英语 冲刺高考之读后续写满分手册专题04（练习）纯干货-惊险类读后续写精彩表达积累+专题训练-“勇者无惧”

纯干货——惊险类读后续写精彩表达积累+专题提升训练学习目标：学习积累表达“恐惧”“紧张”情感、氛围、动作细节的精彩语句；在惊险类读后续写情境中提升运用相关的表达能力本专题包括：第一部分：输入——夯实基础（一）“恐惧”情感的精彩描写（二）烘托“恐惧”氛围的环境描写（三）体现“恐惧”的动作描写第二部分：操练——熟能生巧1.单句操练2.提升表达——一句多译第三部分：语篇输出——学以致用步骤：StepI语料输入——夯实基础关于“恐惧”“紧张’情感的精彩描写你掌握多少？英译汉beseizedwithpanic________beseizedbyfear___________behalfdeadwithfear_______inpanic__________________interror__________________fearcreepsoversomebody___afloodoffearwellsupinsomebodyataloss__________________2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语不知所措______________感到害怕_______________从心底感到害怕_________惊慌___________________充满了恐惧_____________吓得半死_______________害怕地_________________恐惧地_________________（二）烘托“恐惧”氛围的环境描写你会多少？1.英译汉2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语astormynight_______________beburiedinsnow____________unbearablyhot______________Thenightsettledin__________Thestormisatitsheight______Thereisanipintheair________asmallvillageoffthemap______thethinlypopulatedruralarea____（三）体现“恐惧”的动作描写你会多少？暴风雨之夜________________深埋在雪中________________难以忍受的热______________夜幕降临__________________暴风刮的正猛______________空气寒冷刺骨______________一个偏僻的小村子__________人烟稀少的农村地区_______英译汉heartbeatviolently______________takeadeepbreath_______________comeassomethingofasurprise___bechokedbyfear_______________tremblefromheadtotoe_________shakewithfear/terror____________chokewithfear________________faceturnspale_________________jump/springtoone'sfeet_________struggletoone'sfeet____________2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语心跳得厉害______________________深吸一口气_____________________有点惊讶________________________吓得透不过气来___________________全身颤抖_________________________因害怕/恐惧而发抖________________因为害怕而哽咽___________________脸色变白_________________________一跃而起________________________挣扎着站起来_____________________StepII句子操练单句操练我转向他，眼里充满了恐惧。_____________________________________________________________________我吓得睁大了眼睛。_____________________________________________________________________我的心怦怦跳。______________________________________________________________________我感到恐慌袭来。_______________________________________________________________________我双膝发抖地走上楼梯。________________________________________________________________________那个声音使我害怕。_________________________________________________________________________我吓得喘不过气来。________________________________________________________________________一看见那条蛇，我吓坏了。________________________________________________________________________突如其来的变故使我不知所措。________________________________________________________________________我浑身发抖，感到坐立不安。________________________________________________________________________一句多译——提升单句表达力（1）Atthesightofthesnake,thegirlfelt①_________________________（她的胸口发紧）一看到那条蛇，那个女孩感到②__________________________（她的心脏狂跳）③________________________（她后背一阵寒意）我完全被恐惧控制，寸步难行了。①_________________________,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.②__________________________,unabletomoveaninch.③________________________,Icouldhardlymoveaninch.3）站在悬崖边上，我害怕极了。①Standingattheedgeofthecliff,__________________________________________________②Standingattheedgeofthecliff,__________________________________________________③Istoodattheedgeofthecliff____________________________________________________StepIII语篇输出阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2021·湖北省七市(州)教科研协作体高三3月联考)Gradyandhisfamilygocampingeverysummer.Asitwasbecominghotter,herecamethecampingtime.Havingplannedthecamplong,thefamilyfinallydecidedthedestination—theGreatNationalForest.Withfood,necessityandcookersloadedontothecar,thefamilysqueezedintothecar.Thecardoorclosed,heatwasshutoutside.Inthecar,Jared,Grady'syoungerbrotherwasplayingwithatoydinosaur,makinggreatnoise.Grady'smothertalkedexcitedlywithhisfather.Onsettlinginthecar,Gradyputontheearphoneandturnedonthemusic.Heneitherwantedtojoinhisbrothernorjoinedanytalk.Afterwhatseemedtobehours,thecarstoppedwheretheyheaded.Gradythrewdownhisbackpackandslammedthecardoor.