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浙江1月：人与自我（与队友互助完成任务）浙江6月：人与社会（参加社区服务）新高考读后续写语篇类型以记叙文为主，叙议结合为辅。语篇材料通常具有正能量且通俗易懂，故事线索逻辑性较强。新高考主题均选自人与自我、人与社会、人与自然。内容包括个人成长类、逆境脱困类；善举助人类、社会亲情友爱类、人与动物类、趣事回忆类等等。主要考查动作描写，环境描写，语言描写和情感描写。读后续写是高中英语一个重要的组成部分,其中情绪描写是所有描写手法中占比例最大的一项。考查要点与应对策略‌高考英语读后续写是一种综合性较强的题型，‌既考查了考生的语言基础知识，‌又考查了其综合运用语言的能力、‌创造力和想象力。‌因此，‌考生需要在备考过程中注重多方面能力的提升和训练。‌高考英语读后续写作为一种新题型，‌其考查特点主要体现在以下几个方面：‌1.综合语言运用能力：‌读后续写要求考生在阅读理解的基础上，‌将所获取的信息进行整合，‌并通过写作表达出来。‌这既考查了考生的阅读理解能力，‌也考查了其语言表达能力，‌包括词汇、‌语法和句式的运用。‌2.创造性与想象力：‌读后续写通常提供一篇不完整的故事，‌要求考生根据已有情节进行合理想象，‌续写故事的高潮或结局。‌这要求考生具备一定的创造性和想象力，‌能够构思出既符合逻辑又新颖有趣的故事情节。‌3.逻辑性与连贯性：‌续写的内容需要与原文情境融洽，‌保持人物性格、‌故事情节的一致性，‌同时上下文之间要衔接自然、‌连贯。‌这要求考生具备较强的逻辑思维能力，‌能够准确把握原文的脉络和走向。‌4.文化意识与价值观：‌读后续写所提供的语篇材料一般是具有正能量且故事性较强的文章，‌主题往往涉及人与自我、‌人与社会、‌人与自然等。‌考生在续写过程中需要体现积极的世界观和价值观取向，‌这有助于培养其文化意识和正确的价值取向。‌5.评分标准与要求：‌读后续写的评分标准通常从内容、‌词汇、‌语法和语篇结构三个方面进行考虑，‌具体包括续写内容的质量、‌完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度；‌所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、‌恰当性和多样性；‌上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性等。‌同时，‌还会关注词数、‌拼写和标点符号等细节问题。‌‌为了做好读后续写题，‌考生需要在平时注重积累语料库，‌增强语篇分析能力，‌加强思维训练和自主创造能力的培养。‌同时，‌还需要多读范文，‌积累有效的语言素材，‌提升语言表达的质量。读后续写三原则：原文一致原则内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，语言表达风格一致。2.曲折性原则故事情节应跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。3.正能量原则故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法等等。‌读后续写情感描写常用的表达情感描写常见词汇写作积累与“神态描写”相关的表达1.脸上激动的表情:anexpressionofexcitementonone'sface2.坚定的眼神:adeterminedlook3.满足的微笑/神情:asmile/lookofsatisfaction4.灿烂的微笑:abrilliantsmile5.拉着长脸:pullalongface6.怒视某人:glareatsb.7.极度愤怒的一眼:alookofburninganger8.因愤怒而颤抖:tremblewithanger9.一丝微笑浮上她的脸庞。Asmilefloatedonherface.10.她眼含泪水。Hereyeswerefilledwithtears.话题句式：Happiness&Joy幸福和快乐Hesatbesideher,withherhandinhis.Hewastriumphantlyhappy.他坐在她身旁,握着她的手,充满胜利的喜悦。Herheartwasglowingwithaspecialhappiness.她的心中洋溢着一种特殊的快乐。Shethoughtofhimwithpleasure.Shehadhappymemoriesoftheirchildhood.她开心地想起他。对于他们的童年,她有着愉快的记忆。Excitement激动Theboystoppedshort,hisheartthumpingwithexcitementandanticipation.男孩停住了脚步，他的心怦怦直跳，充满了兴奋和期待。Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因兴奋而显得容光焕发。Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。Herheartwasbeatinglikeafreedbird'sassheleaneddownandgatheredthegiftstoherbreast.当她俯下身子将礼物抱在胸前时，她的心就像获得自由的小鸟一样跳动着。Shame羞愧Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.她感到非常羞愧，脸上滚烫。Soashameddidshefeelthatshewasclosetotears.她羞愧得都快哭了。Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到非常羞愧，都能觉得血液涌上脸颊。Anexpressionofshamecrossedhisface.他脸上掠过一阵羞赧的神情。Shyness羞怯Ablushspreadfromhisfacetohisneck.他从脸到脖子全红了。Aredglowcametohercheek.一片红晕飞上了她的脸颊。Cathylookedupathimandgavehimashysmile.Cathy抬头看着他，羞涩地朝他微笑了一.下。Chriswasabitofanintrovertanddidn'thavemanyfriends.Chris性格有点内向，朋友不多。Hewaspainfullyshyinpublic,butpletelydifferentathomewithhisfamily.他在公共场合非常腼腆，但是他在家与家人在一起时却判若两人。Nervousness紧张Therewasatouchofnervousnessinhismanner.他的举止有点紧张。出淅没林Hisheartskippedabeat.他的心跳陡然停了一下。Herheartpounded,andshetriedtoseemsmallerbehindherdesk.她的心怦怦地跳，她恨不得变得小点儿，躲在桌子后。Herheartthrobbed;hercheeksburned.她的心怦怦直跳，满脸通红。Hisheartalmostleapedintohismouth.他的心几乎要跳出来了。HisheartwasbeatingSoharditseemedtoshakehim.dbefore.Hiskneesfeltshaky;hefelttheywouldbendandhewouldcollapsetothefloor他的膝盖发抖，他觉得双膝弯曲，就要瘫倒在地上了。Uneasiness不安Herpeaceofmindwasdestroyed.她平静的心情被破坏了。Someactorsneverhavebutterfliesbeforegoingonstage.有些演员上台前从不紧张。Ted'sangryoutburstsunsettledthewholefamily.Ted的突然发怒使得全家人都诚惶诚恐。ThedogsarejumpytonightIwonderifthere'ssomethingoutside.今天晚上，狗很不安一我怀疑外面是不是有什么东西。Surprise惊讶Hewasthrownintoastonishment.他大吃一惊。