英语外研复习教案：专题技能突破写作之记叙文

学必求其心得，业必贵于专精学必求其心得，业必贵于专精学必求其心得，业必贵于专精专题技能突破(36）写作之记叙文【技能讲解】记叙文一般有以写人为主和写事为主两种。写作过程中要注意：1.所写内容要包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加；2。注意时态的正确使用.描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣爱好等常用一般现在时，描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历或事迹常用过去时。记述发生过的一件事常用过去时。典例剖析假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动，请根据写作要点并参考图画内容,为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。写作要点:1．活动的策划；2。教室的布置；3．活动的内容;4.你的感想。注意：1．短文词数不少于100;2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数;3．可根据情况增减细节,详略得当；4．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。MsLi，ourEnglishteacher，musthavefounditstrangeonTeachers’Day：shedidnotreceiveasinglegreetingcardfromusstudents.Shewouldhaveneverthoughtacompletesurprisewaswaitingforher.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________［范文]Ms_Li，_our_English_teacher，_must_have_found_it_strange_on_Teachers'_Day:_she_did_not_receive_a_single_greeting_card_from_us_students._She_would_have_never_thought_a_complete_surprise_was_waiting_for_her。AsTeachers’Daywasapproaching，ourclassdecidedtoholdapartytocelebratetheimportantdayforachangethisyear.OntheafternoonofSeptember10，someofusdecoratedourclassroomwithpaperflowersandballoons,andotherswenttobuycakes,drinksandfruits。①Theblackboardwasdecoratedwithbeautifulwords，whichread“HappyTeachers’Day！"Enteringtheclassroom,MsLiwassurprisedtofindwewerestandinginline,clappinghandsandsayingloudly“HappyTeachers'Day！"②WangHua,ourmonitor,presentedherwiththepreparedflowers.SomeofthegirlssangsongsforMsLi，andthreeboysshowedtheirKungfutalent。Beforeweleft,weenjoyedanewEnglishsongbyMsLi.MsLispentawonderfultimewithus，butweknowthatwecannotthankherenoughforallherhardworkandguidance。③［解析］①and连接并列句，“someofus.。.,andothers。。."有一些人用剪纸和气球装饰教室，另一些人去买蛋糕、饮料和水果.②entering作状语，比whensheentered更显高级，clapping和saying又一次使用了现在分词作状语,使句子简洁但生动。③“cannotthankherenough”怎么感谢她都不为过，表达了对老师的感激。技能演练Sunday，January12SnowyThismorning，whenIlookedoutofthewindow,Iexcitedlyfounditwassnowingheavily。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Sunday,_January_12SnowyThis_morning,_when_I_looked_out_of_the_window，_I_excitedly_found_it_was_snowing_heavily.Attractedbythebeautifulsight,Idecidedtogoouttotakesomephotos.Thesnowfinallystoppedatnoon，andIcouldn’twaittogooutsidewithmycamera.AsIwalkedonthepathinfrontofourbuilding,Isawaboysuddenlysliponthesnow。coveredground。ItwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedwhatIshoulddo.Immediately,Iranbackhometogetabroomandstartedtosweepthepath.IworkedsohardthatIsweatedalot.Anhourlater,thethicksn