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考点40应用文写作之建议信&求助信(核心考点精讲精练)1.高考真题考点分布年份试卷体裁话题题材内容2024新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷告知信学校生活介绍美术课的个人作品和感想全国甲卷演讲稿社会科技中国交通发展天津卷演讲稿社会生活低碳生活浙江卷征文投稿学校生活课间开展的运动2023新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷建议信学校生活给外教提建议全国甲卷征文投稿历史文化介绍中国历史人物全国乙卷征文投稿生活学习假期习得新技能天津卷申请信社会生活“中国工坊”活动浙江卷活动报道学校生活认识我们身边的植物2022全国卷乙卷征文投稿调查结果学习英语的状况全国卷甲卷征文投稿世界海洋日保护海洋新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷邀请信文化生活学校的电台访谈浙江卷邀请信学校生活图书馆开设了一个小组学习室天津卷视频文字稿学校生活社团活动2.命题规律及备考策略【命题规律】近3年命题规律:对中国传统文化种类的考查,既有有高度概括性的全面考查,也有针对某一具体文化现象的考查;体现个人成长与时代发展相融合;体裁上有:提纲作文;开放性作文;图表作文;看图作文;内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容。尽管对写作内容有限制,学生仍有较大的自由发挥空间(自己的感想),以展示自己的个性和创意【备考策略】熟练掌握各种应用文的基本构架;积累基本词汇和句式,尤其是简单基本句式,写好简单句;背诵优美的段落和范文,模仿高级句式和表达;加强审题(主题、时态)训练;练习书写,达到整洁美观的程度。【命题预测】预测2025年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活,以电子邮件和投稿为主,考查考生的解决问题能力。考点一、建议信必备基础知识:建议信通常是写给家人或朋友,对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议,或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,不是投诉信。观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。【思路点拨】
①首段:a.介绍自己,不要罗嗦;b.说明目的,注意语气。②主体:a.提出具体建议;b.首先肯定优点,再写改进内容,否则会变成投诉信;c.经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提到你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文。③尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,使对方易于接受。3.写作流程图【必备词汇】1.gve/offer
sb.some
advice(on) 给某人提建议2.ask
sb.for
advice 向某人征求意见3.as
follows 如下4.in
my
opinion/in
my
view/from
my
point
of
view
在我看来5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用6.take
part
in/participate
in... 参加7.follow/take/adopt
one's
advice 采纳某人的建议8.take
sth.into
account/consideration
把……考虑在内9.withregardto 关于;就10.putforward 提出11.in
this
regard/in
this
respect 在这点上/在这方面12.share
sth.with
sb. 与某人分享某事13.with
time
going
on
随着时间的推移14.Befacedwith 面临15.take
sth.seriously 重视;认真对待【万能句式】第一部分:说明写信的目的套语:1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2.IhavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.
Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。3.I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients(顾客).我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。4.
YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。5.I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。6.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。第二部分:介绍详情、说明原因套语:(1)它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlasttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeeches.(2)我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。Wewillstartat8:00amandarrivethereat9:00.(3)下午,我们会一起……Duringtheafternoon,we’ll...together.(4)记得带上水和午餐。Remembertotakewaterandlunchwithyou.(5)顺便说一下,你可以乘坐322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。Bytheway,youmaytakeBusNo.322anditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.(6)我知道你的母语是英语,还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。IknowyouareanativespeakerofEnglishandanEnglishteacher,andI,onbehalfofourschool,sincerelyinviteyoutobepartofthecontest.(7)既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。SinceyouaresoeagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.(8)我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。I’msurethatyouwillenjoyyourselfthere.第三部分:提出建议套语:我建议……I’dliketosuggestthat…MayIsuggestthat…?Inmyopinion…Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…Iamwritingtoadvise…IfIwereyou,Iwould…第四部分:希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复套语:1.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:有志者事竟成。2.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:
Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。3.Bestwishes!(给你)最美好的祝愿!4.
Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.
Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。5.
Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.
Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work!我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。6.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbesomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。【写作模板】模板①Dear________,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto________________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:________________(建议的内容).Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour________________(祝愿).YoursSincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).Hereareafewsuggestion(引出作者的建议).First,Itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)Asto__________,Isuggest_____________(需要具体到某一方面).Inaddition,_________(其他的建议).I’msure______________(预测可能的结果,给对方以行为的信心和决心).Ihope____________(表达愿望)。【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:(1)活动形式;(2)活动内容。注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJimHearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwillallfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议:suggestion→tip提供:offer→provide开展:carryout→conduct主题:theme→topic2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmydhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.拓展句:Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.(24-25高三上·重庆沙坪坝·开学考试)假设你是李华,你的英国好友Jack所在的学校计划组织学生来重庆旅行,请你给他写一封建议信。内容包括:(1)表示欢迎;(2)推荐景点(至少两个);(3)注意事项。注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJack,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJack,I’mthrilledtohearthatyourschoolisplanningatriptoChongqing!Iwholeheartedlywelcomeyoutomyhometown,whichisknownforitsuniqueculture,deliciousfood,andbreathtakinglandscapes.Isuggestedvisitingtwomust-seespots:HongyaCaveandCiqikouAncientTown.HongyaCaveoffersstunningviewsofthecity’sskylineandriver,especiallyatnightwhenit’sbeautifullylitup.CiqikouAncientTownprovidesaglimpseintoChongqing’srichhistoryandtraditionalculture,withitscharmingoldstreetsandlocalcrafts.What’smore,pleasenotethatChongqing’ssummercanbeveryhotandhumid.Makesuretostayhydrated,wearsunscreen,andcarryanumbrellaforbothsunandsuddenrain.Wishyouanamazingjourneyfilledwithwonderfulmemories.Enjoyyourtripandfeelfreetoreachoutifyouneedanymoreadviceorassistance.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jack写一封建议信,因为他所在的学校计划组织学生来重庆旅行。【详解】1.词汇积累激动的:thrilled→excited建议:suggest→recommend充满:befilledwith→befullof极好的:amazing→marvelous2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:What’smore,pleasenotethatChongqing’ssummercanbeveryhotandhumid.Makesuretostayhydrated,wearsunscreen,andcarryanumbrellaforbothsunandsuddenrain.拓展句:SinceChongqing’ssummercanbeveryhotandhumid,makesuretostayhydrated,wearsunscreen,andcarryanumbrellaforbothsunandsuddenrain.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’mthrilledtohearthatyourschoolisplanningatriptoChongqing!(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Iwholeheartedlywelcomeyoutomyhometown,whichisknownforitsuniqueculture,deliciousfood,andbreathtakinglandscapes.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)考点二、求助信求助信是一种写给朋友或机构的正式信件,请求他们提供帮助、支持或资金,以实现某个目标或完成某项任务。通常,求助信会详细说明请求帮助的原因、需要的具体支持以及如何使用这些支持。【思路点拨】
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容:1.表明写信目的,请求帮助。2.要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。3.希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚,并要向收信人表示感谢。【必备词块】1.have
trouble/difficulty(in)doing
sth.做某事有困难2.do
sb.a
favor/give
sb.a
hand给某人帮助3.ask
for
help/seek
for
help寻求帮助4.encounter
some
problems遇到一些问题5.be
busy/occupied/engaged
in
doing
sth.忙于做某事7.make
preparations
for.…为某事做准备9.put...in
use学以致用10.let
sb.down让某人失望11.overcome
the
fear
克服恐惧12.be
anxious/eager
to
do
sth./long
to
do
sth.渴望做某事13.take
the
trouble
to
do
sth.费心地去做某事14.offer
some
constructive
guidance提供一些有益的指导15.be
grateful/thankful/appreciative
to
sb.for
sth.因某事感激某人【万能句式】首段:请求帮助1.NowIamwritingtoaskyoutogivemeahand/domeafavor/lendmeahand.现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。2.Iamwritinginthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtodomeafavor.我希望你能帮我一个忙。3.Iwonderif
you
could
do
