专题03 日常生活-备战2025年上海中考英语书面表达满分攻略（解析版）

！（一）（2021年嘉定一模）59.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“WhenImetwithaproblem.”（以“当我遇到问题时”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）在日常的生活与学习中，我们应该具备一些解决问题的能力。请结合一次自身经历，说说你是如何解决那个问题的，并分享一下你的经验：如果未能解决，也请谈谈你从中获得的教训。（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.（以下表达仅供参考）havedifficultyin…enablemeto…helpmerealize...WhenImetwithaproblem.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：WhenImetwithaproblemEveryonewillmeetadifficultyduringhislife,especiallyforastudent.Iusedtohavedifficultywithmyhomework.Forexample,sometimesIcan'tworkoutamathsproblem.Infrontofadifficulty,differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudes.Somewillgiveup.Tome,Iwillnevergiveup.Iwillthinkitoverandover,tillIhavesolvedit.OrIwillturntomyteachersandclassmatesforhelp.Thisexperiencemakesmeknowtheimportanceofthinkingovertheproblems.【解析】【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“当我遇到问题时”为题写一篇短文，要求结合一次自身经历，介绍如何解决那个问题的并分享经验；如何未能解决，谈一谈从中获得的教训，可适当发挥。2、写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述自身经历；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述经历以及如何解决的问题并分享经验或描述未能解决问题，从中获得的教训时，应详细具体，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。（二）（2020年普陀一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“ThethingIwanttodointhecomingwinterholiday”【以“寒假里我想做的一件事”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】提示：平日里学习任务较重，如今寒假即将到来，你是否有一件想做而没有机会做的事情呢?请谈谈想做的这件事，并阐述理由。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）ThethingIwanttodointhecomingwinterholiday____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThethingIwanttodointhecomingwinterholidayThewinterholidayiscoming.IamveryexcitedbecauseIcanhavetimetodowhatIwanttodo.Duringtheschooldays,Iamalwaysbusywithmyschoolwork.SoIdon’thavemuchfreetime.IhavealwaysbeenlongingforatriptoChongqing.Inthewinterholiday,IwillgotoChongqingwithmyparents.Ihearitisabeautifulcitywithmanyattractiveplaces.AlsoIcanhavealotofdeliciousfoodthere.Ithinkmytripwillbeveryenjoyable.【解析】【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求以ThethingIwanttodointhecomingwinterholiday为题，介绍一下在即将到来的寒假里，自己最想做的事情。这是一篇话题作文，题目比较贴近学生们的日常生活，是学生们比较熟悉的，因此写作内容上对于学生来说不是难题。审题可知，短文应围绕自己假期里想做的这件事进行具体的介绍，这也是文章的主体部分。短文应以一般现在时为主，第一人称来叙述。例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述详细、清晰、有条理。作者说他假期里最想做的事情是去旅行，并介绍了自己想去的地方。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，使用了简单句、并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用较多丰富的句型和短语，文章表达流畅，意思连贯。高分亮点：短语：bebusywith；freetime；longfor；alotof。句型：IamveryexcitedbecauseIcanhavetimetodowhatIwanttodo.；Duringtheschooldays,Iamalwaysbusywithmyschoolwork.；IhavealwaysbeenlongingforatriptoChongqing.；Ihearitisabeautifulcitywithmanyattractiveplaces.。（2021年青浦区二模）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Avaluablelesson”(请以“宝贵的一课”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)提示:在学习与生活中,我们会因为经历了一些事情,获得体验,增加阅历,吸取教训。请以“宝贵的一课”为题,结合你的经历,谈谈你的感受。注意：抄袭试卷中内容不得分。文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。