买东西。WecanbuythingsontheInternetwithoutleavingourhouses.4．可供我们选择的货物种类繁多，而且价格可能比实体店的便宜。(and连接两个并列分句)Therearemanydifferentkindsofgoodsforustochoosefromandtheymaybecheaperthanthoseinrealshops.5．因为我们只能在网上看到货物的图片，我们无法保证货物的质量。(since引导缘由状语从句)SincewecanseeonlypicturesofgoodsontheInternet,wearenotsureabouttheirquality.6．在网上有许多假的广告，使得顾客很简单被欺瞒。(which引导非限制性定语从句)TherearelotsoffakeadvertisementsontheInternet,whichmakescustomerseasilycheated.7．在我看来，我们在享受网上购物的便利时应当谨慎对待。(while引导时间状语从句)Inmyopinion,weshouldbecarefulwhileweareenjoyingtheconvenienceofshoppingonline.第四步：句式升级造亮点1．用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句4Therearemanydifferentkindsofgoodsforustochoosefrom,whichmaybecheaperthanthoseinrealshops.2．用现在分词作结果状语改写句6TherearelotsoffakeadvertisementsontheInternet,makingcustomerseasilycheated.3．用状语从句的省略改写句7Inmyopinion,weshouldbecarefulwhileenjoyingtheconvenienceofshoppingonline.第五步：过渡连接联成篇_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[参考范文]WiththespreadoftheInternet,moreandmorepeopleprefergoingshoppingonline.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesofonlineshopping.WecanbuythingsontheInternetwithoutleavingourhouses.Shoppingonlinecansavealotoftimeforus.What'smore,therearemanydifferentkindsofgoodsforustochoosefrom,whichmaybecheaperthanthoseinrealshops.However,shoppingonlinealsocausesussomeproblems.SincewecanseeonlypicturesofgoodsontheInter