meafvour,thisisthefirsttimethatmyunclevisitsus.我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙,这是我叔叔第一次来访,所以我希望你能到机场接他。4.IwonderifyousomeChineseknotsforme.Imadethemmyselfwithredsilkthreads,clothandotherbmaterials.我想知道你是否能帮我出售一些中国结,这是我自己用红丝线、布等材料做的5.Wouldyouliketodomeafavortohavemydraftpolished?你愿意帮我润色草稿吗?中间段:描述具体困难1.1amencounteringthreeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Tobeginwith,…What’smore,…Whattroublesmemostis…我遇到的三个间题很困扰我,首先……另外……最困扰我的是……2.Unfortunately,I
find/feel
it
quite/extremelydifficult/hardtodowith(使用形式宾语)不幸的是,我觉得做某事十分/非常难。3.ltis
difficult/challenging
for
me
todosth.做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。4.Thave
trouble/difficulty/problems
(in)doing
sth.我做某事有困难。5.Domg
sth.is
another
terrible
headache
for
me.(使用动名词做主语)做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。6.I
find
myself
struggling
with
sth.(使用find复合结构)我发现自己做某事有困难。7.Faced
with
the
above
problems,I
am
anxious
to
get
your
help.Would
you
pleaseoffer
me
some
advice
on...?面对上述问题,我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。结尾段:希望得到帮助:1.Iwonderifcanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme?我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我,我真的很感激。2.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucanoffermesomenecessary/timelyhelp(give/lendmesomepractical/valuableadvice)如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助(给我一些实用的/有价值的建议)。我会很感激。常见困难:
【生活方面】
与人相处
get
along
well
with
my
classmates/
the
new
teacher
/
my
parents.和我的同学/新老师/父母相处
把握时间
arrange
and
make
good
use
of
my
everyday
time
for
valuable
things.
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
明确目标
know
the
purpose
of
my
life
and
the
destination
of
my
future
in
order
to
passionately
live
a
purpose-driven
life
everyday.
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标,以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
【学习方面】
不懂语法
have
trouble
in
mastering
the
advanced
grammar
rules
and
put
them
into
use
in
my
speaking
and
writing.
进步太慢
find
myself
making
progress
not
as
fast
as
before,
which
has
been
annoying
me
for
a
long
time.
精力有限
can’t
be
passionate
and
energetic
all
day
long
so
as
to
make
every
moment
meaningful
and
splendid.
【写作模板】模板①Dear______,Iamwritingtoformallyrequestto______(请求的内容).Thereasonfor_____________isthat_____________(给出原因).I___________,soI_____________(给出细节).Iwouldalsoliketorequest___________(提出进一步的要求).IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecaused.Thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,donothesitatetocontactmeat__________(电话号码).Ilookforwardtoafavorablereply.Yourssincerely,LiMing模板②Dear________,Mynameis_______________(自我介绍).I’mwritingalettertoyoutoaskforsomehelp.Ihavemetdifficultyin_______________(求助内容).First,Ifind___________(困难1).Besides,________(困难2).What’smore,__________(困难3).Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.Wouldyouliketo____________(委婉提出请求)?Inthemeanwhile,Ibegyouto(请求内容)sothat___________(请求目的).Also,Iwouldlikeyouto(请求内容).I’msurethatIcanmakegreatprogressin_____________(表达期待).Yours,LiHua(2024·江西吉安·模拟预测)假定你是校英语报的编辑李华。你校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”,请你给外教Johnson写封邮件,内容包括:1.请他推荐一部英文电影;2.说明推荐理由。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMr.Johnson,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Johnson,OurschoolEnglishnewspaperintendstosetupanewcolumn“EnglishMovieAppreciation”.Knowingthatyouareamoviefan,I’mwritingtoaskforyourrecommendation.ItiswidelyacceptedthatEnglishmoviescannotonlyhelpgreatlyimprovestudents’interestandacquisitionofthelanguage,butalsobroadenstudents’mindaswellasdeepenculturalunderstanding.Asamoviefan,youmusthaveseenalotofEnglishmoviesthatarebothinterestingandthought-provoking.Couldyoupleaserecommendonethatyouappreciatemost,andlistsomereasonsforit?I’msurestudentswilllikeit.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,学校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”,要求考生给外教Johnson写封邮件,请他推荐一部英文电影并说明推荐理由。【详解】1.词汇积累普遍地:widely→universally提高:improve→boost肯定的:sure→certain打算做某事:intendtodo→plantodo2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:OurschoolEnglishnewspaperintendstosetupanewcolumn“EnglishMovieAppreciation”.