Avaluablelesson____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文参考】AvaluablelessonDuringourlife,therearealwaysmomentsthatgiveusvaluablelessons,becausetheycantaughtsomethingimportantaboutourselves.Asforme,Iwillneverforgetmyfirstvolunteerexperience.Duringthesummervacationofmyseventhgrade,ourclasswenttotoanorphanhomeinourcitytohelpthechildrenthere.Atfirst,wegaveawaysomemeaningfulstorybooksandstationerytothem.Thenwetalkedaboutourschoollifetothem.Iwasquiteshybefore,tomysurprise,Italkedwithsomekidsforalmostanhourwithoutintermission.Isharedmyeffectivestudymethodswiththemexcitedly.AndIevenshowedsomechildrensomeskillswhichIlearnedfrommyPEteacheronhowtoplaybadmintonbetter.Finally,weplayedgamestogether.Allofusfeltsohappy.Thatvolunteerworkreallytaughtmealesson,whichIwillneverforget.Ifeltthetruthofthosewords,whichIneverunderstoodbeforethat:“Itismoreblessedtogivethantoreceive.”Thatday,Inotonlygainedhappiness,butalsobecamemoreconfidentandoutgoingtocommunicatewithothers.Moreimportantly,itmademerealizethatgivingisreceiving.（四）（2021年金山区二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Keepyourmindopen.”(以“敞开心扉/心胸开阔”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在生活中，你对你的生活满意吗？不满意的话，是什么原因呢？如果我们能以开阔的胸怀面对不同的事物。从不同的角度去思考问题，可能会得到意想不到的收获。结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何做到心胸开阔、乐于接受各种顺势逆境的）。(注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。)Keepyourmindopen.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________KeepyourmindopenInourdailylife,wesometimesdon’tfeelsatisfiedwithourlifeespeciallywhenwemeetdifficultsituations,suchasgettingalowmark,losingapreciousgiftandsoon.OnceIgotalowmarkwithmyEnglishpaper.Ireallyfeltdisappointedandwantedtogiveitup.Butmyparentsencouragedmetokeepmymindopen.Theytoldmefailureisthekeytosuccess.Iagreedwiththem.Fromthenon,whenIfeelfrustrated,Ialwaysthinkofmyparents’word.Inaword,weshouldkeepourmindopenwhenwefacethedifficulties.（五）（2021年嘉定区二模）VII.Writing（作文）（共20分）84.Writeatleast60wordsonthegivensituation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）石砖和雕像的经历告诉我们，不同的选择会带来不同的结果。生活中，我们也会碰到很多选择。请以“Ichoseto”为题，结合自身的经历，说说你是怎么做的？你为什么会做出这样的选择?（注意：请先将题目补充完整，短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表达仅供参考）choosetobe/domakeupmymindencouragemetoIchoseto__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IchosetoexerciseeverydayAsastudentwhoisgoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool,thoughtimeisquitetightformetostudy,Istillchoosetosticktoexerciseeveryday.Manypeoplethinkthatexercisemakesthemtiredandtheycan’tfindtimetodothisduetobusyworkandstudy.Onthecontrary,IbelieveexercisekeepsmefitandenergeticsothatIrarelyfallill.Besides,everytimeIfinishexercising,Ifeelaclearmind,soIcanfocusonmystudybetter.Then,inmyopinion,exercisewon’tcostapersonmuchtime.Onweekday,Iusuallyspend30minutesrunningonourschool’splaygroundafterschool.Onweekends,Ioftenplaybasketballwithmyfriendsforanhour.Thus,itwon’ttakemealotoftimeandthepressureaccumulatedduringtheweekcancompletelyvanish.Inconclusion,exerciseisagoodchoiceforbothourbodyandmind.Iwillcontinuetobefirminmychoice.（六）（2019年杨浦区一模）SupposeyouareMark.Youwitnessedacrime.Writeadiaryin60-120wordsaboutit.(假设你是马克，你看到一起犯罪活动，就你所见所为写一篇60-120个词的日记，标点符号不占格。)Thefollowingquestionsareforreference（以下问题仅供参考）Whodidyousee?Whenandwheredidyouseethem?Whatweretheydoing?Howdidyoufeel?Whatdidyoudothen?