考点39 应用文写作之告知信 演讲稿（核心考点精讲精练）（含答案解析）

考点39应用文写作之告知信&演讲稿（核心考点精讲精练）1.高考真题考点分布年份试卷体裁话题题材内容2024新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷告知信学校生活介绍美术课的个人作品和感想全国甲卷演讲稿社会科技中国交通发展天津卷演讲稿社会生活低碳生活浙江卷征文投稿学校生活课间开展的运动2023新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷建议信学校生活给外教提建议全国甲卷征文投稿历史文化介绍中国历史人物全国乙卷征文投稿生活学习假期习得新技能天津卷申请信社会生活“中国工坊”活动浙江卷活动报道学校生活认识我们身边的植物2022全国卷乙卷征文投稿调查结果学习英语的状况全国卷甲卷征文投稿世界海洋日保护海洋新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷邀请信文化生活学校的电台访谈浙江卷邀请信学校生活图书馆开设了一个小组学习室天津卷视频文字稿学校生活社团活动2.命题规律及备考策略【命题规律】近3年命题规律：对中国传统文化种类的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有针对某一具体文化现象的考查；体现个人成长与时代发展相融合；体裁上有：提纲作文；开放性作文；图表作文；看图作文；内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容。尽管对写作内容有限制，学生仍有较大的自由发挥空间（自己的感想），以展示自己的个性和创意【备考策略】熟练掌握各种应用文的基本构架；积累基本词汇和句式，尤其是简单基本句式，写好简单句；背诵优美的段落和范文，模仿高级句式和表达；加强审题（主题、时态）训练；练习书写，达到整洁美观的程度。【命题预测】预测2025年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活，以电子邮件和投稿为主，考查考生的解决问题能力。必备基础知识：告知信通常是要求考生将某条信息告知外国友人的信件。常见的有告知上课计划、会议、招聘信息、电话留言、活动报名及安排等。写作时应该先告知写信目的，然后再讲述要告知的具体信息。考点一、告知信【思路点拨】

