专题08书面表达2

专题08书面表达（解析版）目录一、衡阳市祁东县育贤中学二、娄底市娄星区三、娄底市四、邵阳市邵阳县第四中学五、邵阳市六、永州市零陵区七、岳阳市四区三十五校八、张家界市民族中学九、张家界市十、长沙市北雅中学十一、长沙市湖南师大附中教育集团十二、长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校十三、长沙市开福区十四、长沙市青竹湖湘一外国语学校十五、长沙市雅礼集团长沙市一中集团长沙市长郡教育集团十八、长沙市长沙县湘郡未来实验学校衡阳市祁东县育贤中学八、话题作文56．2021年10月19日，《中华人民共和国体育法（修订草案）》提请审议，拟定每年8月8日为国家体育节。针对青少年体质下降问题，草案规定要确保学生有充足的体育锻炼时间，树立健康第一教育理念。请根据提示，谈谈你的想法。★What’syourfavouritesport?★Howoftendoyoudoexercise?★Whydoweneedtodoexercise?...注意事项：(1)词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；(3)文章必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。TheImportanceofPhysicalExerciseEveryonehopestolivehappilyintheworld.Physicalexerciseisindispensable(不可或缺的)toahappylife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheImportanceofPhysicalExerciseEveryonehopestolivehappilyintheworld.Physicalexerciseisindispensabletoahappylife.Myfavouritesportisbasketball,asitisveryexciting.Iplaybasketballthreetimesaweek.Thereisafamoussaying,“Lifeliesinphysicalexercise.”Thereisnodoubtthatexerciseisgoodforourhealth.Ontheonehand,doingexercisehelpsuskeepahealthylifestyle.Apersonwhotakesexerciseregularlywillkeepfit.What’smore,exercisecanmakeuswellbehavedandconfident.Ifweusuallytakeexercisewithourfriends,wewillbeclosetothem.Ontheotherhand,it’sveryimportantforustolearnhowtocooperatewitheachother.Doingexercisecanhelpusdevelopoursenseofteamwork,whichisimportantforourcareer.Inmyopinion,exercisecanmakeourlifemorecolorful.Nothingismoreimportantthanit.It’llcertainlyhelpuslivelongerandmorehealthily.【解析】【详解】1.这是一篇议论文写作。根据所给问题提示锻炼身体的重要性，包含自己喜欢的运动、锻炼的频率以及为什么做锻炼。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称和一般现在时来行文；短文开头已给出，注意承接上文；可分为四段：第一段点明自己喜欢的运动；第二、三段写运动的好处以重要性；最后一段发表自己的观点。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。娄底市娄星区十二、材料作文76．从“深海一号”能源站到太空空间站的搭建，从“人造太阳”新突破到淀粉的全人工合成，中国科技发展日新月异，我们祖国日益繁荣昌盛。而祖国未来的强大则在于我们青少年的锐意进取。假如《二十一世纪英文报》就青少年怎样让自己变得更优秀开展征文活动，请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇征文稿。1.要点：（1）树立崇高理想，坚持不懈；

（2）拥有良好品质，助人为乐；（3）培养良好习惯，强健体魄；

（4）……2.要求：(1)文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等；(2)语言要通顺，表达要正确；(3)要求包含所有要点提示，为了行文需要，可适当拓展和增加要点；(4)词数不少于60个英语单词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3.参考词汇：崇高理想loftyideals

