冲刺讲义10指导写作话题讨论类专项训练-2022年新高考英语二轮总复习

编者小注：本专辑专为2022年上海新高考英语二轮总复习及1月春考准备。说说编写思路：版块一：冲刺讲义10讲，注重方法性学习，对于知识的拆解全面到位，选题主要根据上海官方公布的近五年级春秋考真题试题为主，近两年一二模测试及今年最新期中试题为辅。版块二：专练8讲，注重常考题型，高频考点的训练，数十篇选材均选于近两年上海高三四校、八金刚及十三名校之真题版块三：模拟满分卷4套，供大家在完成以上讲练后进行整体测试，满分140分。希望助上海的莘莘学子在求学路上一臂之力。我们是赢未来学科培优工作室，专注上海地区资料研发，烦请广大一线教师提出宝贵意见，谢谢。20212022学年上海市高三英语二轮复习讲义10话题讨论类写作学习目标1，掌握讨论类作文的写作步骤2，掌握讨论类作文的句式3，掌握作文词汇教学内容进门小练笔上海名媛拼单事件引发热议，请你谈谈对此事的看法精讲精练讨论类作文写作结构:第一段：一句话写清背景+一句话表明立场。第二段：论证自己的观点，论证方法有正反对比论证，举例论证等。第三段：用总结或提醒的方式回归话题。【例题精讲】19年秋考题VI.GuideWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现了这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下：1.介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容；2.针对此事自己的态度以及理由。第一步：列提纲第一段：背景：__________________________________________________________________________观点：_________________________________________________________________________参考思路：背景：chargedomestictourists5dollarswhileforeigners15dollars观点：unfair，thepriceforticketsshouldbefair第二段：理由：1，_______________________________________________________________________2,________________________________________________________________________3,________________________________________________________________________参考思路：1，itattractsmoretourists，maketravelingthrive;2，bringjobsandconsumption,improveeconomy;2，protecttheoldhistoryanddisplaytheancientcity;第三段：总结（对观点的升华）总结：___________________________________________________________________________参考思路：notonlyimprovetourismbutalsoprotecttheancientcity第二步：思考主体段落的思路拓展：第一式：________________________________________________________________________第二式：__________________________________________________________________________第一式：分析原因：overseatouristswillbemorewillingtotravelhere第二式：分析结果：theimproveconsumptionandincreasedjobswillbenefiteconomy第三步：组织成句子第一段：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考思路：背景句：theticketpricesoftheancientcityfordomestictouristsisat5dollarswhile15dollarsforoverseasguests.观点句：Istronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.第二段：First：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What’smore：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lastbutnotleast:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考思路：Firstly,manyforeignersarewillingtovisittheancientcitybutwillfeeldiscriminatedanddrawbackwhenbeingchargedhigherpricethanthelocal.fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasingpetitivetravelingmarket.What’smore,moretouristsbringmoreconsumptionandmorejobs,which,withoutdoubt,willmakelocaleconomythrive.Another,researcherswillhavemoremoneydeeplyexploringthehistoryoftheancientcityanddisplaytheolddayswithnewtechnology.Therefore,wecanappreciatethepastbeautifulsceneryoftheancientcity.第三段：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BasedonwhatIstatedabove,thefairpricewillbenefitmoretouristsandtourisms.Notonlyitattractsmoretouristsbutalsodisplaysitsbeautifulscenery.Whatmattersmostisthatithasaprehensiveinfluenceonourpresentdaysandconstructsnewrelationshipbetweenhumansandtheenvironmentofancientcity.第四步：成文DearEditor,Asanhonestreaderofyourtravelmagazine,itisapitytoreadthenewsthattheticketpricesofanancientcityfordomestictouristsareat5dollarswhile15dollarsforoverseasguests.Iamwritingtostronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.Firstly,manyforeignersarewillingtovisittheancientcitybutwillfeeldiscriminatedanddrawbackwhenbeingchargedhigherpricethanthelocal.fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasingpetitivetravelingmarket.What’smore,moretouristsbringmoreconsumptionandmorejobs,which,withoutdoubt,willmakelocaleconomythrive.Another,researcherswillhavemoremoneydeeplyexploringthehistoryoftheancientcityanddisplaytheolddayswithnewtechnology.Therefore,wecanappreciatethepastbeautifulsceneryoftheancientcity.BasedonwhatIstatedabove,notonlywillthefairpricebenefitmoretouristsbutalsohaveaprehensiveinfluenceonourpresentdayseverlastingdevelopmentoflocaleconomyandtourism,constructingnewrelationshipbetweenhumansandtheenvironmentofancientcity.Iwillhighlyappreciateitifyoucanreplytomeassoonaspossible!Yourfaithfully,LiMin句式总结：1,Asanhonestreaderofyourtravelmagazine2,Iamwritingtostronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.3,fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasingpetitivetravelingmarket.4,which，withoutdoubt,willmakelocaleconomythrive.5,BasedonwhatIstatedabove,…6,notonlywillthefairpricebenefitmoretouristsbutalsohaveaprehensiveinfluenceon…【巩固练习】【教学建议】巩固练习部分在理科对应变式练习，文科对应同类篇章。