通常写作结构为：第一段：点明写信目的，简要写明要告知的事情；第二段：写明告知的具体事项（时间、地点、前期准备和活动安排）；第三段：询问对方是否要了解其它信息，并表达期待。【必备词汇和万能句式】【篇首句】简要说明写信目的1.Iamwritingthislettertotellyouthat…2.Iwouldliketotellyousomeinformation/detailsfor…3.Iamwritingthisletterbecause…4.Iheardthat...5.Myteachertoldme...6.I’minformedthat...7.Ireadinyournewspaper/websitethat...8.Irememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedin....9.I’mwritingtoexpress【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容。ThematchwilltakeplaceinourschoolgymontheafternoonofJuly4th.比赛将在7月4日学校体育馆举行。WewillplayagainsttheteamfromHongXingHighSchool.我们将与红星高中对决。Inordertowinthematch,weshouldgetfullypreparedandpracticehard.为了赢得这场比赛，我们要充分准备，刻苦练习。Sofromtomorrow,weneedtotrainfortwohoursafterschooleveryday.从明天开始，需要每天放学后训练两小时。Pleasecometotheschoolgymat6:30pmfromMondaytoFriday.请周一到周五每天下午6点半到学校体育馆。【篇尾句】表达感受。Withyouontheteam,weareconfidentthatwecanwinthegame.Let’stryhardtogether!有你在。我们相信一定会赢。让我们一起努力！Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,pleaseletmeknow.I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.如果你有任何其他问题，请告知我。期待你的到来。【写作模板】模板①Dear________,I’mwritingtoletyouknowthat_______________________(告知写信目的).Thematchwilltakeplace___________________________(简明扼要地告知活动的时间、地点).Wewillplayagainsttheteamfrom_______________________.Inordertowinthematch,______________________(赛前等的决心）.Sofromtomorrow,weneedto_____________________________(具体准备事宜）.Pleasecometotheschoolgymat6:30pmfromMondaytoFriday.You’reanexcellentplayer.Withyouontheteam,weareconfidentthat____________________(表达期待和鼓励).Let’stryhardtogether!Cheers,LiHua模板②Dear________,I’mgladtolearnthat________________(了解到的情况）.I’mwritingtoexpressthewarmwelcomefrommeandmyfamily.NowIwanttotellyousomethingabouttheplans(写信目的）.Thedetailsareasfollows（告知细节）.Inthemorning,_______________________(活动安排）.Intheafternoon,wewill___________.Intheevening,notonlywillwe____________,butalsowewill___________（按照时间顺序活动安排）.I’msurewewill______________________（表达感受）.Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,pleaseletmeknow.I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.(期望表达）.【2024新课标Ⅰ&II卷】假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmycreativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信,分享在公园上美术课的经历。【详解】1.词汇积累决定：decide→determine整个的：entire→whole提供：offer→provide总之：inaword→inshort2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.【点睛】[高分句型1]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.(that引导的定语从句)[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.(as引导的时间状语从句)（24-25高三上·山东济南·开学考试）假定你是李华，在暑假参与了一次社区志愿者服务活动。请你给英国朋友Frank写封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：1.你做的工作；2.你的收获。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearFrank,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestregards,LiHua【答案】DearFrank,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.Duringthesummervacation,Iparticipatedinacommunityvolunteerserviceactivity.Mymaintasksincludedhelpingtocleanupthelocalparkandassistinginorganizingacharityeventforunderprivilegedchildren.Thisexperiencewasincrediblyrewardingasitallowedmetogivebacktothecommunityanddevelopadeepersenseofsocialresponsibility.Ialsomadenewfriendsandlearnedvaluableteamworkskills.Iamlookingforwardtoparticipatinginmoresuchactivitiesinthefuture.Bestregards,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Frank写封邮件，分享暑假期间参与的社区志愿者服务活动的经历。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participatein→takepartin帮助：help→assist值得的：rewarding→worthwhile有价值的：valuable→precious2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Ialsomadenewfriendsandlearnedvaluableteamworkskills.拓展句：NotonlydidIalsomakenewfriends,butalsoIlearnedvaluableteamworkskills.【点睛】【高分句型1】Mymaintasksincludedhelpingtocleanupthelocalparkandassistinginorganizingacharityeventforunderprivilegedchildren.（运用了动名词helping和assisting作宾语）【高分句型2】Thisexperiencewasincrediblyrewardingasitallowedmetogivebacktothecommunityanddevelopadeepersenseofsocialresponsibility.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句）考点二、演讲稿必备基础知识：演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场合发表的讲话文稿，是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体。演讲一般用以交流思想感情、表达主张见解等，具有宣传、鼓动、教育等作用，以期使听众信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣。1)主题演讲类：围绕某一主题提炼延伸，交流思想情感，将听众的思维引向更高的境界，升

