读后续写-环湖赛讲评 课件 高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

续写之环湖赛跑续写中的学、思、辨、达读原文，学内容和语言01PART011.Forme,itwasnormaltofeellostattheinter-camptrack.Fourcampsofkidswerereadytoleadtheirteamstoablueribbonandwintheday.Notme.Iwastoolittletobetheleaderandtooskinnytobeanathlete.IknewthisbythetimeIwastwelve,becausemycampcounselors（辅导员）andtheotherkidsremindedmeofiteverychancetheygot.Sowhenourcampneededafourthrunnerinthetwo-mileracearoundthelake,IknewIwasnoone’sfirstchoice.2.Ihidintheshadeofamapletreeastheycalledthenamesoftherunners,mybodytensedasIheardacounselorcall,“Fred!WhereisFred!Heisinthisrace!”ItwasBarry.Hespottedmeunderthetree.“Fred!Weneeda12-year-oldwhohasn’tbeeninothereventstorunthetwo-mile!”3.Hegavemeapushtowardsthestartingline.Havingnoconfidenceandtryingtosavemyselffromtheshameoftakingthelastplaceasfourcampswatched,Ipleadedwithhim.4.“ButIdon’tknowthewayaroundthelake!”5.“You’rein.JustfollowBill!”Barrysmiled.6.Billwasmyfriendandthefastestrunnerinourcamp.AndthenBarrysaid,“Whenyoumakeittothelaststretch（最后一程）onthefield,justthrowyourheadbackandrun.”7.Atthestartingline,IstoodnexttoBillandtrembled.8.“Onyourmark…Getset...”Theguncrackedandsixteenofustookoff.IstayedcloseonBill’sheels,alittletoocloseforBill,Iguess.Heshoutedatme,“Backoff!”9.Idid.Twoguyspassedme,butIkeptmyeyesonBill.10.Itwastiring.ThedistancewaswideningbetweenBillandme.Wemadetheturnfromthedustyroadontothemuddy,woodedtrailthatwouldgoaroundthelakebacktothefield.Throughthetrees,IsawBilltripoveratreerootandfall.Arunnerfromanothercamppassedhim.Paragraph1Inamoment,Billwasupagainandrunning.____________________________________________Paragraph2Ididn’tknowwhenIcrossedthefinishline._____________________________________________A.学内容(Getthemainidea)WhenplacetimepeopleeventFred(I),Barry(counselor),Bill(bestfriend)thetwo-mileracearoundthelakeatcampBarryaskedmetoparticipateinthetwo-mileracearoundthelakewithBill.Theracebeganbutunfortunately,wewerebehindandBilltrippedoveratreeroot..B.学语言(learnthelanguage)1.Forme,itwasnormaltofeellostattheinter-camptrack.Fourcampsofkidswerereadytoleadtheirteamstoablueribbonandwintheday.Notme.Iwastoolittletobetheleaderandtooskinnytobeanathlete.IknewthisbythetimeIwastwelve,becausemycampcounselors(辅导员)andtheotherkidsremindedmeofiteverychancetheygot.Sowhenourcampneededafourthrunnerinthetwo-mileracearoundthelake,IknewIwasnoone’sfirstchoice.2.Ihidintheshadeofamapletreeastheycalledthenamesoftherunners,mybodytensedasIheardacounselorcall,“Fred!WhereisFred!Heisinthisrace!”ItwasBarry.Hespottedmeunderthetree.“Fred!Weneeda12-year-oldwhohasn’tbeeninothereventstorunthetwo-mile!”ablueribbon优秀wintheday获胜tensev.(limbs)becometightandstiff紧绷定语从句3.Hegavemeapushtowardsthestartingline.Havingnoconfidenceandtryingtosavemyselffromtheshameoftakingthelastplaceasfourcampswatched,Ipleadedwithhim.4.“ButIdon’tknowthewayaroundthelake!”5.“You’rein.JustfollowBill!”Barrysmiled.6.Billwasmyfriendandthefastestrunnerinourcamp.AndthenBarrysaid,“Whenyoumakeittothelaststretch（最后一程）onthefield,justthrowyourheadbackandrun.”7.Atthestartingline,IstoodnexttoBillandtrembled.8.“Onyourmark…Getset...”Theguncrackedandsixteenofustookoff.IstayedcloseonBill’sheels,alittletoocloseforBill,Iguess.Heshoutedatme,“Backoff!”givesbapush推了某人一把thestartingline起跑线pleadv.乞求throwone’sheadback身体向前倾theguncracked.枪响了staycloseonone’sheels跟紧某人的脚步非谓语B.学语言(learnthelanguage)B.学语言(learnthelanguage)9.Idid.Twoguyspassedme,butIkeptmyeyesonBill.10.Itwastiring.ThedistancewaswideningbetweenBillandme.Wemadetheturnfromthedustyroadontothemuddy,woodedtrailthatwouldgoaroundthelakebacktothefield.Throughthetrees,IsawBilltripoveratreerootandfall.Arunnerfromanothercamppassedhim.woodedtrailtrailcoveredwithtrees树木繁茂的小路tripover(trippedtripped)绊倒读原文、首句、画线词，思情节和情感02PART02beginningclimaxending1.______2.______3.______4.______5.______A.Billgotupandrestarted.B.Icrossedthefinishline.C.BarryaskedmetojointherunnersandfollowBill.D.TheracestartedbutBilltrippedover.E.Atwo-mileracearoundthelakewastobeheld.F.Ourcampneededafourthrunner.6.______EFCDABBeforethegame:Ifelt_________clues____________________________________unconfident

Notme;toolittleto...tooskinnyto...;noone’sfirstchoice;hid;tensed;trembledDuringthegame:Ifelt_________clues____________________________________tiredstayedcloseonBill’sheels;keptmyeyesonBill;passed;tiring;widening;Afterthegame:Ifelt_______________clues_______________??读情节、情感变化，

辨主题、续文方向03PART03How?BeforethegameDuringthegameAfterthegameunconfidenttiredconfidentthemelovefriendshipchangeofmyattitudefiercecompetition构思语言，传情达意04PART04Para.1Inamoment,Billwasupagainandrunning.