巩固练习必须和例题保持同一知识点，建议巩固练习题目设计不要超过3题，题目建议是中高考常考精典例题，从精品题库中选取，题型不限。VI.WritingDirections:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明启中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由（信的格式已给）。第一步：列提纲第一段：背景：__________________________________________________________________________观点：_________________________________________________________________________参考思路：背景：friendLinandevelopaAppofsharingclothes观点：willingtoshareclothesontheApp第二段：理由：1,_______________________________________________________________________2,________________________________________________________________________3,________________________________________________________________________参考思路：1，buildtherelationshipbetweenmeandmyclothesmates;2，peoplecanweardifferentclothes;3，makefulluseofclothes;第三段：总结（对观点的升华）总结：___________________________________________________________________________参考思路：notonlybenefitothersandmebutalsorealizeclothes’value.第二步：思考主体段落的思路拓展：第一式：________________________________________________________________________第二式：__________________________________________________________________________第三式：__________________________________________________________________________第一式：分析原因：sharethesamehappinessofwearingthesameclothes,emotionallyconnectedwithsomeone,probablydeepentherelationship;第二式：分析结果：spendinglessmoneyonclothes;第三式：举例说明：peoplebuydifferentclothesfordifferentoccasions.第三步：组织成句子第一段：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考思路：背景句：Hearingthatyouplantodevelopanewappofstudentssharingclothes,Ifeeltrulyproudofyournovelidea.观点句：Personallyspeaking,Iamwillingtosharemyclothesonyourapp.Thereasonsareasfollows.第二段：First：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What’smore：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lastbutnotleast:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考思路：Tobeginwith,itwillbewonderfulformeifIlearnthatsomeonethatIbarelyknowofcansharemyhappinessofwearingmyclothes.Feelinglikeyouareemotionallyconnectingsomeoneinyourclothes,Imaynaturallywishtoknowmoreaboutthatparticular“someone”andprobablyfurtherdeepenourrelationship.Intheend,agoodfriendshipbetweenmeandmyclothesmatemightbebuiltbasedonourmonclothes.What’smore,ifotherstudentscantrymyclothesthroughtheapp.Inturn,Ialsocantrytheirnewclothes.Therefore,studentscanweardifferenttypesofclotheswithoutactuallyspendinganymoney.What’smoreimportantisthatsharingmyclotheswilltakefulluseofthem.Intoday’smaterialsociety,therearesomanyparentswhopreparelotsofclothesfortheirbelovedchildrenfordifferentoccasions,suchasadressfortheparty,gymsuitforindoorsports.Moreover,theclothescanonlyrealizetheirtruevalueaftertheyareputonaperson’sbody.第三段：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BasedonwhatIstatedabove,notonlydoessharingmyclothesonyourappbenefitothersandmebutalsorealizethevalueofclothes.第四步：成文DearLiNan,Hearingthatyouplantodevelopanewappofstudentssharingclothes,Ifeeltrulyproudofyournovelidea.Personallyspeaking,Iamwillingtosharemyclothesonyourapp.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,itwillbewonderfulformeifIlearnthatsomeonethatIbarelyknowofcansharemyhappinessofwearingmyclothes.Feelinglikeyouareemotionallyconnectingsomeoneinyourclothes,Imaynaturallywishtoknowmoreaboutthatparticular“someone”andprobablyfurtherdeepenourrelationship.Intheend,agoodfriendshipbetweenmeandmyclothesmatemightbebuiltbasedonourmonclothes.What’smore,ifotherstudentscantrymyclothesthroughtheapp.Inturn,Ialsocantrytheirnewclothes.Therefore,studentscanweardifferenttypesofclotheswithoutactuallyspendinganymoney.What’smoreimportantisthatsharingmyclotheswilltakefulluseofthem.Intoday’smaterialsociety,therearesomanyparentswhopreparelotsofclothesfortheirbelovedchildrenfordifferentoccasions,suchasadressfortheparty,gymsuitforindoorsports.Moreover,theclothescanonlyrealizetheirtruevalueaftertheyareputonaperson’sbody.BasedonwhatIstatedabove,notonlydoessharingmyclothesonyourappbenefitothersandmebutalsorealizethevalueofclothes.Yours,LiHua句式总结：1,Hearingthatyouplantodevelopanewappofstudentssharingclothes,Ifeel…2,itwillbewonderfulformeifI…3,Feelinglikeyouareemotionallyconnectingsomeoneinyourclothes,Imaynaturally…4,What’smoreimportantisthat….5,Inturn,Ialsocantrytheirnewclothes…讨论类作文的句式总结：引出背景Wearediscussing/havediscussedwhether…ornot….Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionon".inourclass/inthenewspaper.Nowthereisamonphenomenonthat(同位语从句)Withthedevelopment/improvement/increase/popularityof…,alotofpeople…Althoughsomemanypeoplethink…，Iprefer…(转于从句，转折)Thereisatendencythat….Asarecentinvestigation/surveypointedout,….Thereisagrowingconcernabout….Theabovepicturereveals/indicatesthat.,anditisamonphenomenon….Asweknow,itiswellknownthat…,whatisknowntousallisthatAsiswellknown,itiswidelyacknowledgedthat…Thereisnodoubt…Thereisnodenyingthat…Itisobviousthat….表示不同人的观点Everycoinhastwosides.isnoexception.Foronething,….foranother.…..Justlike.....hasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.引入他人的观点为自己的观点作铺垫Somepeoplethink",othersholdtheview.Somearefor.therestareagainsttheopinionthatitiswidely/monlyacceptedthat…/Anideawidely/monlyacceptedby...isthat….Themajorityseemstogetusedtotheviewthat…Ifitwereleftmetodecidewhether...,Iwould,withouthesitation,choseto/Iwouldprefertheformerto…Itisdifficultfortomakeachoicewithoutcarefulconsideration/discussion.However,Iwillchosebecause,atleast,itis…总结Itcanbeconcludedthat.,accordingto.…above…Fromwhathasbeenstatedabove,wecaninfer/concludedrawaconclusionthatInmyopinion,IaminfavorofPersonally,Iprefer.lamfullyconvincedthat…当堂检测2017年春考题VI.GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑期将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会。李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。你要写一封回信，内容包括：1.你对此事的明确态度；2.你的理由。参考答案：Possibleversion1DearLiHongIhaveheardthatyouhavegotachancetoattendanoverseasexchangeprograminBritainfortwomonthsthissummerandIamhappyforyou.However,youarefacedwithadilemmaofwhetheryoushouldpayaheavypriceforacmodationofferedbythehostordovoluntaryworkinanursinghomefortheagedinexchangeforfreeacmodation.Personally,Iremendyoustayinanursinghousenotonlybecauseofitsfreechargebutalsofortwootherreasons.First,volunteeringinanursinghousefortwomonths,youcanimproveyourabilitytolookafteryourselfandothers.Beingtheonlychildinyourfamily,youarealwayssparedthetroubleofdoingallthoseboringandtiringchores,sodoingvoluntaryworkservesasagoodopportunityforyoutobeemoreindependent.Notonlywillyouneedtotakegoodcareofyourself,butyouwillalsohavetocatertotheneedsoftheelderlyaroundyou.Throughthisuniqueexperience,Iamsureyouwillbeeamatureadult.AnotherequallyimportantreasonisthatyoucangetclosetothelocalBritisholdpeopleandthuscanhavearoughpictureofthecultureandsocialconditionsthere.Ithinkthepurposeoftheexchangeprogramshouldnotbelimitedtoacademicissues.Instead,intakingcareofandmunicatingwiththeseseniorpeoplewithrichlifeexperience,youcanexpandyourhorizonsandgaininsightintoBritishcustomsandculture,whichyoucannotreadfrombooksAllinall,Ifavorthefreeacmodationinanursinghousebydoingvoluntarywork.Anyway,itstillfallsonyoutodecidewhichplantochoose.WishyouasuccessfulandmeaningfultripYours,WangreiPossibleversion2ItissaidthatyouwillgoabroadtoEnglandforatwomonthoverseasmunicationactivityinthissummervocation.Ihearthatyouarehesitatingwhethertospendhigherpricechoosingarrangeddormitoryortospend30hourseverymonthservingtheoldtogetafreeliving.Inmyopinion,Ithinkyoushouldchoosethefirstone.Ifyouchoosethesecondoption,youwillusetoomuchtimetodoserviceinsteadofstudyingthelocalculture.Althoughmunicationwiththeoldcangetalotoflivelyexperienceandavoidmaymistakesinlife,yourmostimportantresponsibilityistolearnhowoverseasstudentsstudyandwhattheywilllearn.Arrangedroomcansaveyoutimeandhavemorechancestolivewithpeerswhomayhavethesameinterestwithyou.Bythis,youcanmakealotofyoungfriendsandifyouareintroubleinfuture,theymaygiveyousomesuggestionsandahelpinghand.IwishthatyouwouldtakemyadviceandI’mwaitingtohearfromyou.Yours,WangreiVI.GuidedWriting:Directions:WriteanEnglishpositioni