华主题(对主题的见解+自己的做法)2)观点发表类：在会议或重要活动上就某话题发表自己的主张、见解(正反观点/利弊+自己

的主张)3)仪式致辞类：在仪式上说明活动安排或回顾以往活动，表示欢迎、感谢、勉励、祝贺等，

交流感想，表达祝愿(活动安排+目的/活动回顾+收获)【思路点拨】

【演讲稿的基本结构】首段简短介绍1.欢迎听众(welcomeyouraudience)2.介绍主题/自我介绍(briefintroductionofyoursubject)*TodayIamgoingtotalkabout…*Thepurposeofmypresentationistointroduce…3.说明演讲结构(explainthestructureofyourspeech)*I’llmainlytalkaboutthreepoints…*Duringmytalk,I’llbelookingatthreeareas.First,…Second,…Third,…*I’vedividedmypresentationintofourparts.Theyare…主体演讲的正文陈述主题(presentthesubjectitself)*So,tostartwith,I’dliketotalkaboutthe…*Thefirstproblemtodayisthat…*Let’sgotothefirsttopic…结束概括总结1.总结演讲(summarizeyourspeech)*Toconclude/Inconclusion/Now,tosumup,…*SoletmesummarizewhatI’vesaid.*Finally,I’dliketorepeatthepointsImadeatthebeginning.*Inconclusion,myrecommendationsare…*Ithereforesuggest/propose/recommendthefollowingstrategy.2.致谢听众(thankyouraudience)*Manythanksforyourattention.*Thankyouallforbeingsuchanattentiveaudience.【演讲稿写作步骤】第一步：对听众的称呼语最常用的是

Ladiesandgentlemen，也可根据不同情况，选用

Fellowstudents,Distinguishedguests,MrChairman,HonorableJudges(评委)等等。第二步：提出论题由于演讲的时间限制，必须开门见山，提出论题。提出论题的方法有各种各样，但最生动，最能引起注意的是用举例法。比如：你要呼吁大家关心贫穷地区的孩子，你可以用亲眼看到的或者收集到的那些贫穷孩子多么需要帮助的实例开始。另外，用具体的统计数据也是一个有效的引出论题的方法，比如：你要谈遵守交通规则的话题，你可以从举一系列有关车辆、车祸等的数据开始。第三步：论证对提出的论题，不可主观地妄下结论，而要进行客观的论证。这是演讲中最需要下功夫的部分。关键是要把道理讲清楚。常见的论证方法有举例法、因果法、对比法等等，可参见英语议论文的有关章节。第四步：结论结论要简明扼要，以给听众留下深刻印象。第五步：结尾结尾要简洁，不要拉拉扯扯，说个没完。特别是不要受汉语影响，说些类似＂准备不足，请谅解＂，＂请批评指正＂这样的废话。最普通的结尾就是：Thankyouverymuchforyourattention.【必备词汇】1.takepartin/participatein 参加2.beahelpfulwaytodosth. 是做某事的一种有用方法3.preparefor/getreadyfor 做准备4.develop/formagoodhabitof… 养成……的好习惯5.intheprocess/courseof… 在……的过程中6.payattentionto/attachimportanceto 注意7.try/doone’sbesttodosth./makeeveryefforttodosth. 尽力做某事8.turn.Into. （使）变成；成为9.takeresponsibilitytodosth. 负责做某事10.narrowthegenerationgap 缩小代沟11.guideto 带领到12.behelpful/beneficialto 对……有帮助13.beofgreatbenefit 有很大的好处14.makegooduseof.… 好好利用15.takeaction/steps/measures 采取行动 16.Itishightimesb.didsth. 