投身于devoteoneselftoHowtoMakeOurselvesMoreExcellent?Asteenagers,howcanwemakeourselvesmoreexcellent?Hereismyadvice.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Possibleversion:HowtoMakeOurselvesMoreExcellent?Asteenagers,howcanwemakeourselvesmoreexcellent?Hereismyadvice.First,weshouldsetuploftyidealsandsticktothem.Nowwemuststudyhardsothatwecanenteragooduniversity.Weshoulddevoteourselvestoourmothercountryinthefuture.Second,weshouldowngoodcharacters.Weshouldbeanactive,honest,friendly,outgoingandbraveperson.Ithinkit’snecessaryforustogetreadytohelpothersatanytime.Third,wemustdevelopgoodlivinghabits.Forexample,weshouldeatmorefruitandvegetablesandexercisemore.Andwehavetogetenoughsleeptokeephealthy.It’sthemostimportantthatwehaveastrongbody.Lastbutnotleast,we’dbettertakeupmoreinterestsandhobbiessothatwecanrelieveourpressureandlearnhowtosolveourproblemswhenwefaceworriesanddifficultiesinlife.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。在写作时应承接短文开头。根据要点提示，写一篇英文短文。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称；时态采用一般现在时为主。注意按照要点提示的四个方面来写作，不可有遗漏，为保证语言通顺，行文连贯可适当增加内容。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。娄底市十二、材料作文75．三八国际妇女节（Women’sDay）很快就要到了，这是世上所有女性的节日，更是妈妈们的节日。作为学生的我们，可以为妈妈做点什么呢？请你做一件你觉得最有意义的事情，作为节日的礼物送给妈妈。要求：1.仔细审题，立意要新，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；3.卷面整洁，书写美观；4.词数：不少于60个单词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）参考词汇：Women’sDayisingsoon.It’saspecialdayformothers.IthinkIshoulddosomethingspecialformydearmother...____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Women’sDayisingsoon.It’saspecialdayformothers.IthinkIshoulddosomethingspecialformydearmother.Iknowsomeofmyclassmatesaregoingtohelptheirmotherswiththehousework,othersaregoingtobuysomeflowersfortheirmothers.IwanttosaytoherthatIloveherverymuch.butasaboy,itisabitdifficultformetoshowmyheart.Ithinkonlygirlscandothat.Mymotherisverykind.Shetakescareofmedayandnight.Shespendslittlemoney,butbuysanythingformethatIneed.ThistimeImustshowmylove.Iamgoingtogiveheracardandwritelikethis,“Iloveyou,mother!”Iamgoingtoputitunderherpillow.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，根据题干内容，要求记叙一件最有意义的事情，这件事情是送给母亲作为母亲节的礼物的。注意文章开头已经给出，需要承接上文。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时，描述自己要做的这件事时，要说明原因，文章叙述完整，保证条理清晰。不要出现拼写和语法错误。邵阳市邵阳县第四中学九、材料作文56．书面表达（共1题）初中三年的学习生活让人难忘，毕业之际，你校将举行"感恩"为主题的英文演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿．要点提示：1．感谢父母，教我如何生活，……2．感谢老师，教我许多知识，……3．感谢同学，给我美好回忆，……写作要求：1．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；2．可适当增减词汇，使语句流畅、完整；3．文中不能透露个人真实信息．Good

morning，everyone．I'mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou．HereI'dliketothankeveryoneofyou．____________That'sall．Thankyou．【答案】Goodmorning，everyone．I'mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou．HereI'dliketothankeveryoneofyou．Howtimeflies!We'llgraduatesoon．Ihavesomanywordsfrommyhearttosay．Atthismoment，Iwanttosaythankstomyparents，myteachersandmyclassmates．Deardadandmom，you'vetakengoodcareofmeinthepastthreeyears．WhenIwasintrouble，youusedtoencouragemeandcheermeup．Youtaughtmehowtogetonwellwithmyclassmates．Dearteachers，thankyouforteachingmesowell．Iwon'tforgethowinterestingyourlessonsareandhowfriendlyyouare．IstillrememberwhenIfailedinanexam，youencouragedmetokeeptrying．WhenIhadtroubleinlife，youtoldmetobebrave．Becauseofyourhelp，Ihavemademuchprogress．Dearclassmates，you'vehelpedmealotinmystudiessinceIcametothisschool．WhenIwasintrouble，youusedtoencouragemeandgivemesomeadvice．Ineverforgetthedayswhenwestudiedtogether．Wordscan'tshowmythankstoyou!I'llrememberallofyou．That'sall．Thankyou．【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.Atthismoment，Iwanttosaythankstomyparents，myteachersandmyclassmates．；Deardadandmom，you'vetakengoodcareofmeinthepastthreeyears．WhenIwasintrouble，youusedtoencouragemeandcheermeup．学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。邵阳市十二、材料作文76．国务院颁布了“双减”政策。旨在减轻义务教育阶段学生课业负担.同时提质增效。某英语报就此将举办“双减时代如何提高学习效率”的征文比赛。请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文参赛。词数80左右。