拓展句:OurschoolEnglishnewspaperintendstosetupanewcolumn,whosenameis“EnglishMovieAppreciation”.【点睛】【高分句型1】ItiswidelyacceptedthatEnglishmoviescannotonlyhelpgreatlyimprovestudents’interestandacquisitionofthelanguage,butalsobroadenstudents’mindaswellasdeepenculturalunderstanding.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)【高分句型2】Couldyoupleaserecommendonethatyouappreciatemost,andlistsomereasonsforit?(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)(最新模拟试题演练)Writing1(2024·河南郑州·模拟预测)假设你是郑州外国语学校高三学生李华,临近毕业,你们班的英语老师请每位同学给新高一学弟学妹写封英文邮件,邮件内容包括:1.你的建议;2.你的祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dearfellowstudents,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Dearfellowstudents,Congratulationsonbecomingapartofourwonderfulschoolcommunity.AttherequestofourEnglishteacher,I’mreachingouttoofferyousomeadviceonnavigatingyourtimehere.First,treasureeverymomentspentwithyourteachersandclassmates.Yourtimeherewillpassquickly,soseizetheopportunitytoforgemeaningfulandlastingconnections.Secondly,letgoofyourpastachievementsorfailures.Instead,focusonthetasksathand.Itisthededicationandeffortyouinvestnowthatwillshapeyourfuture.Finally,explorewhattrulysparksyourpassion.TakeEnglishlearningforinstance.Whetherit’swatchingmoviesorreadingnovels,trytofindwhatgenuinelymotivatesyou.Wishingyouallafulfillingandrewardingjourneyaheadfilledwithjoy,growth,andsuccess.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写出对高一学弟学妹各方面的建议,最后表达美好的祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累珍视:treasure→cherish抓住:seize→grasp/catchholdof专注于:focuson→concentrateon以……为例:takesth.forinstance→takesth.forexample2.句式拓展宾语从句变定语从句原句:Whetherit’swatchingmoviesorreadingnovels,trytofindwhatgenuinelymotivatesyou.拓展句:Whetherit’swatchingmoviesorreadingnovels,trytofindsomethingthatgenuinelymotivatesyou.【点睛】【高分句型1】Itisthededicationandeffortyouinvestnowthatwillshapeyourfuture.(运用了强调句型:Itis/was+被强调部分+that+其他部分)【高分句型2】Finally,explorewhattrulysparksyourpassion.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)Writing2(24-25高三上·山东滨州·开学考试)假定你是李华,你刚刚得知你的美国笔友Jim打算雇一个同学帮他完成期末论文。请你给他写封信,指出他的错误并提出建议。注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJim,Ihopeyou’redoingwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,Ihopeyou’redoingwell.Iheardthatyouareplanningtohireaclassmatetohelpyouwithyourfinaltermpaper,butIamafraidthat’simproper.Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegrity,whichcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.Secondly,itmaynothelpyoutrulyunderstandthesubjectanddevelopyourownskills.Asanalternativesolution,Isuggestseekinghelpactively.Youcanapproachyourteacherforguidance,consulrelevantbooksandresources,orevenjoinastudygrouptodiscussideasandimproveyourwritingskills.Onlyinthiswaycanyounotonlylearnthematerialbetter,butalsoenhanceyourabilitiesforfutureassignments.I’mconfidentthatyoucanfinishthispaperonyourownandmakehugeprogress!Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Jim写封信,他打算雇一个同学帮他完成期末论文,要求信中指出他的错误并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累打算:planto→intendto不合适:improper→inappropriate导致:leadto→contributeto建议:suggest→recommend2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegrity,whichcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.拓展句:Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegritysothatitcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.【点睛】[高分句型1]Iheardthatyouareplanningtohireaclassmatetohelpyouwithyourfinaltermpaper,butIamafraidthat’simproper.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegrity,whichcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing3(2024·江苏南京·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的朋友Daniel被伊利诺伊大学厄巴纳-香槟分校(UniversityoflllinoisUrbana-Champaign)录取了,但是他对未来的大学生活感到紧张。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表达祝贺;2.表示理解;3.提出建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearDaniel,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearDaniel,
I’msohappytohearthatyou’vebeenadmittedtoUniversityoflllinoisUrbana-Champaign.Congratulations!