到了某人该做某事的时候17.beboundto 一定要……；注定18.turninto. （使）变成；成为19.makeadifference 有影响；起（重要）作用20.inconclusion 最后，综上所述【万能句式】【经典句型一】最常用的演讲开场句型1.Iamhonoredto...我很荣幸……【短评】这是演讲的第一大王牌句型，几乎每一场演讲都要以这个句型作为开场白。有人提出，这个句型已经到了陈词滥调（cliche）的地步。但是，谦虚永远是一种美德，这个句型之所以能被古今中外无数演讲大师所采用，当然有其吸引人的地方。2.Iamhonoredtohaveachancetospeaktoyoutoday.我今天很荣幸跟大家讲几句。3.Iamhonoredtobehereonsuchaspecialoccasion.我很荣幸在这个特别的时刻来到这里。4.IamhonoredtointroducethefounderofCrazyEnglish，Mr.LiYang.我很荣幸地为大家介绍疯狂英语创始人—李阳先生。这个句型也可以说成＂It’smy(great)honorto...＂【经典句型二】最具感情色彩的演讲句型1.Wordscan’texpress...言语表达不了……2.Wordscan’texpresshowluckyIam.简直不能用言语来表达我有多幸运。3.Wordscan’texpresshowthankfulIam.言语表达不了我的感激之情。【经典句型三】最平实的演讲过度句型1.TodayIwanttotalktoyouabout...今天我想跟你们谈谈……（演讲都有个主题，如何在演讲中介绍自己的主题呢？这个句型是最常用的。）2.TodayIwanttotalktoyouaboutaveryimportantsubject.今天我将和你们谈一个非常重要的话题。3.TodayIwanttotalktoyouaboutthefutureofbusinessinChina.今天我将和你们谈一谈中国的商业前景问题。【经典句型四】最具表达力的演讲句型1.Isincerelyhope...我衷心希望……2.Isincerelyhopethatyouwilltakeaminutetothinkaboutthefuture.我们真心希望你能花一点时间考虑一下未来。3.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillhaveawonderfultimetonight.我们衷心希望你们今晚过得开心。【经典句型五】最具领导风格的演讲句型1.Iaskallofyoupresentto...我要求在座各位……2.Iaskallofyoupresenttojoinmeinraisingyourglassestooureverlastingfriendship.我要求在座的各位与我一起举杯，为我们的友谊长青干杯。3.Iaskallofyoupresenttojoinhandsinthebattleagainstcorruption.我要求在座各位携起手来反腐败。【经典句型六】最具感染力的演讲句型1.IknowIspeakfor...我知道我在为……说话。2.IknowIspeakforthepresidentandalltheemployees.我知道我是代表着经理和所有的员工在说话。3.IknowIspeakforseveralpeopleinthisroomwhenIsaythatwearethankfulfortheimprovementsinthecompany.当我说我们为公司状况改善感到欣慰时，我知道这是代表你们当中几个人所说的。【经典句型七】最具煽动性的演讲句型1.Iwanttoremind...我想提醒……2.Iwanttoremindyouthatit’snevertoolatetolearn.3.我想提醒你们，无论何时开始学习都不迟。4.Iwanttoremindyouallthatwesharetheresponsibility.我想提醒大家，我们都得承担责任。【经典句型八】最常用的演讲结束句型1.Iwishyouthebestofluckin...我祝你……好运（这个句型不但演讲中常用，很多场合也能用得上，比如信函的结尾等。）2.Iwishyouthebestofluckinyournewbusinessventure.祝你们新公司生意兴隆。3.Iwishyouthebestofluckineverythingyoudo.祝你们一切顺利。【经典句型九】最具修辞色彩的演讲句型1.Asknotwhat...candoforyou,askwhatyoucandofor...