参考词汇：efficiency效率；doublereductionpolicy双减政策.

注意事项：

1.开头已给出,不计入总词数；

2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

Withthedoublereductionpolicy,wehavelesshomeworktodo.Learningefficiencyisbeingmoreimportant._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Withthedoublereductionpolicy,wehavelesshomeworktodo.Learningefficiencyisbeingmoreimportant.Firstofall,weshouldhavegoodlearningmethods.Weshouldpreviewourlessonsbeforeclass.Inthisway,wecaneasilyunderstandwhattheteachersays.Inclass,we’dbettertakenotes.Afterclass,weshouldreviewintime.Second,weshouldimprovegoodhabits.Weshouldgotobedandgetupearly.Weshouldn’tplaygamesbeforegoingtobed,orwewon’tsleepwell.Weshoulddosportseverydaytokeephealthy.Besides,weshoulddomorereadingbecausewecanlearnalotfrombooks.【解析】【详解】1.题干解题：该题目属于材料作文写作，但写作时要以说明文的格式来写。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段分点列出提高学习效率的方法。2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称复数来提出提高学习效率的建议；时态采用一般现在时为主；列举建议时，应先分为三大版块，即“学习习惯”、“生活习惯”和“其它”总体说明，再在每个版块下具体详细举例说明；注意采用像“Firstofall”、“Second”、“Besides”等过渡词进行衔接；举例说明时，保证条理清晰。永州市零陵区十一、书信作文75．某英语报以“如何让在校学生更加健康快乐地生活”为主题征稿。假如你是李华，请你以书信的形式写一篇征文稿。主要内容包括∶1.简要描述目前你在学校的学习生活；2.针对教师、课堂、校园环境等方面提出建议。注意∶1）信中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名；2）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearEditor,I’mgladtowritetoyouandsharemysuggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearEditor,I’mgladtowritealettertoyou.NowIhaveagoodlifeinstudyinginmyschool.Theteachersarenice,theschoolenvironmentisbeautifulandIgetonwellwithmyclassmates.Buttomakeourschoolmoreexcellent,Ihavesomesuggestions.

First,Ihopeourschoolwillopenthelibrarymoreoften.Second,Ithinkourschoolcanorganizemoreafterclassactivities.Next,Ihopeourschoolwillgiveusmoretimeforsports,artandmusic.Andtheschoolshouldorganizefewerexamsaswell.Asforourteachers,Ihopetheywillbeourfriendsandmakeclassesmoreinteresting.AndIhopetheycantalklessbutgiveusmoretimetopractice.What’smore,Ihopetheywillgiveuslesshomeworkandfinishclassesontime.