Iunderstandyournervousnessabouttheupcomingcollegelifeasit’sanewchapterwithmanyunknowns.Butdon’tworrytoomuch.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Trytogetfamiliarwiththecampusanditsfacilitiesbeforeyoustart.Besides,makeastudyplantomanageyourtimewell.Anddon’thesitatetojoinvariousclubsandactivitiestomakenewfriends.
Iamsureyouwilladapttoyournewlifesoonbyfollowingthesuggestionsabove.Yours,
LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就你的朋友Daniel对未来的大学生活感到紧张这事给他写一封邮件。其内容包括:表达祝贺、表示理解和提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的:happy→glad焦虑:nervousness→anxiety很多:many→plentyof建议:suggestion→advice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Besides,makeastudyplantomanageyourtimewell.拓展句:Besides,itisadvisablethatyoushouldmakeastudyplantomanageyourtimewell.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’msohappytohearthatyou’vebeenadmittedtoUniversityoflllinoisUrbana-Champaign.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Iunderstandyournervousnessabouttheupcomingcollegelifeasit’sanewchapterwithmanyunknowns.(运用了as引导原因状语从句)Writing4(24-25高三上·江苏南京·开学考试)假定你是李华,最近收到好友Ben来信,信中说他因为使用人工智能完成翻译作业而受到老师批评,请你写一封回信,内容包括:1.你的宽慰;2.对使用人工智能完成作业的看法;3.你的建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。DearBen,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearBen,I’msorrytolearnaboutyourcurrenttroubleregardingtheuseofAItoolsforyourassignment.IcanfullyrelatetoyoursituationasIoncefacedsimilartemptationstomanageheavyacademicworkloads.However,AIshouldneverreplaceourownintellectualefforts.Asascientistoncesaid,“Ourintelligenceiswhatmakesushuman,andAIisanextensionofthatquality.”WhileAIcanassistincertainareas,overrelianceonitunderminestheessenceoflearningandcompromiseacademicintegrity.Therefore,IsuggestyouimproveyourworkwithoutsolelydependingonAItoolsandhaveanopenconversationwithyourteacher,clarifyingyourintentionsanddemonstratingyourcommitmenttogenuinelearning.Learningisnotjustaboutcompletingtasksbutalsoabouttheprocessofacquiringknowledge.Wishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评的好友Ben写一封回信,表达你的宽慰、阐述对使用人工智能完成作业的看法并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累理解:relateto→understand代替;取代:replace→taketheplaceof因此:therefore→thus建议:suggest→advise2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:However,AIshouldneverreplaceourownintellectualefforts.拓展句:However,itisourownintellectualeffortsthatAIshouldneverreplace.【点睛】【高分句型1】IcanfullyrelatetoyoursituationasIoncefacedsimilartemptationstomanageheavyacademicworkloads.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)【高分句型2】WhileAIcanassistincertainareas,overrelianceonitunderminestheessenceoflearningandcompromiseacademicintegrity.(运用了while引导的让步状语从句)Writing5(24-25高三上·福建厦门·开学考试)假定你是李华,在美国某博物馆参观时,发现博物馆对一些中国文物(artifacts)的英文介绍有误。请你就此向博物馆写一封信,内容包括:1.投诉问题并举例说明;2.