不要问……能为你做什么，问问你能为……做什么【短评】肯尼迪总统的那句＂Asknotwhatyourcountrycandoforyou,askwhatyoucandoforyourcountry.＂成了千古绝唱，为世人广为传颂。我们可以将他这个句子中的鱼骨抽出来，造出不少同样铿锵有力，同样震撼人心的句子。2.AsknotwhatChinacandoforyou,askwhatyoucandoforChina.不要问中国能为你做什么，问问你能为中国做什么。3.Asknotwhatsocietycandoforyou,askwhatyoucandoforsociety.不要问社会能为你做什么，问问你能为社会做什么。4.Asknotwhatotherscandoforyou,askwhatyoucandoforothers.不要问别人能为你做什么，问问你能为别人做什么。【经典句型十】最具震撼力的演讲句型1....meansagreatdealto...对……意义重大。2.Thisprojectmeansagreatdealtoourcompany.这项目对我们公司来说意义重大。3.Ourcompany’ssuccessmeansagreatdealtoChina.我们公司的成功对中国来说意义重大。【写作模板】模板①Boysandgirls/Ladiesandgentlemen,It’sagreathonorformetostandhereandgivemyspeech._________（表示荣幸）Mynameis

__________.（自我介绍）Thetopicofmyspeechis

___________.（提出演讲主题）Tobeginwith,manypeoplesuggestthat

___________.（话题或现象列举）Secondly,

___________.Thirdly,

___________

.WhatIwanttostressisthat

___________.（重申主题）Foronething,

.Foranother,

.Besides,

___________.（原因或重要性列举）Inaword,

___________.（总结）模板②Goodmorning/afternoon/evening,everyone,It’snicetoseeallofyouhere.Ifeelhonoredtohaveopportunitytogive/make/deliveryouaspeechisagreatpleasureformetospeakhere.Thetopicofmyspeechis___________________./TodayIwilltalkabout________________./It’snicetotalk/speakabout…(演讲的主题)Firstofall,___________________.Besides,________________.Secondly,_________________________.What’smore,__________________(具体内容)AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion,_____________.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthat____________.Thanksforyourattention/listening.(总结演讲)【2024全国甲卷】英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以DevelopmentofTransportinChina为题写一篇发言稿。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday'sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasanenormousdevelopment.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday’sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasseenenormousdevelopment.Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.Secondly,theintroductionofhigh-speedtrainshasdramaticallyshortenedtraveltimes,makingintercitytravelfasterandmorecomfortable.Lastly,theproliferationofnewenergyvehiclesunderscoresChina’sdedicationtoenvironmentalsustainability,reducingrelianceonfossilfuels.ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.Inshort,China’stransportsystemisembracinginnovationandeco-friendliness.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以DevelopmentofTransportinChina为题写一篇发言稿。【详解】1.词汇激活提供：offer→provide极大地：dramatically→tremendously减少：reduce→decrease总之：inshort→inanutshell2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.拓展句：Firstly,sharedbicycles,whichofferanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttripshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility.【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)【高分句型2】ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)（24-25高三上·福建南平·开学考试）假定你是李华，报名参加学校“BeSporty,BeHealthy”为主题的演讲比赛。请你写一份英文演讲稿，内容包括:1.问题:学业紧张，疏于活动;2.建议:合理安排，正常锻炼注意:词数80左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】BeSporty,BeHealthyHello,everyone!Ifeelhonoredtobeheretotalktoyouonexercise.Westudentsareheavilyburdenedwithschoolwork,andthussparelittletimeforregularphysicalexercise.However,weallneedasoundbody.SoIsuggestwefitexerciseintoourbusyschedule,makingitpartofourdailyroutine.Putdownourbookstostretchourarmsfromtimetotime.Dosomejoggingandjumpingeveryday.Ifweareabletomakeexercisingourlifehabit,wewillsurelybenefitfromitbothphysicallyandmentally.That’sall.Thankyou.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“BeSporty,BeHealthy”为主题，写一篇演讲稿参加学校举办的演讲比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累然而：however→nevertheless健康的：sound→healthy建议：suggest→recommend能够做某事：beabletodosth.→havetheabilitytodosth.2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：However,weallneedasoundbody.拓展句：However,weallneedasoundbody,whichisessentialforleadingahealthyandactivelife.【点睛】【高分句型1】SoIsuggestwefitexerciseintoourbusyschedule,makingitpartofourdailyroutine.（suggest后面运用了that引导的宾语从句，that被省略）【高分句型2】Ifweareabletomakeexercisingourlifehabit,wewillsurelybenefitfromitbothphysicallyandmentally.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）（最新模拟试题演练）Writing1（24-25高三上·山东青岛·开学考试）假定你是李华，上周你校师生和英国交换生共同开展了一次文艺演出活动。请你给英国朋友Tim写一封邮件分享这次活动，内容包括：1.活动介绍；2.你的感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearTim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTim,I’mexcitedtosharewithyouaculturalperformanceeventheldatourschoollastweek,whichinvolvedbothourteachers,students,andBritishexchangestudents.Theeventfeaturedvariousperformances,includingtraditionalChinesedances,Britishfolksongs,andajointdramaperformance.Itwasafantasticopportunityforculturalexchangeandmutuallearning.

