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Sarah,ahighschoolstudent,wasalwayseagertoparticipateineveryactivityhappeninginschoollife,andsheoftenpersuadedherbestfriend,Anthony,tojoinher.Oneday,SarahsawaposterannouncingtheannualGreatBake-offChallenge.Excitedly,sheexplainedtoAnthonyhowthewinnerwouldbegrantedabakingmasterclasswiththewell-knownbaker,ChefBella.BothSarahandAnthonylovedbakingandidolized(崇拜)chefBella,whosecookingshowwaspopularacrossthecountry.However,theyrealizedthecompetitionwouldbetoughastheirschoolhaditsshareoftalentedbakers.Despitethis,Sarahsuggestedthattheycombinetheirstrengthstoparticipateasateam.Anthonyagreed,andtheystartedthejourneytowintheGreatBake-offChallenge.SarahandAnthonystartedbyshortlistingtheirstrengths:Sarahwasskilledatconstructinganddecoratingcakes,whileAnthonywasgoodatdevelopingdeliciousflavors.Theyspentweekends
brainstorming,testing,andperfectingtheirbakingrecipes,transformingSarah'sfamilykitchenintotheirveryownbake-offbattleground.Asthedateofthecompetitiongotcloser,theygrewmoreanxious.Theyevenhadafewargumentsaboutthecake'sdesignortheflavorcombination,buttheyquicklyresolvedtheirdisagreementsandcontinuedtoworktogetherasateam.ThedayoftheGreatBake-offChallengefinallyarrived.SarahandAnthonywalkedintotheschoolhall,theirheartspoundingwithamixofanticipationandfear.Thesetuphadmultipleworkstations,eachequippedwithanoven,amixer,andbasicbakingtools.Theparticipantsweregiventhreehourstocompletetheircakes,afterwhichthejudgeswouldevaluateeachcreationbasedontasteandoriginality.Thecountdownbegan,andthecouplesprungintoaction.Anthonyworkedonthecomplexflavorcombinations,whileSarahstartedbuildingthecake'simpressivestructure.Duringtheintensity,theycouldn'thelpbutstealaglanceattheothercompetitors,admiringtheiropponents’skillsandcreativity.However,theyremainedfocusedontheircreation,supportingandencouragingeachotherthroughouttheprocess.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thejudgesbegantheirroundoftastingandassessments._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意高中生Sarah热衷于参加学校活动,她拉着好友Anthony一起参加学校一年一度的烘焙大赛。获胜者能得到知名烘焙师ChefBella的大师课。他们知道竞争激烈,但决定发挥各自优势组队参赛。赛前他们利用周末研究食谱,虽有争论但都能迅速化解。比赛当日,现场有多个配备齐全的工作站,参赛者需在三小时内完成蛋糕,由评委根据味道和创意评判。比赛中,他们分工协作,在专注自己作品的同时也关注对手。五要素分析人物:Sarah、Anthony及其他参赛选手、评委。时间:从看到烘焙大赛海报开始,到比赛当天。地点:学校,包括Sarah家厨房(准备阶段)和学校礼堂(比赛现场)。起因:对烘焙的热爱以及渴望赢得与知名烘焙师学习的机会。经过:组队、准备、参赛过程中的协作与小插曲。结果:完成作品,等待评委评判。几处伏笔及续写中的回应伏笔:比赛竞争激烈。回应:他们在比赛中看到对手的实力,更专注于自己作品,通过努力使作品有竞争力。伏笔:评委将根据味道和创意评判。回应:文中描述他们在味道和创意上精心准备,等待评委评判结果。续写要点第一段情感线:紧张又期待,完成作品后的如释重负和对结果的忐忑。故事线:详细描述完成的蛋糕外观,展现他们对作品的满意,同时提及其他参赛者作品的优秀,增加紧张感。第二段情感线:极度紧张,对评委评价的关注与担忧。故事线:描述评委品尝和评价的过程,着重于他们的表情和动作,突出Sarah和Anthony的紧张心情。主旨升华句Teamworkinacompetitioncanturnashareddreamintoatangibleachievement.Intheheatofacontest,friendshipandcollaborationarethesecretingredientstosuccess.Thejourneyofabakingchallengeisnotjustaboutwinning,butalsoaboutthebondforgedthroughteamwork.Whenpassionmeetsteamworkinacompetition,theresultisnotonlyacreationbutalsoastoryoffriendship.Abakingcompetitionrevealsthatwithcombinedefforts,friendscancreatesomethingbeautifulandachievetheirdreams.写作示范第一篇Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup.Theircakestoodoutwithitsuniquecharm.ThesmoothfrostinganddelicatedecorationswereatestamenttoSarah'sskill.Anthony'sflavorsseemedtowaftthroughtheair,invitingeveryonetotakeabite.Theylookedaroundandsawotheramazingcakes,buttheyfeltproudofwhattheyhadachieved.
Thejudgesbegantheirroundoftastingandassessments.SarahandAnthony'seyeswerefixedonthem.Everybitethejudgestook,everynodorwhisperamongthemmadetheirheartsrace.Theysawthejudgeswritedownnotes,andtheyprayedthattheirhardworkwouldshinethroughandearnthemthetopprize.第二篇Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup.Theircakewasamasterpiece.Thetierswereperfectlyaligned,andthecolorsblendedharmoniously.Itwasavisualdelightthatdrewmanyeyes.Astheyaddedthefinaltouches,theywerefilledwithasenseofaccomplishmentdespitethenervousness.
Thejudgesbegantheirroundoftastingandassessments.SarahsqueezedAnthony'shandtightly.Thejudgessampledeachcakemethodically.WhentheyreachedSarahandAnthony'screation,theduowatchedintently.Thejudges'expressionswereinscrutableastheytasted,leavingSarahandAnthonyontenterhooks,waitingfortheverdict.范文:Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup.Theytookastep
backandstartedadmiringtheir
accomplishment.It'sanextraordinaryfive-layercakewithanincrediblemixofflavorsandimpressivedecorations,
displayingtheirbeautifuljourney
togetherasfriends.Drawinginspirationfromtheiridol,ChefBella,theysoughttocreatenotjustacake,butagreatworkofart.Withdustedfaces
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