《课时把关练》英语选择性必修第四册RJUNIT 1 Part IV Writing 写作专练含答案

UNIT1SCIENCEFICTION第课时把关练PartIVWriting妙笔生花——读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。DreamforFuturePeoplewerebusyintheirownlaboratoriesonMars.Turtextoldme，“LetusgototheEarthtohaveacupofcoffee.”IlaughedforsuchachildishjokeandIalsojokinglyaskedhim，“IstherenocoffeeshoponMars?”Hereplied，“Ithasbuttheycan’tpreparecoffeeastastyasthatontheEarth.”However，forawhileIthoughtitwouldbebettertotakeacupoftastycoffeefromRamu’sCoffeeShoplocatedatourvillage，Kushmandi.Turtextoldmetoenteraroomnearhislaboratory.Weenteredthereandfoundthattheroomwasinternallycoatedwithsomematerialslikesponge.Turtexclosedthedooroftheroomwithaclap.Isawsomecolorfulbuttonsinsidetheroom.AfterafewsecondsIheardanotherclapandnoticedthatthedooropened.Turtexsaid，“Comewithme.”Iasked，“Where?”Hereplied，“NowweareatKushmandi.”Ishouted，“What?”WecameoutoftheroomandIastonishinglyviewedtheskyscrapersaroundme.Turtexsaidloudly，“What’swrongwithyou?Comewithme.”EventuallyweenteredacoffeeclubdesignedlikeaFiveStarRestaurant.SuddenlyInoticedadisplayboardwithanelectronictexton，“WelcometoKushmandi.NowyouareinfamousRamu’sCoffeeShop.EnjoythetasteofthebestcoffeeontheEarth.”Suddenlymanyhazyandcrazyquestionscametomymind.“Whatwasthenearbyroomofthelab?HowwasitpossibletotravelanenormousdistancefromMarstotheEarth?IsitlikeopeningmyfavoriteTVchannelwitharemote?HowdidthepoorcoffeestallofourvillageturnintoaFiveStarCoffeeClub?Inwhichcenturywerewe?”注意：续写词数应为150左右。Thinkingsuchhazythings，IfollowedTurtexintothecoffeeclub._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thewaiterbroughtustwocupsofcoffeeandleft. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________步骤一：品读语篇——抓住要点很关键前文概要审体裁：本文是一篇科幻故事，属于记叙文。审时态：一般过去时审前文大意以及要点：Turtex和作者从火星来到地球上喝咖啡，因为地球上的咖啡比火星上的咖啡更加美味。作者和Turtex进入了实验室附近的一个房间，瞬间来到了Kushmandi。结合故事的结尾，作者感到困惑，脑海中出现了许多问题。步骤二：戴着镣铐跳舞——研读首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情节①第一段所给首句：Thinkingsuchhazythings，IfollowedTurtexintothecoffeeclub.提示句1提到作者跟着Turtex走进了咖啡店，续写部分应该描写他们进入咖啡店之后发生的事情。②第二段所给首句：Thewaiterbroughtustwocupsofcoffeeandleft.提示句2提到服务员端来了两杯咖啡，然后离开了。本段应该描写作者品尝咖啡的过程。既然是科幻故事，续写的故事应该有一个出人意料的结尾。因此，如何构思一个巧妙而且符合逻辑的结尾也是本文续写的关键。步骤三：斟酌打磨——丰富续写词汇，生动描述情节话题激活词汇地点：laboratory，Mars，theEarth，coffeeshop，Ramu’sCoffeeShop，Kushmandi动作：haveacupofcoffee，laugh，ask，reply，prepare，taste，locate，notice心理活动：bebusyin，achildishjoke，jokingly，astoni-shingly句式翻译1.咖啡的香味扑鼻而来。（主谓状）_______________________________________________________________________________________2.我渴望立刻喝一杯！（主系表状）_______________________________________________________________________________________3.我仍然沉浸在那些模糊的问题中，我跟着Turtex坐在一张桌子旁边。（as引导时间状语从句）_______________________________________________________________________________________4.桌子上覆盖着奇怪的材料，我等待着享受地球上最好的咖啡。（and连接的并列句）_______________________________________________________________________________________5.咖啡太热了，我的嘴像是烫伤了。（主系表）_______________________________________________________________________________________6.最后我意识到我在Kushmandi的乡村医院而不是咖啡俱乐部。（宾语从句）_______________________________________________________________________________________步骤四：创造性表达——润色注重细节，句式再造升级1.把第2句升级为how引导的感叹句_______________________________________________________________________________________2.把第3句升级为过去分词短语作状语的句子_______________________________________________________________________________________3.把升级后的第3句和第4句再次升级为which引导的定语从句_______________________________________________________________________________________4.把第5句升级为so...that...句式_______________________________________________________________________________________5.把第6句升级为Itis...that...强调句型_______________________________________________________________________________________步骤五：高分在即——连句成篇，认真誊写并仔细检查Thinkingsuchhazythings，IfollowedTurtexintothecoffeeclub.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thewaiterbroughtustwocupsofcoffeeandleft. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________课时把关练PartIVWriting参考答案步骤三句式翻译1.Thedelicioussmellofcoffeerushedintomynose.2.Iwaseagertohaveacupofitatonce!3.AsIwasstillabsorbedinthosehazyquestions，IfollowedTurtexandsatbesideatable.4.Thetablewascoatedwithstrangematerials，andIwaswaitingtoenjoythebestcoffeeontheEarth.5.Itwastoohotanditseemedthatmymouthgotburnt.6.IfinallyrealizedthatIwasinourvillagehospitalatKushmandinotthecoffeeclub.步骤四1.HoweagerIwastohaveacupofitatonce!2.Stillabsorbedinthosehazyquestions，IfollowedTurtexandsatbesideatable.3.Stillabsorbedinthosehazyquestions，IfollowedTurtexandsatbesideatable，whichwascoatedwithstrangematerials，waitingtoenjoythebestcoffeeontheEarth.4.Itwassohotthatitseemedthatmymouthgotburnt.5.IfinallyrealizedthatitwasourvillagehospitalatKushmandithatIwasin，notthecoffeeclub.步骤五Thinkingsuchhazythings，IfollowedTurtexintothecoffeeclub.Thedelicioussmellofco