Personally,Ifoundtheeventincrediblyenriching.ItnotonlydeepenedmyunderstandingofBritishculturebutalsostrengthenedthebondbetweenusandtheexchangestudents.Ihopewecanhavemoresucheventsinthefuture.

Yours,

LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作，要求考生给英国朋友Tim写封信，向其介绍学校上周举办的文艺演出活动。【详解】1．词汇积累：激动的：excited→thrilled；机会：opportunity→chance；丰富的：enriching→fulfilling；加深：deepen→enhance。2.句式拓展：简单句变复合句。原句：Itwasafantasticopportunityforculturalexchangeandmutuallearning.拓展句：Itwasafantasticopportunitywherewecouldengageinculturalexchangeandmutuallearning.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’mexcitedtosharewithyouaculturalperformanceeventheldatourschoollastweek,whichinvolvedbothourteachers,students,andBritishexchangestudents.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】ItnotonlydeepenedmyunderstandingofBritishculturebutalsostrengthenedthebondbetweenusandtheexchangestudents.（运用了notonly…butalso…结构）Writing2（2024·湖南永州·一模）假定你是李华,上周六你参加了学校举行的以“保护海洋”为主题的创意作品大赛。请你给英国朋友Ryan写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:1.参赛过程（包括你的参赛作品等）；2.你的感受。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearRyan,I’mwritingtosharewithyouourschool’screativeworkcompetitionIparticipatedinlastSaturday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearRyan,I’mwritingtosharewithyouourschool’screativeworkcompetitionIparticipatedinlastSaturday.Withthethemeof“OceanProtection”,agreatnumberofcompetitorsfromdifferentgradesofourschoolproducedavarietyofcreativeworks,includingposters,T-shirts,handbags,videosandsoon.Imadeananimationvideotoshowthelivingconditionsoffishbeforeandaftertheseawaspolluted,emphasizingtheimportanceofprotectingoceans,whichreceivedunanimouspraisefromjudges.Thiscontestnotonlywonmeanaward,butalsohelpedmemakemanylike-mindedfriendsandstrengthenedmydeterminationtoprotecttheocean.Smallactionsaswetake,itwill,Ibelieve,makeahugedifferenceinourlife.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于书信写作。要求考生给英国朋友Ryan写封邮件，分享学校上周六举行的一“保护海洋”为主题的创意作品大赛，介绍参赛过程和感受。【详解】1.词汇积累：主题：theme→topic大量的、许多的：agreatnumberof→plentyof各种各样的：avarietyof→allkindsof强调：emphasize→highlight比赛：competition→contest2.句式拓展：同义句转换：原句：Withthethemeof“OceanProtection”,agreatnumberofcompetitorsfromdifferentgradesofourschoolproducedavarietyofcreativeworks,includingposters,T-shirts,handbags,videosandsoon.拓展句：Withthethemeof“OceanProtection”,agreatnumberofcompetitorsfromdifferentgradesofourschoolproducedavarietyofcreativeworks,whichincludedposters,T-shirts,handbags,videosandsoon.【点睛】【高分句型1】Imadeananimationvideotoshowthelivingconditionsoffishbeforeandaftertheseawaspolluted,emphasizingtheimportanceofprotectingoceans,whichreceivedunanimouspraisefromjudges.（运用了以连词beforeandafter引导的时间状语从句和以关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。）【高分句型2】Smallactionsaswetake,itwill,Ibelieve,makeahugedifferenceinourlife.（运用了以连词as引导的让步状语从句的倒装句和插入语形式。）Writing3（24-25高三上·河南·开学考试）假定你是李华。上周六你校摄影社团到社区养老院给老人拍照。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：1.拍摄过程；2.