Hopemysuggestionswillbehelpful.Thanksforreadingmyletter.Yours,LiHua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题是书信写作，书信格式已给出，写作时应承接开头，描述学校的学习生活，并针对教师、课堂、校园环境等方面提出建议。2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来描述，时态采用一般现在时为主。写作时承接开头描写学校的学习生活；接着针对教师、课堂、校园环境等方面提出建议；最后表达希望和感谢。写作时保证语言连贯，无词汇和语法错误，叙述要点完整，条理清晰。岳阳市四区三十五校十三、材料作文76．2022年1月1日，《家庭教育促进法》开始生效。未成年人的父母应该重视家庭教育。英语课上，英语老师组织了一场关于“家庭教育该如何进行”的班会，你要代表学生说出大家的心声。请你根据以下要点写一份80字左右的发言稿。要点提示：（1）父母应该多花时间陪我们；（2）父母要多和我们交流；（3）父母可以树立良好榜样（setgoodexamples），在家不能经常玩、打游戏；（4）父母应注重培养（develop）我们的好习惯；（5）……注意：每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺。Helloeveryone,It’smyhonortospeakoutourstudents’thoughtshere.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Helloeveryone,It’smyhonortospeakoutourstudents’thoughtshere.Parentsofminorsshouldattachimportancetofamilyeducation.Parentsshouldspendmoretimewithus.Parentsshouldmunicatewithusmore.Parentsshouldbeconcernedaboutourstudyandlifeinschool.Parentscansetagoodexample.Forexample,theycan’toftenplaymobilephonesandgamesathome.Parentsshouldpayattentiontocultivatingourgoodhabitsandhelpusformthegoodhabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.Itisveryimportantthatchildren’shealthygrowthneedsthepanyoftheirparents.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，在关于“家庭教育该如何进行”的班会，你要代表学生发言，介绍孩子们的心声，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。2.写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态，人称主要为第三人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。张家界市民族中学八、材料作文56．书面表达。亲爱的同学，你生活中有烦恼，学习有压力吗？那我们应该如何正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力呢？请根据提示以“Howtosolveourstress”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，开头已给出，不计入总字数；语言表达准确规范，语句通顺连贯；提示内容必须用完。提示:1．积极参加体育锻炼，有一个健康的身体。2．多与老师、家长和朋友交谈，说出自己的烦恼。3．多听听音乐，多看看书。4．尽自己最大努力学习，勇敢面对自己的成绩。5.如果经常压力太大，可以去看看医生。Howtosolveourstress

Weallhavesomeproblemsandinourlives.Howshouldwesolvethem?【答案】

HowtosolveourstressWeallhavesomeproblemsandinourlives.Howshouldwesolvethem?Ithinkweshouldtakeanactivepartin(doing)sports.Sowecankeephealthy.Weshouldtalk(municate)withoutteachers,parentsandfriendstotellthemaboutourproblemsorstress.Wecouldlistentolightmusic,domorereading,too.Weneedtorelaxourselves.Weshouldtryourbesttostudyhard.Weshouldbebravetofaceourgrades.Ifweareoftenundertoomuchpressure,wecouldgotoseeadoctor.【解析】【详解】题目解读：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。写作指导：动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。这篇短文多次使用情态动词should以及could，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。张家界市五、电子邮件41．假如你是李华，刚刚收到美国笔友给你发来的电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容回复她。DearLihua,How’severythinggoing?I’munhappythesedays.Ineedyourhelp.Iwenttoanewschooltwoweeksago.Thenewschoolisbigandbeautiful.Atfirst,Iwasexcited.However,Ihaveaproblemnow.Itseemsthatmynewclassmatesdon’tlikeme.Ifeelleftout.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Couldyoupleasehelpmeout?Bestwishes!Yours,Cindy要求：1.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺，连贯。