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Monday,July15th（日期随意） Onasunnymorning,Iwalkedmydog,Henry.WhenIwentpastagarage,Iwitnessedacrime.Twomenwerebusypainting,whileamanwasreplacingthenumberplate.Allofthemweresoabsorbedintheirworkthattheydidnotnoticeathiefstealingtheirmoney.Isawthethiefputthemoneyintoabigbag,andthemoneyspreadontheground.Ifeltangrybecausethethiefwassowildthathecommittedacrimeinbroaddaylight.Icouldnotletitgo,soIwenttopolicestationtoreportthecrime.【答案解析】本次杨浦区作文沿用了去年一模的图片作文，甚至内容有很大的相似性。只不过今年的采用的是日记的形式，学生在写的时候注意格式，还有图片的内容，一定要看懂，注意故事的前因和后果都要交代清楚，而且要衔接和连贯。（七）（2019年黄浦区一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“WeekendorNot?”accordingtotheinformationgiven.（阅读以下内容，并以“这是汤姆的周末吗？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）如今，很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末，如下图中的Tom，请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法，以WeekendorNot?为题写一篇不少于60个词的英语短文，向Parents杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。要求：简单描述“Tom”的周末状态、提出你的具体想法并给出建议；短文中不得出现“Tom”以外的人名或任何校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________作文分析一模中考作文考查类别：记叙文、看图写话、书信、议论文。其中记叙文所占比重达80%。19黄浦作文通过全命题作文：《这是汤姆的周末吗》考查学生的议论文写作能力。一篇好的作文：1.审题很重要，本文的题干和要求告诉学生要描述图片主要内容同时对图片内容给出自己的想法和建议，二者缺一不可。2.描述部分采用记叙方式，可以选择图片中的几个点进行展开。3.建议部分需要加入自己的思考和想法，着手点还是很多的，比如应该劳逸结合，过渡的学习会导致孩子焦虑和压抑等等，还可以从Tom展开到学生这个群体，进行升华。范文：Nowadays,it’scommonphenomenonthatstudents’weekendsareasbusyasweekdays,whicharefilledwithplentyofhomework,hobbygroupsandcrammingclasses.Let’stakeTom’sweekendasanexample.Besidesdoinghomework,healsohastoattendmathsclass、singingclass、drawingclassandsoon.ThismakesTomstressedalot.Frommyperspective,weekendsaresupposedtoberelaxing.Ononehand,afterfivedays’study,thereisagreatneedforstudentstotakearestatweekend.Ontheotherhand,overstudydoesharmtotheirphysicalandmentalhealth.Insteadofstudying,itisagoodchoicetodoexerciseorgooutingwithparentsandfriendsatweekends.Justasthesayinggoes“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”.Ibelieveproperrelaxingenablesthemtobehealthyandstudybetter.（八）（2019年闵行区一模）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Sharing”.（根据中文提示，以“分享”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的经历，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法、一次美好的旅行……，结合你自己的生活体验，描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。Sharing____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________It’sveryimportanttolearntosharewitheachother.Ihavemanythingstoshareindifferentways.Forexample,Icansharesomebeautifulpictures,favoritemusic，differentideaswithothersfacetofaceorbyQQe-mailwhicharewidelyused.NowI’dliketoshareoneofmyunforgettableexperienceswithyou.Emilywaslonelyandunhappy.Ihopedtocheerherup.SoIsharedmyfavoritebooksandchattedwithherafterclass.Astimewentby,shebecameusedtosharingherfeelingswithme.Nowwe’regoodfriends.Inaword，sharingisnotonlyinterestingbutalsohelpfulanditmakesusgrowup.Wecanlearnalotfromsharingandenjoyourlivesmore.（九）（2020年青浦区二模）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.(请根据所给情景写一段话，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)情景提示：在本学期居家学习期间，你是如开展学习的？有什么收获？请结合你的学习经历和体验谈一谈。(除诗歌外文体不限。)Expressionsforreferences:takeonlinecourses,watchvideolectures,organizeWechatgroups,sharetheexperiencefollowtheadvicetheself-learningability注意:抄装试卷中内容不得分。文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文：（十）（2019年徐汇区一模）Thereisasection“MyVolunteerWork”intheschoolnewspaper.Theeditorwantsgoodarticlestobecollected.Pleasewriteatleast60wordsonthetopic.学校校报有“我的志愿者工作”这一栏目。编辑想收录好的文章登载。请写写你的志愿者工作。