你的感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearChris,IamwritingtosharewithyoutheexperienceourphotographyclubhadlastSaturday._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearChris,IamwritingtosharewithyoutheexperienceourphotographyclubhadlastSaturday.Wevisitedacommunitynursinghometotakephotosoftheelderlyresidents.Theprocesswasbothheartwarmingandeye-opening.Wespenttimeinteractingwiththeseniors,listeningtotheirstories,andcapturingtheirjoyfulmoments.Personally,itwasatouchingexperience.Seeingthesmilesontheirfacesandhearingtheirlifestoriesmademeappreciatetheimportanceofcherishingeverymomentandconnectingwithothers.Itwasareminderofthesimplejoysinlifeandtheimpactofakindgesture.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给英国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件，分享校摄影社团到社区养老院给老人拍照的经历，需涵盖拍摄过程和个人感想两方面的内容。【详解】1.词汇积累感人的：heartwarming→touching,moving,affecting与……交流：interactwith→communicatewith,engagewith在我看来：personally→frommypointofview,inmyopinion珍惜：cherish→treasure影响：impact→influence2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Itwasareminderofthesimplejoysinlifeandtheimpactofakindgesture.拓展句：Itremindedmethattherearesimplejoysinlifeandakindgesturecanmakeadifference.【点睛】[高分句型1]Wevisitedacommunitynursinghometotakephotosoftheelderlyresidents.(运用了不定式短语作目的状语)[高分句型2]Seeingthesmilesontheirfacesandhearingtheirlifestoriesmademeappreciatetheimportanceofcherishingeverymomentandconnectingwithothers.(运用了动名词短语作主语)Writing4（24-25高三上·广东·开学考试）假定你是高三学生李华，你们学校上周举办了高三启动仪式(Kick-offCeremony)，请你写封邮件与英国笔友Paul分享此事。内容包括：1.活动的目的和内容;2.你的感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearPaul,Hopethise-mailfindsyouwell.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPaul,Hopethise-mailfindsyouwell.I’mexcitedtosharewithyoutheSeniorThreeKick-offCeremonythattookplaceatourschoollastweek,whoseaimwastomarkthebeginningofourjourneytowardsthecrucialGaokaoandinspireustobemoredetermined.Duringtheevent,ourheadmasterdeliveredaspeech,emphasizingthevalueofhardwork,perseverance,andapositivemindset.Astudentrepresentativesharedhislearningstrategies.Themostinspiringmomentcamewhenwechorusedourdetermination.Theceremonyisagreatmotivator,inspiringmetoresolvetogivemybestinthecomingyearandtacklethechallengesahead.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Paul写封邮件，分享上周学校举办的高三启动仪式。【详解】1.词汇积累

激励：inspire→motivate目标：aim→goal激动的：excited→thrilled处理：tackle→dealwith

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Duringtheevent,ourheadmasterdeliveredaspeech,emphasizingthevalueofhardwork,perseverance,andapositivemindset.

拓展句：Duringtheevent,ourheadmasterdeliveredaspeech,whichemphasizedthevalueofhardwork,perseverance,andapositivemindset.【点睛】【高分句型1】Themostinspiringmomentcamewhenwechorusedourdetermination.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

【高分句型2】I’mexcitedtosharewithyoutheSeniorThreeKick-offCeremonythattookplaceatourschoollastweek,whoseaimwastomarkthebeginningofourjourneytowardsthecrucialGaokaoandinspireustobemoredetermined.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）Writing5（24-25高三上·江西南昌·开学考试）假定你是学生李华，你校将举办一次有关农业劳动课重要性的英语演讲比赛，你将代表班级参赛，请你以“Ontheimportanceofhands-onagriculturallaborcourse”为主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1.同学们对此课程的看法；2.学习农业劳动课的意义。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Ladiesandgentlemen,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ladiesandgentlemen,Iamhonoredtostandheretodeliveraspeech.Todaymythemeisabout“Ontheimportanceofhands-onagri