2.60词左右。DearCindy,I’msorrytoknowthatyouarehavingahardtimewithyournewclassmates.Butdon’tworry,Makingfriendsiseasierthanyoumightthink.Here’ssomeadviceforyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeIcanhelpyou.Bestwishes!Yours,Lihua【答案】例文：DearCindy,I’msorrytoknowthatyouarehavingahardtimewithyournewclassmates.Butdon’tworry.Makingfriendsiseasierthanyoumightthink.Here’ssomeadviceforyou.Asstudents,weneedtogetalongwellwithourclassmates.Inordertogetalongwiththem,herearesomesuggestions.Firstofall,weshouldbepolite.Notonlyisitnecessaryforusbutalsoitcanhelpustomakeagoodimpressiononotherpeople.What’smore,tryingtomunicatewithothersisadirectedandgoodwaytomakefriendswithourclassmates.Lastbutnottheleast,weshouldgiveahelpinghandtowhomisintrouble.IhopeIcanhelpyou.Bestwishes!Yours,Lihua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于邮件写作。在写作时应根据题目要求和来信讲述对朋友关于如何跟同学相处的看法和建议。2.写作指导：本文应用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般现在时为主；关于如何跟同学相处的看法和建议要表述完整，条理清晰，无语法和拼写错误。长沙市北雅中学七、电子邮件51．假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lisa因为初三下学期的一次考试失利，非常沮丧，无心学习。请你给她写一封电子邮件，建议她正确看待考试，享受学习的过程而不必太在意结果；告诉她只要坚持努力就可获得成功；鼓励她好好学习的同时，也不要放弃个人爱好，开心地度过每一天。要求：(1)80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)不得出现真实的人名和校名。DearLisa,I’msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingdownbecauseofyourfailureintheexam.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou’llbehappyeveryday.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearLisa,I’msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingdownbecauseofyourfailureintheexam.Herearesomeofmyopinions.Inmyopinion,youshouldtreatitinaproperwayandenjoytheprocessinsteadoftheresult.Astheoldsayinggoes,“Failureisthemotherofsuccess.”Youcanlearnalotfromthefailure.Aslongasyouworkhard,youcanmakeyourdreametrue.Lastbutnotleast,asastudent,youshouldstudyhardfirst.Meanwhile,thereisnoneedtogiveupyourhobbies.Justrelaxandhavefun!Hopeyou’llbehappyeveryday.Yours,LiHua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求给Lisa写一封电子邮件就她考试失利这件事给出自己的看法，建议她正确看待考试。2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。给出建议可采用情态动词should，can等。正文可分为三段式：第一段点题；第二段给出具体建议；第三段收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。长沙市湖南师大附中教育集团七、话题作文51．莎士比亚曾说过：“生活里没有书籍，就好像没有阳光；智慧里没有书籍，就好像鸟儿没有翅膀。”书籍是人类进步的阶梯，阅读对每个人都很重要。4月23日是世界读书日（WorldBookDay），学校英文校刊开展了以“GoodBooks,Greatpanions（读好书·共成长）”为主题的征文活动。请写一篇短文，推荐一本好书并谈谈你对阅读的看法，向校刊投稿。内容包括：（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的一本好书及推荐理由；（2）谈谈你喜欢的阅读方式（纸质书、线上阅读……）及其原因；（3）提出能鼓励大家阅读的具体方法（至少两点）。要求：（1）80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。GoodBooks,Greatpanions

April23rdisWorldBookDayandweallknowthatreadingisveryimportanttoeveryone._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文GoodBooks,GreatpanionsApril23rdisWorldBookDayandweallknowthatreadingisveryimportanttoeveryone.AmongallthebooksI’veread,I’dliketoshareTheOldManandtheSeawithyou.Amancanbedestroyedbutnotdefeated.Thefisherman’sspiritencouragesmemost.Wecandoalmostanythingifwenevergiveup.It’sthefirstpaperbookIboughtformyself.Ilikereadingpaperbooks,becausetheydolittleharmtomyeyes.Readingcannotonlyopenourminds,butalsomakeuscleverandhappy.Inordertoencouragestudentstoreadmorebooks,wecancarryoutawidevarietyofactivitiesoncampustoattractstudents’activeparticipation.It’salsoagoodideatoaskthemtowriteareportabouttheirfavoritebooks.

Let’sstartreadingnow.Andletitbeeapartofourlife!【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。作文的题目是“GoodBooks,Greatpanions（读好书·共成长）”，开头已给出，写作时，应承接短文的开头。注意写作内容的全面性，需包含所有提示要点。2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称书写；时态采用一般现在时为主。作文可以采用三段式：首先，分享一本你最喜欢的书及推荐理由，表明你喜欢读纸书还是电子书及其原因；其次，点明读书的重要性，提出鼓励大家阅读的方法；最后，呼吁大家多读书，让读书成为我们生活的一部分。写作时要注意保持主谓一致，无语法及标点错误。长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校七、话题作文51．本套试卷第三部分第二节短文中提到一种现象：当今社会，无论何时何地，我们都可以看到很多人旁若无人地在玩。不少在校学生一到假期也喜欢花大量的时间在上，暑期即将来临，请你针对这一现象向英语报社投稿，谈谈长时间玩会给人带来哪些不良影响（不少于两点），以及对玩上瘾这一问题提出一些解决办法（不少于两个）。要求：

