2024-2025学年新教材高中英语Unit5Revealingnature表达作文巧升格学案外研版选择性必修第一册

PAGEUnit5Revealingnature视察日志本单元写作项目是描写植物生长过程的视察日志。[基本框架]1．开头(beginning)——写作目的；2．主体(body)——植物成长的过程；3．结尾(ending)——你的感受。[常用词块]1．growthconditionoftheplant植物生长条件2．aholelargeenough一个足够大的洞3．puttheearthbackinthehole把土回填到洞里4．upto20feetinlength长度达20英尺5．selectproperseeds选择合适的种子6．alightapplicationoffertilizer运用微量的肥料[常用语句]精彩开头1．Doyouhaveanexperienceofplantingakindofplant？你有过种植植物的经验吗？2．Letmeshareyouwiththeprocessaboutmyexperienceofgrowingwatermelon?让我和你共享我种植西瓜的经验。3．Ioncelivedinthecountrysideandplantedsomegarlicinthegarden.我曾经在乡村住过，在菜园里种过大蒜。丰满主体1．Checktoseeifthereareanylocalrequirementsaboutdigging.检查当地是否有关于挖掘的要求。2．Takeasuitableshovelanddigaholethatis4－5timesthewidthoftherootball，morethanenoughsoitwillfit.用一把合适的铲子挖一个比球宽4－5倍的洞，足够大，这样就合适了。3．Usethegardencultivatortoloosenthedirtallaroundtheholetomakeiteasierfortherootstospread.用园艺耕耘机把洞四周的泥土松掉，使根部更简单散开。余味结尾1．Seeingtheflowers，Iwastooexcitedtoexpressmyfeelings.看到这些花，我太兴奋了不能表达我的感受。2．Ican'twaittoshowmygrandparentsthefruittreesIhaveplanted.我迫不及待地给祖父母看我种的果树。3．Nopains，nogains.不劳无获。假定你是正在英国留学的李华，在生物课上，老师要求同学们课后视察一种植物的生长过程，并用日志的形式将该过程记录下来。请你写一篇日志介绍草莓的生长过程，内容包括：1．幼苗(seedling)植入土壤；2．两周后：幼苗叶子变大，呈伞状；3．一个月后：长出花苞(bud)；4．两个月后：雌蕊(pistil)变成草莓，约5天后，草莓成熟(mature)。留意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[学生习作]Strawberriesaremanypeople'sfavouritefruit.Somepeoplewanttoplantstrawberries.Thegrowthprocessofthemisprettylong.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgrowintolargerumbrella­shapedleavesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoilfortwoweeks.Onemonthlater，smallbudsbegintoappear.Ittakesabouttwomonthsforthepistilstogrowintorealstrawberries.Fivedayslater，wecanenjoyfreshmaturestrawberries.点评：1．草莓生长过程记述详尽；2．结尾处没有涉及感受；3．句与句之间的连接还不太紧凑。[升格作文]Strawberriesaremanypeople'sfavouritefruitandsomepeopleevenwanttoplantstrawberriesbythemselves.Actually，thegrowthprocessofthemisprettylong.Hereismyobservationaboutthem.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgraduallygrowintolargerumbrella­shapedonesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoilfortwoweeks.Onemonthlater，smallbudsbegintoappear.Thefollowingprocessisalittlelonger，takingabouttwomonthsforthepistilstogrowintorealstrawberries.Andfivedayslater，wecanhavefreshmaturestrawberries.Isn'titinterestingtowatchthegrowthprocess?假如你是李华，请你写一篇短文，描述你种植绿豆(mung)的经验。1．购买种子，种在菜园里；2．几天后，绿豆长出地面；3．又过了几天，长出绿叶；4．给绿豆浇水，长得很好；5．绿豆不断生长，三个月后最终开花结籽。留意：1.词数：80左右；2．可适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：长出地面comeup；长叶子comeintoleaf；洒水sprinklewater；开花结籽gotoseed___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LastsummerIplantedsomemunginmygarden.FirstIboughtsomeseedsfromaseedman.ThenIsowedtheminthegarden.Afewdayslater，Iwenttothegardenandfoundthemungwerebeginningtocomeup.Anotherfewdayspassedandthemungwerecomingintoleaf.NowandthenIs