“Thiswillbealengthyweek”hesaidunhappilytonooneinparticular.Helookedaroundthecampground.Hundredsoftallandgreenfirtrees,someastallaschurchtowers,coveredthemountainsidelikeagreencarpet.Thesunwouldbesettingsoon.Gradythoughtmaybetheheatwouldn'tbeunbearable.Butactuallynowinthemountain,thehotstickinessofJulywascloselyattachedtohim.Gradyhatedcamping,butitwassomethinghisfamilystucktoeverysummer.Hisfatherlikedcookingoveranopenair,tellingstoriesabouthowtosurvivethingslikebearattacksandbitesofbees.HismotherandJaredlikedtohikeandtakepicturesofanimals.Jaredhadacollectionofbugpicturesthathehadpinnedtothewallsinhishalfoftheirroom.GradythoughttheywerejustscaryandproofthatJaredwasastrangekid.Theysetupcamp—twotents,oneforhisparentsandoneforhimselfandJared.Whileeveryoneelsestartedpreparingdinner,Grady,lookingforsomeplacetocooldown,setoffforthenearbystream,whichwasdeepenoughtoswimin.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。AsGradygotclosetothestream,anadorablebearcubcaughthiseye._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Turningaround,hesawanangrybearmovingswiftlytowardshim.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“四步”搞定读后续写：1.读懂材料2.理清人物事件（6W-who？What？WhenandWhere？How？Why？）3．根据已给两个段首句，确定两段的续写内容：第一段：___________________________________________________________________第二段：___________________________________________________________________4.润色提升，完成故事续写,认真誊写到作文本上纯干货—惊险类读后续写精彩表达积累+专题提升训练答案StepI语料输入——夯实基础（一）关于“恐惧”“紧张’情感的精彩描写你掌握多少？1.英译汉惊慌失措充满了恐惧吓得半死害怕地恐惧地感到害怕从心底感到害怕不知所措2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语atalossbeseizedbyfearafloodoffearwellsupinsomebodybeseizedwithpanicfearcreepsoversomebodybehalfdeadwithfearinpanicinterror（二）烘托“恐惧”氛围的环境描写你会多少？1.英译汉2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语暴风雨之夜深埋在雪中难以忍受的热夜幕降临暴风刮的正猛空气寒冷刺骨一个偏僻的小村子人烟稀少的农村地区astormynightbeburiedinsnowunbearablyhotThenightsettledinThestormisatitsheightThereisanipintheairasmallvillageoffthemapthethinlypopulatedruralarea体现“恐惧”的动作描写你会多少？1.英译汉2.根据汉语意思默写英语短语心跳得厉害深吸一口气有点惊讶吓得透不过气来全身颤抖因害怕/恐惧而发抖因为害怕而哽咽脸色变白一跃而起挣扎着站起来heartbeatviolentlytakeadeepbreathcomeassomethingofasurprisebechokedbyfeartremblefromheadtotoeshakewithfear/terrorchokewithfearfaceturnspalejump/springtoone'sfeetstruggletoone'sfeetStepII句子操练单句操练Iturnedtohim,withhiseyesfulloffear.Myeyeswerewidewithhorror.Myheartwasbeatinghard.Awaveofpanicflooded/sweptoverme.Thesoundthrewmeintoapanic.Iwalkedupthestairswithmykneestrembling.Thesoundthrewmeintoapanic.Iwasoutofbreathwithfear.Iwasfrightenedatthesightofthesnake.Theunexpectedandsuddenchangemademeataloss.Ishookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.2.一句多译——提升单句表达力（1）Atthesightofthesnake,thegirlfelt①herchesttightenedwithfear.②herheartracedwildlyinherchest.③acoldwentupherback.2）①Aburstofhorrorseizedmetotally,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.②Iwastotallyheldbyhorror,unabletomoveaninch.③Overwhelmed/Heldcompletelybyhorror,Icouldhardlymoveaninch.3）①Standingattheedgeofthecliff,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.②Standingattheedgeofthecliff,Ifeltbutterfliesinmystomachandmykneesfeltweak.③Istoodattheedgeofthecliffwithmyheartinthroatandmypalmssweating.StepIII语篇输出学生佳作赏析：AsGradygotclosetothestream,anadorablebearcubcaughthiseye