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyVolunteerWorkWhenIwasalittlechild,myparentstaughtmethatIshouldtakepartinvolunteerworkasmuchaspossibleinthefuture.IusedtoworkinthePets’House.It’sactuallyavolunteerorganizationtohelptheabandonedorhomelesscatsanddogs.SowetakethosepooranimalsbacktothePets’Houseandfeedthem.Sometimestheyareseriouslyill,sowewouldtakethemtothehospitals.Wetakeverygoodcareofthemandhelpthemgrowhealthily.Then,wewillposttheirpicturesandinformationontheInternet,sothatsomeonewhoarewarm-heartedcancometoadoptthem.Therefore,thesecutecreaturescaneventuallyhavearealhome.I’mdoingthesebecauseIlovepetssomuchandIthinkhelpingthesepooranimalsisverymeaningfultothewholesociety.IenjoydoingthisandIwillcontinuedoingit.Wisheveryonecanjoinusandhelptheselovelyanimalstogether!（十一）提示：家务是生活中的一部分，我们作为一名家庭成员，应该学会分担家务。请以“DoingHouseworkMakesMe__________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你做家务的经历，并谈谈你的体会。要求：1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。DoingHouseworkMakesMe______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DoingHouseworkMakesMeHappyDoinghouseworkispartofourlife.It’snecessarytosharehouseworkwithotherfamilymembers.I’dliketotellyouaboutoneofmyexperiences.LastMother’sDayImadeaspecialdinnerformymom.Itdidn’tworkaswellasIthought.Ihurtmyfingerswhilecuttingcarrots,andIforgottoputsaltintothedishes.Whenmymomcamebackhome,shewashappytotastethem.Thenshehuggedmeandsaid,“Goodgirl!”Fromthisexperience,I’velearneddoinghouseworkcannotonlyhelpmegrowupbutalsobringhappinesstomyfamily.【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求补全标题，叙述一次做家务的经历，谈谈体会。注意叙述的合理性。2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称书写，介绍经历时，用一般过去时。可分为三段，第一段大体介绍做家务的影响；第二段介绍做家务的经历，第三段介绍体会。注意上下文的衔接通顺，注意连词和从句的使用。（十二）人们常说：“服务他人，快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的暑假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格提示内容，给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文，介绍你的计划。PlacesActivitiesCommunitycenterhelptheold,singsongs,tellstories,…Communityhospital(s)handouttheleaflets（宣传册）onCOVID-19,…Communitypark(s)pickuprubbish,waterflowers,………要求：1.参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）Asweallknow,“Servingotherscanbringushappiness.”Summerholidayiscoming,I’ll________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’msureI’llhaveameaningfulholidaythissummer.【答案】Asweallknow,“Servingotherscanbringushappiness.”Summerholidayiscoming.I’lldosomeserviceinmycommunitytomakeitbetter.First,I’llgotoourcommunitycentertohelpandcheeruptheoldpeople.Forexample,Icansingsongsortellthemsomeinterestingstories.Second,I’mgoingtohandouttheleafletsonCOVID-19atourcommunityhospitalorotherplaces.Next,I’malsoplanningtopickupandsortrubbishwithmyfriendsinourcommunitypark.What’smore,I’llhelpthekidswiththeirlessonsandlookafterthemaswell.I’msureI’llhaveameaningfulholidaythissummer.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假计划。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时。根据所给的提示要点，介绍自己暑假即将要进行的一些社区服务工作。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。（十三）新冠疫情提醒人们更加重视健康。越来越多的人通过运动来保持健康，但是运动安全也不容小觑。请你给校报的英语栏目EnglishCorner投稿，号召同学们重视运动安全。要求：1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.运动安全的现状和重要性；2.运动安全的建议（着装、热身、规则……）；3.…….