Para.2Ididn’tknowwhenIcrossedthefinishline.Howwashiscondition?HowdidIfeelatthesightofBill’spersistence?WhatdidIdo?Bill带伤跑步--我受到激励--我奋起直追WhatdidIdoandhowdidIfeelafterreachingthefinishline?WhatdidBarryandBillsay?WhatdidIthinkoftheexperience?

（我)到达--(别人)祝贺--(我)感悟比赛中受激励l来自比尔的感动1.一看到比尔跌跌撞撞地前行着，膝盖仍在流血，我无比动容。

（on+doing一...就...）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.

尽管我能从他极其苍白的脸看出巨大的疼痛，Bill还是没有停下来。______________________________________________________________________________________________________3.正是他钢铁般的坚持和坚定的决心给了我额外的能量。（强调句)OnseeingBillstumbleforwardwithhiskneesstillbleeding,Iwasdeeplymoved.Itwashisironpersistenceandresolutedeterminationthatgavemeanextraburstofenergy.

DespitethehugepainIcouldtellfromhisextremelypaleface,Billdidn’tstop.比赛中受激励l来自巴里的提醒、激励

我突然想起巴里的话。

ThenBarry’swords______________________.(闪过我脑袋)

_______________________.(在我脑袋回响)flashedthroughtmyhead.

echoedinmyhead.Ø

加速1.快速跑v._________________比赛中坚持和努力raceeg.Iraced

forward.快速移动eg.Irushedforward.

迅速移动rushdarteg.Idartedtowardsthefinishline.飞奔zoomeg.Izoomed

passedBill.

快速移动whizeg.BarrycheeredasI

whizzed

by.

嗖嗖地快

速移动Ø

加速1.快速跑v._________________

比赛中坚持和努力eg.Ichargedoff,headingstraightforthefinishline.猛冲eg.Izipped

across

thewoodedtrail.

呼啸而过zipsprintshootchargeeg.Isprinted

forthefinishingline.冲刺Itookadeepbreathandshot

forward.冲Ø

加速2.加速____________(vt)____________(短语)

3.我全速往前冲。

Idashedforward___________________.

4.我以惊人的速度向终点冲去。Ichargedtowardsthefinishline________________.5.我以闪电般的速度向终点冲去。(比喻)Idartedtowardthefinishline___________________.

I...________________(像箭般)

I..._________________________(像正在加速的火车般)6.Iranasfastasmylegscouldcarryme.__________________________________比赛中坚持和努力acceleratespeedup/pickupspeedattop/fullspeedatanamazingspeedinlightningspeed

likeanarrow

likeaspeedingtrain

我飞快地跑着。比赛中坚持和努力Ø

坚持与努力1.咬紧牙关___________________(短语)2.拼尽全力___________________(短语)3.鼓起勇气___________________(短语)4.不遗余力做__________________(短语)5.Mythroatwasdry,chestwasburning,andIwas

____________

(喘气)butIdidn'tstop.6.Tough__________________(气喘吁吁),Ipushedon.(非谓语)7.Thelastfewmileswasablur.But____________(倒装)

最后几公里我感觉一片模糊，但我一直跑着。8.我深吸一口气，大喊一声，往前冲去。(三连动)I______________,_____________and_______________.puffingandpantingworkupmycourage/summonupmycourage/pluckupmycourage/musterupmycourage/gather...withallone’smightgritone’steeth(-tt)sparenoefforttodosthonIrangaspingforbreathtookadeepbreathletoutashoutsprintedforward9.环境+身体的阻力也没使我放弃Thescorchingsun(炙热的太阳)_________myface,andbeadsofsweats__________myvision,Iwasnearly_______________,yetIploughedon.ploughon:tocontinuedoingsththatisdifficultorboring.坚持做某事；苦撑bakingblurredsuffocated比赛中坚持和努力比赛后的如释重负1.我如释重负地舒了一口气。

_______________________________________

Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverme.welledupinsideme._______________________________________

（无灵主语）

Iletoutadeepsigh./Iheavedasighofrelief./Ifeltrelievedandsighed.heave:tomakeasoundslowly缓慢发出(声音)比赛后的喜悦鼓掌v.__________n.__________拍肩膀_____________________(短语)Thewholeteamwas_____________(非常高兴),especiallyBill.Thewholeplace__________________.(爆发出掌声和欢呼声)Thefield

_____________________________.(爆发出难以置信的欢呼)ThencameBill,whoslightlyquivered____________(高兴地),tookunsteadystepsforwardand______________________(热情地拥抱我)wildwithjoyburstoutclappingandcheeringexplodedwith

yellsofdisbeliefinexcitementhuggedmewarmly/gavemeawarmhugpatone’sshoulder(-tt)clap(-pp)/applaudapplause(U)比赛后内心反思我从没有想到我还能作为赛跑运动员完成全程。（倒装句）____________________________________________________________————————————————————————要不是比尔我不可能完成两公里的绕湖赛并且找到我的勇气的。(虚拟语气)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________突然意识到_________________________________thatthereisalwaysstrengthandconfidenceinsideus,andaslongaswepersevere,maintainhopeandpushforward,wecanfinallyreachthem.

NeverinmywildestimaginationdidIeverexpect

myselftocompletethewholeraceasarunner.Hadn’titbeenforBill/ButforBill,Iwouldn’thavemadet