Iwaspletelytakenabackbyhisaggressiveandunreasonableattitude.他那挑衅、不讲理的态度让我大为吃惊。I'mrallysurprisedthatherememberedmybirthday我真的很吃惊，他竟然记得我的生日。Itamazesmethatnoonehasthoughtoftheideasooner.居然没有人早点想到这个办法，这令我吃惊。ItgavemeashockwhenIrealizedhowcloseIhadetobeingkilled.我意识到自己刚才差点儿没命，吓了一大跳。Anger愤怒Brian'sremarklefthisbossspeechlesswithanger.Brian的那番话气得老板哑口无言。Filledwithfury,Jimwasunabletoutterasingleword.Jim满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。Ginawasfuriouswithhimforleavingthebabyaloneinthehouse.Gina对他大发雷建，因为他把宝宝独自留在家里。Hecollapsedonachair,hischeeksturningnowwhitewithanger,nowredwithshame.他倒在一张椅子上，两颊一时气得煞白，一时羞恼得通红。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。EmilyWhitewasbornseventeenyearsagowithsomanybirthproblemsinherbody.Someofherorgans,bonesandmuscleswereoutofshape.Nooneexpectedhertosurvive.Shedidmakeitbutwithherstrangebodyfigure,everyonecouldrecognizeher,evenfromadistance.InEmilyWhite’shometown,therewasayearlyoutdoorperformanceintheschoolauditorium(礼堂).IthadbeenperformedforsomanyyearsandactuallyhadbeeoneofthemostimportanteventsoftheChristmasseasonformanyofthetown'speople.Manypeopletriedouteachyearforitbutsomanywereturnedaway.Itcouldonlyincludethemostexcellentpeopleinthefield.Emilyhadabeautifulsingingvoice.LastyearshewenttoMrs.Owenshermusicteachertoasktojoinintheperformance.Withoutlettinghersing,Mrs.OwenstookalookatEmily'sbodyandsaid,“Child,youjustdon'tfit.Everyonewouldstareatyouandthatwouldmakeyouunfortable.Itwouldmakethemunfortable,too."Withoutsingingasinglenote,Emilywassentbackthroughthedoorofthechoral(合唱队的)room.Hurtandupset,shedecidednevertotryoutagain.ButMrs.Owensthenretired.Thisyear,therecameanewmusicteacher,Mr.Butler.HeheardaboutEmilyandsuggestedthatshehaveatry.Emilydidn'twanttoberejectedagain,soshehesitatedalittleaboutit.AsEmilystruggled,thedoorwaspushedopenandMr.Butlercalled,“Emily,you'renext.”Althoughkindofnervous,EmilydidasMr.Butlertoldhertodo.Mr.ButlersatbythepianotoacpanyEmily.WhenEmilyfinishedhertestingperformance,shethankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbepostedonthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.Emilycouldn'tsleepthatnight.Shewassufferingfromthefeelingsthatshedidn'tfitand thegreatneedtobeaccepted.Bythenext morning,herstomachwaseveninpainbecauseofstress.注意:续写词数应为150左右。Paragraph1:Thenextday,Emilynervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Finally,thedayoftheperformancecame.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析初识文本重点词汇1.outofshape变形的;不健康,身体不好2.makeit幸免于难,渡过难关3.recognizev.认出4.performancen.表演5.tryoutfor...参加…选拔(或试演)6.turnaway把……拒之门外7.rejectvt.拒绝接受,不予考虑8.hesitatevi.犹豫,迟疑不决9.strugglevi.挣扎10.sufferfrom...因...受苦11.inpain感到疼痛12.acpany为...伴奏，陪伴预测情节发展第一段：第二天，Emily焦虑地看合唱室门上的名单（首句信息）Emily被选上——Emily心情复杂，兴奋之余流露出不自信Mr.Butler对Emily说了一番话，引导Emily接下来坚定信心，刻苦训练第二段:终于到了演出那天(首句信息)→Emily走上表演舞台后观众因她的外表而产生不好的反应→Emily不受影响,全身心投人表演→Emily演出成功,观众的态度发生转变→Emily战胜自己,完成蜕变。遣词造句1.在横线上填入适当的单词(1)toone's_____________让某人惊讶的是(2)_____________adj.神秘的(3)remain_____________保持冷静(4)withallone's_____________全心全意地(5)e____遇到(6)beused______sth.习惯于某事(7)____one'sbreath屏息(8)break_突然开始2.完成句子(9)她喜出望外,但又心存疑虑。Shewas_____________but_____________.(10)她使劲拍了一下自己的手,却发现自己并不是在做梦。Shehitherhandhard_____________shewasn'tdreaming.(11)然后Mr.Butler带着笑容从房间里走了出来。ThenMr.Butlerwalkedoutoftheroom_____________.(12)Emily深受鼓舞,坚定地点点头,保证为演出努力练习。Emilywas_____________,andshe_____________andpromisedtopracticehardfortheperformance.她一出现在舞台上,迎接她的是轻蔑的目光。_____________appearingonthestage,shewas_____________ scornfuleyes. (14)观众爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。