提出建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearSirorMadam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadam,IamwritingtoexpressmyconcernregardingtheinaccuraciesfoundintheEnglishdescriptionsofsomeChineseartifactsatyourmuseum.Duringmyvisit,InoticedthattheexplanationforaTangDynastyvasewasnotonlymisleadingbutalsohistoricallyincorrect.Ikindlysuggestthatyourmuseumreviewandcorrectthesedescriptionstoensuretheyaccuratelyreflecttheculturalheritagetheyrepresent.ItwouldalsobebeneficialtocollaboratewithChineseculturalexpertsorinstitutionstoguaranteeauthenticityandrespectfortheartifacts.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本文是一篇应用文。这是一封写给博物馆的建议信,反映了博物馆对中国文物英文介绍有误的问题,并提出建议。【详解】词汇积累表达:express→convey不准确:inaccuracies→imprecisions建议:suggest→propose合作:collaborate→cooperate句式拓展同义句改写原句:IamwritingtoexpressmyconcernregardingtheinaccuraciesfoundintheEnglishdescriptionsofsomeChineseartifactsatyourmuseum.拓展句:IamwritingtoexpressmyconcernregardingtheinaccuracieswhichwerefoundintheEnglishdescriptionsofsomeChineseartifactsatyourmuseum.【点睛】【高分句型1】Duringmyvisit,InoticedthattheexplanationforaTangDynastyvasewasnotonlymisleadingbutalsohistoricallyincorrect.(使用了连接代词that连接的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Ikindlysuggestthatyourmuseumreviewandcorrectthesedescriptionstoensuretheyaccuratelyreflecttheculturalheritagetheyrepresent.(使用了动词不定式做目的状语)Writing6(2024·江苏·模拟预测)假定你是李华,将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人,并正在设计节目串词。请你给外教Mr.Smith写封邮件,请他给予指导。内容包括:1.陈述问题;2.请求指导。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:串词programcue
情景喜剧sitcomDearMr.Smith,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Smith,IamwritingtoseekyourguidanceasI’mgoingtohostourschool’supcomingEnglishsitcomcompetition.Whatchallengesmemostisdesigningtheprogramcues,especiallywhenitcomestocreatingsmoothtransitionsbetweenprogramsandincorporatingappropriatehumor.Ihavelongheardofyourexpertiseindramaandperformance,soIwonderifyoucouldkindlyprovidemewithsuggestionsonstructuringtheprogramcueseffectivelyandmaintainingalivelyatmospherethroughoutthecompetition.Anyadviceonmyhostingworkwouldbegreatlyappreciated.I’meagerforyourpreciousguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人,并正在设计节目串词。要求考生给外教Mr.Smith写封邮件,请他给予指导。【详解】1.词汇积累合适的:appropriate→proper比赛:competition→contest建议:suggestion→advice维持:maintain→sustain2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:I’meagerforyourpreciousguidance.拓展句:Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldofferyourpreciousguidance.【点睛】[高分句型1]Whatchallengesmemostisdesigningtheprogramcues,especiallywhenitcomestocreatingsmoothtransitionsbetweenprogramsandincorporatingappropriatehumor.(运用了what引导主语从句)[高分句型2]Ihavelongheardofyourexpertiseindramaandperformance,soIwonderifyoucouldkindlyprovidemewithsuggestionsonstructuringtheprogramcueseffectivelyandmaintainingalivelyatmospherethroughoutthecompetition.(运用了if引导宾语从句)Writing7(23-24高一下·湖北·期末)假定你是学校英语社负责人李华,为参加你校即将举办的“多彩社团
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