参考词汇：热身运动warming-upexerciseCOVID-19hastaughtustopaymoreattentiontoourhealth________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】COVID-19hastaughtustopaymoreattentiontoourhealth.TodayIwanttotalkaboutsportssafety.Sportssafetyisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.Nowadays,studentspaylessattentiontosportssafety.Sothereareallkindsofaccidentsthathappenatschools.Wedoexercisebecauseitcanimproveourphysicalfitnessandhealth.Tokeepsafecanensurethatwecanbetterachievethegoalsofsports.Whenweexercise,weshoulddoenoughwarming-upactivities.Weshouldwearcomfortableandsuitableclothes.Weshouldadopttherightwayofrest,payattentiontothereasonabledietandhealthcare.Weshouldexercisetokeephealthy,andweshouldalsopayattentiontosportssafety.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍运动安全的相关问题。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍运动安全的现状和重要性；第三段给出运动安全的建议；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（十四）在日常生活中,冲突难免发生。请以“Aconflictwith…”为题。用英语写下你与他人（如：家人,老师,同学等）或自己内心发生过的冲突故事。故事需包括冲突的发生和解决。注意：1.词数：100左右;2.请先将标题填写完整，再写文章；3文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名，校名等信息;照抄阅读语篇不得分。参考词汇：conflict冲突Aconflictwith____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AconflictwithmymotherIndailylife,conflictsoftenoccur.Isometimeshaveconflictswithmymother.WhenIgothome,shealwayssaidalot.Shewouldaskmeaboutmyperformanceinclass,howIgotalongwithmyclassmatesandsoon.Ifeltreallyboredsometimes.Iwasverytiredafteraday’sclass.WhenIgothome,Ijustwantedtorestanddidn’twanttotalk.Sowhenevermymotheraskedmesomething,wealwayshadsomeconflicts.Later,ItoldmygoodfriendwhatIthought,andshesuggestedthatItalktomymotheraboutwhatIreallythought.Ididasshesuggested.Ihadaheart-to-hearttalkwithmymother.Iexplainedmythoughtsindetailtomymother.Insteadoftalkingaboutitendlessly,mymothergavememorespaceandmadememoreindependent.Intheend,myrelationshipwithmymotherbecameveryharmonious.Weallbecamehappierandmorerelaxed.【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语，写出自己和谁发生了冲突，包括冲突的发生和解决，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

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写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。（十五）做家务是学生应尽的义务。假设你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级学生，请以“MyExperienceofDoingHousework”为题写一篇英语小短文，介绍你平时做的家务及其感受。内容要点：你做家务的原因；你平时做的家务（至少举一个例子）；3.你对做家务的感受。写作要求：包含上述三个要点，可适当发挥；语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；3.文中不能出现“李雷”和“建华中学”以外的人名、校名或地名；4.词数80左右。MyExperienceofDoingHousework____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyExperienceofDoingHouseworkAsafamilymember,it’sourdutytohelpourparentsdohousework.LastSunday,whenmyparentswentoutshoppingtobuyfoodforlunch,Ibegantocleanmyhouse.First,Isweptthefloorandwipedthetable.Then,Icollectedallthebooksandotherthingsandputtheminplace.Finally,Itookalltherubbishout.Whenmyparentscameback,theyweresurprisedandpraisedme.Ifeltsohappyatthattime.SoIkeepdoinghousework,suchassweepingthefloorortidyingtheroom.Sharingthehouseworkwithourparentsmeansshowinglovetothem.SoIsuggestallofusshouldtakeactionfromnowon.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕做家务的经历写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段说明自己做家务的原因；第二段介绍自己曾经做家务的经历以及自己常做哪些家务；最后一段发表自己对做家务的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。（十六）在初中三年的时光里,你不仅学到了知识，也具备了一定的能力。当你克服困难第一次成功地完成某件事情时，这份与众不同的经历一定在你的脑海里留下