Theaudience_____________thunderousapplause.(15)Mr.Butler被感动了，他给了Emily一个大大的拥抱。Mr.Butlerwasmoved,andhegaveEmily_____________.(16)那时,他知道Emily已经战胜了她自己。ThenheknewthatEmilyhad_____________.3.句式升级(17)用形容词作状语合并句(9)和句(10)____________________________________________________________________________________用倒装句改写句(11)____________________________________________________________________________________用过去分词作状语改写句(12)____________________________________________________________________________________(20)用so...that...结构改写句(15)____________________________________________________________________________________用it强调句强调时间状语改写句(16)____________________________________________________________________________________连句成篇Paragraph1:Thenextday,Emilynervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Finally,thedayoftheperformancecame.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、单句翻译（情感描写）1.他回到家里，又累又饿，不想说一句话。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.极度惊讶和困惑，我一篇接一篇地看着日记，每一篇表现的主题都很相似。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.里，听见他的话，我羞愧得低下头,一阵愧疚向我袭来,脸上发烫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________回想起那一幕，简非常后悔，忍不住哭了起来，泪水夺眶而出。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.跟老师讲出真相后，她不安地坐在座位上，手指交叉着，心跳得像打鼓一样。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.听到这话，Bob感到很尴尬，扭动并使劲揉搓他的手，似乎是想在这刺骨的冬日里取暖。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、读后续写（2023·广东阳江·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onemorning,Ann’sneighborTracyfoundalostdogwanderingaroundthelocalelementaryschool.SheaskedAnnifshecouldkeepaneyeonthedogandsheplannedtofinditsowner.Annagreed,butshesaidthatshecouldwatchitonlyforthedaybecausesheneededtotakecareofherson.Atthetime,hersonThomaswas10yearsold,whowasrecoveringfromaheartoperation.Later,Tracytookphotosofthedog,printedoff400FOUNDfliers,puttheminmailboxesandbegantofindthedog’sowner.Meanwhile,Annboughtsomepetsupplies,warninghersonnottofallinlovewiththedog.However,hersonwasfilledwithexcitementasheknewthathismothergotadogbackhome.Heplannedtoprovidethedogwithsomefoodeveryday.Fourdayslater,Annandhersonwerestilllookingafterthedog,whomtheyhadstartedtocallRiley.Duringthefourdays,theytookcareofthedogcarefully,providedsomefood,tookashowerandplayedwithit,andtheyhadalreadybeethebestfriends.Theeveningofthefifthday,whenAnnarrivedhomefromwork,thedogthrewitselfagainstthedoorandbarkedmadlyather.Assoonassheopenedthedoor,Rileydashedintotheboys’roomwhereAnnfoundThomassufferingfromaheartattack.RileyranovertoThomas,butassoonasAnnbentovertohelphim,thedogwentsilent.Thedoctorsaidifithadn’tetogethismotherintime,Thomaswouldhavedied.Luckily,withthedoctor’shelp,Thomascouldgohometomorrowmorning.“Mum,canwekeepitifwecan’tfinditsowner?Evenwecanaskforpermissionifwefindtheowner,”Thomasaskedhismotherwhentheycamebackhome.“Well,sincenoonehascalledtoclaimit,wedecidetokeepit,”hismotherreplied.Hearingthat,Thomaswasexcited.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。However,thenextday,AnnwastoldamannamedPeterrecognizedhislostdog.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Peter’scarcameandThomasstoodsilentlybesidehiscar.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2024·新课标Ⅰ卷·高考真题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：Para1IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.Flashinghimanotherapologeticsmile,Ibeggedhimforadelayedpayment.“IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I’llbelatefortheconferencewhichissoimportantthatIcan’taffordtomissit!”Iexplained.“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?Iwillcallyou