1、不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

2、信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

3、书写工整，注意谋篇布局。

Nowadays,manypeoplespendalotoftimeonthephone,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：Nowadays,manypeoplespendalotoftimeonthephone,whichbringsmanydisadvantagestoallofages.Forthestudents,theymaybeaddictedtothegamesonthephonewhichmayleadtothefailureontheexam.Andfortheadults,theyhavenointerestinworkandthusbeelesscreative.Soitisimportantforustokeepusawayfromthephones.First,weshouldkeepthephonesathomewhengoingtoschool.Second,wecansetalarmclockstoremindusnottobefocusonthephones.Third,wecanusemoreinterestingthingstotaketheplaceofphonessuchasreading,outdooractivitiesandsoon.Ihopeeveryonecanusephonesless.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求“针对人们花大量的时间在上”这一现象写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。2.写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称和第三人称口吻；可采用2段落格式，第一段：阐述长时间玩会给人带来的不良影响；第二段：阐述自己的建议。长沙市开福区七、话题作文51．鲜花盛开的五月，度过“小长假”的我们又回到校园学习。请以“My________MayDay”为题，写一篇英语短文，描述你“五一”劳动节的活动及感受。要求：

（1）80词左右（请补充标题,标题不计入总词数）；

（2）可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；

（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。My________MayDay______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文：MymeaningfulMayDayOnMay1st,IwenttoaHopeSchool.Ididmanythingstohelpthechildrenthere.First,Ihadapartywiththestudentsandgaveoutthefoodthere.Second,Ialsohelpedthemcleanuptheirclassrooms.Third,theteachertoldussomestoriesaboutsomehardworkingstudentswhoarefromverypoorfamilies.Iwasdeeplymovedbytheirstories.What’smore,inordertoraisemoneyforthem,Iheldabigsaleintheplayground.Iraisedalotofmoney.IthinkbeingavolunteerisreallygreatandIwouldliketohelpmorepeople.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“My______MayDay”为题，根据你的“五一”劳动节的活动及感受进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段可以根据自己的实际情况说说“五一”劳动节参加的活动；第三段叙述感受和收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。长沙市青竹湖湘一外国语学校七、材料作文51．当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此，对孩子们来说，学会自立相当重要。请根据以上所述，结合表格所提供的图片及文字信息，以“LearntoBeIndependent”为题写一篇90词左右的短文。社会现象你的观点◆家长应相信孩子，不要包办一切；◆家长应提出合理建议，让孩子自己作决定；◆……◆孩子不要过度依赖父母，学做家务，◆照顾自己；勇于面对并解决困难；◆……要求：短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥。LearntoBeIndependentNowadays,manychildrenaretreatedas“littleemperors”athome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:LearntoBeIndependentNowadays,manychildrenaretreatedas“littleemperors”athome.Parentsshowsomuchlovetotheirchildrenthatwhentheyfaceproblems,theydon’tknowwhattodo.Soit’simportantforchildrentolearntobeindependent.Inmyopinion,parentsshouldbelieveintheirchildrenandneverdoeverythingforthem.It’snecessarytogivechildrenproperadviceandmorechancestomaketheirowndecisions.Asforchildren,theyshouldn’tdependontheirparentstoomuch.Ononehand,theyshouldlearntodohousework.Ithelpstodeveloptheirindependenceandteachesthemhowtolookafterthemselves.Ontheotherhand,theyaresupposedtofacedifficultiesbravelyandtrytosolvethem.Besides,theyhadbetterlearntonevergiveup.In